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Part 5


Curious and Fascinating Update

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Love over lies (Alternative version)Part 6

Manas went to Mohini and told her about what Ganga told him about her grand parents.

Mohini became dull.

Mohini:Maybe Ganga is not aware of the truth.So she she thinks that her grand mother was nice and she sacrificed her life while saving people.

Manas:Ya mom.I also think so.

Mohini thought:Glad that Manas does'nt have doubt anymore.

Manas and Ganga pampered their dogs.

Manas:You know Ganga?Dogs are the best friends of human beings.That's why they are friendly with us.

Ganga thought:I am a Naagin.Still these dogs love me.Because I love them.We animals just need love.



A woman came to visit Mohini.They both hugged each other.

Mohini:Uvashi,you did not come for my son's wedding.

Urvashi:Sorry Mohini.I was busy with pilgrimage.But I want to see your daughter in law.

Mohini:Sure.

Manas and Ganga came.

Mohini:This is my daughter in law Ganga.

Urvashi:Your daughter in law is very beautiful Mohini.

Manas,Mohini and Ganga smiled.

Mohini:This is my friend Urvashi.She is always into pujas and pilgrimages.So God has blessed her with the magical power to heal people.She is known as Guru Mata.

Ganga was surprised.

Ganga thought:Why she does'nt look like someone who is involved in devotional activities?Appearances are deceptive.She may not be looking like Guru Mata.But she is.

Mohini:Manas and Ganga...Dadi wants both of you to visit Urvashi's Ashram at Megha Mountain to get blessings.

Manas's heart was pricked.

He looked at Ganga and thought:Ganga will be kept in captive by Guru Mata as her slave.Poor Ganga!Will she lose her life also there?Will she be killed there?

Ganga:Sure.We will go there.

Urvashi,Dadi and Mohini smirked.

Raghuveer took Prarthana somewhere.

Prarthana found it strange.

Prarthana:We were go...go...going for a mee..mee..meeting.Then why did you bri...bri...bring me here?

Raghuveer:Because I want to tell you an important matter.You are my friend too.So if I hide it from you,it will be like cheating you.I can't cheat you anymore.

Prarthana was stunned.

Prarthana:Secret?What se..se..secret?

Raghuveer: I am your jiju Manas' brother Raghuveer.

Prarthana was shocked:What?

Raghuveer:I am saying the truth Prarthana.

Prathana:Then why were you no…no..not there for any we..we..wedding function?

Raghveer:I was trapped by someone in a drug case and my reputation got ruined.There was no one to stand for me except Manas.My family kicked me out of the house.That’s why I am not staying with them.

Prarthana was shocked.

Raghuveer:Prarthana,do you also doubt that I was involved in the drug mafia like others?

Prarthana looked at him emotionally.

Prarthana:No.Not at all.I trust you.You are the most wonderful person I have ever met.

Raghuveer was relieved and smiled emotionally.

Raghuveer:Sorry for hiding the truth from Prarthana.Sorry for betraying you.

Prarthana felt guilty.

Prarthana thought:I also cheated Raghuveer by hiding my identity from him.Since Raghu revealed the truth to me,I should also reveal my identity to him.But if he hates me for that?I have to face his hatred also.But I should not cheat him anymore.

Prarthana was going to reveal her truth.

But Raghuveer said:Let's go back to our office.There is a lot of work.

Prarthana:Ok.

She thought:I could not tell him my truth.But very soon I have to tell him.



Mohini asked Ganga:Ganga,are you ready to go to the ashram?

Ganga:Yes mummiji.

Manas's heart was pierced.

He thought:Oh God!What will happen at the ashram?I am feeling scared.

Ganga noticed Manas's dull face.

Ganga:What happened Manasji?

Manas:Nothing.

Mohini became dull as she could understand why Manas was looking upset.

Manas walked away.

Ganga:What happened to Manasji?

Mohini smiled in an artificial manner.

Mohini:Nothing like that Ganga.Basically he is a serious guy.That's why.

Ganga smiled.



Prarthana sent a message to Raghuveer:Please come home.I want to tell you an important matter.

Raghuveer read the message and went to meet Prarthana.

Raghuveer:Why did you call me Prarthana?Is everything alright?

Prarthana:How will he react after knowing my truth?What if he hates me after knowing my truth?I can't imagine that.

