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Posted: 7 months ago
#51

Originally posted by: Krish58


thanks for your kind comment..I hope you enjoyed reading it.


next part will come up soon..

I have completed writing the whole story.. the rough draft is completed and finalizing it.Most probably part 5 & 6 is last for sure...


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Posted: 7 months ago
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this is so so niceee! Sahibas dialogues when she hits Akeer...it was soo beautiful sis....loved loved loved it!!! Theres so much life in your dialogues!

P.S I am eagerly waiting for Keerat-Sahiba milan.

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Posted: 7 months ago
#53

Originally posted by: Athz

this is so so niceee! Sahibas dialogues when she hits Akeer...it was soo beautiful sis....loved loved loved it!!! Theres so much life in your dialogues!

P.S I am eagerly waiting for Keerat-Sahiba milan.


Thank you so much for the kind comments.

I am happy that you liked it...


Dont worry milan is gonna happen soon then you think

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Posted: 7 months ago
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A/n : This is the second last part of the fiction.

This particular part and next one can be read also as a standalone part as its purely of keery family and sahiba family Milan.

This part is something should have shown in show where rightful questions or reactions should have been shown.

I have tried my best to write this and next and last part .

hope you guys will like it.

Sorry for any typo error .

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Part 5/6


@Monga house,


Bani-(whispers) papa mujeh bahar khelna hai, par mummy ne bola hai ki thodi der baad jaau khelne, par dekho na kelu bhi aagaya hai, dekho woh bahar khada hai.


Garry was confused.He looked at the entrance ,but couldnt see any kid.


Garry-baby , yeh kelu kon hai?Mujeh toh nahi dikh raha Apka dost hai?


Bani- kelu, papa !!!kelu waha ..woh dekho waha papa ..


Garry- kaha? kidhar mujeh toh dikh nahi raha ..


Bani-areee, papa woh dekho waha..waha woh rose flower ke paas baitha hai..


Garry looked carefully at the pointed direction and saw a black puppy was happily chewing off manveer's shoes after chewing off gurleen bua 's sandal .


He knew if some one from brar house , now saw this ,they would create a ruckus and a bigger one, especially manveer mami and gurleen mami.


Bani- Woh rooroo doggiee hai na uska chotta sa puppy hai uska naam kelu hai.Mein ne aur mummy ne uska naam kelu rakha hai , usko na ball se khelna pasand hai .Aur usko na aapke fav jim jam biscuits bahut pasand hai.


Garry- (whispers) achaaa...tabhi mein sochu ki yeh kelu itna golu molu kaise hai aur hamesha mujeh dekh ke khush kyu hojaata hai Jabhi mein apni fav biscuits kha raha hota hoon..(to bani) okay ,thik baby mein help karta hoon..mein jaise kahu ,waise hi chup chaap jaana thik hai aur kelu ko bhi saath lejanaa..

Bani- okay..


Bani kisses on Garry's cheek.


Bani-aap best ho.


Garry ruffles her hair.


Garry-aur aap iss world ke best baby ho...


Garry sees keerat and jasleen were serving prasad


.Garry-(acts) (holds his stomach) ouch ouch..mera stomach!!!!


Keerat - kya hua garry!?thik toh ho ...


Garry-kuch nahi , woh yeh orange khane ke baad turant pet dard start hogaya.ahhh ouch ouch..


Keerat-tum baitho mein dawai leke aati hoon.


Garry cues bani to leave. Keerat goes to get meds and on other hand bani leaves silently.

After sometime brars and other guests leaves.


@outside monga house,


Bani was playing with her ball . However, while playing rooroo snatches the ball and runs off .Bani goes after her.

Bani- off ho .rooroo, stop ... rooroo stop..


She ran after rooroo. However, following rooroo she sees akeer. and his family. just at the entrance of neighborhood lane buying fruits..


Bani- akeer bhaiya...akeer bhaiya!!!(waving at akeer) akeer bhaiya...akeer bhaiya....


To grab akeer's attention bani throws the ball towards him.

Akeer sees the ball and gets happy..


Akeer- ball!?yeh toh bani ka ball hai!!!Mamma yeh dekho bani ka fav ball.

Sahiba and twinkle looked confused .


Akeer-mamma yeh dekho bani ka ball, mein uske ghar gaya tha na tab uske pass yahi ball tha. Par woh yaha kya kar rahi. hai. (looks here and there) .Bani...bani..bani..


Diljeet-bani, ??? yaha kaha hai akeer ??


Akeer-papa ,bani yahi hai...yeh dekho uska ball..


Akeer shows him the ball


Twinkle- (picking up fruits )yeh dusri ball hogi , aisi ball sabke paas hoti hai .


Akeer-nai bua ,yeh bani ki ball hai,yeh dekho iss ball pe uska naam bhi likha hai...hum dono saath mein likha tha ' Bani ka fav ball..' yeh dekho


Akeer shows the ball to twinkle and sahiba..


Sahiba- akeer , nai beta yeh dusri kisi aur ki hogi,jiska naam bani hoga..woh chotti bacchi yaha kaise aayegi..


Akeer- nai mamma , yeh bani ki hi ball hai..


Akeer looks here and there..


Akeer-bani....bani...


Bani-akeer bhaiya!!!Akeer bhaiya ..yaha...yaha ..akeer bhaiya


Akeer saw bani waving at him ...


Akeer -dekha mein ne kaha tha na..mamma


Sahiba and others are surprised to see her.


Sahiba-yeh bani hai?


Diljeet-haan, sahibaji ,mein ne kaha tha bilkul guddiya jaise hai ..Par yeh yaha kya kar rahi aur uske mummy papa bhi nahi dikhaayi de rahe. hai?


Akeer-bani ...bani. kaisi hai tu....


Bani- mein thik hoon aap kaise ho..


Sahiba and others join akeer ...


akeer - mein bhi thik hoon . Bani yeh meri mumma hai, yeh bebe aur yeh bua hai.


Bani greets them

Sahiba gets down at bani's level. She felt happy , to see her, when she looked closely at bani, she had a lot of resemblance to keerat. For a moment , she thought , she was talking with keerat.


Sahiba-hi bani, kaise ho? tum toh bahut hi cute aur pretty ho..


Bani-Thank you aunty, aur aap bhi bahut pretty ho.


Sahiba-aww thank you.Tumhare mummy papa kaha hai?


Bani-woh ghar mein hai.


Sahiba- aap yaha kaha rehte ho?


Bani nods in. yes


Akeer-par tum toh woh bade waale ghar mein rehti ho?


Bani-haan mein waha bhi rehti ,aur yaha bhi rehti hoon.Abhi meri bua ka school test hai na ,toh bua mujeh khelne nahi deti ball se aur khelti hoon toh chilaate hain aur gussa hote hai.


Sahiba on hearing this felt bad who would shout at such a small kid for playing and that too such a sweet kid.


Biji-aree itni choti pyari bacchi pe kon chillate hai bhalla?


Diljeet-sahibaji, aap bani se baate kariye mein tab tak mithai leke aata hoon !


Sahiba-haan, thik hai tab tak hum log yaha wait karte hai ..


Bani-aunty, akeer bhaiya ne mujeh bataya ki aap hi achi drawing banate ho ..


Sahiba-acha??


Bani nods in a yes.


Bani-aap mere papa ko sikhaoge drawing? Unki drawing very bad hai Miss shanaya ne unki drawing ko ek bhi star nahi diya.


Sahiba , twinkle and biji laughs.


Sahiba-pakka sikhaungi .


Akeer-patah hai , aaj mera birthday hai!! mein aaj 10 years ka hogaya .


Bani-(happily) Happy birthday akeer bhaiya .


Akeer- Thank you.


Bani- Akeer bhaiya aapka birthday hai na , toh aapko chocolates khaani hai? ..mere paas bahut saari chocolates hai..kal papa mere liye bahut saari chocolates .Lekin mein apni gems nahi doongi woh meri fav hai.


Akeer gets happy, he wanted to go, but then first asks sahiba for permission. Diljeet returns after purchasing sweets.


Akeer-mumma ,hum jaaye bani ke ghar please..please


Sahiba - nahi ,beta hame kahi aur jaana hai , aaj nahi beta kal .pakka jaayenge bani ke ghar.


Akeer- mumma please!!! I promise mein methi ki sabji khaaunga.. ... please mein jaaun (making puppy eyes)


Sahiba was in dilemma on one hand she wanted to meet her family as soon as possible and on other hand today she didnt wanted to make akeer sad.


Sahiba -(whispers) ab kya kare..? agar aur kahi gaye toh ghar nahi jaa paayenge .


Diljeet and sahiba looks at bani and akeer who were making puppy eyes..


Akeer - please mumma...


Sahiba-acha thik hai par, 5 min se zyada nahi rukenge .hame kahi aur jaana bhi hai thik hai..Aur zidd nahi karoge tum.


Akeer-okay, promise.


Bani-okay,


Bani grabs akeer and drags with him.

Sahiba and everyone follows her .However, soon she realizes that where bani was taking them. She is surprised. She had a doubt in mind and wanted to confirm it.

Sahiba stops bani few blocks far from her house .


Sahiba- bani, beta aap yaha rehte ho?


Bani-haan..woh raha mera ghar..


Sahiba sees that bani pointed at monga house which was decorated.

Sahiba and diljeet are shocked .


Biji -kya hua beta itna chauk kyu rahe ho?


Diljeet-biji , yeh sahiba ji yaha rehti hai..jaha bani bata rahi hai....


Sahiba(to herself)- yeh kaise ho sakta hai?? Kya mummy papa aur keerat kahi aur rehne gaye hai? Par uss din toh kaha tha ki yeh monga house mein hi keerat rehti hai.


Sahiba- (cupping bani's face)beta , tera naam kya hai...?


Bani looked confused..


Bani- mera naam bani hai.


Sahiba-(getting emotional) nai, mera matalb hai ki , Jaise Akeer bhaiya ka naam Akeer Panser hai ,waise aapka kya naam hai??


Bani-Mera naam hai , Bani Kaur Baweja.


Sahiba-(surprised and emotional) Baweja..kahi yeh ..(To bani) Beta tumhare mumma papa ka naam kya hai?


Bani- Mummy ka Keerat Kaur Baweja ,aur Papa ka Garry Baweja.


Sahiba's eyes started to fill up with tears. She was surprised ,shocked and emotional .So were panesar's except akeer and bani.

Bani and akeer were confused as to why they suddenly got emotional ..

Sahiba heard keerat's voice calling for bani ,followed by Garry's and Jasleen voice


Bani -mummy bula rahi hai, chalo.


They both ran inside the monga house.


It took few moments for sahiba to finally realize what bani said. And the house bani went into.


Sahiba was emotional . She remembered Garry's confession for having feelings for keerat. She couldn't believe ,her baby sister ,her keeru whom she dotted on so much was now a mother. Her little keeru was married to Garry. The guy who changed for better and now they had their own little family.


Sahiba entered monga house.


Everything was still same nothing had changed. Sahiba thought she had gone back in time, memories of her maika ,flooded in her mind. For her, every step became heavier, as with every step ,a memory from past would appear before her eyes .


