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Love over lies (Alternative version)Part 5
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Manas went to the terrace and started drinking.
Manas:Why i feel so much of pain?
Ganga who came there saw Manas drinking with a shock.
Ganga:What happened to Manasji suddenly?
Ganga ran to the room and cried.
Manas took a photograph from his purse and looked at it.
Manas:I miss you.If you were here with me,I would have got an emotional support and I would not have gone weak.
Suddenly he heard a voice.
"I am here Manas".
Manas turned back.He was surprised to see that person.
It was Raghuveer.
Manas called him emotionally:Raghu!
They hugged each other.
Manas:I missed you.
Raghuveer:I also missed you.
Manas:I am depressed.Seeing you,I got relief.
Raghuveer:Why are you upset even after marrying the woman you love?I came to know about your wedding from your sister in law Prarthana.
Manas was surprised
Manas:You know Prarthana?
Raghuveer:Yes.She is my friend.She works with me.
Manas was surprised.
Raghuveer:Tell me Manas.Why are you depressed?
Manas was silent.
Raghuveer:I am your brother.Won’t you share it with me?
Manas:I am depressed because....
Manas told him why he married Ganga.
Raghuveer was shocked.
Raghuveer:You are depressed because you are guilty.Because you did a sin by cheating an innocent woman.You feel guilty of betraying Ganga because you have started loving her.
Manas remembered getting attracted to Ganga and trying to kiss her.He shed tears.
Raghuveer:Please back out from what you are doing.
Manas:No,I can't. I have to protect my family.
Raghuveer:Manas.. trust me.You can't save your family by cheating and breaking the heart of the woman who loves you blindly.
Manas felt upset.
Raghuveer:And I really feel that our so called family is lying.They lied to you to achieve their goal which is purely evil.
Manas was stunned.
Manas:Raghuveer,still you are suspecting them?
Raghuveer:I am not suspecting them...I am 100 percent sure about them.Because I have experienced it.
Manas:Raghuveer,you are misunderstanding them.
Raghuveer:No Manas.They are greedy people who do black magic to gain success.Dadi is an evil woman who does black magic to get naagmani.She wants Naagmani for herself to be eternal and rule this world.But you trust them kindly.To safeguard the reputation of the family,it was necessary for them to shut my mouth.So our so called father..our step dad portrayed me as a drug addict and put me in the jail.If you had not saved me,I would have been in the jail itself. All because of Lalit Gujral and his family.
Manas:Raghuveer..I am sure that dad was not the one who was behind your scandal and arrest.Even though he is our step dad,he loves us.
Raghuveer:Nobody loves us.All are using us.One day you will understand the truth.But make sure that you don't become late.And cheating the woman who loves you is a sin.I also a love a Naagin.I fell in love with Prarthana at first sight itself.Since I do research on Naagins seeing her eyes itself I understood that she is a Naagin.But my love for her did not stop there.Because my love is true.
Manas was shocked.
Raghuveer:Anyways,I am with you my brother.Now I have to go.See you soon!
They had a hug and Raghuveer left.
Manas was in a dilemma.
The next morning...
Ganga went near Manas.
Ganga:Manasji,yesterday night you behaved strangely.Are you still the same?I hope not.
Manas:My mood is still the same Ganga.I hope everything gets cleared and I will become normal.
Ganga got confused.
Ganga:I am your wife Manasji.You can share it with me.Maybe I can help you out.
Manas thought:How can I tell you the truth Ganga?
Manas:No Ganga.Let it be in my mind itself.
Ganga:Why?You don't trust me?
Manas replied in his mind:I trust you.But I am not trustworthy.
Manas:It's not like that Ganga.I just need some time and space for myself.
Ganga:Ok.
Manas walked away.
Ganga:What is disturbing Manasji all of a sudden?
The meeting got very late for Prarthana and Raghuveer.Prarthana was worried.
Raghu:What happened Prarthana?Our meeting went well.Then why are you gloomy?
Prarthana:To…to..tday evening is my sister’s re..re..reception party.I am worried whether I will be late.Be…be..because the meeting ended very late and when I catch a bus or an auto itself the time will go.
Raghu:Don’t worry.I will drop you home by my car.You can get ready fast and I will drop you to the party also.
She smiled:Thank you.
Raghuveer dropped Prarthana to her house.
Prathana:You come inside.
Raghu smiled:Yes.
They both got inside the house.
Prarthana took a dress to wear.Raghuveer saw it.
Raghu:Prarthana,it’s a party.Then why are you wearing such a simple dress?
Prarthana:I ca…ca..can’t afford such expensive clothes always.
Raghu:One second.
Raghuveer rang up someone.Within some time one person brought a cover there.Raghuveer received it and took one party wear out of it and gave it to Prarthana.
Raghu:You wear this for the party.
Prarthana was stunned.
Prarthana:But…how can I?
Raghu:Don’t worry.This is yours.I had bought this earlier for you only.That’s why my maid brought this from my house so fast.
Prarthana was surprised.
Prarthana:You had bo..bo…bought this for me?Why?
Raghu:Actually for the annual function of our office,I bought clothes and ornaments for all my staffs. I thought of distributing them before the function.But you need this now.That’s why I giving it to you now.
Prarthana smiled:Thank you Sir.
She thought:I thought Raghu bought this specially for me.Because he has soft corner towards me.But I am a fool to think that he will love me.
Prarthana wore the party dress.Surprisingly Raghuveer came from behind and placed a necklace around her neck.She was stunned.
Prarthana:You bo..bo…bought such expensive ornaments for everyone?
Raghu:Yes.
Prarthana thought:Strange!Which Boss buys such costly accessories for all his staffs?He has a big heart.
Raghuveer:You look very beautiful now.
