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Posted: 7 months ago
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Part 3

A/N.

Heya guys, part 3 is below.

Also, just to let you know all this fiction will be of 5 parts.

This part 3 was my personal wish that akeer could meet bani. But khair chodo. Unlike show here , I will try to portray akeer as a 8-9 year old kid . I have tried my best here to show a bond between 5 and 8-9 year old kids. Hope you all like it.

SORRY for any spelling mistakes and typo errors.

AND LONG POST

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PART 3


@ Admin office, GGD school, Main branch


Sahiba-admin office.... admin office. ..Yeh raha office. diljeet ji aap parents aur baaki baccho se puchiye mein admin office mein inquire karti hoon.


Outside the office,


Diljeet asks the students and their parents. But there is no info.


Diljeet stops another person .


Diljeet-(folding hands)maaf kijiyega bhaisaab par kya aap ne iss bache ko dekha yaha (shows akeer pic) ji woh aaj subha science competition ke liye aaya tha aaj competition hai na yaha. Iss school mein.


Person-haan,par science ka nahi yaha toh poetry competition hai aaj.


Diljeet-kya?? kya matalb poetry competition hai, form par toh science competition likha tha


Person-haan,par aaj subha subha hi management decision liya ki usko yeh school ki dusri branch mein hoga, bahut se bacche aaye the toh yaha possible nahi ho paayega.


Diljeet - aapko patah dusra venue ka address patah hai?


Person-ji nahi aap admin office mein puch lijiye.


Diljeet-ji...shukriya..( whispers) kaha hoga, akeer puttar tu? hey rabji mere puttar ka khayal rakhna.


Diljeet informs the same to sahiba. They ask about the venue changes and address of new venue at admin office.


Sahiba- diljeet yeh GT singh road toh sehar ke dusre chor par hai aur yaha se bahut door hai. Hame abhi ke abhi nikalna hoga.


Diljeet- sahiba , ek kaam karte hai aap yaha aas paas pehle puchiye ki akeer ko kahi dekha, kisi ne toh dekha hoga na ,ya phir shayad yaha kahi ho school mein ho uske paas dusre branch tak jaane ke paise na ho toh kya patah hamara yahi wait kar raha ho.

sahiba - sahi kaha, aap yaha niche dhoondhiye , mein upar canteen mein dhoondhti hoon.


They search almost for an hour or two ,but akeer is not found, however they do get to know that free transportation was allowed and all the participants went there and akeer was with them.


Diljeet and sahiba immediately leaves for the other branch.


On the other side , Akeer reached the GGD school another branch,


Akeer-baap re itna bada school...Yaha toh mere 3-4 school aajaye , school toh mein aagaya, bas mamma papa ko woh chithi mil jaaye par unhein patah kaise chalega ki mein yaha dusri branch mein hoon??


Person-beta kya dhoodhn rahe ho??aur tumhare mummy papa kaha hai??



Akeer-woh...woh bahar bike park kar rahe hai unhone kaha hai ki mein registration desk pe jaake form bhar doon..


Person-thik hai , jaao waha ander jaake right turn lena waha competition ka form le lena..


Akeer- okay, thank you..


Akeer gets in the line for registeration but gets to know that due to some technical error it would take at least an hour to maintain it.


Akeer -ek aur hour. Wait karna hoga...???bahar hi wait karta hoon.


Akeer sees simran struggling with Angad's poster ,so he decides to help her out.


Akeer-didi , thoda left...nai thoda right.. areee aapka nahi mera left aur right..


Simran-ab thik hai?


Akeer- haan


However unknown to simran she stumbles with board and akeer laughs..


Simran- tumhari himmat kaise hue hasne ki ??mera mazzak uda rahe ho???Yeh sab tumne jaan bhujkar kiya na??