Suddenly Prarthana started crying.

Raghuveer was shocked.

Raghu:Why are you crying Prarthana?

Prarthana:I am also so..so…sorry Raghu.I also hi..hi..hid my identity from you.

Raghuveer was shocked to see her crying.

Raghuveer:What happened Prarthana?Why are you crying?

He embraced her to console her.

Raghuveer:Tell me why you started crying suddenly?

Prarthana moved away from him.

Prarthana turned into her Naagin form.

Prarthana said emotionally:This is my real form.If you hate me fo...fo..for this then...

Raghuveer:Why should I hate you for this?Just like I was born as a human being,you were born as an Ichaadari Naagin.That's it.

Prarthana was relieved.She smiled emotionally.

She asked with surprise:You ha..ha..have no problem with it?

Raghuveer:Since I do research on shape shifting serpents at first sight itself I realized that you were a Naagin.But i pretended as if I did'nt identify you as I respected your privacy.

Prarthana was surprised and smiled.

Prarthana:Why di...did..did you re..re...search on Naagins?

Raghuveer:Out of curiosity.I myself did not know why I was so interested in knowing more about Naagins.But now I think that God made me do that as a Naagin was destined for me.

Prarthana:What?

Raghuveer realized what he said.

Raghuveer:Because God gave me a Naagin as my closest friend.

Prarthana smiled happily.

Suddenly Prarthana thought:Does he know that Ganga di too is a Naagin?

Prarthana:Do you know anything about Pra...Pra..Ganga di?

Raghuveer:Yes.Not only me,Manas also knows that Ganga is a Naagin.But he is also pretending as if he does'nt know her identity.Until she herself reveals it,he won't question her.

Prarthana became emotional.

She thought:Manas jiju loves Ganga di truly.

Manas and Ganga went to Urvashi's Ashram at the Megha Mountain.

Urvashi welcomed them.

Urvashi:Welcome children!

Ganga found the ashram strange as there was no God's idol there.

Ganga:Why there is no God's Idol in the ashram?

Urvashi:Because I don't think God needs any form to appear before us.God is with us always in an invisible form.Then why should we need God's idols here?We don't need to see God's form created by human beings to communicate with God.

Ganga was amazed by her words.

Ganga:You are right Guru Mata.

Urvashi thought in her mind:The real season I don't keep God's Idols here is because I am a witch who is into witch crafts and black magic.

Urvashi:Can I speak to Ganga alone?

Manas:Sure.

Manas went out.

Manas was feeling restless.

Manas:What does Guru Mata want to tell Ganga?

Ganga asked Urvashi:What do you want to tell me in Manasji's absence?

Urvashi:To tell you the family secret.

Ganga:Secret?

Urvashi:Yes.

Urvashi told her about Lalit's disease.

Ganga was shocked.

Ganga was very upset:I did'nt know about Papa's disease.

Urvashi:The biggest secret is only you can save the sinking family of your husband.

Ganga was confused:Me?How?

Urvashi:Only a naagin who has a special zodiac sign can save the family.Because only that Naagin can touch the Naagmani other than the Naagin who is the protector of Naagmani.Only the naagmani can save your family.You are that Naagin who can bring the naagmani to the Gujral family.

Ganga was shocked.

Urvashi:You may be thinking how I realized that you are a Naagin.Right?Because God blessed me with the magical power to identify animals as I am a God's true devotee.If I am not wrong.please show your Naagin form to me.

Ganga took her Naagin form.

Ganga:Pranam Guru Mata!

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Urvashi smiled:So I was right about you.

Urvashi:Anyways if you want your husband's family to safe,bring the naagmani.Otherwise the next victims will be Mohini and Manas.The whole family will perish.Everything is in your hands Ganga.

Ganga was in complete shock.

Manas was becoming restless.

Manas:Will Guru Mata harm Ganga?No..I won't allow it.I will have to save Ganga.

He rushed to the ashram.

There he saw Urvashi and Ganga coming out.He was relieved to see Ganga.

Manas cupped her face in his hands:Ganga,are you alright?

Ganga nodded.

Ganga:Yes Manasji.Why did you ask so?

Manas thought:Unfortunately I can't tell anything to Ganga.

Urvashi:Ganga is completely alright.Everyone will be perfectly alright in an ashram where God's blessing is visible.I am happy that you both came here.