Sahiba-(touching the door frame, then walls) (crying) kuch nahi badla yaha, sirf mein badal gayi hoon. Aisa lag raha ki waqt ,yaha tehr gaya aur mein hi aage nikal gayi..bahut door aagayi hoon mein , kitna door yeh ab mujeh bhi nahi patah.


Sahiba stopped in the courtyard .Looking at her house at each and every corner of her house. After almost 9 years she was going to see them again. So much had changed in this past years .

She could hear keery and bani talking in the main hall. Now, only a parda separated sahiba from keery ,bani and jasleen. She just stopped there , suddenly she couldn't had the courage to step in.


Bani-mummy, akeer bhaiya ko mein ek chocolate doon,jo papa kal laaye the ?


Keerat- haan ,kyu nahi,aur ek kyu ,aaj toh akeer bahut saari chocolates milegi..


Bani- aur mein bhi bahut saari chocolates khaaungi .lekin mein apni gems nahi doongi woh meri fav chocolate hai.


Jasleen- haan, kha lena par pehle yeh dhoodh finish karo..Warna strong kaise banogi..


Garry-akeer tumhare mummy, papa kaha hai..woh abhi tak nahi aaye.


Akeer- lagta hai , woh raasta bhul gaye honge, hum log itne fast dodh ke yaha aaye hai na..mein leke aata hoon


Sahiba saw akeer coming towards them. She was just silently crying letting her tears flow down.


Akeer-areee mamma, papa , bebe,bua aap sab yaha kyu khade ho,chalo na ander. Uncle ,aunty ,aur badi mom bula rahe hai...


Akeer takes sahiba's hand and leads her to the main hall .

Sahiba entered the main hall and saw Keery were making sure bani completed the glass of milk and jasleen was clicking their pictures.


Akeer-yeh dekho mamma, yeh hai bani ke mamma ,papa aur badi mom. Aur uncle , aunty badi mom yeh hai meri mamma, bua aur biji.


All of them looks up at sahiba same time. Keery and Jasleen were in shock.


Garry-(whispers)sahiba...bhabhi.


keerat - di..


Jasleen-sahiba.


Keerat couldn't believe her eyes . She was in shock , her sister was finally back .She thought, it a was dream. She stumbled backwards ,but garry safely held her.


Keerat-(crying )sah..sahi..sahiba didi( to garry) (pointing towards sahiba) garry, wa..waha sahi..sahiba..sahiba didi.. sahiba didi hai na..mein sapna dekh rahi hoon.?


Garry-(crying) keerat , sahiba bhabhi hi hai..woh ..hamare..saamne hi hai.


Bani-badi mom, mummy ro kyu rahe ..akeer ki mumma ko dekh ke , papa..papa ,aur aap bhi kyu ro rahe ho..


Jasleen- mummy na apne sister se mil rahi hai na issliye mummy papa ro rahe hai.


Sahiba cried like a baby and so does were keery and jasleen. All those years of suppressed pain started to resurface.

Keerat immediately hugged sahiba as tightly as she could and didnt let go in the fear that it might turn out to be a mere mirage. For her, her search was over, her sister was back.


Finally, keerat let go away all those years of unsheded tears of pain and separation. Though, she never resented her sister for act as she knew their must be some strong valid reason for such step, but their was still anger in her, towards sahiba for not letting them know or contacting them in all this years. As ,she thought it was completely wrong on sahiba's part .


She was angry that her parents had to suffer of pain and burden of helpless because of sahiba's act to not contact them or taking their help . Though her parents never said a word of it ,but it was visible in their eyes and behavior till they breathed their last.


Sahiba too hugged her tightly.


Both the Sisters found the solace in each others embrace. After a long time she was able to speak some words .All those years of anguish, and pain started to pour out.


Keerat-(crying) kaha chale gaye the di, aap bina bataye???


"kya yeh ghar aapka nahi tha? mein aapki behen nahi hoon ??konse baat ki sazaa de rahe the aap hame???Kitna pareshaan the...hum sab di .... mein, mummy papa ,garry, mom, hum the na di phir kyu wapas nahi aaye ?"


" kyu wapas nahi aaye?? Mein ,ne na duniya se lad jaana tha aapke liye. mujh pe toh bharosa karti na di. kyu wapas nahi aaye? ! Hum pe bharosa nahi tha aapko? "


Breaking the hug Keerat continued.......


" di, ek rishta toot gaya toh iska matalb yeh toh na ki dusre rishte bhi khatam hogaye the!!

Mein , garry mom , mummy ,papa hum sab aapka saath dete....Hum ne konsi galti ki thi di ??Ki aap ne itni badi sazaa di hame."


"Kya aapke liye , ek saal ka rishta ina important hogaya ki aapne hamara apno ka rishta chod diya?

bolo na di...(keerat wipes her tears) bolo na .Chup kyu hai aap? Jawab chahiye mujeh..!!! mera aur aapka toh janam se rishta tha na , toh kya ek saal ke rishte ke saamne hum beheno ka rishta kamzor hogaya , di? "


"Bachpan se sab kuch saath saha hai,sab kuch saath kiiya hai, toh yeh bhi ,seh lete di, toh yeh bhi kar lete ..!! "


"Kya aapko hum itne kamzor lage ki aapko vishwas nahi tha ki hum aapke liye ,akeer keiye fight nahi kar paayenge?"


"Veer ke against ,puri family ke against gaye the mere liye , garry aur mom ko unka haq dilaya, toh di hum bhi toh aapke liye stand lete na.Bum itne bhi kamzor nahi hai, jitna aap samjhte ho!"


"Didi ek baar ..ek baar bhi kya aapko hamari yaad nahi aayi. itne saalo mein?Aapko nahi patah kaise kaise khayal aate the hume ..!!!! Mummy ,papa ko kaise un muskil waqt mein sambhala hai ..vishwas dilaaya hai ki sahiba didi lautegi ...ek din.."


"Aap Angad veerji se naraaz the... par humse konsi narazgi thi di aapki?..Ek call kar liya hota di..ek call !!!"


"Aap meri chodiye di, aapko patah hai garry ko, mom ko kitne sunna pada hai, woh log pure family ke against hogaye the meri help karne ke liye, aapko dhoodhne ke liye."


"Yaha tak ki garry 2 saal tak usse ghar se bahar nikaal diya tha.Kyuki ussne faisla kar liya tha ki woh mera saath dega ,aapko dhoondhne mein, aur iss mein ussne bhi bahut maar khaagi hai angad veerji se, par sab kuch ussne chup chaap sehen kiya kyu patah hai?"

" Kyu woh aapke liye khada tha .Aapke support mein khada tha.Woh do saal yaha rehta raha hai aur chup chaap mummy papa ka gussa saha hai.Angad jiju aur veer ke upar jo bhi gussa tha , mummy ,papa ne garry pe nikala hai taane maare hai, bahut kuch bura bhala kaha hai usko ,lekin woh chup raha.Aapke liye, mere liye."


"Garry ne mere liye fight ki hai, bani ke liye fight ki hai , toh aapke liye ,akeer le liye bhi woh fight karta na di!!"


Garry-(whispers) keerat..


keerat-(wipes her tears) nahi garry bolne do mujeh! bolne do !please ! Di ko patah chalna chahiye ki unke liye kuch log hai ,jinhe unki fikar hai, unki help ke liye tyaar hai .aur yeh bhi ki hum kamzor nahi..hum bhi unke liye stand le sakte hai aur unhe samjhna hoga ki woh aise hi sab kuch chod ke nahi jaa sakti .


Keerat cries more, So does sahiba. Sahiba knew , whatever keerat said was right, and her anger was right too. Her parents, sister and baweja's , they too unknowingly suffered .


Keerat again hugs sahiba.


Keerat - bahut miss karti thi mein aapko. Ab mat jaana di, please mat jaana ,warna mein tutt jaaungi.Mere ab aur shakti nahi bachi ki mein aapko kaise..kaise... samjhaau ki hum hai aapke liye ,aur hamesha rahenge ..aapke liye ,kyuki hum aapki family hai ,paraye nahi hai, ki jab mann kiya wapas aagaye aur mann kiya humse door chale gaye. Hume bhi hurt hota hai di, parwaah hoti hai aapki.


(holds sahiba's hands) Di, ab aap gaye na toh iss baar na zindgi bhar ke liye apse naraaz hojaaungi mein.


Sahiba in response just hugged keerat more and cried . She knew they didnt deserved that behavior ,but she had her own reasons to stay away from them .

They stayed their in each other embrace for long time.


Keerat-i am sorry ...sorry di..mein jaanti hoon koi wajah hogi ,aapne jo kiya uski wajah hogi,par yeh bhi galat tha ,ki aapne hum pe bharosa nahi kiya.


Garry pacified bani, as she got too emotional seeing her mother cry. Even akeer got teary, he didnt understand what keerat aunty was saying and why his mother and bani's parents were crying so much .

But he got emotional on seeing his mother cry like baby. It was the first time he saw his mother cry like that.


Akeer-(whispers) bebe, mein ne koi galti ki hai?



Bebe- nai beta


Akeer-(whispers) (tears) toh mamma ro kyu rahi hai, ? mamma ko aise rote dekh mujeh bhi rona aa raha hai..


Bebe-mamma na apne behen se yaani tumhari keerat masi itne saalo baad mil rahi issliye ro rahi hai.


Akeer-keerat aunty meri masi hai ??


Bebe-haan..


Keerat heard bani crying, breaking the hug she takes bani in her arm. She pacified bani.


Keerat- (emotional) (wipes her and bani tears) shhhss mein hoon na..dekho mummy nahi ro rahi na...shsss ..mein hoon na..yaha.(Holding Garry's hand) didi, yeh meri aur garry ki beti hai , bani.


Sahiba hugs bani .


Garry-(emotional) aap..aap kaise ho sahiba bhabhi, kaha chale gaye the...



Sahiba- mein..thik hoon...tum kaise ho...


Garry- (wipes his tears) mein thik hoon.Aaj dekh ke bahut khushi ho rahi hai bhabhi.Mein bata nahi sakta aapko aur akeer ko sahi salamt dekh ke bahut khushi mehsoos ho rahi hai.


Sahiba-Mujeh bhi bahut khushi ho rahi hai, Bahut miss kiya hai tum sab ko .


Sahiba greets Jalseen and hugs her. Both cries.


Jasleen-(wiping sahiba tears) kaha chali gayi thi tu..beta ..kaisi hai tu..Kitna yaad kiya hai..Tujeh sahi salamat dekh ke bahut khushi ho rahi hai.


Sahiba-Mein thik hoon bua, aap kaise ho aap sab ko bahut miss kiya hai...Aur aap toh bilkul bhi nahi badle...


Jasleen laughs. Sahiba then introduces akeer and diljeet's family.


Sahiba- akeer yaha aao, Tum bani ko jaante ho ,par tum yeh jaante ho ab yeh tumhari behen hai..Aur yeh keerat masi, Garry masa aur woh badi mom..

Akeer -mamma toh keerat masi sach meri masi hai ya jhut waali masi hai?

All looked puzzled ...

Sahiba-matalb ??


Akeer and bani then re narrates the competition day incident and what happened in the staff room.

All laugh at the incident.


Sahiba-nai yeh sach mein tumhari masi hai...


Akeer-toh woh teacher sach bol rahi thi?


Sahiba-haan...


Akeer -toh sach mein bani meri chotti behen hai....


