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cuteariya

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Posted: 5 years ago

#111

Small chapter & also last part made me sad

I can't describe how beautifully u wrote every single emotions of shamita

It was really heart touching story

Asmita dilemma was very well written

It was really hard for her to decide to give another chance to shantanu or not

But when shantanu open up she couldn't stop her cry & let him to console her

At last finally puchki gave shantanu another chance

Which made both Chanda maa & Pathan baba overwhelmed

U made me so happy in the end that shamita adopt khushi & Chanda maa well come her warmly

Can u plz update epilogue & continue more on shamita?

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Preeti

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Posted: 5 years ago

#112

What an impactful ending. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. It's been some journey. Thank you for such a beautiful story. Hope to Read more of your work in the future x

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riti4u

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Posted: 5 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: cuteariya
Small chapter & also last part made me sad
I can't describe how beautifully u wrote every single emotions of shamita
It was really heart touching story
Asmita dilemma was very well written
It was really hard for her to decide to give another chance to shantanu or not
But when shantanu open up she couldn't stop her cry & let him to console her
At last finally puchki gave shantanu another chance
Which made both Chanda maa & Pathan baba overwhelmed
U made me so happy in the end that shamita adopt khushi & Chanda maa well come her warmly
Can u plz update epilogue & continue more on shamita?

Thank you for liking and encouraging words. I have concluded the story 😊, there was quite less response on this one but due to you and couple of other people who responded and liked ,I finished this one.. If I find time , I will write OS with continuation of this story.. Again thanks for encouraging words😊

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riti4u

@riti4u

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+ 7

Posted: 5 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Preeti.xo
What an impactful ending. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. It's been some journey. Thank you for such a beautiful story. Hope to Read more of your work in the future x

Thank you dear for encouragement , I am glad you liked the story 😊

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Dheeraj

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Posted: 5 years ago

#115

The way you ended the story is really beautiful. I'm happy Puchki gave Shantanu another chance and finally they are together. And also they adopted khushi too. I really enjoyed to reading this beautiful story. Thank you for such a lovely story. hope you will write more interesting story in the future. Edited by A_bhi_23 - 5 years ago

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riti4u

@riti4u

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Posted: 5 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: A_bhi_23
The way you ended the story is really beautiful. I'm happy Puchki gave Shantanu another chance and finally they are together. And also they adopted khushi too. I really enjoyed to reading this beautiful story. Thank you for such a lovely story. hope you will write more interesting story in the future.

Thank you dear for lovely comment 😊 and liking this story 😊

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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Posted: 5 years ago

#117

Riti can u plz update epilogue?

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