Akeer-(controlling his laugh)nai..nai mein jaan bhujkar nahi kiya. Woh toh bas aise hi hasi nikal gayi...sachi


Simran- itne chotte hoke itna jhut bolte ho..sharam nahi aati...Tumhare mom dad ne manners nahi sikhaaye.


Akeer-(gets angry) dekho didi aapko jo bolna hai na mujeh bolo mere mumma aur papa ko kuch mat bolo ..aur mere ander bahut manners, shayad aapke paas manners nahi issliye aise baat kar rahe ho.


Simran-itna chotta hoke, bado se aise baat karta hai???Ruk abhi ..ruk abhi tu competition ke liye aaya hai na ..mein bhi dekhti hoon tu kaise competition mein part leta hai

(to the registeration admin)aap iska registeration nahi karenge..aapne dekha isne meri kaise insult ki hai .aise baccho ko competition mein hissa nahi lena chahiye. patah konse chotte school se aajate hai.



With this simran walks away and akeer in goes in different direction. He was going towards playground when he saw few boys were trying to snatch a notebook from bani's hand


Bani- (holding a firm grip on book) meri book wapas do, warna miss ko complain kar doongi!!!


B1- nai doonga,


Bani-(trying her best to snatch the book ) meri book wapas do!!! warna mein miss ko complain kar doongi.

Bani was almost successful in getting back her book but one of the boys tries to push her. Bani stumbles back and is about to fall but at the niche of time akeer arrives and saves her from fall .

He makes sure she was okay.


Akeer-oye ,ladai karni hai toh apni level to level se karo .Ek girl ko dhakka ko maara bad manners hai yeh.. Chalo maafi maango aur book wapas karo.


But those boys doesn't apologize and doesn't give back books.


Akeer tries to take back books , but is not successful instead ,due to little commotion, the teacher scolds them all and threatens to call their respective parents if they didnt told truth.

However, they all start to speak all at once, frustrated the teacher takes them all to staff room.


While waiting outside their office.


Akeer-(Whispers)woh ladke tumhe tang kyu kar rahe the?


Bani-(whispers) woh meri class ke bad boys hai aur woh sabko aise hi tang karte. Hum ne kai baar complain ki hai madam se ,par woh nahi sunte .Aur aaj toh woh bad boys ne meri workbook hi le li .Par tum kon ho? Meri help kyu ki?


Akeer -(whispers)mera name akeer. Aur meri mamma ,papa kehte hai ki sab ki help karni chahiye,issliye mein ne tumhari help ki.


Bani- (sadly)smiley13 lekin ab punish hame mil rahi hai.


Akeer- koi gal nahi, woh bad boys ko punishment milegi . smiley16


Bani- kaise??


Akeer- suno, tumhe jhut bolna aata hai ?


Bani nods in no.


Akeer-dekho bani, Mein teacher se yeh kahunga ki tum meri behen ho toh tum bhi kehna ki mein tumhara bhai hoon samjhi ?


Bani- nahi, tum mere bhai? kaise ? mein tumhe bhaiya kyu bolu? aur patah bai jhut bolne se nose lambi hojaati hai!!


Akeer-(to himself) offo ho !!! ab kya karu??(thinks for a min) sunno tum kitne years ki hai


Bani-5


Akeer - aur mein 9 years toh 9 bada hua na 5 se.? toh mein tumhare se bada hua na? aur hum hamare se bade baccho ko bhaiya aur didi bulaate hai na?


Bani- hmmm haan.


Akeer- bas sab mujh par chod do! Ab hame punishment nahi hogi. Aur hum jhut bhi nahi bolenge .


Bani-(smiles) ok.


@in staff room,


The teacher asks about the incident.


Akeer tells the whole incident as how those boys were snatching the book from bani and one of them pushed her.


B1- nai yeh miss ,yeh jhut bol raha hai..iss bhaiya ne hame dhaka diya!


Akeer-no,miss mein sach bol raha hoon yeh boys ne bani ko dhakka maara .


