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Chapter 10

She woke up late that morning, Sun was already up and her Pathan Baba was waiting for her with tea in their dining hall. She saw no trace of Shantanu around and was little surprised to see that perhaps he left so soon. Love is unreasonable at times, just last night she asked him to leave and today when he was not around, she was feeling bad about it. She thought of asking Pathan Baba about him..

Baba , woh Shantanu .. woh aaya tha na kal .. woh ..

Her baba realized her delimma as she struggled with that question..

Haan beta ..bada ajeeb hain yeh ladka .. Kal achanak raat ko hi nikal gya...baad mein phone aaya tha ki ja rha hain.. pta nahi aisa kya hua.. Her Pathan baba tried to guage her reaction , she looked quite disturbed..

While on the other side of the city, Shantanu was still at the shores wondering what to do next , he had made a call to Pathan Baba so that old man would not worry for him but he didn't know which path to take from here..

He got up and went to a nearby hotel to freshen up for the day. He got a room for himself and got inside to relax as it has been long tiring journey and aftermath for him. Suddenly he heard few screams from next room which seemed a bit like of a child crying for help. He stood against the wall to hear things more clearly. There was something fishy going on there. All Shantanu could hear was a little girl's scream and a voice asking others to silence her.

There was silence now in that room but Shantanu was sure of what he had heard and it alarmed him that something was not right there. He got out and knocked on the next room door but didn't get any response from the other end. He immediately called up hotel manager who was quite reluctant in hearing what he had to say..

Main aapse keh rha hu .. yaha koi hain.. Koi choti bachi jo kuch mushkil mein hain..

Sir , uss kamre mein koi nahi hain.. Main aapko yakeen dilata hu... aapne jo suna woh ek brahm hoga ..

Manager tried to convince Shantanu that there was nothing wrong about that room but Shantanu was not convinced. Though he was sure of one thing that he would not get any help from the hotel staff there, he only had to do something about it.

He pretended to get convinced and got back to his room. Still those screams haunted him. Those screams were asking for help. He shuddered to think what could have gone wrong with that little girl.

It reminded him back to his childhood days and scary memories attached to it, it reminded of the struggle that he and his Puchki had gone through then. But they were lucky enough to have their Chanda Ma by their side as their protector but he knew that some children were not so lucky enough. He desperately hoped for that little girl to be fine but he continued sensing her presence around.

In next room a little girl quietly wept as she had just got thrashed by the person who had just bought her from her parents in return of huge sum. It was her punishment for making noise there and alerting the man next door. Though with those knocks on the door, girl felt little hope but was scared not to make any noise further. She just hoped that person who knocked would do more to set her free. She wanted to seek his help thus she tapped the wall as Shantanu heard those little beats on the wall. He was sure that there was someone who was on the other side and  it was definitely something suspicious going on. He went near the wall and replied back to her with same sets of beats on the wall. Little girl smiled with hope as she heard those beats but how can she let him know that she needs help.  The bad guy was still in the room though not looking at her, he was busy flirting with some girl on phone. She quietly took a paper kept on table and a pen placed on it and scribbled little notes to that stranger who had returned back her call of distress.

Now was the challenge of passing the note to next door, she excused herself to the washroom as the guy allowed her to go there and looked out a way from the window. The window from that washroom made way to the balcony of the next room as she discovered a way to pass that note to the next room.

Shantanu was back to his thoughts after nothing came after those beats he heard last, maybe he was imagining too much he thought.. He had just closed his eyes for brief rest as his body was tired and worn out from the stress and lack of sleep.

Suddenly some noise came from balcony, something had dropped there, Shantanu got up to see what was it as he opened the door to room's balcony. There was a note crumbled inside that fancy soap boxes kept in washroom. He read that note

Mujhe bacha lijiye main , yeh log gande hain.. mujhe yaha band kar rakha hain.. mujhe yaha se nikal lijiye.. main Khushi..

This was all that was written in that note and Shantanu immediately rushed out but before he could knock again on that door, he stopped and thought for a while. They seem to be dangerous people and he would risk child's life if he would behave in sudden rage. He had to think of a plan to help her. He had to call for help. He dialed the helpline number for police and alerted them about the situation in the hotel.

Madam , there is a distress call from a hotel in Juhu near beach area. Caller told us about some little child in trouble there.

What was the name of hotel , Jay? Asmita asked Inspector Jay as he conveyed what constable had just told him.

Hotel Mirage is the name.. I think we have heard this hotel name before..

Yes we have. Asmita got alerted with that name and immediately called up for help and back up support as she marched outside with Inspector Jay following her running footsteps.