Bani-(excitedly) haan...akeer bhaiya ,aap badam khaya karo..


Bani hugs akeer bhaiya and akeer hugs her back.


Akeer- ab mein apne saare dosto se kahunga ki meri chotti behen hai ..


keery and jasleen hugs akeer...


Sahiba- Keerat maa papa kaha hai?? mein akeer ko milwana chahti hoon. kaha hai woh bahar gaye hai?..(looks at garry). Garry. woh kaha hai bolo na ..bahar gaye hai?


Garry - Sahiba..bhabhi woh..mummy...papa...woh..(looks at keerat and jasleen)


Sahiba -bolna keerat


Keerat - (tears) (pause)sahiba di mummy, papa ab nahi rahe hai.


Sahiba-tu kya bol rahi hai?? mein kuch samjhi nahi, Jasleen bua, yeh keerat kya keh rahi hai


Jasleen- sahiba... keerat sahi keh rahi hai woh ab nahi rahe...


Sahiba was in tears ..She looked at keerat. To wait and tell it was a joke , But keerat didnt.

Keerat takes sahiba to their parents room ,where the portrait of their parents were there..

Keerat and sahiba entered their parents room followed by others.


Sahiba was shocked. She didnt wanted to believe it. She was not ready to accept it.

She lovingly touches their portraits and sits down in front them .


Keerat informed her that due to old age related issue they both passed away 7 years back .


Sahiba-(crying) mumma, papa dekho mein na aagayi hoon...i am sorry..sorry..Mein na bahut buri beti hoon...Bahut buri ....Jab aapko meri zyada zaroorat thi mein nahi thi...Bahut dukh diya hai mein aapko. Mein bahut swarthi hogayi thi..papa mammma ,please wapas aajao na..please..dekho na mein ..aapki sahiba aagayi hoon.Dekho na mere saath kon aaya hai..(she calls akeer diljeet biji and twinkle)


Sahiba -yeh ...yeh aapka pota akeer , yeh aapke damad diljeetji..yeh biji aur twinkle..


Sahiba cried more..


Akeer-(emotional) papa , mumma kyu ro rahi hai?Jab se aaye hai tab se ro rahi hai .Aur woh kon hai photo mein?


diljeet- (wipes his own tears)beta , woh na aapke nani , nana hai , woh bhagwan ke ghar chale gaye hai na issliye mumma ro rahi hai. Unke aashirwaad lo.


Keerat-(whispers)garry, tum sab ko leke niche jaao .Mein didi ke saath rukti hoon.


Garry- thik hai, aur kuch jaroorat ho toh mujeh bulaana le na.(to diljeet) diljeet ji , hum niche chalte hai ,baaki saari baate wahi karenge.Sajiba bhabhi ko hame thodi der ke liye akele chod dena chahiye..


Diljeet-haan...sahiba ji ko thodi waqt yahi rehne dijiye, bahut saalo ka dard chuppa ke rakha hai unhone ..Aaj beh jaane dijiye unhe.


Jasleen and biji were preparing tea and snacks.


Diljeet and Garry looked over the kids who were busy in playing the board game. They were happy to know that they were indeed brother and sister and didnt cared about what happened earlier the day.


Diljeet was emotional too today. He never knew what was parents love or how his parents looked. But he loved his biji and twinkle as his own and wouldn't want to loose them. He understood sahiba's pain and also of his sister in law's pain.

Eventhough ,young she must have gone through so much pain but handled it without shedding a tear or any complains or resent towards life. He admired Keerat's strength. She was even stronger than sahiba and was lucky to have a life partner like Garry who can go against family for his wife and daughter.

If sahiba fought and suppressed her pain for akeer for past 9 years. then so was her sister and her family .

Later on, Garry and Jasleen asked about how they found sahiba and why didnt sahiba contacted them in this past years. Diljeet tells them that it was better if sahiba herself tells it .

It had been hour or two,

Garry checks on sahiba and keerat. sahiba was resting on keerat's lap. Keerat was lost in her thoughts. On Seeing him, she carefully places pillow under sahiba's head and leaves the room.


Outside the room.


Garry- tum thik ho keerat?


Keerat nods in a yes.


Garry-aur sahiba bhabhi?


Keerat- Haan , woh bhi thik hai, Unhe bahut dukh pauncha hai, kabse yahi keh jaa rahi thi ki unhone sabko bahut dard diya hai.. Mein ne bahut samjhaya unhe,garry.


Garry- waqt ke saath saath sab thik hojaayega keerat.


Keerat-bacche thik hai?


Garry- haan, woh niche kamre mein khel rahe hai.


Keerat- didi so rahi hai, toh mein niche jaake sab ke liye khaana bana deti hoon.


Garry- tum sahiba bhabhi ke saath raho, mein ne khaana order kar liya hai.


Keerat- garry, kya diljeet ji ki family ko patah hai akeer ki sachai .


Garry- haan, unhe sab patah hai .


Garry before leaving hugs keerat assuring her that he was their for her and now that everything would be fine. Keerat too hugs him back and thanks him for being their for her taking care for everything.


After another hour sahiba and keerat joins the rest of family downstair


Sahiba- mein jaanti hoon bahut saare sawaal hai jinke mein saare jawab dena chahti hoon,par usse pehle mein akeer ka birthday celebrate karna chahti ,hoon yaha monga house mein sabke saath, mein usse promise kiya tha ki aaj uska birthday celebrate karenge.


Jasleen- thik hai, jaisa tum chaho. Aur aaj toh double khushi ka mauka hai aaj toh akeer ka birthday bhi hai aur itne barso baad tum wapas aayi ho.Toh celebration hona hi chahe.


Everyone freshens up and celebrate akeer's birthday . At night after Akeer and Bani slept in keerat's old room. Every one sat in the main hall and were having tea.


Jasleen-sahiba , tum jab chaho tab sab kuch bata sakti ho.Tum par koi pressure nahi hai. Mein jaanti hoon biti hui baato ko dauhrana bahut hi muskil hai.


Sahiba-nahi jasleen bua, mein sab baat batana chahti hoon,apne dil se bhoj utharna chahti hoon. Bas samjh nahi aa raha hai kaha se start karu, bahut kuch hai kehne ko..


Keerat- hmm ..toh hum baat shuru karte hai di, mere aur garry ke vyah se..


Keery tells how they got married ,about how their parents approved the marriage and that in brar house it was darji, bebe and jasleen who agreed for their marriage despite of disapprovals of certain family members. Keerat also tells about Brar's behavior towards her and their daughter bani and how in a recent fight garry stood up for her and bani .


Sahiba-(takes keerat hand) mein bahut khush hai .hoon ki teri kismat meri jaise nahi hai .Tujeh bahut acha pati aur dost mila. Jo tere liye aur bani ke liye khada ho . Teri care kare.Tujeh samjhe


Keerat- mein bahut khush di, Sach kahu agar garry aur mom nahi hote na toh mein kab ki tutt chuki hoti. Shayad mere mein koi strength nahi hoti ki mein kuch face karu


Sahiba-thank you garry.Mein aaj sahi maaino mein bahut khush yeh jaan ki tum keerat aur bani ka bahut khayal karte hai aur shayad tumhe acha na lage , yej sunn ne mein par mein khush ki tum angad jaise nahi ho. Aur kabhi banna bhi mat.


Garry- nahi bhabhi mujeh bura nahi laga, infact mom bhi yahi kehti hai ki woh khush hai ki mein angad jaise nahi hoon par yeah kya ,sahiba bhabhi thank you bolke paraya kar diya ..


Sahiba-nahi garry, paraya nahi kiya, par mein sach mein dil se thank you keh rahi hoon. Aaj tumne meri baat , mere vishwas ko sach kar diya, Jab tumhe apni galti ka ehsaas hua tha na tab mein ne dekha tha tumhari aankho mein , tumhe sach mein apne kiye par pastva tha aur apni galtio ko sudhara hai aur ek ache son , husband , father ki responsibilities nibha rahe ho .Bina dare tum apne family ke liye ,sach ke liye khade rahe.


Garry- yeh sab aapki wajah se possible hua ..aap thi toh mujeh chance mila , apni galtio ko dekhne ka aur mauka mila unhe sudharne ka aur aaj issi ki wajah se mujeh bahut hi pyari family mili hai . Toh aapko na thank you nahi bolna chahiye..Balki mujeh bolna chahiye .


Sahiba- kya brar house mein se kisiko patah hai akeer ke baare mein.?


Jasleen-nahi, sirf mujeh garry aur keerat ko patah hai.


Garry narrates how they got to know about fake report 2 months back.


Sahiba -jab uss din bus accident hua tha ,ussi din doctors ne medical camp meinuneh inform kiya tha ki mera miscarriage hua hi nahi..Aur yeh baat mein ne angad ko batane ki bahut koshish ki par ussne sunna tak nahi..infact mein aayi thi 9 saal pehle mein ek nahi do baar aayi yaha angad se milne usse batane ki hamara baby ko kuch nahi hua .


Jasleen, keery are shocked but were not surprised. As they already assumed that this situation as a possibility. Sahiba then narrates what happened exactly 9 years back.

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Phew !!! That is end of Part 5


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A/n: Heya guys so I have finally completed the last part. Its mainly based on sahiba's pov of what happened 9 years back and why she took such decision. And their is on sahan or diljeet sahiba here. I have just shown logical reason of why sahiba took certain steps. I hope you all like it.




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Part 6


Jasleen and keery were shocked but not surprised by sahiba's revelations.

Sahiba informed them that not once, but twice she came to ludhiana to tell about akeer to angad.


Jasleen- kya hua tha accident site pe??



Sahiba-jab bus accident hua, tab mein behosh hogayi thi aur phir jab hosh aaya toh mein medical camp mein thi. Aur waha ke doctor ne mujeh bataya ki mera koi miscarriage nahi hua hai.


Pehle toh mujeh vishwas hi nahi hua . Par jab unhone mujeh reports dikhaaye tab yakin hua.Phir mujeh diljeet ji mile toh mein ne unke mobile se angad ko call kiya tha .


Mein usse batana chahti thi ki hamara baccha zinda hai,par ussne kuch nahi sunna, aur bolne ka mauka hi nahi diya .Aur yeh keh diya ki mein usse aaj ke baad call na karu ,kyuki bacche ke saath saath hamara rishta bhi mar chukka hai aur mein bhi uske liye mar chuki hoon...


(wiping tears)


Uss waqt mein tutt chuki thi,ki mujeh kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya karu ,kya na karu .Aur phir jab medical camp mein meri halat kharab hone lagi toh waha ke doctors ne mujeh turant hi paas ke hospital mein admit hone ke liye kaha aur tab diljeet ji ne phirse meri help ki. Issliye mein unke saath panesar aagayi .


Sahiba- waha doctors ne bataya tha ki baby safe but unhe kaha ki bahut aaram ki zaroorat hai,3 mahine ke liye complete bed rest ke liye kaha tha. kyuki accident bhi hua toh bahut savdhani rakhni hogi. Travelling karne se bilkul mana kar diya tha ..aur mera phone bhi nahi tha uss waqt mere paas ki mein kisi ko bhi call karu .


Issliye thode din mein hospital mein admit rahi aur uske baad mein diljeet ji ke saath unke ghar chali gayi jaha biji aur twinkle ne mera bahut khayal rakha..