Teacher-okay, but aap kon ho?Aap hamare school ke toh nahi ..?


Akeer-mein akeer hoon, bani ka bhai , hai na bani?


Bani nods in confirmation.


Bani-yes ,miss yeh akeer bhaiya hai.


Akeer-aur mein panesar se aaya , yaha science competition hai na uss mein hissa lene. Aur jab mein bani se milne uske class jaa raha tha toh yeh boys meri behen ko tang kar rahe the. aur dekho kitni zor se dhakka maara usse. Meri behen ko chott lag jaati toh ? aap woh camera hai na uss mein check kijiye miss, uss mein aapko dikhega ki kaise yeh boys ne bani ko dhakka maara.


Bani just nods in a confirmation as taught by akeer.


Teacher- okay.


Teacher checks in camera and then reprimands the boys for their behavior and appreciates akeer's efforts and standing up for bani.


Teacher- aap class mein jaa sakte ho.


Akeer-(to himself) thank you, babaji, bach gaya.


Akeer and bani smiles and they are about to leave.


Teacher-ek baat beta, aap bani ke bhai kaise hue ?mein unke family ko jaanti hoon,bani ka toh koi bada bhai ya behen nahi hai .


Akeer -(to himself)phass gaye!!!ab kya bolu !!kya bolu ...haan..yaad aaya.. bas ... yeh jhut koi pakad na le ..god...please help ...


Bani gets scared and she is about to speak the truth , but akeer speaks


Akeer- bani ki mummy aur meri mummy sister hai ,miss.


Teacher -oh, yes , yes I remember Mrs.baweja ne kaha tha, unki ek behen hai ,sahiba right? aapki mother ka name sahiba hai right?


Akeer-( to himself)(inhe hai meri mummy ka naam kaise patah? )(khair meinu ki, abhi toh haan haan karta hoon, jhut chupana hai)(to teacher) haan..haan sahiba ..sahiba hi naam meri mummy ka .


Teacher-okay..okay..aap jaao and all the best for competition.


Akeer-thank you miss.


Akeer and bani leaves. They make sure no one was seeing them and then sigh in relief.


Akeer and bani high five each other.


Akeer-aaj toh bach gaye . Aajtak itna jhut nahi bola mein ne.agar mamma saamne hoti toh mera kaan khichti aur kehti shabashiyaan teh


Bani- shabashiyaan teh jamdnewaal !!!


Akeer- areee tumhe kaise patah yeh?


Bani-meri mummy bhi yahi kehti ,jab mein shaintani karti hoon.


Bani and akeer laughs.


Akeer- yeh dekho tumhari class, aagayi...chalo ..chalo ab mein chalta hoon mera competition bhi hai..Bye.. bye...


Bani-bye...bye..akeer bhaiya!!!!


Akeer waves her good bye . He sits in the assembly hall and waits with other.


He had few biscuits with him, however, they were soon over and he felt hungry again.


Akeer-aur kitna time lagega, form bharne mein bhukh bhi lagi hai..


To his relief , soon there was annoucement for registeration being open . He queues up in the line, however when his turn came in ,the administrator declines his form .


Akeer-Par aap mera form kyu nahi le rahe ho.


Admin-kyuki aapne abhi thode der pehle jo batmizi ,ki woh allowed nahi hai. Hamare school yeh sab allowed nahi hai..


Akeer-hawww!!! par batmizi toh woh didi ne bhi ki thi na..aur mein ne jaan bhujkar kuch nahi kiya..aapne bhi dekha tha miss.


Admin- dekho bacche yeh hum nahi jaante , aur aise kaise koi bhi chotti school se kisi ko bhi allow nahi karte competition mein. tumhe part lena hai toh jaao apne mummy papa ko leke aao .aur yaha ke principal se baat karo.


With this the admin shoos away akeer.


Akeer is disappointed and feels bad. He wanted to hug his parents at that moment.