This hotel was already in radar for its mischievous activities and thus she knew that caller was right. What she was not aware was identity of the caller though. and rightfully so the caller name was not revealed and not even asked in such cases.

Asmita asked her team to come in normal clothes as she also disguised herself in plain clothes to investigate what was going wrong in that hotel. Now was the time for some action for Asmita. Her team entered the hotel and since they were in plain clothes no one got alarmed of their presence. They reached the room and broke open the door with two shots right at the door lock. Hotel staff started running but the police team outside the hotel grabbed them. Asmita went inside to see little girl just sitting in fear in a remote corner of the room. She was perhaps six or seven years old, a little angle dressed shabbily with tears rolling down her cheeks. She looked quite scared.  Before Asmita could take any action, a guy just kept a knife near the throat of little child..

Don't you come near .. else I will kill her. He cautioned the police team and moved little girl to escape from there. But as he got outside the door keeping all officers at safe distance to avoid any harm to the girl, a person just held his knife and knocked him with a punch straight on his face. The guy retailiated though releasing his hold from the knife and slitting hand of the savior here as Asmita noticed him and her breathe stopped. Shantanu was in front of her fighting with that guy who still had that knife.. She screamed .. Shantanu.. With little help from police team present there, Shantanu finally managed to secure safe release of khushi... as she ran into his arms and cuddled him thanking him for saving her life.

Asmita grunted a little at this visual, it was as if someone else was taking her limelight away that day but yes she was proud of what he did. Her officer just revealed to her that this was the guy who had called them. Khushi was still terrified as Shantanu tried consoling the little girl in his arms , just making her feel secure.  He looked at Asmita looking at them and thought how destiny always brings them face to face.

He was hurt with his action stints and Asmita took no time in tending those wounds after finally separating Khushi from Shantanu.  Shantanu felt that little pang of jealousy in his Asmita from that little girl. Asmita sent that girl with her officers for medical treatment in a hospital nearby and asked them to contact her parents or any guardian.

Cut look very deep.. Asmita said noticing his wounds on hand and as her team went out with khushi , she gave a hard slap on shoulder to Shantanu for his risking his life like this.

Tum .. apne aap ko samajhte kya ho.. Mujhe pareshaan karna acha lagta hain tumhe ... She gave some more slaps on other shoulder of already injured Shantanu... Shantanu smiled seeing his Puchki scolding him like his bondhu. She continued verbal assaults on him as he watched her with mixed emotions.. They have travelled together so far with all ups and downs in their lives but these little moments is what have made it all worth it..

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#92
I'm liking how this is going. Shaan is Asmitas little helper. Its really good to see this side of Shaan. Normally he's having to play puppet to Nivi and Ridoy. Asmita will only bring out the best in him. Can't wait for more x
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#93

Originally posted by: Preeti.xo

I'm liking how this is going. Shaan is Asmitas little helper. Its really good to see this side of Shaan. Normally he's having to play puppet to Nivi and Ridoy. Asmita will only bring out the best in him. Can't wait for more x


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This is so good and very well written.👍🏼 I liked it. Keep it up. Looking forward to updates.😊
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Originally posted by: A_bhi_23

This is so good and very well written.👍🏼 I liked it. Keep it up. Looking forward to updates.😊


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Okay so I received a feedback from my friend on this.. that it is quite filmy.. last part..😆, well the last part had kicked off a Bollywood movie buff in me.. so it might appear bit OTT 😳 but thoda drama and action toh banta hain na... When in serial you are so much of it...😲  
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awesome chapter
oops now asmita is disturb as shantanu left her home🤔
pathan baba understand her dilemma
on the other hand shantanu went to stay in hotel 
but he found that little girl in trap
he wanted to help her but that manager convince him there isn't any problem😡
glad shantanu didn't believe it & tried everything to rescue little khushi🤗
god how can anyone can hurt little girl like that such a disgusting that monster😡
shantanu call the police in time & asmita came with her teams😃
but that monster got hold on khushi to save himself😡
thank god shantanu save khushi from that monster🤗
while saving khushi shantanu got hurt
at that moment asmita behave normally with shantanu which he enjoyed it
hope shamita will go to visit khushi
continue plz
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Thank you 😊
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

awesome chapter

oops now asmita is disturb as shantanu left her home🤔
pathan baba understand her dilemma
on the other hand shantanu went to stay in hotel 
but he found that little girl in trap
he wanted to help her but that manager convince him there isn't any problem😡
glad shantanu didn't believe it & tried everything to rescue little khushi🤗
god how can anyone can hurt little girl like that such a disgusting that monster😡
shantanu call the police in time & asmita came with her teams😃
but that monster got hold on khushi to save himself😡
thank god shantanu save khushi from that monster🤗
while saving khushi shantanu got hurt
at that moment asmita behave normally with shantanu which he enjoyed it
hope shamita will go to visit khushi
continue plz


