AbhiMaan Mini OS-Renewed Faith & Shattering Hopes Part 2 FINAL PART UP

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Abhira was helping Armaan wear his T-shirt.He had been finally discharged from the hospital.....Armaan had been in a terrible accident,the entire family had been fearful and shocked....Abhira had been broken to pieces and prayed to god for her husband....They had found out 2 weeks ago that they were still married....Armaan had bluntly told dadisa that he was going to remain married to Abhira ....And as she had never before cared for his happiness she should stay away from him and Abhira....After the accident however Dadisa had changed,something had changed inside of her.....But Abhira had her walls up atleast in front of Dadisa.....


Ruhi came into the hospital to meet Armaan.She had came twice previously however once The Chorus Gang had not allowed her and second time both Vidya and Abhira were sitting right besides Armaan and that had not allowed her to meet him.....She saw from the window that Armaan was right there with Abhira.She decided to meet him finally.....Just as she had opened the door and she heard their conversation.....


Armaan (caressing her face)-Tum roh rahi thi ?


Abhira (sarcastically)-Nai mai toh bhangda kar rahi thi Khadoosman,tumhara accident jo hua hai.....


(with tears in her eyes)-You are not allowed to scare me like that Armaan......


Armaan (smiling)-Kabhi nai daraoga aise....Promise....But give me my answer Abhira.....Jo maine tumse uss din hosh mai aane par poocha tha.........


(confessing)-I love you Abhira,And I cant live without you anymore.....I know maine Ruhi ke baare mai tumhe na bata kar bahut galti ki thi but please believe me mai tumhe sach batane wala tha.....Ruhi was my past and pure attraction....Mai zindagi mai sirf tumse pyaar kiya hai.....Pyaar kya hota hai that I understood after I fell for you......Toh batao na Will you give me a chance ?


Abhira (tearfully)-Yes I will.....i love you too....


Armaan (snickering)-Kahi isiliye toh chance nai de rahi ho because mai marr raha tha kuch dino pehle.....


Abhira (hitting him on his arm)-Doobara aisa kuch bola na toh I will kill you samjhe......


Armaan hugged his wife tightly....He had the world now and wanted nothing more....He would try and make Kaveri understand but if she wouldnt than Armaan had already decided that he would leave Poddar House and Firm with Abhira.....He had already applied to couple of jobs and there were several replies......He cupped her face and wiped her tears.....


Armaan (cupping her face)-Abhira Marry me.....


Abhira (stunned)-What ? Armaan hum toh pehle se hi married hai....Divorce kaha hua tha humara..


Armaan (smiling)-I know nahi hua tha.But uss waqt humne mam ke liye shaadi ki thi,aaj mai humare liye pooch raha hu.......Marry me Vakil sahiba.........


Abhira (smiling widely)-Theek hai tum jaha bologe waha aakar mai shaadi kar loogi tumse alright.....


Ruhi escaped the room closing the door of Armaan's room......Her heart shattered into multiple pieces.....Armaan called what they had attraction,infatuation......He only loved Abhira and was going to marry his wife again....They were not even divorced.....Manish and Suwarna saw Ruhi crying,they knew this was going to happen..........Manish and Suwarna decided to meet Armaan once before going unknown to them that it would bring a storm in their lives......


Armaan (sarcastically)-Shaaid karne aa rahi ho ya Job doodhne.....Tumhari jagah koi aur hota toh kitna excited hota......


Abhira (snickering)-Kyu khadoosman tumhe nai pata tumhari biwi duniya ka aathma ajooba hai......Abhira Akshara Sharma hu aise hi thodi na alag hu........


Abhira face fell hearing her speak about Akshara's name.....If her mother had been here,she would have been not only happy but would have actually danced.....


Armaan (cupping her face)-Akshara mam ko yaad kar rahi ho ? She is always with you Abhira.....In you r heart,memories......Toh batao kab shaadi karni hai........


Abhira (warning him)-Pehle theek toh ho jao.....Tumhe shaadi karne ka itna excitement kyu hai......?


