Love over lies (Alternative version)PraVeer Manas Ganga - Page 4

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Does Raghuveer know Manas? Why is he so shocked?

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Thank u very much coderlady,Kavitha,taahir,khwaishfan,glitter_goldie.



Love over lies (Alternative version)Part 4

During the lunch time,Raghuveer went and sat near Prarthana.

Prarthana:Sir…

Raghuveer:Continue eating.I came here to tell you something.

Prarthana:Say Sir..

Raghuveer:Actually the models who were supposed to do photoshoot for our calendar have backed out in the last moment.So they are suggesting us to do the photo shoot as a pair.

Prarthana was stunned.

Raghuveer:I am not forcing you.You do it only if you are comfortable.I will try to search for another model.

Prarthana:In the last mo....moment,it will be difficult to get another model.I wi..wi..will do it Sir.

Raghuveer:Are you sure?

Prarthana:Yes Sir.

Raghuveer:Are you really comfortable with it?

Prarthana:Yes.It’s just that I a...a..am not used to photo shoots before.So I don’t know whe..whe..whether I will be good at it.Whether I will look goo..good or not.

Raghuveer:You will look good.Without make up also you look very beautiful.

She blushed.

Raghuveer:In this happiness shall we go out and have icecream?

Prarthana got excited.

Prarthana:Yes.I love icecream.

He smiled.

Raghuveer and Prarthana enjoyed having icecream together.

Raghuveer stood close to Prarthana from behind and whispered:You look cute while having icecream.

She smiled looking at him.They shared a sweet eye lock.

They both went to get ready for the photoshoot with a smile.

Raghuveer-Prarthana did the photoshoot together.They were shy too while posing for the romantic photo shoot.

Prarthana felt goosebumps when Raghuveer was posing with her romantically.

Manas gave a gown to Ganga.

Manas:I wish to see you in this gown for our engagement function.

She smiled:Sure,I will wear this.

He smiled.

Manas-Ganga's engagement function...

Manas and Ganga exchanged rings.

He held her hand and said:I am so lucky to have you Ganga.

Ganga:I am also lucky to have you Manasji.

Manas had a prick in his heart.

Haan aa.. o..

Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe
Beinteha pyaar doon (Repeat once)

Manas:You look so beautiful in the gown that I am unable to take my eyes off you.

She smiled.

Ganga:You gave this gown to me with love.That's why I look nice in this gown.

He smiled.

Saari hadein maine meri
Ab maine tod di
Dekar mujhe pataa
Awaargi ban gaye

They cut a cake and fed each other.

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Haan aa.. o..

Kya khoob rab ne kiya
Bin maange itna diya
Warna hai milta kahaan
Hum kaafiron ko khuda

Then they danced together romantically.

Hasratein ab meri
Tumse hai jaa mili
Tum duaa ab meri
Aakhiri ban gaye


Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Oo.. aa..
Aa.. aa.. oo

Prarthana thought:Ma…Ma..Manas ji..ji..jiju and Didi are looking so nice to…together.I am ha..ha...happy for them.I wish Raghu…Ra..Raghu is here.

She imagined dancing with Raghuveer.

Haan aa.. o..

Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon


Keemat ho koi tujhe
Beinteha pyaar doon (Repeat once)

Saari hadein maine meri
Ab maine tod di


Dekar mujhe pataa
Awaargi ban gaye..

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye


Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye



Haan aa.. o..

- Hamari Adhuri Kahaani

Manas-Ganga got married.

In the bedroom...

Ganga came wearing a sky blue saree.Manas smiled seeing her.

Manas:You look very beautiful in this saree.Simple and elegant.

Ganga smiled.

Ganga:You look very handsome like a Prince.You are my Prince.

Her words pricked his heart.

Manas thought:Ganga considers me as her Prince.But I am cheating her.

Ganga gave a glass of milk to Manas.

Ganga:Manasji,drink half.

Manas:These rituals...

Ganga:We should follow rituals.

He smiled.

He drank half.

Manas:I will feed you milk.

He fed her the milk.

She smiled.

She thought:Manasji is so sweet that he is pampering me.

He cupped her face in his hands.

They both embraced each other passionately.

He leaned towards her face to pamper her lips with his lips.

Ganga was lost in him.Suddenly he came back to senses and moved backward.

He thought:How could i do this to Ganga?How did I lose my control?While doing love drama with Ganga,did I really fall in love with Ganga?

He became restless.

He thought:No,I can't fall in love with Ganga.I am only a Naagin hunter now.The only aim is to save my family through Ganga.But will I be able to cheat Ganga for that?Why do I feel bad to cheat Ganga?

Ganga:What happened Manasji?

Manas:Nothing.

He began to walk out.

Ganga:Where are you going?

Manas:I will go wherever I want.Don't question me.

Ganga was shocked to hear his reply and the tone.

Manas walked out.

Manas went to the terrace and started drinking.

Manas:Why i feel so much of pain?

Ganga who came there saw Manas drinking with a shock.

Ganga:What happened to Manasji suddenly?

Ganga ran to the room and cried.

Manas took a photograph from his purse and looked at it.

Manas:I miss you.If you were here with me,I would have got an emotional support and I would not have gone weak.

Suddenly he heard a voice.

"I am here Manas".

Manas turned back.He was surprised to see that person.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#33

Loved it dear

Awesome and beautiful part

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗

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Posted: 1 years ago
#34

thanks for the pm


Outstanding update.... brilliantly written

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Posted: 1 years ago
#35

Raghuveer and Prarthana are posing as a couple for the photo session.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#36

Manas was all set to deceive Ganga, but now he is not feeling so good.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#37

Whose picture does Manas have with him?

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Posted: 1 years ago
#38

Part 4


Fabulous and so Amazing Update

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Posted: 1 years ago
#39

In your precious part, you wrote that Raghuveer was shocked when Prarthana told him that her sister is going to marry Manas, but this post does not mention Praveer's conversation about the Ganga and Manas. Praveer's photoshoot scenes are romantic. It seems that Ganga's words reminds Manas that he is doing wrong.

The song sequences engagement and marriage scenes of Manga is romantic.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#40

Thanks a lot.After that PraVeer did not talk about Manas Ganga.You will soon know why Raghuveer was shocked hearing about Manas Ganga.


QUOTE=kavitha_r]

In your precious part, you wrote that Raghuveer was shocked when Prarthana told him that her sister is going to marry Manas, but this post does not mention Praveer's conversation about the Ganga and Manas. Praveer's photoshoot scenes are romantic. It seems that Ganga's words reminds Manas that he is doing wrong.

The song sequences engagement and marriage scenes of Manga is romantic.

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