He sits down on the near by stairs and starts crying.


Akeer-(sad) mummy ,papa ko kaise patah chalega ki mein yaha iss school mein hoon .??woh dusre waale branch pe honge na??Mere paas toh paise bhi kam hai mein ghar kaise jaaunga ??


Bani's class was over and was waiting in class for keery to pick her up ,when she sees Akeer sitting on stairs and crying.


Since ,the school was over and allowed to leave classroom .She walks up to him .


Bani -areee tum???kya woh bad boys ne tumhe tang kiya ?


Akir-(wiping his tears)nahi.. kuch nahi hua.... mujeh woh science competition mein nahi jaane de rahe !!


Akir starts crying. again ..


Bani-areee shsss..shss ro mat akir bhaiya....ro mat yeh lo pani .


She hands over her water bottle to akir..


Akir-Mujeh competition mein bhi nahi jaane diya.. aur ab mein wapas ghar kaise jaaunga..Mujeh meri mamma aur papa ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai.


Bani- kya karu.kya karu mein(to akir)...ab toh tumahari help mere super heros hi kar sakte hai .

(she felt bad for the boy, he helped her ,but she didnt know how to help him in return..)


Akir-Kon??


Bani-(excitedly )mere mummy aur papa,tum unse help maango.


Akir-lekin woh meri help karenge?


Bani- haan kyu nahi , tumhe patah hai sab ne meri drawing puri karne mein help ki thi ,toh tumhari bhi karenge aur ab tum mere bhai ho, toh woh tumhari help jaroor karenge..Lekin uske pehle tumhe meri ek aur help karni hogi.


Akir-ab kaise help koi tumhe tang kar raha hai???


Bani- nai yeh(handing him her tiffin)meri help karni hogi yeh pura karne mein.


With this bani opens her tiffin


Akir- methi ki sabji??Mujeh nahi pasand..methi ki sabji..smiley18


Bani- areee waah !!!!same pinch(bani without warning pinches on akir's arm)smiley4


Akir-ouch!!!chutti kyu kaati..smiley26


Bani-aree akir bhaiya, chutti nahi yeh same pinch hai, jaise aapko nahi pasand waise mujeh bhi nahi pasand methi ki sabji, par khaana toh padega warna mummy daantegi .smiley4


Akir-nai..nai tab toh complete karna hoga aur mujeh toh bhukh bhi lagi hai.Thoda khana kha hi leta hoon.


Akir and bani happily share the food..


Bani and Akir waits for sometime ..


Bani soon sees keery entering the premises.


Bani-dekho!! akir bhaiya mere mummy aur papa chalo..jaldi chalo aao.


Bani literally dragged him towards Garry and keerat .


Akir was surprised by her strength.


Akir-(to himself) oye !! yeh hai toh bahut chotti si par bahut strong aur tez hai..kitna tez bhaagti hai.. agar woh bad boys bani ko dhakka nahi marte toh, yeh akeli hi kaafi hai woh do bad boys ke liye.smiley1


Bani greets her parents..


Akir dearly missed his parents when he saw garry and keerat showering their love and care to bani. He almost imagined his parents would share the same love and care. But right now he was far away from them due to his mistake.


On the other hand , bani told her parents about akir and how he helped her( except the detail that teacher asked how akeer was related to bani.) Keerat and garry were furious and was ready confront to those boys parent . Keery then made sure bani was okay and was not hurt.

Keery too felt bad for boy, they knew what akir had done was completely wrong but right now helping him out was the need of hour .

Keerat , was the first one to break the barrier she immediately engulfed akir in a warm hug and assured him that they would help them out.


Keerat- (comforting him) ab hum aagaye haina hum aapki help karenge thik hai . Lekin ,ab aapko samjah aagaya hoga ki aapne jo kiya woh bahut galat tha.Aapke mamma aur papa kitne pareshaan ho rahe honge.


