Originally posted by: Adiandsid
24th:
Bhavani and Jahan wait for Ammu. Ammu arrives. Bhavani tells Ammu to come back now that the job is done. Ammu makes some excuse and goes -
Ex-Ishika-Jayesh scene... not revealed what she asked... but he agrees. [Something to do with asking Ammu - oh... ask Virat to take back the FIR.]
Ammu saying things to Harsh from the 5th (or is it 3rd?) floor is heard by them in the other floor (5th / 3rd). Asks them to leave cause Ammu is coming... [2 floors???]
Odd thing is before he goes in, ex goes on with her monologue 'ise to nipta liya, ab Babita Ahuja ki baari.' [Waah... timing... and of course Jayesh cant hear at all.] Where did Ishika go? her home or with ex? dont ask... not shown... no idea.
Harsh-Ammu scene. [facepalm] Wish I could go in and slap Ammu... tries to convince literal crap to him as to why she is going back... ehsaan, dosti, guilt se bahar laana... the list goes on and on.... unko pachtava hai... etc. etc. etc. bohot badal gaye hai... yup... Good questions from Harsh... but then he has to lose of course. [I have no idea what they are doing with her.] At least what she said is something she believes in ... and not excuses to avoid saying things. Some solace she hasn't forgotten the mela incident... but then does it matter??? Doesn't look like it.
[Would've been good if they actually showed what she said 'Tumhe kya lagta hai Harshya, maine khud se aise sawaal nahi kiya hai?'.... 'Show, Dont Tell' is a rule in writing ... and perhaps we may connect with Ammu better if they show her thinking, asking herself relevant questions, rather than her telling these things to Dildaar, Harsh, Bhavani.... which in any case, they emphasise as an excuse. (though, show dont tell, i guess, doesn't exactly work this way).]
[God their habit of editing the sound of some dialogues... ... doing that since week one perhaps... still continues in the same way nearing ep 300. We know VA is the end game... even if some may not like it. can we move on from these 'emphasising the dialogues for the nth time' please?]
Next morning. pre sandwich scene.
Then the sandwich scene...
Babita burning the whole time. Well... she is being royally ignored by everyone.
Long stare from Virat to Babs... then to perhaps taunt her, feeds Ammu the sandwich...
Faints... of course... 'If Bachca feeds her she will be fine'... Virat remembers some things... also connects the fainting drama... [sad life for Babs... she had thought 'ye drama works every time'.]
No sandwich for her from him today though.... Gives it to Dildaar to feed her. Goes out... Ammu runs behind him...
Babs thinks nope.. he cant do that...
Babs get a bouquet... [Ammu sees it, and as always Virat doesn't].
Poem... taunts Anjali and Nimmi.
An envelope in the bouquet... a note from ex... staying in a hotel, underground... if you need help, will message location and time.
Some info on Ammu in the Harsh scene... but God... she is a gone case!!! [Somehow that contrast of Nimmi feels so very apt. Ammu has to get out of this!!!!] Sachch me gale pad rahi hai ab.
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