Is Arjun above the law, or not?
Arjun broke Balaram's foot with no provocation, in front of witnesses, and Balaram didn't make a police complaint. However, a mere video of Arjun snatching Savitri's oḍhaṇī (which isn't burning in the video) and being slapped by her forces the police to investigate a complaint by a women's advocacy group.
Of course, we viewers know that Balaram had Arjun ambushed and tried to break his skull, and Arjun must suspect him, but Arjun's retaliation is not justifiable. Broken bones could have left Balaram handicapped for life, and that's more serious than Ganapat's stabbed hand, Mahendar's whipped skin, or the beating that Arjun gave the louts who harassed Priya.
Considering that teenagers and children may be watching with their families, and may get the idea that dropping a barbell on someone's foot is how heroes stand up for themselves against bullies, Chinmay Mandlekar should stop writing irresponsibly for shock value.
Neither Krishna'i nor Vidyadhar seems to care about Balaram's broken foot. They are all smiles as they celebrate with Arjun, as if one brother crippling the other is just part of being a family. Priya never seemed close to Balaram anyway, and Vishvambhar may be hiding his resentment as his plot to win Arjun's trust in Savi unravels.
Arjun saving Savi from the fire on Hoḷī and Savi slapping Arjun for grabbing her clothes were both recycled incidents from Jīva Zhālā Yeḍāpisā. When Shiva pulled the cockroach off Siddhi's padara, she didn't see him coming, it felt like she was being stripped, she had every reason to feel unsafe with him because he had drugged and kidnapped her and forcibly married her, and she genuinely believed that he was a sexual predator based on the incident with Saumya. Here, the slap doesn't make sense because Arjun was standing in front of Savi, she saw that he wasn't groping her, and she wasn't exposed by him pulling her oḍhaṇī.
As Arjun correctly pointed out, Savi had time to think before slapping him. What is she thinking, treating Arjun like a molester yet again when her goal is to make him fall in love with her? Already, Arjun shouldn't trust Savi after she woke up from her fake faint in his Pune hotel room and said that he must have drugged her to take advantage! Yet Arjun allowed Savi to spend the night in his hotel suite, and offered her a ride back to Kawathe-Bhairavgad. Savi should know his character by now.
What is the point of Savi and Dipu and Çamaki slipping cannabis into Arjun's drink? He's going to guess who did it, and even if he doesn't punish them, it will be difficult to fulfil their task for Vishvambhar. Their usual modus operandi was to drug the entire wedding party, steal, and escape before anyone woke up. In this situation of a long-term swindle, they can't afford to be obvious.
Unpredictability is good in moderation, but when characters' behaviour opposes their established motivation, the audience can't feel the tension of the task. This is just bad writing.
Edited by BrhannadaArmour - 1 years ago
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