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Posted: 5 months ago

Just finished the 27th chapter.... Readerjiii u r an awesome writer... ! This update was just too beautiful, ... And I could visualize every single part of the story. I love how you've characterized Angad. This is how he should have been in the show. The arrogant guy who slowly falls for his wife.. And in the process turns out to be a good man. And the way you've dealed with Sahibas trauma... Amazing.. Her inner turmoil, her confusion, everything.... Just mind blowing! Thanks for consistently serving such beautiful updates Readerji. U the best ❤

P. S: Also, thanks a lot for tagging me everytime 🫂

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Posted: 5 months ago

Amazing update, very beautifully written 🥺❤️....!!

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Posted: 5 months ago

That was one rollercoaster ride of a chapter ☺️😥😱🥹❤️🫠 too good readerji!!

My fav para “he looked up and saw Sahiba standing there....panting....she just stood there for few seconds...time stopped....they just stared at each other....and the next thing he knew...she crashed into him....and they hugged each other as if their life depended on it....holding each other so tightly that they could not make out where one ended and another started”

Just reeling in from this chapter.



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Posted: 5 months ago

Chapter 32: The cutestt!!! You spoil me Readerji. Now I want to see all this on screen!!! I was slowly losing interest in Sahan, but after reading your chapters I went back and watched a few older epis..specially the Pagphera ones...

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Posted: 5 months ago

Originally posted by: MansiP23

I loved how well you describe Saheba's outfits, I think Angad would be happier if Saheba wears flimsy night gowns, thoda shaant hojaayega bechara.smiley17


Bechara already controls himself a lot of times as it is can’t imagine how Sahiba will kill him softly with her mesmerizing beauty with those flimsy night gowns. 🤣




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Posted: 5 months ago

This chapter is intense! The fire incident adds a lot of drama and tension to the story, and it really showcases the depth of Angad and Sahiba's relationship. The way they both risked their lives for each other shows their love . Angad's anger and Sahiba's defiance create a powerful dynamic between them, and the resolution with Sahiba's unexpected kiss adds an interesting twist

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Posted: 5 months ago

Awesome chapter!

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Posted: 5 months ago

Wow your update just gets more beautiful with each chapter. Like Athzji said you can really visualize what you’ve written and what a blissful sight it is. The intensity of their feelings was so magnificently described by you. 🙏

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Posted: 5 months ago

i hope he will realize that he needs to stop being a chauvinist. its great that he is protective of her but theres nothing wrong in a woman wanting to protect and save her husband. him being a man doesnt mean he needs to do the "saving" and Sahiba has to be the damsel in distress. i hope he will soon realize that he should be happy and feel lucky that he has found a spouse , a partner who will stay put in adversity and not run away instead of being angry at her for not obeying him. I really hope better sense prevails on him and he stops being angry at her.

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Posted: 5 months ago

Every time I feel this is the best update so far and each time you surprise me with a masterpiece of an update.



We always wanted to see such love in the story where Sahan can give their lives for each other, and we did but after that either Angad turned toxic, or Saheba turned doormat.



What Saheba felt for Angad today, unbeknownst to her tragedy took place, but her love, her sheer devotion and sacrifice saved her husband's life, the intuition that something might happen to your beloved if this is not love then what is??



And the last part "Why! Why! You want to know why you mandbuddi, this is why" She screamed, she was so angry....she wanted to hit him...but as she could not hit him she did the next thing.. ....she put her hands on his cheeks, pulled his face to her and gave him a tight kiss on his lips..... was CHERRY ON TOP...smiley43smiley17

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