Diljeet- issi dauran , mein ne bahut try kiya Angad ko contact karne ke liye mere aur twinkle ke number se par ya toh call lagta hi nahi tha ya phir angad yeh bol ke call kaat deta tha ki unhe ab sahibaji se koi rishta nahi.Infact hamara number bhi block lar diya tha .Aur unke ghar pe bhi bhut try kiya tha but call out of reach ho jaa raha tha..


Sahiba- Aur issi liye ,3 mahine baad mein aur diljeet ji phir se brar office aaye the ,angad ko sab sach batane, mein apne saath reports bhi laayi thi,kyuki mujeh yakin tha angad bina proof ke meri baat pe vishwas nahi karega.Mein apne rishte ko ek aur mauka dena chahti..Angad ko akeer ki zindgi mein involve hone dena chahti thi..Par shayad yeh sirf mein chahti thi..Angad nahi .


Flashback starts...

@ outside brar office,


Sahiba asks the security guard about angad. They inform her that he was there in cabin for important meeting. So they needed to wait for another 2-4 hours.


Sahiba-veerji, mein aapse request karti hoon , aap please angad ko yeh urgent message dijiye ki sahiba aayi hai, aur bacche se related ek bahut hi important baat karni hai.Ek bahut badi misunderstanding hui hai ,usse clear karna hai..Please veerji wait nahi kar sakte aap please unhe yeh message abhi jaake dijiye..


Gatekeeper- thik hai ...thik hai...aap wait kijiye


After getting Angad's message..


Gatekeeper-Sorry, dekhiye aap jaayie yaha se ,anagd sar ka message hai ki woh aap se milna nahi chahti ,aur nahi koi baat chit karna chahte hai...


Sahiba- aap sunniye mera angad se baat karna bahut zaroori hai .Maan jaiye aap phir se unse kahiye ki sahiba aayi please. Please mein aapke aage haath jodti hoon...


Gatekeeper again goes aside and talks to his subordinates..


Gatekeeper-Angad sir aapse milna bhi nahi chahte..Unke strict orders hai ki agar aap yaha se abhi nai gaye toh ..Toh hame by force aapko yaha se nikaalna hoga.


Diljeet-Sahibaji aap baithe mein baat karta hoon..


Sahiba-nahi , aapne dekhna woh mujeh aur aapko ander tak nahi jaane de rahe hai.Meri baat bhi sunne ke liye tyaar nahi Kya karu kuch samjh nahi aa raha hai.(to herself)please angad maan jaao, hamara rishta tutt ne ki kagaar pe hai.


She thinks for sometime..


Sahiba-haan ek insaan hai jo meri baat sunega ..aur usse anagad ka bhi darr nahi..Woh angad ke orders ke upar jaa sakta hai .


Diljeet-kon..sahibaji?


Sahiba- Garry, Jalseen bua ka beta


Diljeet-Kya wph aapki baat sunnega?


Sahiba-haan jaroor sunnega .ek woh aur jasleen bua hi hai pure brar house mein jo mere liye khade hote ...Mera saath dete hai aur jinki himmat hai ki woh angad ke saamne hojaaye.


Sahiba - (to gatekeeper)veerji aap garry ..Garry sir. hai?aap garry sir ko bula dijiye yaha unse kaho ki sahiba bhabhi aayi hai aur bacche se related bahut hi important baat karni hai( to herself) Hey babaji,please please garry office mein ho..


Gatekeeper-areee aap phir aagaye ,aap jaaye yaha se,warna by force mujeh aap dono ko nikaal na hoga


Sahiba- Veerji,please ek baar sunn lijiye, Garry ..Garry sir hai?Mujeh milna hai unse..please aap garry sir se baat kijiye ,kahiye ki sahiba aayi hai (to herself) i hope garry ho , office mein, ab woh hi meri last hope hai..


Gatekeeper-Garry sir nahi hai, woh bahar gaye hai ab aap yaha se jaaye..Angad sir ke orders hai aap ko yaha kisi se bhi milne nahi diya jaayega


Sahiba-aap jhut bol rahe hai, garry hai yaha hai, office. mein , uski car yahi park ki hai .Mujeh milne dijiye Garry se.


Gatekeeper doesn't listen and asks them to leave.


Diljeet- mein aapse haath jodke request kar raha hoon, ek baar garry ji se milne dijiye...bahut hi important baat karni hai.Aap kisiki baat mat sunniye insaaniyat ke naate ek baar mila dijiye...


Gatekeeper-areee ek baar kaha samjh nahi aata ..


Gatekeeper slightly pushes away sahiba..Diljeet gets angry


Diljeet-(angrily) areee aap yeh kaise behave kar rahe hai..aap dekh nahi rahe hai yeh pregnant...hai dhakka kyu maar rahe hai..yeh kya tarika hai..?? Sahibaji chaliye...


Sahiba-nai..mein nahi jaa sakti ,mera rishta tutt jaayega, ek aakhri umid bhi chali jaayegi , diljeet ji mein yahi rahungi..


Diljeet-sahibaji,mein samjhta hoon, par angad ko aapki koi baat sun ne ke mood mein nahi hai..dekha nahi kaise dhakke maarke nikaal ne ka order diya hai...mein jaanta hoon yeh matter important hai,par aapke bacche aur aapki health se zyada nahi

..Aap samjhiye ab aap akeli nahi hai,aapke saath aapka baby hai, uska bhi khayal rakhna hai aapko.


Sahiba- nahi diljeetji, Aaj agar yaha se mein chali gayi toh bahut badi galti hogi...Mein angad se uska haq nahi chin sakti ...Mujeh patah hai garry ander hi hai , lekin angad ne garry tak yeh news paunchne hi nahi dega..mein haar nahi maan sakti ..


Diljeet-mein jaanta hoon sahiba ji aur mein wapas jaane ke liye nahi keh raha hoon,par abhi aap yaha se chaliye aapki sehet kharab hojaayegi..Aap apna nahi toh baby ke baare mein soch ke chaliye abhi yaha se...please


Sahiba reluctantly agrees..

@near a small cafe...

Diljeet gives water and some food


Diljeet-dekhiye sahibaji, mein jaanta hoon apko angad se milna hai, par aap samjhiye abhi bhi woh bahut gusse mein hai,woh ek baat bhi aapki nahi sunega..


Sahiba-Mujeh samjah hi nahi aa raha.Kya karu..Kya karu ki woh meri baat sun ne ke liye raazi hojaaye. (thinks for some min)ek raasta hai..hum brar house chalte hai, bhale hi uss ne mujeh yaha nahi milne diya ,par brar house mein , mein dusre family waalo ko bata sakti hoon.


Diljeet-par woh log bhi toh aapse baat nahi kar a chahte na..


Sahiba-saare, nahi,sirf kuch log baat karna nahi chahte..Kaise bhi karke mujeh ek baar darji,ya bebe ya jasleen bua se milna hai . Hame abhi turant brar house ke liye nikalna hoga..


Sahiba and diljeet reaches brar house. Going back to brar house was not easy for her ,she remembered the fateful day. Unfortunately, like brar office ,she was not allowed near brar house , she tries her best to convince the security guards , but they didnt allowed her to enter or contact them.

Flashback ends.....


Sahiba- mein ne bahut koshish ki par kuch nahi hua. Uss waqt lag raha tha maano saare darwaaze bandh hogaye ho.Phir mein yaha , monga house aayi toh ghar pe taala laga tha ,patah chala ki ghar tin mahine se bandh tha..


Flash back starts..


@it was evening...


Sahiba- hame yaha wait karna hoga, diljeet ji ,shayad woh log aajaye.


Diljeet- thodi der aur wait kar lete hai..


After few more hours...


Diljeet-sahibaji,lagta hai ab hame chalna chahiye..Bahut der hogayi hai aur aapko ya mujeh bhi nahi patah aapke gharwaale kab aayenge. Issliye better hoga ki hum wapas panesar chale aur wapas aayenge phir se yaha monga house kal.


Sahiba reluctantly agrees


Flashback ends..


Sahiba- mein dusre hi din aana chahti thi ,par meri tabiyat aur kharab hogayi aur doctor ne mujeh complete bed rest bola tha..issliye akeer ke janam se pehle mein naa hi aa paayi aur naahi kisiko call kiya.


Unn mahino mein mein ne bahut socha ..apne aur angad ke rishte ke baare . Aur tab mujeh lagne laga tha ki ab hamara rishta wapas nahi judega.


Patah hai,jab meri pregnancy ki news aayi thi ,tab mujeh yeh umeed jaghi thi ki iss rishte ke naye kisse hum dono phir se ek saath nayi shuruat kare , apne rishte ko bhi chance denge, par mein galat thi kyuki chance toh sirf mein dena chahti thi. Par Angad ke hissab se woh sirf aur sirf bacche ke liye chance dena chahta tha kyuki uske hissab ab humaare bich kuch nahi badla tha aur baccha hi ek akkhri kadi thi rishte ki.


Uske liye uske khoon ke rishta hi sab kuch hai. Shaadi ke baad se uss ne sab ki baato par aankh bandh karke vishwas kiya hai, par jabhi mein ne kuch kaha hai ,ussne kabhi bhi vishwas nahi kiya.(laughs scarstically) yaha tak ussne seerat di ki baato par mujh se zyada vishwas tha..


Mein 9 mahine tak apne mann ko samjhati rahi , dilasaa dilaati rahi ki sab kuch thik hojaayega.Par aisa kuch nahi hua.


Sahiba - Jab ,akeer ke janam ke baad do mahine pure hogaye and doctor ne permission di tab, mein yeh hi sochke aayi thi ki shayad ab angad mujeh par yakin karega jab woh akeer ko dekhega.Mein akeer ke liye,apne doobte hue rishte ko bacahne ,anagd ke liye ,ek aakhri baar aayi thi.


.Flashback starts


@in panesar,


Sahiba and diljeet were leaving for ludhiana


Biji- sahiba, puttar aaj tu jo bhi faisla kare , ek baat yaad rakhna yeh ghar ke darwaaze tere liye aur akeer ke liye hamesha hamesha khule rahenge.


Sahiba-ji, biji...


sahiba hugs Biji


Sahiba and diljeet leaves for ludhiana


@in waiting room,brar office


Sahiba and diljeet were in the waiting room.


Diljeet-(whispers) sahibaji, yeh toh achi baat hai angad ne aapko yaha waiting room mein aane diya iska matalb angad ka gussa thanda hogaya hai..Yeh toh acha sign hai.


Sahibaji- Haan, (looking at a sleeping akeer) angad aaj bahut khush hoga...


It was an hour ..diljeet inquired about angad, But they were told to wait for more time...


Akeer's sleep gets disturbed so he starts crying.Sahiba pacifies him and diljeet helps.


There were few more people,in waiting room..


P1-Awww kitna cute baby hai....kya mein isse hold kar sakti hoon??

Sahiba smiles.


sahiba-ji..dhyan se , bahut shaitaan hai yeh ..kisi ke paas itni aasani se nahi jaata .


As soon as sahiba tries to hand over akeer to the lady ,but he starts crying. not wanting to depart with sahiba


lady- areee yeh toh rona start kar diya ...