She blushed.
They shared a deep eye lock.
He broke the eye lock and said:I will drop you to the party.You tell me the address.
Prarthana:Ok.
Raghuveer dropped Prarthana to the Gujral house.
Raghuveer:Enjoy the party Prarthana.Bye!
Prarthana:Bye!
Manas and Ganga’s reception Party....
Manas and Ganga were dancing romantically.
Ganga was happy.
She thought:Guess Manasji is normal now.He loves me a lot.
Mere saare vaade vaade
Reh gaye aadhe
Hai kusoor kya, hai kusoor kya
Jeet ke bhi haare haare
Khwaab ye bichare
Ye fitoor kya, ye fitoor kya
Duniya deewani, ishq na jaane (aa...)
Duniya deewani, ishq na jaane
Dil toh bas dil ko pehchaane
Naino se naina takraaye
Na jaane kya dhoonde akhiyaan
(Dhoonde akhiyaan)
Naino se naina takraaye
Na jaane kya dhoonde akhiyaan
(Dhoonde akhiyaan)
Kaise tumhe ye samjhaaye
Na jaane kya doondhe akhiyaan
(Dhoonde akhiyaan)
Heer na jaane, na jaane Ranjha
Jaane yeh kaisi dor
Jud jaaye toh, tode na toote
Ishq ki aisi dor
Heer na jaane, Ranjha na jaane
Jaane hai dil mera
Kahin pe jaake mil jayega
Naam yeh tera mera
Heer na jaane, Ranjha na jaane
Jaane hai dil mera
Kahin pe jaake mil jayega
Naam yeh tera mera
Log deewane dete hain taane (ho...)
Log deewane dete hain taane
Dil toh bas dil ki hi maane
Naino se naina takraye
Na jaane kya dhoondhe akhiyaan
(Dhoonde akhiyaan)
Naino se naina takraaye
Na jaane kya dhoonde akhiyaan
(Dhoonde akhiyaan)
Kaise tumhe yeh samjhaaye
Na jaane kya dhoondhe akhiyaan
(Dhoonde akhiyaan)
Tu jab jab mujhse roothega
Mera yaar mera dil tootega
Dil tootega, jag chhootega
Jab yaar tu mujhse roothega
Tu jab jab mujhse roothega
Mera yaar mera dil tootega
Dil tootega, jag chhootega
Jab yaar tu mujhse roothega
Duniya deewani (deewani)
Log deewane (deewane)
Ishq Khudari (Khudari)
Kyun na ye jaane (na jaane)
Duniya deewani (deewani)
Log deewane (deewane)
Ishq Khudari (Khudari)
Kyun na ye jaane (na jaane)
Naino se naina takraaye
Na jaane kya dhoonde akhiyaan
(Dhoonde akhiyaan...)
Naino se naina takraye
Na jaane kya dhoonde akhiyaan
(Dhoonde akhiyaan...)
(Aa... dhoonde akhiyaan...)
(Jabariya Jodi)
After the party,Manas slept on the couch shocking Ganga.
Ganga remembered their romantic moments.
She became upset.
She thought:Why suddenly Manasji is avoiding me?
Ganga too started avoiding Manas.Manas could not bear it.
Manas went to the kitchen in search of Ganga.
Manas:What are you doing here Ganga?
Ganga did not even look at Manas.
Ganga:Can't you see what I am doing?I am cooking.
Manas:Fine.But why are you avoiding me?
Ganga:You are asking me why I am avoiding you?You are also avoiding me.Right?
Manas became silent.
Manas:I did not avoid you purposefully Ganga.I have some business tensions.That's why.
Ganga looked at Manas in disbelief.
Ganga:Is it?
Manas:Yes.Sorry for avoiding you.I could see only business problems before me.Only if I sort out the problems I can be peaceful.
Ganga was relieved as Manas was not avoiding her purposefully.
Ganga:Don't worry Manasji.Everything will be fine.I will pray to Bolenath.
Manas thought:I wish everything gets fine.But....
Manas:Ganga,I want to tell you something.
Ganga:Say.
.Manas:Prarthana is working with my brother Raghuveer.
Ganga was surprised.
Ganga:You have a brother?Then why is he not staying here?He did not attend our wedding and the reception party.
Manas: Raghuveer has a tragic life.Somebody trapped him in a drug case.So our own family disowned him as they also misunderstood him.
Ganga was shocked.
Ganga:I really feel sad for Raghuveer.Hope his innocence gets proved and our family accepts him back.
Manas:Please don't tell this to Prarthana now.Raghuveer himself wants to tell Prarthana that he is my brother.Because he loves Prarthana.
Ganga was surprised.
Ganga:What?Raghuveer loves Prarthana.
Manas:Yes.
Ganga:I am so happy.Because Prarthana also loves him.
He smiled with surprise.
Ganga was looking at a photo frame.There was a couple in the photo.
Manas:Who are they Ganga?
Ganga:They are my grand mother Bela who is my mother's mother and my grand father Mahir.
Manas thought:So this is the evil Naagin because of which our family is suffering.
Ganga:My mom used to say that Bela Nani and Mahir Nana were an ideal couple.They used to give couple goals.They both had golden hearts.They loved everyone and helped others risking their lives.They both tried to save their clan from an evil family who did black magic.But they got killed by that evil family.
Ganga was becoming emotional while revealing her grand parents' sad story.Mohini was watching them with a shock.
Manas was shocked.
Mohini thought:Will Manas come to know the truth through Ganga?Then what will happen?
He thought:But the story which Dadi told was completely different.Is Raghuveer right about dadi?Is Dadi lying about Ganga's Nani?If Raghuveer is right,then is the evil family who killed Ganga's grand parents my own family?
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