Love over lies (Alternative version)PraVeer Manas Ganga - Page 7

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Urvashi is planning to betray Manas's family even. After they are of no use to her, they will be discarded.

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Thank u very much coderlady,Kavitha,taahir,khwaishfan,glitter_goldie



Love over lies (Alternative version)Part 7

Ganga stood in front of Manas's family members.

Ganga:You all accepted me despite of knowing my identity.

Mohini:What do you mean Ganga?

Ganga took her naagin form.

Ganga said emotionally:You all knew that I am a Naagin.Still you all accepted me whole heartedly.

Now it's my turn to prove a good daughter in law.I promise that I will bring naagmani from the Naagmani protector.

Mohini smiled emotionally and said:You are so good Ganga.We are lucky to have a daughter in law like you.

They smiled.Mohini hugged Ganga with a smirk on her face.



After some time...

Dadi,Mohini and Lalit were in the room.

Dadi:Naagmani in and Ganga out.The end of Ganga.

They laughed.

Lalit:Raghuveer deserves a horrible fate after he tried to expose us.Raghu and Manas are our adopted sons.Though we accepted them as our sons,Raghu tried to betray us.We don't intend to hurt Manas as he is on our side.

Mohini:Manas is on your side as he is unaware of the truth.But if he comes to know the truth,he won't spare any of us.

Lalit and Dadi became dull.

Lalit:Manas should never know the truth.

Mohini:I think Manas has started feeling for Ganga.

Dadi and Lalit became dull.

Dadi:Then that is dangerous.Mohini…warn him not to love Ganga.

Mohini:But now I am worried whether Manas can remove Ganga from his heart.

Lalit:After we get naagmani from Ganga,we will kill her.After that automatically Ganga will leave Manas’ heart.

They chuckled.

Ganga met the Naagmani Protector Naagin Vani in her Naagin form.Manas had accompanied Ganga.

Seeing Ganga itself Vani smiled.

Vani:Ganga!

Ganga was surprised.

Ganga:How did you recognize me?

Vani:Being the Naagmani protector,I can recognize you very well Ganga.Because other than you,it's only you who has the right to take Naagmani from here.Others can touch the Naagmani only if you hand it over to them.

Ganga:Please give me the Naagmani.I need it for my family.I need to save my family from the danger with this naagmani.

Vani:It's not that easy Ganga.You can definitely get this Naagmani from me.I will hand it over to you.But only after you complete 6 months of austerity...continuous meditation.

Ganga was shocked:6 months?But how can I survive without eating for 6 months?

Vani:If you are deeply involved in meditation dedicating yourself to God,you will be able to survive without food too.Because you are not an ordinary human being,but a blessed Naagin.

Ganga:Ok.I will do the austere spiritual meditation putting my heart and soul into it.

Vani smiled.

Manas:No,I will not let it happen.I will not allow you to torture body without eating food.



Ganga:Manasji,calm down.It's not torturing the body,but purifying the body.I am a blessed Naagin.I am strong.I can manage it.Trust me.

Manas:But Ganga....

Ganga:Right now,we need the naagmani and it's essential.You know that.So please co-operate with me.

Manas nodded emotionally.

He caressed her face and said:Take care!

Ganga:Yes.You also take care of yourself.We will see after 6 months.A few months of wait and after that we will be together forever and lead a happy life.

Manas smiled.He bid good-bye and went.






Ganga started her Tapasya with Vani near by her.

Raghuveer held red roses and stood infront of Prarthana.

Raghuveer:Prarthana,believe it or not, it was love at first sight for me.When you were talking to me,I was impressed by the rhythm in your talk.It sounded musical to me.When you looked at me,I was just seeing your sparkling eyes.Each encounter of ours made me fall in love with you more and more.I love you Prarthana.

Will you be mine?

Prarthana became surprised,emotional and happy.

Prarthana:I al…al..always wanted to be loved by you.

Raghuveer was surprised.

