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Originally posted by: Sajini235

Hi, I am trying to start an own ff of mine. Can u help me with the procedure ?

What help required I will try to help if I can

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Part 2

In the 6months

After Armaandecided to leave everything people were trying to come out of the shock butrohit accident make all of them num the situation advantage was taken by Sanjay and ruhi who join hands together to take the charge . madhav got veryupset with abhimaan leaving and no one taking stand for them even he couldn’t sohe took transfer to different city and settle there leaving Vidhya helpless thoughshe thought now rohit will take care of her but what happened to him was thingsshe coulnt control she wanted to get in touch with madhav but he has changedhis number and was not available to reach armaan was now out of question to herin all this things Sanjay controls dadisa

Sanjay and Dadisa

Sanjay :maa sa armaan ke jaane ke baad aur rohit ka accident bhi ho gaya hain aur aapjanti hain manjo bhaisa waise bhi koi kaam ke nahihain main chatha hoon ki aapsara charge mujhe dede

Dadisa: humhekuch samajh nahi aah raha aapko jo sahi lage who kariye

Sanjay :aapko kuch nahi karna bas yeh legal documents signed kar dijiye jis maincontrol firm ka mere upar hoga

Dadisa withoutreading signed the papers it was not about control but ownership paper firm wasnow under name of Sanjay bansal no poddar included in it and Poddar house wasdivided between ruhi and Sanjay ruhi demanded firm profits also

Sanjay andruhi

Ruhi gothold of Sanjay cctc footage where he gave money to judge in place of abhira if thatcame out in media Sanjay knows he is finished

Sanjay :tum chathi kya ho

Ruhi :mujhe sab dikh raha hain aap kya kar rahe hain mujhe bas aapke profits main hissaaur yeh ghar main bhi

Sanjay tumpagal ho gayi ho kya

Ruhi aapchahthe hain main yeh footage media main dekhao

Sanjay agreed

Within 3months of armaan abhira leaving all thisthings happens manoj was very hurt and felt betrayed with this decision ofdadisa though dadisa tried to make him understand that Sanjay betrayed hermanoj was like he was his fav jamai after all and he decided to leave the placewith Manisha and kids Vidhya and dadisa were under utter shock of what ishappening around but could not control anything . rohit was in worst conditionruhi got busy with kitty parties and friends she was least interested for hisnaam ka pati . nurse was kept for rohit who use to take care of him he feltlike a vegetable at one corner of house with only people concerned about him weredadisa Vidhya and krish . kajol and charu did not want to go against Sanjay . Vidhyaand dadisa use to sit in one room of there house with rohit and during breakfast lunch dinner were also not served to them Vidhya has to go to kitchen andprepare everything. Servants were told not to do there any job ….

Dadisa and Vidhya

Dadisa wasthinking something and abhira words were echoing in her mind

Dadisa aapbahut pachtayegi she was sitting on the chair and those words were kept echoingshe just closed her ears with hands

Vidhya :kya hua maa sa

Dadisa: whoabhira ne kaha tha bahut pachtayegi aap

Vidhya smilingslightly

Dadisa: tumhaas kyun rahi hoon

Vidhya :aapne pehli baar abhira ka naam liya hain

Dadisa kashmaine uski baat sun li hoti kash hum armaan aur rohit ki duriyan naa badhatekaash

Vidhya : abpachtane se kuch nahi hoga maa sa humne apne parivaar ke sabse ache bete bahuko apne hi haathon se khoya hain aur us ka hi nateja hain humari halat yeh hain

Rohit gotvery disturbed hearing there names which make them stop abrubtly they thoughtmight be rohit still angry on them

Rohit isnot he was betrayed himself again because of ruhi he is not able to see ruhiaround him but has to see as he cant speak nor explain he regrets the day heasked division in property from his brother the dark day of his life definitelythen after some time he slept

Dadisa :humne ruhi ko pehchane main bhi galti kar di mujhe laga woh rohit ko sambhallegi lekin who to