Sahiba-kaha tha, yeh aisa hi karega...(pacifying akeer)areee shsss..mein yahi hoon..shssss..


Diljeet-areee ek min..ek min chotte sahab aapka fav toy deta hoon..phir rona bandh hoga..


Sahiba and diljeet pacifies akeer and he stops crying and starts to smile ..


lady- awww ...so sweet family. aap dono ki jodi kitni cute..Aapka beta toh aap dono pe gaya hai..


Sahiba and diljeet looked awkwardly at each other .


Sahiba- actually hum dost hai.....He is not my husband.


Diljeet-haan..hum couple nahi hai..


Lady-oh..i am sorry , mujeh laga aap dono couple hai..


Sahiba-no..no its okay..


Soon , the lady leaves...


Sahiba -mujeh bahut fikar ho rahi hai...kya angad maanega? Ussne mere pe ek baar bhi vishwas nahi kiya aur baat bhi sunni.


Diljeet-aap chinta mat kijiye, mujeh lagta hai tab woh shayad bahut gusse mein the issliye angad aapse nahi mile , par aap dekhiyega ,aaj yeh chottu sahab ko dekhenge toh unhe turant patah chal jaayega ki woh akeer ke father hai..


Sahiba smiles..


Suddenly, the door opens angad walks in furiously


Flashback ends..


Sahiba- Jab akeer ke saath aayi toh mein ne socha tha, angad aaj sab se zyada khush hoga apne bete ko dekhe, ek umeed jagi thi ki, akeer ko dono ka pyaar milega. Par mein galat thi .Jab angad waiting room mein aaya toh ussne akeer ki aur dekha bhi nahi aur siddha ek hi baat dauhraane laga ke kaise mein ne uske bacche ko maar diya aur meri wajah se uske parivaar ko kitna kuch sehna pada hai..Aur kaise mein uske ghaav par aur zakhm dene aayi hoon yeh soch ke ki mein diljeet ki saath move on hogayi aur phir se nayi duniya basai.


Woh bolta gaya aur mein chup chaap waha sab sunnti rahi..Jab woh yeh sab kuch bol raha tha..mein uski aankho mein sirf ek hi chizz dekhna chahti ,ek umeed hamare marte hue rishte ko zinda rakhne ki umeed.Par woh hi thi nahi,kyuki usko aankho saamne sirf ek hi chizz thi woh aur uske khoon ke rishte..aur uski ghatiya ghinouni soch .Issliye tab hi ussi waqt mein ne decide kar liya ki angad ko akeer ki sachai kabhi nahi patah chalne doongi.


Flashback starts


Sahiba slaps angad


Sahiba-(crying) yeh thappad na Mr.Angad Singh brar yeh thappad mera jawab tumhare har woh lagaye jhute inzaam ka .Tumhari ghinoni soch ka, jo tum ne paal rakhi hai uske liye hai. Woh has waqt ka jab tumne aur tumhari family ne mujeh zhalil kiya hai.

Aur acha hi hua,jo move on hogayi warna tumahre jaise insaan ke saath puri zindgi bitaani padti mujeh.Ek baat yaad rakhna Mr.brar tum na kaan ke kacche insaan ho aur ek din issi wajah se bahut pachtoge bahut.


Aur chinta mat karo Mr.brar , mein tumhare family kya tumahre life bhi ab nahi aana chahti .Aur aaungi bhi nahi ,kyuki mujeh na tumhare ghar mein kuch log hai jinki mujeh phikar hai, aur unhe bhi meri phikar hai..toh unhe mein suffer nahi karne doongi..


Angad leaves and throws the signed divorce papers on ground.


Diljeet picks up the papers


Sahiba -papers dijiye diljeet ji, Jo rishta tutt chuka hai, jiss rishte mein saaman nahi woh rishte ko zinda rakhne ka koi matalb nahi ..


Sahiba gives akeer in diljeet's arms ..


Sahiba gives a glance at peacefully sleeping akeer and then signs on divorce papers.


She hands it over to the guard and asks to give it too angad.


Before leaving the waiting room , she takes out the ring and pendent which angad gave to her .


Diljeet- aap ek bar aur soch lijiye..aisa ho toh mein baat karta hoon


Sahiba-(whispers )jab rishta hi tutt gaya hai toh, usse judde rakhna galat hoga aur iske saath har ek chizz ko bhi tutt na hoga.jo iss rishte ki yaad dilaayega


And with this sahiba with all her anger and frustration throws away the ring and pendent on ground and leaves from there.


Flasbhback ends....


Sahiba -jab mein uss din waha se nikli ussi pal se mein ne decide kar liya tha ki ,ab mera jo bhi faisla hoga , jo kuch bhi mein karungi sirf apne bacche ke liye karungi, phir uss ke liye mujeh sab se door rehna kyu na pade,jitna selfish banna pade ,mein banugi. Mujeh patah tha ki agar mein ne garry , jasleen bua ko ya apne ghar mein se kisi se bhi contact kiya toh tum sab mujeh lene aaoge aur tum log na chaho phir kisi na kisi tarah se angad yeh sach patah lag hi jaata.


Mujeh patah tha ki aisa karne se mere parivar ko, tum sabko dukh paunchta,par uss waqt meri prority akeer ban chuki thi.


Agar aisa kuch hua bhi nahi hota , aur mein angad ke saath reh rahi hoti toh bhi yahi hoti , toh bhi meri ek galti ya agar akeer ko bhul se bhi ek chotti si kharoch aajati toh bina kuch soche samjhe , mujeh hi kasurvaar kehta ,yaha tak uska bas chalta toh mujeh akeer ke janam baad hi mujeh ghar se nikaal deta, kyuki uski nazaro mein toh mein hi kasoorvaar rahungi hamesha, woh akeer apne jaisa bana deta..ek number ka selfish aadmi, jisse sirf aur sirf apne khoon ke rishte ko dard dikhta hai dusro ka nahi.


Mein jaanti thi aisa karne se mein maa papa ko bahut dukh doongi, par uss waqt mein ne kuch nahi socha ,mein ne woh har faisla liya jo mujeh sahi laga . Aur dekho na bhagwan iski sazaa bhi dedhi, mein aakhir waqt par bhi apne mummy papa ko nahi mil paayi. Khair, phir mein ne ussi din mein ne ek aur faisla liya...


Flashback starts...


@Gurudwara


Sahiba - (wipes her tears) meri hi galti thi jo,mein yaha aayi..Mujeh laga tha ab tum mujeh par vishwas karoge ,par aaj tumahre iss jhute aur giri hui soch ne saabit kar diya ,ki tum sirf wohi sochte ho aur samjhte ho jo tumhe ,dikhta hai,jo tumhe sach lagta hai aur usse hi sach maan lete, ho.Par mein akeer ko tumhare jaisa insaan bilkul bhi nahi banaungi . Tum laayak hi nahi ho.Ab jo bhi faisla loongi woh sirf aur sirf akeer ke liye iske liye mujeh mere apno se door rehna pade toh woh bhi karungi.


While , praying..


Sahiba-mujeh maaf kar dena babaji, aaj jo faisla liya hai usse mummy,papa,keerat aur woh un sab logo dukh paunchne wala hai..Mein yeh sab akeer ke bhavishya ke liye kar rahi hoon..Babaji,mere mummy ,papa ,keerat, ka khayal rakhna..


In premises,


Sahiba-diljeetji ,mein ne faisla kar liya hai ,mein aapke saath panesar wapas aa rahi hoon..


Diljeet-thik hai, par kya ek baar aap aapne ghar waalo se..


Sahiba-nahi ,agar mein waha gayi wapas monga house ,toh mein kamzor hojaaungi apne faisle pe.Ak aur faisla hai, jis mein mujeh aapki rai jaani hai aur agar aapko sahi lage toh hi aap haan kariyega .mera koi pressure nahi hai..


Diljeet- aap kya kehna chah rahi hai,mein kuch samjha nahi..


Sahiba-kya aap mujeh se shaadi karenge?


Diljeet is taken a back...


Diljeet-aap...aap ..sahibaji aap..?Kyu??mujeh lagta hai hame angad se phir se milna ..chahiye ..Aap yeh decision kyu le rahi hai???


Sahiba-nahi diljeet ji, woh nahi sunnega..Agar usse sunna tha woh kuch mahino pehle hi sunn leta..Aapne dekhana kitna kaan ka kacha insaan hai..woh..Aur mein nahi chahti ki mera akeer angad jaisa banne .Aur aaj jo ussne kaha hai uske baad na,mein bilkul bhi aise aadmi ke saath zindgi bitana nahi chahungi aur nahi akeer ko uske jaisa banne doongi.


Mein ne issliye aapse shaadi ki baat rakhi ,kyuki mujeh patah hai, kabhi na kabhi akeer ka sach bahar jaroor aayega aur tab woh puri koshish karega akeer ko mujeh se chinne ki .Aur yeh bhi hai ki mein chahti hoon ki akeer ko dono parents ka mile .


Aur mere nazariye mein aap ek bahut ache pita ban sakte hai akeer ke liye.Haan par aap par koi force nahi rahega .kyuki aapki bhi zindgi hai aage.


aur aapki bhi khawashiye hongi aur mein jaanti hoon kisi aur ke bacche ko apna keh ke ,maan ke paalna bahut hi mushkil hai.Aur ek aur baat hai, agar aap haan kehte hai toh mein yeh shaadi nibhane ko puri koshish karungi par ,yeh bhi hai ki.. kabhi bhi woh patni wala...haq mein nahi de paaungi.


Diljeet-yeh ek bahut bada faisla hai ..mujeh thoda waqt chahiye hoga sochne. ke liye..


Sahiba-thik hai....


After two hours,


Diljeet- mein ne soch liya hai sahibaji,mein shaadi ke liye tyar hoon...


Sahiba- diljeet ji, aap koi bhi faisla jaldbaazi mein lena, please aap ek aur baar sochiye, aap ek aise chizz liye haan keh rahe hai.Jiska effect hum sabki zindgi mein aayega,yeh bahut bada faisla hai.kyu ki jo kuch hua uske baad mera shaadi aur pyaar par se vishwas uth chuka hai.Mein shayad kabhi aapko woh haq bhi na de paau.

Mein nahi jaanti aap mere baare mein kya soch rahe hai ya kya sochte hai,mein bas itna jaanti hoon aur dekh chuki hoon ki aap akeer ke liye bahut kuch kiya hai aur mein jaanti hoon aap ek ache father honge.

Aur mein ne yeh faisla issliye liya kyunki mein nahi chahti ki angad ko kal ko uth ke koi mauka mile mujeh se mere akeer ko chinn ne ke liye.Mein aapko force nahi karungi, kyuki yeh aapki jindgi ka sawaal hai, aur aapke saath biji aur twinkle bhi judi hai.


Diljeet-mein ne soch liya sahibaji, aap chinta mat kariye, mein sab soch ke hi haan keh raha hoon.


Sahiba-thik hai, par ek baar mein biji se bhi baat karungi.Mein unki permission se hi yeh faisle mein aage badhungi.


Diljeet-thik hai, par ek baat kahi sahibaji..


Sahiba-kahiye


Diljeet-aage jaake jo bhi faisla ho, hum shaadi kare ya na kare ,par hum ek dusre ke ache dost hamesha rahenge.Issliye agar shaadi hui bhi na toh bhale hi hamare rishta ka roop badla ho par hamari pakki dosti hamesha rahegi, manzoor?


