Originally posted by: cuteariya
Small chapter & also last part made me sad
I can't describe how beautifully u wrote every single emotions of shamitaIt was really heart touching storyAsmita dilemma was very well writtenIt was really hard for her to decide to give another chance to shantanu or notBut when shantanu open up she couldn't stop her cry & let him to console herAt last finally puchki gave shantanu another chanceWhich made both Chanda maa & Pathan baba overwhelmedU made me so happy in the end that shamita adopt khushi & Chanda maa well come her warmlyCan u plz update epilogue & continue more on shamita?Thank you for liking and encouraging words. I have concluded the story π, there was quite less response on this one but due to you and couple of other people who responded and liked ,I finished this one.. If I find time , I will write OS with continuation of this story.. Again thanks for encouraging wordsπ
Originally posted by: Preeti.xo
What an impactful ending. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. It's been some journey. Thank you for such a beautiful story. Hope to Read more of your work in the future x
Originally posted by: A_bhi_23
The way you ended the story is really beautiful. I'm happy Puchki gave Shantanu another chance and finally they are together. And also they adopted khushi too. I really enjoyed to reading this beautiful story. Thank you for such a lovely story. hope you will write more interesting story in the future.
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