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Posted: 5 months ago
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Lovely update! Hope Armaan does not create a scene.

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Fantastic update

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Outstanding chapter, beautifully written! Do update whenever you have time.smiley32

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------CHAPTER 4-------


Armaan entered the party dressed in a formal Ralph Lauren navy blue suit with white innercoat. He looked no less than a kdrama ceo , he was looking every bit of posh and rich. As soon as he entered, his eyes started to search for his wife, Abhira.



He knew she is nearby, he can feel her presence ( never beating the male bahu allegations). His eyes started to look hither and tither to locate her. As he was getting inside the club, looking for her ,a hand on his shoulder stopped him in his tracks.



He halted and looked behind to meet the eyes of Mr Malhotra, the man whom he did not like at all. Armaan knew that he was wrong and a cheater but still their Firm made him win the case. He tried to explain to Dadisaa and Fufasa of how terrible this man actually is. But as usual dadisa did not pay any heed to him and rebuked him harshly and smiled and accepted her son in law's words.



But still, Armaan has to maintain the decorum and his cool , because he knew he is also responsible for him winning the case despite being the criminal. It's not the first time that something like this has occured. He smile a very professional smile and extended his hand. Mr Malhotra held his hand for a formal greeting.



," Mr, Armaan Poddar, very welcome to my humble abode, I hope you didn't have any problem." Armaan smiled and said with a sarcastic smile," Indeed, a very humble abode, and no absolutely no problem occurred to me. How are you doing by the way?



," I am fine, and I am doing great actually all thanks to you and your family, specially Mr. Bansal, Where is he?," He asked. Armaan replied," Your welcome, but he couldn't make it due to some last minute emergency so here I am. Thank you for having me here,"

," Yes, yes please go ahead and enjoy,by the way, your wife did not come, is she alright?," Armaan replied with a tightlipped smile," yes, she is more than fine but she couldn't make it here due to some work stuff. But, the party for the case is planned by us next week,then what is the purpose of having such a great party now, Any special occasion?,"



," Yes, it's a very special occasion my dear son's company just reached new heights after a merger contract with the biggest Company of Rajasthan. So, it's kind of success party for him , because he is very young just completed his college but still managed such a great thing, so ...."



Armaan was actually impressed and really shocked because he has heard about his son's personality that he is a typical richy rich , Playboy. But , he had no idea that he is also so talented and intelligent when it comes to business, Armaan understood he should not have judged the book by it's cover.



No matter,what kind of personality one possess but it should not be the testimony of someone's talent and intellect in any other field. He wanted to meet him and congratulate him personally. He gave a genuine smile, this time and said.



," That's great, Can I meet him and congratulate him personally on such a huge success," Mr. Malhotra smiled happily and nodded and started looking for Achintya here and there , he finally spoted him dancing happily with some girl. He pointed to Armaan in his direction and asked him to talk to him when the dance gets over , he couldn't introduce them to each other because he was the host and kinda busy. So, he left after bidding him good bye .



Armaan spotted him dancing with some girl ,he smiled but he also found the girl somewhat known. As if he knew who she was but he couldn't make out due to the club's lighting. Slowly ,when Achintya twirled the girl and she landed on his chest. Armaan could now see the girl clearly and his smile vanished.



The girl was none other than his wife, Abhira. ( So unpredictable) Armaan clenched his fist, something akin to acid settled in his lower gut, his whole body went crazy and mad with rage. He was literally shivering in anger.



He saw her dancing romantically in the arms of some other man that also too close. They both were smiling,talking and giggling while dancing so close to each other. Armaan's could only see red.



He came out of his misery when he heard few people discuss something beside him,"Who is the girl with whom Achintya is dancing?," Armaan's ears perked up at the mention of Achintya. He listened keenly to their conversation.



," Oh, she is so pretty, they both suit each other." ,"She also looks so young , they look like a power couple, they look so in love," . ," look at their comfort while dancing, "She is so comfortable and close to him, lucky her,".



Armaan was getting more and more rigid with every word he was listening, so they assumed she is Achintya's girlfriend. Kuch bhi, but who wouldn't think they are not together with the way they are dancing. Also, his ears caught one sentence which filled him with toxic insecurity and possessiveness.



," She is so young, they both suit each other," were the words which were constantly ringing in his head, a whole lot of insecurity and some ugly feeling kicked him . He was shocked at himself at the intensity of his feelings towards her.



Armaan wanted to rip him apart from her and beat the man black and blue for touching her, but he was known for his calm and composed demeanor his whole life, so he chose the difficult and painful but better way out, which was to be calm and confront her later.



Why was she here in arms of some other man dancing so freely with someone else as if she is single? Doesn't she know, she has a husband already, and all the compliment and praises of them being such a wonderful couple ignited some dark feeling. He was no more the calm and composed Armaan , he was burning in jealousy and fury.



Armaan went to the adjoined bar and ordered for whisky on the rocks. Although,he was never the drinking type of guy, but only the taste of alcohol can calm his jealous and possessive ass. He started drinking, one by one ,one after other while staring at his wife in some other Man's arms who was busy talking and giggling with that rich ba*tard.



Finally, after what feels like an eternity the song ended and they seperated. The whole party bursted with claps and hootings for them. Abhira smiled and was leaving when Achintya held her hand ,while Armaan clenched his fist. Achintya told something to Abhira and she nodded, switching on her phone, she probably called him.



Armaan went absolutely crazy and ballistic on why she gave her number to him,is she thinking of moving on with him after their marriage ended,??? Has she finally acknowledged that she is going to be single in few days and she is already trying to secure her future with someone special??? All kinds of questions arose in his mind and he became highly restless.



Abhira turned towards the bar after giving her number to Achintya. She was surprised when she saw Armaan there drinking as if there was no tomorrow. She was not scared or afraid because she was not doing anything wrong even if he has seen it. She was just dancing but she was hoping Armaan came alone otherwise a great problem would arise.



She can easily convince him but she was so wrong, at that point only he was whom she can't convince at all. She walked towards him pleasantly surprised and happy because she finally managed to gather some evidences and ideas, on how to trap Poddar Madclan into their own mess and also give justice to the oppressed and who were cheated on by her dear husband's family.



She came towards him waved him a Hii. Armaan was looking keenly at her trying to find out what was different,when she finally was near and he could see her clearly because of the alcohol messing with his cerebellum .He finally acknowledged that she was not wearing any mangalsutra nor sindoor.



She was also carrying her veil in somewhat stylish way which he never has seen on her ,she was really looking like a single girl in her early 20s who has come to enjoy a party. It pained him to admit that she was not looking married at all and he was sure she would have got a lot of male attention and asking outs.




Sorry for the cliffhanger....but itne din kuch post nhi Kiya tha... toh abbb kr rhi hun....abb updates regular hongi....paper ho gya ( woh baat alag hai ki bhut ghatiya huwa)

Also @whimsical eagerly waiting for your Safarnama.....please ... hume aise suspense me mat choro.....please overthinking kam kriye aap apni....mera paper kharab gya tab bhi main chill hun.....please be a little more gentler to your self...we love you and your writing.

Niharika ♥️


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Posted: 4 months ago
#58

Great update. Look forward to more soon!

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Can't wait to read 😉

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Awesome :-)

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