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Thats beautiful...i hope he react that way in the show the day he will discover the truth in the show
Originally posted by: cuteariya
i like finally everyone got to know the truth abt nivedita in this story ๐
but sorry to say riti i hate the part that asmita forgive shaan so easily after what he did to her๐๐ผthat part i hate the most & hate asmita for that aslo๐๐ผi want asmita to give back those hurt to shaan as much as he hurt hernot happy at all how she went to console him even after he destroyed her life
i would love to read that will be waiting dear๐
๐ don't worry I have just written first part...it's not that Asmita has forgiven him.. . he needed his best friend at that moment so she is just playing that part in consoling him... ofcourse I will not leave Shan that easily๐, wait for my next parts ๐ณ
๐ don't worry I have just written first part...it's not that Asmita has forgiven him.. . he needed his best friend at that moment so she is just playing that part in consoling him... ofcourse I will not leave Shan that easily๐, wait for my next parts ๐ณAwesome first part! You are a great writer. Just wanted to know if you are able to turn this into a full fledged fanfiction or are interested in writing one if you have the time. It would be amazing to read about Shan and Asmita's rediscovery of friendship and love, and a potential parallel trajectory that their story could take following Nivedita's revelation alongside the actual show since the actual show is getting more regressive and the characters are getting butchered after today's episode.I feel like there's so much to address not only in terms of relationships, but also in terms of character growth (Shan becoming Shantanu again, Ridoy changing and growing up, RM changing his thinking, Arindham dynamics with his sons, etc).I personally hope to see the public Asmita/Puchki revelation, Shan's reconcililation with his mother and getting her out of Sonagachi, and Asmita going back to Mumbai with her self-respect intact after fulfilling her duty as a friend and police officer(She needs to realize her mistake of having begged Shan for acceptance and nullify both marriages). I also hope that Shan leaves the Mazumdar house and business to make it on his own despite being asked to stay back (allowing Ridoy to grow up and take over). I think he can still fulfill his duties as a son and brother without the pressure of being the face of the Mazumdar empire. It would be great to see the Shan-Puchki friendship/courtship phase with Shan finally taking initiative to go after Puchki and win her back.
Awesome first part! You are a great writer. Just wanted to know if you are able to turn this into a full fledged fanfiction or are interested in writing one if you have the time. It would be amazing to read about Shan and Asmita's rediscovery of friendship and love, and a potential parallel trajectory that their story could take following Nivedita's revelation alongside the actual show since the actual show is getting more regressive and the characters are getting butchered after today's episode.I feel like there's so much to address not only in terms of relationships, but also in terms of character growth (Shan becoming Shantanu again, Ridoy changing and growing up, RM changing his thinking, Arindham dynamics with his sons, etc).I personally hope to see the public Asmita/Puchki revelation, Shan's reconcililation with his mother and getting her out of Sonagachi, and Asmita going back to Mumbai with her self-respect intact after fulfilling her duty as a friend and police officer(She needs to realize her mistake of having begged Shan for acceptance and nullify both marriages). I also hope that Shan leaves the Mazumdar house and business to make it on his own despite being asked to stay back (allowing Ridoy to grow up and take over). I think he can still fulfill his duties as a son and brother without the pressure of being the face of the Mazumdar empire and actually being there. It would be great to see the Shan-Puchki friendship/courtship phase with Shan finally taking initiative to go after Puchki and win her back.
@bs123 Thanks for liking ๐. I will try to extend this to FF..I do understand there is not much I can cover with size of my writing in 3 parts.. but yes the dynamics you talked about...I do have an idea on how I can take that forward in my story if I make it a FF instead so will definitely give a try.. ๐
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