Vidhya :armaan ne krish ko bataya tha ruhi kis maksad ke liye yaha aayi thi use baskisi tarah armaan ko hasil karna tha armaan ne rohit ko bhi batane ki koshi kithi

Dadisa shockedtumhe humhe us waqt kyun nahi bataya

Vidhya kyabatate aapke liye to ruhi duniyan ki sabse achi beti bahu patni aur pata nahikya kya thi kis tarah batate mujhe to yeh bhi nahi samajh aata ki aap armaan kosautela kehti kyun hain mere liye woh sautela hain aapke liye to aapke bete kahi khoon hain na

Dadisa wasshocked didn’t have answer still reasoning lekin uski maa ka khoon acha nahitha uske khandaan ka koi aata pata nahi tha

Vidhya :maasa aapne ruhi abhira dono ko dekha hain aap phir bhi wahi atki hui hain kahina kahi aapki isi soch ki wajah se aaj hum pure beghar gaaye hain

Dadisa wasregistering everything and somewhere guilt is coming up for treating armaanlike that …….

Ruhi wasenjoying her life she thought because ofall of them she was tied to rohit not armaan and took revenge of it goenkastried explaning her but she cried and manipulate and find her ways she hadgiven them then goenka house there own manish refuse to take but Swarna is likewhere they will go and now they all are not in contact with ruhi (in this ff goenkasare not there )

Seeing allthis krish tried to find out where abouts of abhimaan he knew how much they areangry but they will help in such times but couldn’t locate as armaan dropped hissur name and removed all social media contacts and pages .

Summary of6 mnths for them now back to my fav abhimaan

In the busycity like Mumbai after lots of struggle and initial phase due to armaan goodname and reputation all over india they have made mark here also (he was happyhis success is just not under armaan Poddar name its because of armaan work )but armaan has stop using his sur name so now he is just armaan and abhira isabhira armaan sharma they marry in the temple with giving only one vow to eachother to be with each other until death and make each other there priority . in6 months from changing one rented house to another finally them have boughtthere small home one bhk apartment and a small two cabin office for themselves inbuying office armaan ki nautanki shuru

Armaan : Aresuno na pehle hum log ek saath hi baithethe na why two cabin now mujhe ek hi cabin chahiye

Abhira : docabin naam ke liye hain client honge nahi to tumhe mere cabin main hi rehnahain kaunsa tum sunte ho tumhe work place main bhi romance chahiye hota hain

Abhira whowas standing near him he pulled her on his laps

Armaan : towoh to mera right hain na giving her peck on her cheek

Abhira haanhain but you should know the meaning of public place

Armaan :public ho ya private tum meri ho to I can romance with you anywhere jaise abhiis room main and they started there usual thing

After lotof argument abhira won as always and bought two cabin office giving logic clientshould get good feeling about place

Armaan haschanged a lot in these 6 months he don’t mention his family name nor talk aboutthem even if abhira try he make her stop his love life zindagi pyaar is nowonly abhira and abhira no one else and became extra caring protective towards her .

Abhira isenjoying new version of armaan who gives her too much attention love and caresometimes it becomes difficult for her to handle his husband protectiveness buthis cute antics make abhira forget all and to give in his demands

Prerecap

Armaan abhiranew home and office pooja and the earlierone prerecap also continues from next it will be abhimaan more

Hope ypuenjoy reading it next update on Wednesday or Thursday

Sanjay and ruhi pay back time will also comehave patience

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i need a help when i am editing post for updating index they told they require note id field what is that

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Enjoyed reading part 2

Loved reading about abhimaan

Please add more scenes of abhimaan

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Loved this version of Armaan need more of abhimaan and bashing for Ruhi enjoyed
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From nexts parts it's more of abhimaan this is to show there back story and built up so there is lot more of abhimaan smiley31

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Originally posted by: mithilalovesksg

What help required I will try to help if I can

I am trying to update part 1 of my ff but its not updating
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PART 3