Akir-haan,Mujeh unse baat karni hai sorry kehna hai..aap please meri baat kara dijiye unse .


Garry- Beta , tum tension mat lo,hum call karke yaha bula lete hai.., mujeh apne papa ka number do .


Akir gives diljeet's number.


After few rings diljeet picks up the call


Garry-Hello, yeh diljeetji panesar ka number hai.. ?aap akir singh panesar ke father bol rahe hai?


Diljeet- haan...haan.aap kon, aur aapko akir ka naam kaise patah? Kya woh aapke saath hai??aap kaha se bol rahe hai..akir kaha hai??


Garry- dekhiye ...dekhiye ji Mein Garry Baweja bol raha hoon ,Aur mein yahi GGD international school GT singh road pe jo branch hai na wahi se ,baat kar raha hoon, woh yahi hai..mere paas sahi salamt hai. aap lijiye akir se baat kijiye.


Diljeet-hello...hello akir


Sahiba-diljeet aap please phone speaker pe lagaye..mujeh baat karni hai...


Diljeet-Haan..haan.mein rakhta hoon speaker pe..hello akir...akir..beta apni mamma se baat karo..


Akir- (crying) hello, mama papa ....papa..Mein akir bol raha hoon..I am sorry ab mein aisa kabhi nahi karunga. Mein yaha bani ke papa saath hoon. yeh bade waale neem ke tree ke paas.


Akir gives the phone back to Garry .

Diljeet puts off the speaker and talks to garry about akir whereabouts.

Garry ,assures him that akir was safe and they were waiting near the playground .


After the call ,


Akir also shares with garry , how he was denied to fill up the competition .Garry was upset, simran had still not learned her lesson and now on top of it she was also rude to other kids too.He decided to talk this matter to bebe. Garry assures akir that surely he will take part in competition. With Garry's help akir is allowed to fill up registeration form and allowed in competition.


On the other hand , diljeet and sahiba sighs in relief.


Sahiba-aap jaldi kijiye mujeh akir se milna..bas phir wapas ghar chalte hai...aaj uski khair nahi hai.aur aaj aap bich mein nahi aayenge.


Diljeet was about speak something in akir's defense but stops when he saw sahiba determined face and somewhere he realized what she said was true too.


Keery wait for diljeet and sahiba, bani and akeer plays in playground, and keery watches over them.


Keerat-(keeping her head on Garry's shoulder) garry, yeh simran ka misbehavior toh aur bhi badhata jaa raha aur veerji bhi uski galti ko nazar andaaz kar rahe hai. Kuch din pehle laga tha ab un mein koi change aayega jab unhone bani ki help ki par ab .


Garry- angad apne aapko apne past se nikaalna hi nahi chaahta. kahi na kahi angad ke ander abhi bhi past ko leke gussa hai .


Keerat-garry, agar future mein sahiba didi wapas aagayi, aur hame koi side choose karna pade toh tum kya choose karoge ya phir kal koi aisa time aaye jab hum ek dusre ke saath nahi par aamne saamne khada hona pade toh tum kya karoge?


Garry-(comforting her) toh mein wohi side loonga jaha sach hoga. Mein ek baar ke liye dusro ki nafrat sehen kar sakta hoon par tumhari nahi . Aur sach kahu toh darta hoon, ki sahi mein kabhi mujeh aisi koi situation naa aaye jaha hame ek dusre ke saath nai par aamne ,saamne khada hona pade. Mein tumhe aur bani ko kho nahi sakta.


Keerat- mein bhi yeh nahi chahti garry. badi muskil se thodi bahut khushiyaan hame mili hai. Usse mein kho nahi sakti ..


Garry-mein bhi nahi,issliye rab se bhi yehi prathna karta hoon ki mujeh sahi raasta dikhaaye,woh raasta bataye aur aisa raasta dikhaaye ki jaha mein tumhe,mom aur bani se door na jaau .