Sahiba-(smiles) manzoor..


Flasback ends


Sahiba-aur phir panesar aane ke baad mein ne biji se saari baat ki aur uske baad hum ne court marriage ki.


Jasleen-kitna sab kuch hogaya ,par angad ek baar bhi iss baat ka zikhr ghar mein kabhi nahi kiya. Mein nahi jaanti thi ki uske dil mein itni nafrat bhari hui hai..


Sahiba-nafrat nahi bua ego aur uska kisi pe bhi vishwas na karna .Yeh hi sab ki wajah hai ki aaj hum sab iss mod par hai..


Sahiba- patah hai hamara rishta puri tarah se bikharana start kab hua? jab angad ne seerat di ki baaton mein aake mujeh divorce papers diye the .

Mein ne kitna kaha tha angad se ki mujh par vishwas karo mein apne free lance project ke liye woh lawyer ke pass gayi thi, par ussne vishwas hi nahi kiya, mujeh samjh jana chahiye ki hamare rishte mein bahut darar aa gayi hai jab uss ne mujeh thappad mara tha . mein hi pagal thi jo mein sochne lagi thi ki ab sab sahi hoga.

Hum apne rishte ki nayi shurrat karenge ,jab meri pregnancy ki news aayi thi.Par sab kuch galat tha.


Mein jaanti hoon diljeet ji akeer asli pita nahi hai par unhone har ek father ka farz pura kiya hai.Aisa nahi ki woh perfect hai, unse bhi galtiya hoti hai par woh unhe sudharte hai, taaki akeer unko dekh ke sikhe .


Sahiba narrates how diljeet asked to punish him too.


Sahiba recounts every inside when angad torutured her, distrusted and disrepsected her.


Aur yeh sirf ek baat nahi yai jabse hamara vyah hua tha, usse sirf aur sirf meri galtiyaan hi nazar aayi, ussne har baar , har pal shak kiya hai , bina koi shaq kiye kabhi bharosa nahi kiya,


9 saal pehle uss din, mujeh sach mein nahi patah tha ki mera ek faisla ka yeh anjaam hoga.


Tab mein ne yahi socha tha ki agar aaj un baccho ki help nahi ki, toh mein kabhi apne honewaale bacche se aankh nahi mila paaungi, kyuki jabhi aankh milaaungi tab woh bacche nazar aayenge jinhe mein bacha nahi paayi ..jinki help nahi kar paayi.mein na rab se, na khud se kabhi nazare mila paati.


Jasleen - ( helds her hands) sahiba , mein ne khud garry aur kiara ke liye ladai ladi hai apne parivaar se , uske liye mujeh har woh kadam jo mujeh sahi laga mein ne kiya hai jiss mein mere baccho ka benefit ho.

Haan pehle galat raasta chunna tha par ab sahi raasta chunti hoon , toh tune kuch galat nahi kiya hai sahiba apne aap ko dosh mat de.Itne saalo mein apne parivaar waalo ko mein bahut achi tarike se jaan gayi hoon. .Aur mujeh lagta hai tune jo bhi faisla liya sahi liya hai.Aur yeh mein maa ke nazariye se keh rahi hoon. Issliye mein saath hoon aur hamesha rahungi .


Garry-Haan sahiba bhabhi, mein sach kahu toh jab hame patah chala ki aapka miscarriage nahi hua tha, tab hame laga ki ab wapas sahi hojaayega , angad ko bhi wapas khushiyaan mil jaayegi, par ussne jo kiya hai,uske baad i think aapne sahi decision liya hai bhabhi ,hum tino aapke saath hai.


Keerat- haan, di ab aap akele nahi ho..


For the weekend sahiba and panesar stays at monga house, Keery and jasleen suggests that sahiba and her family can move to ludhiana at monga house . But sahiba tells them that she will think about it, however, till then every weekend she would try to come to ludhiana along with her family to stay at monga house .


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The end...


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A/n: Heya guys so I have finally completed the last part. Its mainly based on sahiba's pov of what happened 9 years back and why she took such decision. And their is on sahan or diljeet sahiba here. I have just shown logical reason of why sahiba took certain steps. I hope you all like it.




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Part 6


Jasleen and keery were shocked but not surprised by sahiba's revelations.

Sahiba informed them that not once, but twice she came to ludhiana to tell about akeer to angad.


Jasleen- kya hua tha accident site pe??



Sahiba-jab bus accident hua, tab mein behosh hogayi thi aur phir jab hosh aaya toh mein medical camp mein thi. Aur waha ke doctor ne mujeh bataya ki mera koi miscarriage nahi hua hai.


Pehle toh mujeh vishwas hi nahi hua . Par jab unhone mujeh reports dikhaaye tab yakin hua.Phir mujeh diljeet ji mile toh mein ne unke mobile se angad ko call kiya tha .


Mein usse batana chahti thi ki hamara baccha zinda hai,par ussne kuch nahi sunna, aur bolne ka mauka hi nahi diya .Aur yeh keh diya ki mein usse aaj ke baad call na karu ,kyuki bacche ke saath saath hamara rishta bhi mar chukka hai aur mein bhi uske liye mar chuki hoon...


(wiping tears)


Uss waqt mein tutt chuki thi,ki mujeh kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya karu ,kya na karu .Aur phir jab medical camp mein meri halat kharab hone lagi toh waha ke doctors ne mujeh turant hi paas ke hospital mein admit hone ke liye kaha aur tab diljeet ji ne phirse meri help ki. Issliye mein unke saath panesar aagayi .


Sahiba- waha doctors ne bataya tha ki baby safe but unhe kaha ki bahut aaram ki zaroorat hai,3 mahine ke liye complete bed rest ke liye kaha tha. kyuki accident bhi hua toh bahut savdhani rakhni hogi. Travelling karne se bilkul mana kar diya tha ..aur mera phone bhi nahi tha uss waqt mere paas ki mein kisi ko bhi call karu .


Issliye thode din mein hospital mein admit rahi aur uske baad mein diljeet ji ke saath unke ghar chali gayi jaha biji aur twinkle ne mera bahut khayal rakha..


Diljeet- issi dauran , mein ne bahut try kiya Angad ko contact karne ke liye mere aur twinkle ke number se par ya toh call lagta hi nahi tha ya phir angad yeh bol ke call kaat deta tha ki unhe ab sahibaji se koi rishta nahi.Infact hamara number bhi block lar diya tha .Aur unke ghar pe bhi bhut try kiya tha but call out of reach ho jaa raha tha..


Sahiba- Aur issi liye ,3 mahine baad mein aur diljeet ji phir se brar office aaye the ,angad ko sab sach batane, mein apne saath reports bhi laayi thi,kyuki mujeh yakin tha angad bina proof ke meri baat pe vishwas nahi karega.Mein apne rishte ko ek aur mauka dena chahti..Angad ko akeer ki zindgi mein involve hone dena chahti thi..Par shayad yeh sirf mein chahti thi..Angad nahi .


Flashback starts...

@ outside brar office,


Sahiba asks the security guard about angad. They inform her that he was there in cabin for important meeting. So they needed to wait for another 2-4 hours.


Sahiba-veerji, mein aapse request karti hoon , aap please angad ko yeh urgent message dijiye ki sahiba aayi hai, aur bacche se related ek bahut hi important baat karni hai.Ek bahut badi misunderstanding hui hai ,usse clear karna hai..Please veerji wait nahi kar sakte aap please unhe yeh message abhi jaake dijiye..


Gatekeeper- thik hai ...thik hai...aap wait kijiye


After getting Angad's message..


Gatekeeper-Sorry, dekhiye aap jaayie yaha se ,anagd sar ka message hai ki woh aap se milna nahi chahti ,aur nahi koi baat chit karna chahte hai...


Sahiba- aap sunniye mera angad se baat karna bahut zaroori hai .Maan jaiye aap phir se unse kahiye ki sahiba aayi please. Please mein aapke aage haath jodti hoon...


Gatekeeper again goes aside and talks to his subordinates..


Gatekeeper-Angad sir aapse milna bhi nahi chahte..Unke strict orders hai ki agar aap yaha se abhi nai gaye toh ..Toh hame by force aapko yaha se nikaalna hoga.


Diljeet-Sahibaji aap baithe mein baat karta hoon..


Sahiba-nahi , aapne dekhna woh mujeh aur aapko ander tak nahi jaane de rahe hai.Meri baat bhi sunne ke liye tyaar nahi Kya karu kuch samjh nahi aa raha hai.(to herself)please angad maan jaao, hamara rishta tutt ne ki kagaar pe hai.


She thinks for sometime..


Sahiba-haan ek insaan hai jo meri baat sunega ..aur usse anagad ka bhi darr nahi..Woh angad ke orders ke upar jaa sakta hai .


Diljeet-kon..sahibaji?


Sahiba- Garry, Jalseen bua ka beta


Diljeet-Kya wph aapki baat sunnega?


Sahiba-haan jaroor sunnega .ek woh aur jasleen bua hi hai pure brar house mein jo mere liye khade hote ...Mera saath dete hai aur jinki himmat hai ki woh angad ke saamne hojaaye.


Sahiba - (to gatekeeper)veerji aap garry ..Garry sir. hai?aap garry sir ko bula dijiye yaha unse kaho ki sahiba bhabhi aayi hai aur bacche se related bahut hi important baat karni hai( to herself) Hey babaji,please please garry office mein ho..


Gatekeeper-areee aap phir aagaye ,aap jaaye yaha se,warna by force mujeh aap dono ko nikaal na hoga


Sahiba- Veerji,please ek baar sunn lijiye, Garry ..Garry sir hai?Mujeh milna hai unse..please aap garry sir se baat kijiye ,kahiye ki sahiba aayi hai (to herself) i hope garry ho , office mein, ab woh hi meri last hope hai..


Gatekeeper-Garry sir nahi hai, woh bahar gaye hai ab aap yaha se jaaye..Angad sir ke orders hai aap ko yaha kisi se bhi milne nahi diya jaayega


Sahiba-aap jhut bol rahe hai, garry hai yaha hai, office. mein , uski car yahi park ki hai .Mujeh milne dijiye Garry se.


Gatekeeper doesn't listen and asks them to leave.


Diljeet- mein aapse haath jodke request kar raha hoon, ek baar garry ji se milne dijiye...bahut hi important baat karni hai.Aap kisiki baat mat sunniye insaaniyat ke naate ek baar mila dijiye...


Gatekeeper-areee ek baar kaha samjh nahi aata ..


Gatekeeper slightly pushes away sahiba..Diljeet gets angry


Diljeet-(angrily) areee aap yeh kaise behave kar rahe hai..aap dekh nahi rahe hai yeh pregnant...hai dhakka kyu maar rahe hai..yeh kya tarika hai..?? Sahibaji chaliye...


Sahiba-nai..mein nahi jaa sakti ,mera rishta tutt jaayega, ek aakhri umid bhi chali jaayegi , diljeet ji mein yahi rahungi..