Armaan (bringing her close)-Ab tumhare bina nai reh sakta mai Abhira.......


Manish and Suwarna glanced at each other shocked......This was their other great gran daughter.....Their Akshu's daughter.....Now Manish understood why he felt like he saw Naira in Abhira.....Suwarna was in tears,their Akshu was dead......And they didnt even meet her........


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GUYS DO YOU WANT PART 2......???


It would be over protective Armaan......I really hated Manish today so you know ...........

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Can't wait...please update soon....🤞🤞🤞
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Yes. Is that even a question. Definitely want p2 ❤️

This was excellent. I loved how Ruhi heard him call her an infatuation and knows they are still married. Ruhi should be put in place every day . Kaash show mein bhi roz usko reality check and suffering milein instead of WW and becharification . Ruhi and goenkas deserve pain and suffering m

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Goenkas and Ruhi only deserve pain and nothing else...... Disgusting creatures they are

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Definitely want part 2

This was awesome. Waiting for the next part.

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Part 2 FINAL PART


It had been happy two days in Poddar Mansion,not only had Armaan recovered and came home but Madhav and Vidya were extremely happy that their children were united once again.....And even more happy when they heard that they wanted to renew their vows......But today morning when Manish showed up with Suwarna,Surekha and Ruhi in tow Abhira and Armaan knew they would create some tamasha.....Manish told Abhira their connection.....Everybody was shocked but not Abhira......She had known about this since quite some time now.....Armaan knew as well.....Poddar family as well as Goenkas were shocked when Abhira and Armaan told them that they knew about everything......


Manish (softly)-Toh phir tum ghar kyu nai beta humare paas......


In the answer to that question Abhira played the recording of the day when Akshara had called him from OT.Poddars had been disgusted at how Manish had talked to Akshara in her final moments...Armaan was standing right besides Abhira when Suwarna tried to come and hug Abhira but Armaan immediately blocked her......Vidya and Manisha came besides Abhira to ease her emotional distress..........


Abhira (angrily)-Jab unhone aapko phone kiya tha tab mumma was in her final moments,aapko shyad mere baare mai batani chahti thi.....But I am glad ki unhone aapko kuch nai bataya......Aapke family se zyada disgusting family aaj tak nahi dekhi hai maine....When have you ever cared for my mother.....Pehle it was Ruhi's mother and than it was Ruhi.....Kabhi hostel,kabhi kasauli and kabhi Mussorie.....Saath kab diya hai aapne unka.......


Ruhi (trying to interrupt)-Unhone meri mumma ko.......


Abhira (angrily)-SHUT UP !! TUMSE KOI BAAT NAI KAR RAHA HAI RUHI BIRLA.....

(Looking at Manish and Suwarna)-Aap dono ko badi papa and badi ma bulati thi na,sadly aap dono na papa ban paye unke na mumma......For once I am very grateful that I was not raised with you.....Ruhi ko dekh kar roz ye gratefulness aur badhti hai........(looking at Ruhi)-Aur tum,tumhe bata du ki meri mumma ne koi accident nai kiya tha,tum khud aapni Ma ki death ke liye responsible ho.....If you dont believe me toh ja kar police report dekh lo......


Manish (tearfully)-Meri bacchi itni nafrat mat kar humse please......Maaf kar de hume.....


Abhira (nodding)-Kabhi na,meri mumma ke saath aapne jo kiya uske baad toh kabhi bhi nayi....Aapke aasu,aapki tadap dekh kar Akshara pigal ti hogi par Abhira nai.....Mai Akshara nai hu Mr Goenka......Agar doobara maine kahi pe bhi suna na ki aapne meri mumma ko murderer kaha toh dekh lijiye ka sir I will drag you to court.....