Akeer and bani takes a break from play to drink water.


Bani-bhuk lagi hai mummy..


Keerat-haan, beta , bas thoda aur wait karo akeer ke mamma ,papa aajayenge na uske baad hum ghar jaakar khana khaayenge..lo tab tak tum dono yeh chocloate khao.


Garry (looks at his watch) kaafi der hogayi..shayad rasta nahi mil raha hoga ,ek baar call lar lete hai.


Keerat -haan ,agar aisa possible ho toh hum waha chale jaate hai..


Garry-good idea..mein ek baar call kar leta hoon.


Here ,on the other hand, sahiba and diljeet are stuck at a petrol pump , as due to some protest ,the roads were closed. So , they decided to take another route for the school.

Sahiba had gone to buy water.

Diljeet sees Garry's call and picks it up immediately.

Diljeet tells about the recent developments. Garry inquires if they could come and pick them up. To which diljeet denies , as the protestors looked dangerous and the situation could also get worst .


Garry-toh phir ek kaam karte hai, dekhiye baccho bhi bhuk lagi aur aapko bhi aane mein waqt lag jaayega, toh mera ghar paas mein hi hai .Toh agar aap chahe toh mein akeer ko apne ghar lejaata hoon, woh ghar ka khana bhi kha lega aur thoda rest bhi kar lega aur phir hum wapas school aajayenge .Meri beti ka bhi function hai shaam ko toh wapas mujeh aanahi hai.


Diljeet thought it was good idea, Bani parents seemed to be good people .


Diljeet-ji aapki baat sahi hai par ek baar akeer ki mummy se permission le loon.


Diljeet puts the phone on mute.


Diljeet shares the suggestion given by bani's parents


Sahiba reluctantly agrees and asks diljeet to let her talk with akeer once.


Garry hands over the phone to akeer.


Sahiba-akeer , tu thik hai na beta.


Akeer-haan,mamma mein bilkul thik hoon.Bani ke mumma ,papa bahut ache se khayal rakh rahe hai mera.


sahiba- thik, sun tu bani ke ghar jaa raha hai. na, dhyan se jaana , aur chup chaap good boy ki tarah rehna , kisi se zyada galla mat karna aur kuch bhi gadbad lage toh turant papa ya mujeh call karna Samjha??


Akeer-haan...mamma ,mein samjh gaya.


Sahiba- thik hai..dhyan se jaana ,hum bas thodi der mein aa rahe hai..


Akeer -thik hai mamma..


After the call, akeer accompanies keery and bani to brar house.


On the way ,keery and bani chat with akeer ,asking about his school, place and friends.


@Brar house.


Akeer and bani gets out of car.


Bani-chalo akeer bhaiya ,hum catch catch khelte hai...


Garry-areee pehle khaana khalo, phir khelna .


Keerat-haan aur school uniform bhi karna hoga. Akeer , aajao tum bhi fresh hojaao.


Akeer was amazed to see a big house. He thought he had walked into movie set.


Bani-chalo ,akeer bhaiya mein tumhe badi mom se milwati hoon..


Bani takes akeer with her to meet Jasleen .


Keerat was getting the lunch ready ,when one of the servants asks for her help.


Keerat- haan boliya na,kya hua sunainaji.


Sunaina -bibiji, thode din ke liye chutti chahiye thi..


Keerat-kyu kya hua?Sab thik hai na??


Sunaina -haan bibiji, aapko patah hai ,pichle mahine mujeh chutti leni padi thi kyuki sister ka miscarriage hogaya tha?


Keerat-haan..ab woh kaise hai..?


Sunaina-ab woh achi hai bibiji, aur toh aur uske miscarriage ki reports galat thi. Yeh toh hum tab patah chala ,jab meri behen ko bahut kamzori hone lagi toh dusre doctor ko bataya tab patah chala ki meri sister ka miscarriage nahi hua.