Diljeet-sahibaji,mein samjhta hoon, par angad ko aapki koi baat sun ne ke mood mein nahi hai..dekha nahi kaise dhakke maarke nikaal ne ka order diya hai...mein jaanta hoon yeh matter important hai,par aapke bacche aur aapki health se zyada nahi

..Aap samjhiye ab aap akeli nahi hai,aapke saath aapka baby hai, uska bhi khayal rakhna hai aapko.


Sahiba- nahi diljeetji, Aaj agar yaha se mein chali gayi toh bahut badi galti hogi...Mein angad se uska haq nahi chin sakti ...Mujeh patah hai garry ander hi hai , lekin angad ne garry tak yeh news paunchne hi nahi dega..mein haar nahi maan sakti ..


Diljeet-mein jaanta hoon sahiba ji aur mein wapas jaane ke liye nahi keh raha hoon,par abhi aap yaha se chaliye aapki sehet kharab hojaayegi..Aap apna nahi toh baby ke baare mein soch ke chaliye abhi yaha se...please


Sahiba reluctantly agrees..

@near a small cafe...

Diljeet gives water and some food


Diljeet-dekhiye sahibaji, mein jaanta hoon apko angad se milna hai, par aap samjhiye abhi bhi woh bahut gusse mein hai,woh ek baat bhi aapki nahi sunega..


Sahiba-Mujeh samjah hi nahi aa raha.Kya karu..Kya karu ki woh meri baat sun ne ke liye raazi hojaaye. (thinks for some min)ek raasta hai..hum brar house chalte hai, bhale hi uss ne mujeh yaha nahi milne diya ,par brar house mein , mein dusre family waalo ko bata sakti hoon.


Diljeet-par woh log bhi toh aapse baat nahi kar a chahte na..


Sahiba-saare, nahi,sirf kuch log baat karna nahi chahte..Kaise bhi karke mujeh ek baar darji,ya bebe ya jasleen bua se milna hai . Hame abhi turant brar house ke liye nikalna hoga..


Sahiba and diljeet reaches brar house. Going back to brar house was not easy for her ,she remembered the fateful day. Unfortunately, like brar office ,she was not allowed near brar house , she tries her best to convince the security guards , but they didnt allowed her to enter or contact them.

Flashback ends.....


Sahiba- mein ne bahut koshish ki par kuch nahi hua. Uss waqt lag raha tha maano saare darwaaze bandh hogaye ho.Phir mein yaha , monga house aayi toh ghar pe taala laga tha ,patah chala ki ghar tin mahine se bandh tha..


Flash back starts..


@it was evening...


Sahiba- hame yaha wait karna hoga, diljeet ji ,shayad woh log aajaye.


Diljeet- thodi der aur wait kar lete hai..


After few more hours...


Diljeet-sahibaji,lagta hai ab hame chalna chahiye..Bahut der hogayi hai aur aapko ya mujeh bhi nahi patah aapke gharwaale kab aayenge. Issliye better hoga ki hum wapas panesar chale aur wapas aayenge phir se yaha monga house kal.


Sahiba reluctantly agrees


Flashback ends..


Sahiba- mein dusre hi din aana chahti thi ,par meri tabiyat aur kharab hogayi aur doctor ne mujeh complete bed rest bola tha..issliye akeer ke janam se pehle mein naa hi aa paayi aur naahi kisiko call kiya.


Unn mahino mein mein ne bahut socha ..apne aur angad ke rishte ke baare . Aur tab mujeh lagne laga tha ki ab hamara rishta wapas nahi judega.


Patah hai,jab meri pregnancy ki news aayi thi ,tab mujeh yeh umeed jaghi thi ki iss rishte ke naye kisse hum dono phir se ek saath nayi shuruat kare , apne rishte ko bhi chance denge, par mein galat thi kyuki chance toh sirf mein dena chahti thi. Par Angad ke hissab se woh sirf aur sirf bacche ke liye chance dena chahta tha kyuki uske hissab ab humaare bich kuch nahi badla tha aur baccha hi ek akkhri kadi thi rishte ki.


Uske liye uske khoon ke rishta hi sab kuch hai. Shaadi ke baad se uss ne sab ki baato par aankh bandh karke vishwas kiya hai, par jabhi mein ne kuch kaha hai ,ussne kabhi bhi vishwas nahi kiya.(laughs scarstically) yaha tak ussne seerat di ki baato par mujh se zyada vishwas tha..


Mein 9 mahine tak apne mann ko samjhati rahi , dilasaa dilaati rahi ki sab kuch thik hojaayega.Par aisa kuch nahi hua.


Sahiba - Jab ,akeer ke janam ke baad do mahine pure hogaye and doctor ne permission di tab, mein yeh hi sochke aayi thi ki shayad ab angad mujeh par yakin karega jab woh akeer ko dekhega.Mein akeer ke liye,apne doobte hue rishte ko bacahne ,anagd ke liye ,ek aakhri baar aayi thi.


.Flashback starts


@in panesar,


Sahiba and diljeet were leaving for ludhiana


Biji- sahiba, puttar aaj tu jo bhi faisla kare , ek baat yaad rakhna yeh ghar ke darwaaze tere liye aur akeer ke liye hamesha hamesha khule rahenge.


Sahiba-ji, biji...


sahiba hugs Biji


Sahiba and diljeet leaves for ludhiana


@in waiting room,brar office


Sahiba and diljeet were in the waiting room.


Diljeet-(whispers) sahibaji, yeh toh achi baat hai angad ne aapko yaha waiting room mein aane diya iska matalb angad ka gussa thanda hogaya hai..Yeh toh acha sign hai.


Sahibaji- Haan, (looking at a sleeping akeer) angad aaj bahut khush hoga...


It was an hour ..diljeet inquired about angad, But they were told to wait for more time...


Akeer's sleep gets disturbed so he starts crying.Sahiba pacifies him and diljeet helps.


There were few more people,in waiting room..


P1-Awww kitna cute baby hai....kya mein isse hold kar sakti hoon??

Sahiba smiles.


sahiba-ji..dhyan se , bahut shaitaan hai yeh ..kisi ke paas itni aasani se nahi jaata .


As soon as sahiba tries to hand over akeer to the lady ,but he starts crying. not wanting to depart with sahiba


lady- areee yeh toh rona start kar diya ...


Sahiba-kaha tha, yeh aisa hi karega...(pacifying akeer)areee shsss..mein yahi hoon..shssss..


Diljeet-areee ek min..ek min chotte sahab aapka fav toy deta hoon..phir rona bandh hoga..


Sahiba and diljeet pacifies akeer and he stops crying and starts to smile ..


lady- awww ...so sweet family. aap dono ki jodi kitni cute..Aapka beta toh aap dono pe gaya hai..


Sahiba and diljeet looked awkwardly at each other .


Sahiba- actually hum dost hai.....He is not my husband.


Diljeet-haan..hum couple nahi hai..


Lady-oh..i am sorry , mujeh laga aap dono couple hai..


Sahiba-no..no its okay..


Soon , the lady leaves...


Sahiba -mujeh bahut fikar ho rahi hai...kya angad maanega? Ussne mere pe ek baar bhi vishwas nahi kiya aur baat bhi sunni.


Diljeet-aap chinta mat kijiye, mujeh lagta hai tab woh shayad bahut gusse mein the issliye angad aapse nahi mile , par aap dekhiyega ,aaj yeh chottu sahab ko dekhenge toh unhe turant patah chal jaayega ki woh akeer ke father hai..


Sahiba smiles..


Suddenly, the door opens angad walks in furiously


Flashback ends..


Sahiba- Jab akeer ke saath aayi toh mein ne socha tha, angad aaj sab se zyada khush hoga apne bete ko dekhe, ek umeed jagi thi ki, akeer ko dono ka pyaar milega. Par mein galat thi .Jab angad waiting room mein aaya toh ussne akeer ki aur dekha bhi nahi aur siddha ek hi baat dauhraane laga ke kaise mein ne uske bacche ko maar diya aur meri wajah se uske parivaar ko kitna kuch sehna pada hai..Aur kaise mein uske ghaav par aur zakhm dene aayi hoon yeh soch ke ki mein diljeet ki saath move on hogayi aur phir se nayi duniya basai.


Woh bolta gaya aur mein chup chaap waha sab sunnti rahi..Jab woh yeh sab kuch bol raha tha..mein uski aankho mein sirf ek hi chizz dekhna chahti ,ek umeed hamare marte hue rishte ko zinda rakhne ki umeed.Par woh hi thi nahi,kyuki usko aankho saamne sirf ek hi chizz thi woh aur uske khoon ke rishte..aur uski ghatiya ghinouni soch .Issliye tab hi ussi waqt mein ne decide kar liya ki angad ko akeer ki sachai kabhi nahi patah chalne doongi.


Flashback starts


Sahiba slaps angad


Sahiba-(crying) yeh thappad na Mr.Angad Singh brar yeh thappad mera jawab tumhare har woh lagaye jhute inzaam ka .Tumhari ghinoni soch ka, jo tum ne paal rakhi hai uske liye hai. Woh has waqt ka jab tumne aur tumhari family ne mujeh zhalil kiya hai.

Aur acha hi hua,jo move on hogayi warna tumahre jaise insaan ke saath puri zindgi bitaani padti mujeh.Ek baat yaad rakhna Mr.brar tum na kaan ke kacche insaan ho aur ek din issi wajah se bahut pachtoge bahut.


Aur chinta mat karo Mr.brar , mein tumhare family kya tumahre life bhi ab nahi aana chahti .Aur aaungi bhi nahi ,kyuki mujeh na tumhare ghar mein kuch log hai jinki mujeh phikar hai, aur unhe bhi meri phikar hai..toh unhe mein suffer nahi karne doongi..


Angad leaves and throws the signed divorce papers on ground.


Diljeet picks up the papers


Sahiba -papers dijiye diljeet ji, Jo rishta tutt chuka hai, jiss rishte mein saaman nahi woh rishte ko zinda rakhne ka koi matalb nahi ..


Sahiba gives akeer in diljeet's arms ..


Sahiba gives a glance at peacefully sleeping akeer and then signs on divorce papers.


She hands it over to the guard and asks to give it too angad.


Before leaving the waiting room , she takes out the ring and pendent which angad gave to her .


Diljeet- aap ek bar aur soch lijiye..aisa ho toh mein baat karta hoon


Sahiba-(whispers )jab rishta hi tutt gaya hai toh, usse judde rakhna galat hoga aur iske saath har ek chizz ko bhi tutt na hoga.jo iss rishte ki yaad dilaayega


And with this sahiba with all her anger and frustration throws away the ring and pendent on ground and leaves from there.


Flasbhback ends....


Sahiba -jab mein uss din waha se nikli ussi pal se mein ne decide kar liya tha ki ,ab mera jo bhi faisla hoga , jo kuch bhi mein karungi sirf apne bacche ke liye karungi, phir uss ke liye mujeh sab se door rehna kyu na pade,jitna selfish banna pade ,mein banugi. Mujeh patah tha ki agar mein ne garry , jasleen bua ko ya apne ghar mein se kisi se bhi contact kiya toh tum sab mujeh lene aaoge aur tum log na chaho phir kisi na kisi tarah se angad yeh sach patah lag hi jaata.


Mujeh patah tha ki aisa karne se mere parivar ko, tum sabko dukh paunchta,par uss waqt meri prority akeer ban chuki thi.


