CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 2

congrats for the ff..

n simply amazing..

loved the story alot..

awsum..

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

congrats on the ff

loved the story

awesome

continue soon

add mr 2 ur pm list

Hey nice storyline...nd all characters r superb...plz continue nd yes thnx to pm me..nd waiting for next pm...luv u

superb😊...one more RTMC FF...we all r waiting since May to see our favourite couple back together onscreen...but this wait is not getting over😡...hope we will get promo soon...till that these FFs will help to make waiting bearable...so i am really happy that u have started one more FF on them😊...

character-sketch is nice...ur story & plot is awesome...loved the start of FF ...feeling bad for ananya & veer...both r facing problems...one emotional & other financial...they look so lonely😭...but i am together they could find their happiness😊...

waiting for their first meeting...plz plz plz update soon...

wow dats really gd effort
bt 1 thing i wanna say
rajat don't fit 2 b 26...
bt except dat evry thing is really gd...

Thanks for starting new RTMC ff😃
It will make our wait for them easy😊
loved storyline its very diff n with suspense too.😳
Perfect Characters chose but y rt's age 26 n with 1 kid 😕 he is kido yaar😒
both updates r wonderiful👏
weaving suspense👏
egar to know how story will proceed😍
waiting for next part😍

Nice character sketch and update😛...Good effort keep on updating👍🏼. Thanks for PM

n abt the daughter there is plot u willl know as story reveals

Part-1&2

Part 3

Mr rai was engrossed in thoughts as how to save ananya. As there were only 5 days remaining till she will turn 20yrs. (acc to the will the property will be transferred to her name) . Suddenly there was a knock on the door. A handsome man in a lawyer's attire was standing , he came in & said, "uncle the hearings gonna start we must go".

Mr rai nodded his head n said "yes ajay I m coming".

Then they left.

When they were coming out of the court room. Mr gupta (veer's family advocate)saw them & walked forward to talk , "hello Rai haven't seen u around. How are you?" .

Mr rai introduced him to ajay "ajay he is gupta, my old friend & collegue". Ajay shook his hand & left as he had to work on some case.

Mr gupta- you look tense Rai , any problem? Tough case huh! Need advice from a better lawyer?

Mr rai- I don't need a lawyer's advice but a friends .

Mr gupta (he sensed the serious note in his tone)- fine lets talk over a coffee

They went for coffee

Mr gupta - Now tell me

Mr rai -(he tells him everything) I really have no clue what to do with 5 days remaining.

Mr gupta - I can help you (& he told him something )

In the evening Mrs jaya singh (veer's mom) was sitting in drawing room tense, suddenly the phone rang.

Jaya - hello

Mr gupta - hello its me . Listen, do you remember Khurranna family

Jaya - yess we had a great relations with Suraj khurrana. My husband & he were friends. Suraj khurrana even proposed his daughters marriage with veer . But after his demise we had not been in touch with their family. But why do you ask?

Mr gupta - listen carefully & (he explained the whole situation) . So wat u think?

Jaya - fine I agree ; set a meeting with Mr rai tomorrow. I 'll talk to veer.

At 10'00 pm in veer's room.

He was furious

Veer- mom i'll do any menial job & take care of my daughter rather then doing something like this.

Jaya (mom)- Ya right! u r gonna do a low level job who cannot manage his own life. That will suit you with your high degree's & tell me how will you afford your daughter's education and well being.

Its easy to say but is tough to live in poverty and think about your brother's family. If we go bankrupt he won't b able to take it and me will I be able to live in poverty?

Veer - for god sake mom there has to be another way

Jaya - no there isn't . If you don't agree we all are ruined

Veer- I can give u my life .but this ...

In disapproval he leaves.

Part-4&5

nice one dear😊...but it was too short & full of suspense...

so there is a plan to save ananya which is related to veer😍...hmm...i hope he agrees to this... i am waiting for their first meeting...

veer loves piyu a lot...so sweet...dieing to know their story...

plz plz update soon...