Keerat - what??aise kaise ?Aur galat report kisne banayi? Doctor ka naam kya tha.?Konse clinic gaye the?


Sunaina-Naam ...naam shayad , doctor ..doctor gill..aisa kuch naam tha . abhi toh khud unki apni clinic hai..par shayad woh pehle Kortis hospital mein kaam karti thi.


Keerat-thik hai koi baat nahi sunaina ji aap jaao..aur haan koi bhi kaam jo toh mujeh ya garry bhaiya se help maang lena..


Sunaina-thik hai...bibiji.


Keerat gets into thinking...


Keerat-Dr.gill ,yeh naam kahi aur sunna hai..mein ne.par kaha .Shayad yeh kortis hospital mein hi the...shayad in hone hi sahiba didi ka check up kiya tha.


Here , other brars meet akeer.


Akeer- aap toh bahut funny ho.Bilkul mere papa ki ..Woh bhi aise hi jokes sunnate hai..


Hansraj - Tab toh teri papa ki aur meri khub jamegi.


Pravjyot-haaye!! kitna sona hai.Iske gaal bilkul golgappe jaise hai.Mann toh karta ek aur baar iske gaal khichu ..


Akeer covers his cheeks


Akeer-nai..nai mere gaal tomato jaise red hogaye hai.Meri bua bhi itna zor se khichti hai gaal mera.


Jasleen-aree tum ho hi itne cute ki kisiko (pulling his cheeks) bhi tumhare gaal khichne ka mann hojaaye..


Akeer-nai...,(covering his cheeks again)hey babaji bachalo...


Hansraj-areee yaha aajo akeer puttar,mein bachunga..


Bebe and manveer watched bani and akeer play .


Bebe-manveer aaj akir ko dekha na toh mujeh angad ka bachpan yaad aagaya ..Yaad hai woh bhi itna hi ziddi tha aur hamesha tyarr rehta tha ki kya karu ki mere mummy papa ka naam roshan ho...


Manveer -haan, sach kahu toh ek baar ke liye mujeh laga ki angad hi mere saamne khada hai...


Bebe- tu phikar na kar manveer, sab rab pe chod de..ab wohi yeh uljhi hui doriyaa suljaahyenge.


It was time to leave for school. Akeer bids them goodbye and takes the blessing.


@school play ground..


Keery and bani wait for Diljeet.


Akeer sees his father.


Akeer-papa.....mein yaha hoon.


Akeer runs towards diljeet and hugs him. Keery too decides to give them some space.


Diljeet-(wiping his tear) tu thik hai na? bahut ghabra gaye the hum. Oye teri mummy ka ro ro ke bura haal hai.Biji aur twinkle bua bhi waha gaav mein.. kitne pareshan..iss baar mein bhi bhi bahut naraz hai.


Akeer-(crying) sorry papa .....aage se aise galti nahi hogi..i am sorry..mujeh mamma se milna kaha hai.


Diljeet-woh bahaar hi hai parking mein tera intezaar kar rahi hai.


Akeer-mujeh abhi mamma ke paas le chaliye..mujeh milna hai mamma se..


Diljeet- haan.. bas ek min . chalte hai, pehle yeh bata bani ke mummy papa kaha hai..?


Akeer-woh rahe ...


Diljeet goes to keery...


Diljeet-(joins his hands)(emotional) mein aapka dhanyawaad kaise karu? Mere paas shabd hi nahi hai..Aap mere liye bhagwan ke se kam nahi hai..


Garry-nai..nahi please aap haath mat jodiye..Aap mere se bade umar ke hai..Please aap haath mat jodiye.Aur mere jagah aur koi bhi jota toh woh bhi help karte..


Diljeet-nahi, aajkal insaano mein insaaniyat nahi bachi hai . bina sawarth ke koi maddad nahi karta. Aur aapne toh bina swarth ke mere akeer ki sambhal kari hai.