Prarthana:You are my drea...drea...dream Pri...Pri...Prince.Be...Be...cause you are the only one who accep...accepted me with my defect.

Raghuveer:That is not your defect Prarthana.That's something which differentiates you from others.

She smiled.

Prarthana:I lo..lo..love you Ra..Ra..Raghu.

Raghuveer became very happy.

Prarthana took the roses from him.

(Thanks Salley for this edited pic).

They looked at each other romantically.




6 months passed by.

Vani smiled:You completed your Tapasya successfully and Shivji has blessed you.

Ganga became very happy.

Vani handed over the Naagmani to Ganga.

Vani:Now you are the one who should take care of this precious Mani.

Ganga smiled:I will safeguard Naagmani.

Vani smiled.

Ganga was very happy.

Ganga:Thank you so much for the naagmani.I wanted this very badly for my family.

Vani smiled.

Vani:Be careful Ganga.When Naagmani is in your hands enemies will be around you.

Ganga nodded.





Ganga went back to the Gujral house.All were very happy to see her back.

Manas and Ganga embraced each other happily.



Manas:I missed you Ganga.I swear..I will never let you stay away from me like this.

Ganga:I will not go away from you ever Manas.

Manas fed her a sweet with his hand and said:Welcome back my dear wife.

She smiled.

Dadi:Ganga,did you get the naagmani?

Ganga:Would I have returned home without Naagmani?

Mohini:Ganga keeps her promise always.

Urvashi:You are right Mohini.

They all smiled.

Ganga took the naagmani and seeing it all were amazed.

A bright ray of light came out of the Naagmani and it reached Dadi's body.Dadi got up from the wheel chair immediately happily.She jumped with joy.

Dadi:Now I can walk and jump.My body is not paralyzed anymore.

All were surprised to see it.

Manas:I can't believe that the Naagmani was so powerful.

The ray of light passed through Lalit's body.

There was excitement on his face.

Lalit:Suddenly I feel energetic.I think my heart problem has also gone.

They all smiled happily.

Mohini said in her mind:What a great performance by Maa and Lalit!Maa pretended to be a paralyzed person and Lalit pretended to be a heart patient just to convince Manas to use Ganga for their benefit.

Dadi took the naagmani in her hands with excitement.

Dadi:Finally the naagmani is with me.I can't believe it.

They all smiled.

Urvashi:Ganga,you did so much for this family.But once you give the naagmani to others you tend to lose your strength.

Ganga and Manas became dull.

Urvashi:But don't worry.I have a special drink for you.It's a spiritual drink which can help you to retain your powers.

Ganga and Manas were surprised.

Urvashi brought the drink and gave it to Ganga.

Ganga:Thank you very much Guru mata..

Urvashi smiled.

Ganga started drinking it.Mohini,Urvashi,Dadi and Lalit smirked.

Ganga turned into her naagin form.She started feeling uneasiness and her skin colour also started changing.

Mohini,Urvashi,dadi and Lalit smirked.

Ganga felt like fainting.Manas held her hand tight before she fainted.

Manas was really worried for Ganga.

Manas:Ganga...what happened?

Suddenly Mohini,Urvashi,Dadi and Lalit started laughing.

Urvashi:It's the effect of poison.The drink I gave her was poisonous.

Dadi said sarcastically:Ganga...sorry beta.You will die in a few minutes.

Manas and Ganga were shocked.

Suddenly what happened shocked all of them.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#63

Loved it dear

Awesome and beautiful update

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗

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Posted: 1 years ago
#64

Thanks for the pm


Good update.... brilliantly written

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Posted: 1 years ago
#65

These people are plotting to kill Ganga. And she is so happy and willing to help them.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#66

Ganga will go through a lot to help her so called family. They don't even care, except for Manas.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#67

Hope Vani does something to help Ganga with her trials.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#68

Dadi and Lalit were pretending this whole time. For how long? Manas never even knew.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#69

That drink spells trouble. Ganga is innocently believing everything.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#70

They gave her poison and also revealed that they did it. Looks like they are in for a surprise yet.

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