From thischapter I am introducing new character armaan’s nani Shivani mom rohini raj Shivani is dead in this. she is positivecharacter and will give abhimaan all love which they missed out of some elderlyone from there childhood armaan got but all was conditioned based we all knew. When they were shifting to Mumbaiabhira told armaan about rose villa belongs to Shivani she wanted there newlife should have no secrets armaan was shocked first knowing that then theywent there and enquire from neighbours about Shivani they told Shivani was deadbut her mother is alive and living at old age home they both went there and mether she got surprised and happy seeing armaan and abhira . she told them how kpmaniputales and took advantage of there financial conditions and create riftbetween madhav and Shivani and how Shivani last days she gave armaanresponsibility to madhav after knowing what all her mother went though armaangot more hurt and decided not to think about them anymore and waste time andemotions. Since then nani abhimaanstayed together in Mumbai .

At present

Abhimaanbedroom

Armaan washugging ridhima very close to his heart and sleeping peacefully

Morningalarm disturbed them abhira trying to get out of hold armaan being himself pullmore closer

abhira :khadoos maan please jane do late ho raha hain aaj bahut kaam hain you know na

armaan: hmmnot leaving

abhira :kya hmm chodo

armaan :baby pls na thode der aur aisa bhi kya zaruri kaam hain mere se important

abhira :pooja hain upar se saree bhi pehni hain

armaan:haan main pehna dunga will help don’t worry ab shanti se raho yaha mere pass

abhira(ears starts standing pehna dunga agar usne pehnana start kiya to jaa hi nayipayenge he will start his nautankis) koi zarurat nahi hain main khud kar lunginani will help

armaan:baby nani ko kyun pareshan karna hain when your khadoos maan is at your serviceand he knews sone to who ab degi nahi so he picked her up kissing her head andcheeks and took her to the bathroom closing the door (abhira was not shocked itwas there daily routin dono ko saath hi nahana hain earlier they had to asthere were timing of water coming in the places they live before but now armaanjust don’t want to leave the habit saying achi habits should be continued.)

After theremorning chores over they came out of room nani was sitting outside they tookher blessing and armaan went to make breakfast as today was his day to cook earlierthey use to cook together but with armaan cooking together got steamy to themso they drop the idea and only do that once in a while . in past months armaanalso realizing new version of him he didn’t allow abhira to do anythingalone they both divide and do therehousehold chores with nani also helping them and at workplace also everythingdone together he also realized his love for cooking and now he has become proin it . abhira was amazed to see thisside of armaan he has led lavish life even though there was not love butmonitary benefits were there still he used to help abhira in mopping, washingcleaning everything and romance this person can start any where )

At present

Abhira :armaan main soch rahi thi

Armaan:sochna bhi mat tum fast nahi rakhogi main rakh raha hoon na main pooja ke baadkha loonga

Abhira :khadoosmaan pooja main dono ko baithna hain

Armaan:haan to dono hi baithenge but fast not allowed to you maine pandiji ko bhi batadiya hain unka bahana bhi mere saath nahi chalega (while making poha . theyhave open space between kitchen and dining so they can see and talk )

Abhira par

Armaan :coming with the bowl no par var abhira tumari health permit nahi karti aur mainkoi chance nahi le sakta ismain (and he got important call but he disconnect ashe knew if he wil be busy with call she will not have but again call startsringing )

Abhira :uthalo important hoga

Armaan:nani please dekhiyega ki yeh kha le mujhe ispe bharosa nahi hain is baat parplease and he left

Nani : khale beta tu janti hain use who tujhe nahi rakhne dega aur keh bhi thik raha haintujhe vrat rakhne se doctor ne mana kiya hain

Abhira :adhe din ki to baat hain yeh to pagal hain nani aaj humari nayi shuruaat hainaajke din mujhe sab ache se karna hain naye ghar aur naye office ki pooja mainmain yeh frige main rakh deti hoon who poochega to bol dena kha liya

Nani: tujhelagta hain main bolungi who maan jayega abhira kha lo tere tabyeet bigad gayito who seh nahi payega tujhe dawai bhi leni hain who bhi wahi deta hain uskakya