Manish tried to come forward to hug Abhira but Armaan stood like a pillar infront of Abhira refusing to let Manish go to her......Abhira clutched Armaan's T-Shirt which he knew meant that she was feeling over whelmed....He had to ask Goenkas to go now......Otherwise Abhira would break down and she would never like it if she broke down infront of somebody she hated.......Vidya and Manisha held Abhira....Vidya could see the anger and emotional toll it was taking on Abhira and asked Madhav to do something.........


Armaan (angrily)-Aap abhi ke abhi yaha se jaye......Aur Abhira se milne ki kosish kabhi mat kijiye ga.....Aap me toh itni bhi insaaniyat nai hai ki ek marte hoi aadmi ki baat ek baar sun sake Mr Goenka......Aap ne uss din kaha tha na ki Ruhi hi aapki sab kuch hai.....Its true Ruhi hi aapki sab kuch hai.....Abhira has a family.....Mai hu uska family.....Her father entrusted Akshara mam into your hands aur aapne kya kiya ye jaante hui that she was expecting aapne mam ko ghar se bahar nikal diya.......


Madhav (angrily)-Kabhi man kiya ye dekhne ka ki aapki poti zinda hai bhi ya nahi.....?


Armaan (angrily)-Akshara mam ne jaan sacrifice kardi mere liye.....Mai kabhi nai bhool sakta mai....Aapne kaise maan liye ki aapki poti aisa kuch kar bhi sakti hai......Sacrifice karwate gaye kyuki woh karti thi......Disgusting hai aap log.....Chale jaye yaha se....Aur kabhi phir mood kar meri wife ki taraf mat dekhye ga....


Manish (angrily)-Tumhari wajah se meri Akshu mar gayi,tumhari jaan bachene mai.....Armaan tumhari wajah se mai.....


Abhira (angrily,standing infront of Armaan)-Bas Kijiye......Kuch toh shram kijiye.....You should be thankful to Armaan.....Uski wajah se mai zinda hu aaj.....Warna Yuvraaj na jaane mera kya haal karta aapko sammajh mai bhi aata hai kya......Aur waise bhi kya Akshu laga ke rakha hai.......Her name was Akshara.....Shaadi ke baad mai aake unka saara samaan aake le jaogi........You dont have any right on her memories,on her children......Kiss hgaq se aap uss insaan ko kos rahe hai jisne meri jaan bachai hai......Go away.....


The day of the wedding had been busy.....The Chorus Gang had teased Armaan a lot and refused to let him meet Abhira......He would meet her in the temple......Vidya and Manisha had especially helped Abhira.....Kaveri had decided to attend the wedding,while Armaan had not given any expressions at that.....Dadisa had a long way to go.......The day of the wedding Madhav and Vidya had escorted Abhira to the temple......Abhira had missed Akshara a lot since past few days especially after the reveal....


While everybody was at the temple,Ruhi had came running to the Poddar Mansion.....Manish had a heart attack and all he wanted was to meet Abhira.....Ruhi came to Poddar Mansion to request Abhira to just meet P-nanu once.......But the entire house was empty......She saw the house help and decided to ask him....


Ruhi (emotionally)-Sab kaha gaye hai kaka ? Koi nai hai ghar pr......


House help (smiling)-Arre aaj toh Armaan bhaiyya aur bhabhi ki shaadi hai......Sab log mandir mai hai....Koi nai hai ghar par......


Ruhi (sadly)-Konse mandir ?


House help (nodding)-Ye toh mujhe nai pata par shayd Shiv mandir ho sakta hai....


While Ruhi had found the mandir,when she reached the temple she was very late because family had left the temple just that second......Ruhi was very angry at herself.....This mess had been her creation......Abhir,Akshara all left her because she had created this mess......And while Abhira never said anything specifically she knew Abhira hated her......First because of Armaan and than this......However when she reached the hospital in evening Suwarna told her that Abhira had came and met Manish but had refused to forgive him.......That day Abhira had took lot of Akshara's luggage and her guitar and sent it back to Mussorie to their house......Her mumma never got the respect she deserved and hence they didnt deserved her........

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Love it!!!!

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Please keep writing more FFs. Waiting for updates on your other works as well.

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