Thank you 😊, I love the way you comment on each chapter.. it gives me recap of what I have written ,that's kind of helpful 😆
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Chapter 11

Another Chance

As they walked together outside the hotel both feeling little lighter and their own selves after such a long time. Shantanu watched her Puchki commanding her officers , as a proud bondhu he stood there recalling the journey it had been for that little girl from sonagachi to this confident officer on duty in front of him. He got reminded of that little girl he just saved , he enquired Inspector Jay about the girl who told him that girl was safe in their custody and they were planning to take her to hospital for routine checkup before handing her to her guardians. The trace for them was already on. Shantanu seeked his permission to meet that girl while Asmita was busy blasting and reprimanding hotel authorities for being often involved in these incidents.

He saw that little girl sitting in the corner of Police Van. She was still frightened , perhaps the day's events had been too traumatizing for poor kid. As soon as she saw Shantanu , she had a smile on her face as she ran out of Police van to meet her savior . Shantanu put a hand on child's head and comforted her.

Aapka naam khushi hain na? Aap yaha kaise aaye?

Shantanu's questions brought out khushi's sad story from her mouth. He got to know that She was being sold by her own people for greed of money and how these people were treating her. Shantanu was filled with anger on how could people stoop so low but yes he was not surprised though he had seen enough cases in his childhood to understand dark side of this world. He sat down with little khushi and consoled her.

Tum akeli nahi ho , Mere saath chalogi

Aapke saath ... Khushi was surprised with his words but there was a trust on this man that she had which was incredible considering many men in her life had failed her especially her own father.

Haan mere saath , Main tumhara dhyan rakhuga .. tumhe school mein padhaunga aur fir ek din tum bade hokar woh andar jo madam thi na bilkul waise banogi.. banogi na..

He was making Khushi see some hope and dreams. Asmita was hearing his words, after a long time she felt pride in him. Love was always between them but there have been very less instances where Asmita had found respect for Shantanu. This side of him was yet unexplored for her in many sense.

Shantanu tum usse adopt nahi kar sakte .. Asmita broke both Shantanu and Khushi's dream as She explained legality of the issue at hand. Shantanu though was married but separated or it was complicated status as they would say and adopting a girl child needed some guidelines to be followed.

There was one way he could do that though if Asmita could claim their marriage as valid in front of court and since there were not officially divorced they can go for this adoption together. Asmita knew this fact but was hesitant in saying the same to Shantanu. However, she consoled him by assuring that Khushi will be taken care of by a NGO and not handed over to her parents. She also made promise to him that Khushi's parents would be soon brought to justice.  As they lovingly bid adieu to little Khushi, Asmita watched Shantanu get bit emotional about that little girl.

Chalo ..ghar chalo..

Shantanu was surprised with her words..

Kya .. Sach mein.. Tumne mujhe ..matlab sach mein..

Asmita looked at him firmly and before he could further misinterpret her invitation she told him that she was inviting him only as a guest and also because he was unwell. For the sake of old times.. this is least that she could do in this state..

Shantanu saw Asmita again pretending to be hard with him, but Atleast she said for sake of good old times..

Soon they reached home and Pathan baba was really happy seeing both together. He thought Shantanu had managed to win Asmita's heart back but soon Puchki broke his day dreams as she again stated the reason of Shantanu being at her house. This time both Shantanu and Pathan baba smiled as hope of invading hardened Asmita's heart had rekindled.

Tumhare ghar se koi phone nahi aaya.. Kya Majumdar khandaan ko pta hain ki tum yaha ho..

Asmita asked Shantanu in taunting way, she was still unaware of what happened after she left Kolkata that day and thus was really surprised that Arindam or his Sir has not stopped him from coming over to her.

Main woh naam peeche chod aaya hu Puchki.. As he uttered those words, she looked at him with those shocking eyes.  Pathan baba narrated her all the events that had taken place in Shantanu's life in past one year. Asmita just looked at him as he smiled ..

Ab toh tumhe yakeen hoga na .. Main sirf tumhare liye aaya hu..

There were too many things going around. She needed some time to figure out how she was feeling at that moment. It was a big deal for Shantanu to leave everything behind, the name for which he and his Chanda Ma had done so much sacrifice for. Was it still sufficient for forgiving him? She didn't want to be hard with him at the same time she needed some space to think through her decisions. She rushed outside to get some space and sense of things as he followed her quietly that night.