Keerat-Lekin akeer ne bhi toh hamari bacchi ki help ki hai.Toh thank you toh hame bolna chahiye.


Diljeet-par aapne jo kiya hai woh usse bhi zyada hai.Mein yeh zindgi bhar nahi bhulunga. Mein zyada kuch toh nahi de sakta ,par haan aapko na kabhi koi bhi kaam ho. Aap ne mujeh bas ek call karna mein aapki help jaroor karunga . Zyada kuch nahi par agle mahine akeer ka 10 va janam din hai toh aap aur aapke gharwaale sab hamare special guest hai .Aapko compulsory aana hai aur hamari special guest toh baniji hai. Iski mummy ne toh kaha hi ki bani ko toh aana ho hoga.


Keerat-ji jaroor,hum jaroor aayenge aur bani ko bhi le aayenge.


Diljeet-mere paas aur kuch nahi ,par yeh chota sa tofa hai ..(takes out few choclates)please aap mana mat kijiyega


Diljeet hands it over to bani.


Bani- thank you uncle.


Diljeet- ab chalna hoga, warna der hojaayegi.


Garry- yeh lijiye , mera card , aapko kabhi jaroorat hai mujeh call kar dijiye aur sirf kaam ke liye hi nahi akeer ko jabhi humse milna ho ya phir bani se toh bina bole aajaye.


Diljeet-ji Jazroor. Ab chalte hai.


Keery ,bani and akeer bids each other goodbye.


@in parking,


sahiba embraces akeer in tightly.


Sahiba-(crying) kaha chala gaya tha tu?Kitna pareshan hogayi thi mein!!Aise koi apni maa kon pareshan karta hai.rab ka lakh lakh shukar hai tu sahi salamat hai.kuch hojaata toh..


Akeer-i am sorry mama . ab mein aisa nahi karunga..


Sahiba was still angry on akeer for his misconduct. and the stunt he pulled up needed a tough punishment. A bitter one but much needed. Many times she had seen that akeer would apologize ,but hardly realized his mistake.

Sahiba tells her decision to leave for panesar and not participate in competition.

Diljeet agrees with sahiba's decision.

Akeer is upset and becomes adamant .

Sahiba tries to make him understand his mistake but he doesn't listen .


Diljeet is about to intervein .When the gatekeeper asks them to move from their as the chief guest car was supposed to be parked here.


Diljeet -haan..haan bas jaa rahe hai bhaisahab..


Gatekeeper-jaldi..karo karo...patah nahi aaj ke main chief guest angad singh barar hai .Unki gaadi yaha park hogi .


Diljeet and sahiba gets surprised and shocked


Sahiba takes few steps back..


Sahiba-k..kya .kya..kaha aapne...?ko..ko..kon aa .aa hai..guest??


Gatekeeper- Angad singh brar...


Sahiba looks at diljeet..


Diljeet understood sahiba's dilemma .


Diljeet -hum hum..hum bas abhi nikal rahe bhaisahab..


Diljeet , sahiba and akeer leave the school.


Akeer is very much upset and angry that his parents didnt fulfilled his wish .

Soon he fells asleep in sahiba's arms.


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And that's end of part 3.


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Posted: 7 months ago
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Lovely Update.

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Posted: 7 months ago
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I am tagging here

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Spectacular update,love the bond between akeer and bani

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Next part is up🙃

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Akir-Bani moments aur Akir-Brar moments bahut hi cute the.smiley9

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Originally posted by: Aleyamma47

Akir-Bani moments aur Akir-Brar moments bahut hi cute the.smiley9

Thank you!!! akeer bani here were the cutest how i wish we get a tiny miny scene of akeer and bani bonding

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Originally posted by: Terimeridoriyan

Spectacular update,love the bond between akeer and bani


Thanks for your kind comments..

I loved writing the akeer and bani bond

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thank you for the kind the comment

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Can't wait for the next update!!

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