She touched their heads and said:I bless you both on God's behalf.

They touched her feet.

Manas:Ok...we are going back now.

Urvashi:Ok.Keep visiting here.

Ganga:Yes Guru Mata.

Manas thought:I don't feel like bringing Ganga here again.

After they left Urvashi smirked.

Urvashi:Your husband's family has no problems Ganga.It was our trick to convince Manas to use you for naagmani.So that we can share Naagmani.But I will not let those foolish Gujrals to take Naagmani.I will take the naagmani for myself and rule this world like a Queen.For that I need your help to get the naagmani Ganga.After your job is done,I will kill you.

Urvashi laughed in an evil manner.

Ganga walked towards the car.But Manas was disturbed and did'nt go near the car.

Manas thought:I find this place too dangerous for an innocent girl like Ganga.I should not bring her here again.

Ganga looked at Manas.

Ganga:Manasji,why are you not getting inside the car?What are you thinking?

Manas turned back and looked at her.

Manas:Nothing like that Ganga.I am coming.

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Ganga smiled.Manas got inside the car with Ganga.

Prarthana told Ganga about Raghuveer.

Ganga:I knew it Prarthana.Manasji had told me.

Prarthana was surprised.

Prarthana:You also have a ha...happy news di.Manas jiju already knows tha...tha..that you are a Naagin.

Ganga was shocked:What?

Prarthana:Yes di.He has no prob...pro...problem with your identity.

Ganga could not believe it.

Ganga was in her room.

Ganga was lost in thoughts.

Manas came inside.He saw Ganga thinking something.

Manas:Ganga...what are you thinking?

Ganga:Tell me Manasji,you know that I am a naagin?

Manas was stunned.

He thought:How did Ganga know this?

Ganga:Raghuveer told like that to Prarthana.

Manas:Yes,I knew it.

Ganga:Then why did'nt you question me?

Manas:Why should I question you regarding your identity Ganga?I love you and I care only about that.Whether you are a human being or a serpent does'nt matter to me.

Ganga became very emotional.

Ganga:Your love is so pure Manasji.I love you more now.

She embraced him emotionally.Manas became emotional.

Manas said in his mind:I also love you more and more Ganga.I will not let anyone harm you.For that I will stand against my own family.

Ganga:Manasji...does your family also know about my identity?

Manas nodded.

Manas:Yes.It's mom who saw you first in the naagin form.That's how I also came to know that you were a Naagin.

Ganga became emotional.

Ganga:They also knew it.Still they accepted me.I am blessed to get such a nice family.I will do anything for this lovely family.I will bring naagmani here to save this family from misfortune.

Manas was shocked:What?

Ganga:Guru Mata told me about the problems our family is facing.She told me that only I can touch the naagmani and bring it here to save our family.I will do that and then we all will live happily together Manasji.

Manas smiled emotionally.

Manas:Thank you very much Ganga.

They embraced each other again.

He thought:That means Ganga does'nt have to be Guru Mata's slave to save our family.Thank God!Ganga will be safe.

Manas:I have never seen your naagin form.Can I see your Naagin look?

Ganga:Are you sure?

Manas:Yes.

She nodded.

She took the form of a Naagin.

Manas was amazed by her Naagin look.

Manas:I never knew that serpents can look so gorgeous.

Ganga blushed.

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Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Loved it dear💕

Awesome and beautiful part 🤗🤗

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon ☺

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Part 6

Terrific update... majestically written

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Mohini manipulated Manas into believing that Ganga thinks her grandmother was a noble lady. The conversation between Manas and Gamga seems that he is hiding something from her. Wrvashi coming to Manas's house for naagmani reminded me of a tantrik in Nagina movie. Gangs thinks that Urvashi. came to her as God, but I am not surprised when her ways turned out to be evil. Glad that Rwghuveer"a love for Praetyana never made any difference to their friendship. Hope Ganga gets to know the truth; soon.

Edited by kavitha_r - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Part 6


Fabulous and Curious Update

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Who is Urvashi in reality? Probably not who she appears to be.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Urvashi,Dadi and Mohini and plotting to capture Ganga. Will Manas play along?

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Raghuveer always knew Prarthana's real identity. She was just not aware of it.

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Ganga is being manipulated. Knowing her kind heart, Urvashi is preparing her trap.

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