Agar aisa kuch hua bhi nahi hota , aur mein angad ke saath reh rahi hoti toh bhi yahi hoti , toh bhi meri ek galti ya agar akeer ko bhul se bhi ek chotti si kharoch aajati toh bina kuch soche samjhe , mujeh hi kasurvaar kehta ,yaha tak uska bas chalta toh mujeh akeer ke janam baad hi mujeh ghar se nikaal deta, kyuki uski nazaro mein toh mein hi kasoorvaar rahungi hamesha, woh akeer apne jaisa bana deta..ek number ka selfish aadmi, jisse sirf aur sirf apne khoon ke rishte ko dard dikhta hai dusro ka nahi.


Mein jaanti thi aisa karne se mein maa papa ko bahut dukh doongi, par uss waqt mein ne kuch nahi socha ,mein ne woh har faisla liya jo mujeh sahi laga . Aur dekho na bhagwan iski sazaa bhi dedhi, mein aakhir waqt par bhi apne mummy papa ko nahi mil paayi. Khair, phir mein ne ussi din mein ne ek aur faisla liya...


Flashback starts...


@Gurudwara


Sahiba - (wipes her tears) meri hi galti thi jo,mein yaha aayi..Mujeh laga tha ab tum mujeh par vishwas karoge ,par aaj tumahre iss jhute aur giri hui soch ne saabit kar diya ,ki tum sirf wohi sochte ho aur samjhte ho jo tumhe ,dikhta hai,jo tumhe sach lagta hai aur usse hi sach maan lete, ho.Par mein akeer ko tumhare jaisa insaan bilkul bhi nahi banaungi . Tum laayak hi nahi ho.Ab jo bhi faisla loongi woh sirf aur sirf akeer ke liye iske liye mujeh mere apno se door rehna pade toh woh bhi karungi.


While , praying..


Sahiba-mujeh maaf kar dena babaji, aaj jo faisla liya hai usse mummy,papa,keerat aur woh un sab logo dukh paunchne wala hai..Mein yeh sab akeer ke bhavishya ke liye kar rahi hoon..Babaji,mere mummy ,papa ,keerat, ka khayal rakhna..


In premises,


Sahiba-diljeetji ,mein ne faisla kar liya hai ,mein aapke saath panesar wapas aa rahi hoon..


Diljeet-thik hai, par kya ek baar aap aapne ghar waalo se..


Sahiba-nahi ,agar mein waha gayi wapas monga house ,toh mein kamzor hojaaungi apne faisle pe.Ak aur faisla hai, jis mein mujeh aapki rai jaani hai aur agar aapko sahi lage toh hi aap haan kariyega .mera koi pressure nahi hai..


Diljeet- aap kya kehna chah rahi hai,mein kuch samjha nahi..


Sahiba-kya aap mujeh se shaadi karenge?


Diljeet is taken a back...


Diljeet-aap...aap ..sahibaji aap..?Kyu??mujeh lagta hai hame angad se phir se milna ..chahiye ..Aap yeh decision kyu le rahi hai???


Sahiba-nahi diljeet ji, woh nahi sunnega..Agar usse sunna tha woh kuch mahino pehle hi sunn leta..Aapne dekhana kitna kaan ka kacha insaan hai..woh..Aur mein nahi chahti ki mera akeer angad jaisa banne .Aur aaj jo ussne kaha hai uske baad na,mein bilkul bhi aise aadmi ke saath zindgi bitana nahi chahungi aur nahi akeer ko uske jaisa banne doongi.


Mein ne issliye aapse shaadi ki baat rakhi ,kyuki mujeh patah hai, kabhi na kabhi akeer ka sach bahar jaroor aayega aur tab woh puri koshish karega akeer ko mujeh se chinne ki .Aur yeh bhi hai ki mein chahti hoon ki akeer ko dono parents ka mile .


Aur mere nazariye mein aap ek bahut ache pita ban sakte hai akeer ke liye.Haan par aap par koi force nahi rahega .kyuki aapki bhi zindgi hai aage.


aur aapki bhi khawashiye hongi aur mein jaanti hoon kisi aur ke bacche ko apna keh ke ,maan ke paalna bahut hi mushkil hai.Aur ek aur baat hai, agar aap haan kehte hai toh mein yeh shaadi nibhane ko puri koshish karungi par ,yeh bhi hai ki.. kabhi bhi woh patni wala...haq mein nahi de paaungi.


Diljeet-yeh ek bahut bada faisla hai ..mujeh thoda waqt chahiye hoga sochne. ke liye..


Sahiba-thik hai....


After two hours,


Diljeet- mein ne soch liya hai sahibaji,mein shaadi ke liye tyar hoon...


Sahiba- diljeet ji, aap koi bhi faisla jaldbaazi mein lena, please aap ek aur baar sochiye, aap ek aise chizz liye haan keh rahe hai.Jiska effect hum sabki zindgi mein aayega,yeh bahut bada faisla hai.kyu ki jo kuch hua uske baad mera shaadi aur pyaar par se vishwas uth chuka hai.Mein shayad kabhi aapko woh haq bhi na de paau.

Mein nahi jaanti aap mere baare mein kya soch rahe hai ya kya sochte hai,mein bas itna jaanti hoon aur dekh chuki hoon ki aap akeer ke liye bahut kuch kiya hai aur mein jaanti hoon aap ek ache father honge.

Aur mein ne yeh faisla issliye liya kyunki mein nahi chahti ki angad ko kal ko uth ke koi mauka mile mujeh se mere akeer ko chinn ne ke liye.Mein aapko force nahi karungi, kyuki yeh aapki jindgi ka sawaal hai, aur aapke saath biji aur twinkle bhi judi hai.


Diljeet-mein ne soch liya sahibaji, aap chinta mat kariye, mein sab soch ke hi haan keh raha hoon.


Sahiba-thik hai, par ek baar mein biji se bhi baat karungi.Mein unki permission se hi yeh faisle mein aage badhungi.


Diljeet-thik hai, par ek baat kahi sahibaji..


Sahiba-kahiye


Diljeet-aage jaake jo bhi faisla ho, hum shaadi kare ya na kare ,par hum ek dusre ke ache dost hamesha rahenge.Issliye agar shaadi hui bhi na toh bhale hi hamare rishta ka roop badla ho par hamari pakki dosti hamesha rahegi, manzoor?


Sahiba-(smiles) manzoor..


Flasback ends


Sahiba-aur phir panesar aane ke baad mein ne biji se saari baat ki aur uske baad hum ne court marriage ki.


Jasleen-kitna sab kuch hogaya ,par angad ek baar bhi iss baat ka zikhr ghar mein kabhi nahi kiya. Mein nahi jaanti thi ki uske dil mein itni nafrat bhari hui hai..


Sahiba-nafrat nahi bua ego aur uska kisi pe bhi vishwas na karna .Yeh hi sab ki wajah hai ki aaj hum sab iss mod par hai..


Sahiba- patah hai hamara rishta puri tarah se bikharana start kab hua? jab angad ne seerat di ki baaton mein aake mujeh divorce papers diye the .

Mein ne kitna kaha tha angad se ki mujh par vishwas karo mein apne free lance project ke liye woh lawyer ke pass gayi thi, par ussne vishwas hi nahi kiya, mujeh samjh jana chahiye ki hamare rishte mein bahut darar aa gayi hai jab uss ne mujeh thappad mara tha . mein hi pagal thi jo mein sochne lagi thi ki ab sab sahi hoga.

Hum apne rishte ki nayi shurrat karenge ,jab meri pregnancy ki news aayi thi.Par sab kuch galat tha.


Mein jaanti hoon diljeet ji akeer asli pita nahi hai par unhone har ek father ka farz pura kiya hai.Aisa nahi ki woh perfect hai, unse bhi galtiya hoti hai par woh unhe sudharte hai, taaki akeer unko dekh ke sikhe .


Sahiba narrates how diljeet asked to punish him too.


Sahiba recounts every inside when angad torutured her, distrusted and disrepsected her.


Aur yeh sirf ek baat nahi yai jabse hamara vyah hua tha, usse sirf aur sirf meri galtiyaan hi nazar aayi, ussne har baar , har pal shak kiya hai , bina koi shaq kiye kabhi bharosa nahi kiya,


9 saal pehle uss din, mujeh sach mein nahi patah tha ki mera ek faisla ka yeh anjaam hoga.


Tab mein ne yahi socha tha ki agar aaj un baccho ki help nahi ki, toh mein kabhi apne honewaale bacche se aankh nahi mila paaungi, kyuki jabhi aankh milaaungi tab woh bacche nazar aayenge jinhe mein bacha nahi paayi ..jinki help nahi kar paayi.mein na rab se, na khud se kabhi nazare mila paati.


Jasleen - ( helds her hands) sahiba , mein ne khud garry aur kiara ke liye ladai ladi hai apne parivaar se , uske liye mujeh har woh kadam jo mujeh sahi laga mein ne kiya hai jiss mein mere baccho ka benefit ho.

Haan pehle galat raasta chunna tha par ab sahi raasta chunti hoon , toh tune kuch galat nahi kiya hai sahiba apne aap ko dosh mat de.Itne saalo mein apne parivaar waalo ko mein bahut achi tarike se jaan gayi hoon. .Aur mujeh lagta hai tune jo bhi faisla liya sahi liya hai.Aur yeh mein maa ke nazariye se keh rahi hoon. Issliye mein saath hoon aur hamesha rahungi .


Garry-Haan sahiba bhabhi, mein sach kahu toh jab hame patah chala ki aapka miscarriage nahi hua tha, tab hame laga ki ab wapas sahi hojaayega , angad ko bhi wapas khushiyaan mil jaayegi, par ussne jo kiya hai,uske baad i think aapne sahi decision liya hai bhabhi ,hum tino aapke saath hai.


Keerat- haan, di ab aap akele nahi ho..


For the weekend sahiba and panesar stays at monga house, Keery and jasleen suggests that sahiba and her family can move to ludhiana at monga house . But sahiba tells them that she will think about it, however, till then every weekend she would try to come to ludhiana along with her family to stay at monga house .


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The end...


I hope you all liked it


What an ending 🤩🥹🥹🤩

Sahiba chooses her respect as she should 🥹❤️

Kerry are with her 🥹


Show mein aise kyu nhi dikhaya 🥺

Sahiba and Daljeet with Kerry move on while Veer and Angad die with Seerat.

🥹😅

Seerat kills angad and Veer kills himself.

Siyappa hi khatam.

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Thank you for writing this amazing fafic , angad got what he deserved

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Originally posted by: fantasy1000a


What an ending 🤩🥹🥹🤩

Sahiba chooses her respect as she should 🥹❤️

Kerry are with her 🥹


Show mein aise kyu nhi dikhaya 🥺

Sahiba and Daljeet with Kerry move on while Veer and Angad die with Seerat.

🥹😅

Seerat kills angad and Veer kills himself.

Siyappa hi khatam.


I am happy you loved it..


oh how i wished sahiba choose her self respect first irrespective of whether she ends up angad or diljeet or not .


Agar show mein dekhaate toh show waalo kha ghaata(loss) hojaata na


sahi kaha siyapaa hi khatam

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Originally posted by: Amanita09

Thank you for writing this amazing fafic , angad got what he deserved


thanks for the comment...

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