Abhira :main manage kar loongi

Nani givingup yeh meri sunegi nahi armaan khud hi khila dega khana bhi aur dawali bhi(nani has confidence he will find out so she left t0 there new house which wastwo bulding away to check and make ready pooja preparations

Abhimaanroom

Abhiraenters after 15 mins so that he don’t doubt but armaan being armaan

Armaan:jaan kaisa laga poha

Abhira :poha oh haan acha tha bahut acha tha

Armaansenses some thing is there he will check that once he send the mail to client

Abhira naninaye ghar pe chali gayi hain preparation dekhne main soch rahi hoon main bhiwahi jake ready ho jaun

Armaan: aapbhul gayi hain to yaad dila doon maine kaha tha main aapko ready karugablinking his eyes

Abhira cansense danger but she knows he will not bulge so she gives in she missed outarmaan had already put his sarees matching jwellery everything ready thereoutside aisa lag raha hain who bas uske aane ka hi intezaar kar raha tha

Armaanhelped abhira wearing saree while he was making the plates of her saree andhelping it to put in his finger slightlytouch her bare stomach sending shiver to her spine armaan knows her reaction soto tease he keeps on touching his stomach making circle from his fingers

Abhira :armaaaan late ho jayega

Armaan:shhh bahut time hain baby tumne khud hi pehle ready hona shuru kiya hain kyunki tum khud yehi chathi ho blinking his eyes .

(abhira wasshocked but he was right morning when he told he will make her ready shedecided to starts early because he knews his khadoosman too well

Armaan :sitting down to check the plates if correct or not kissed on her navel whichmakes her weak on knees but armaan hold her strongly then standing making herhair oneside he tide the dori of her blouse intentionally rubbing her back withfingers and enjoying her face getting pink from mirror . he started puttingtrail of wet kisses on neck and back which make abhira mourns in hapiness

Abhira: tryingto collect her voice slowly jaan pls late ho raha hain tum jis speed se jaahrahe ho

Armaan notin any mood to break the chain of kisses abhira giving in and enjoying themoment again the alarm bell rang which make them come out of there me timearmaan realizing abhira did that so that they don’t get late giving killer lookto abhira he finally like a good boy knowsthey will now get late made her wear the saree pallu properly by pinning it up andgetting close so much that they can feel each other breath while tugging thepin that is armaan Favorite job while helping her wear saree which makes themso close to each other. Then he made her wear the jwellery while planting kisses on that part like neckclace kissingneck earing kissing the ears which abhira didn’t stop also because she knowsher romantic nautanki husband will not listen . he did the make up also sameway kissing the eyes and cheeks but when lipstic came armaan had nauty smileand abhira judging the expression

Abhira :yeh main hi lagaungi please please time dekho pls

Armaan givingin got ready himself wearing kurta pajama of white clour matching with his wifiabhira was lost the hamsome hunk he looked and armaan knew the gaze and

Armaan:biwi agar tum mujhe aisi hi dekhti rahi to main bhul jaunga humhe der ho rahihain

Abhira realizingcame out of her stance and called nani to check if everything ready does shehas to bring anything or not while armaan went out to check on other thingwhich he had made note of it

Abhira comingout of room chale khadoosmaan

Armaan :having the bowl which abhira had kept on fridge in his hand yeh khayega kaunabhira

Abhira hearingher name from him sense it he is pissed of or else he will call baby jaan biwi looking up realizing he found out the bowl

Abhira :armaan woh meri baat suno

Armaan : nahitum suno maine itna samjhaya phir bhi tumhe wahi karna hota hain jo karna hainchup chap baitho yaha aur yeh khao

Abhira :aadhe din ki hi baat hain kuch nahi hoga na

Armaan:adha din tum ek ghanta bhi vrat nahi kar sati bahut hua mujhe force karne pemajboor mat karo ab tum . tumhe pata bhinahi hain karwachaouth wale din jab tumne vrat Rakha tha tum faint ho gayi thi merikya halat hui thi kitna daar gaya thamain having tears in his eyes

Abhira feltguilty of making him cry on this day of her stupidty she hold his face andkissed those tears and try to hug him instead he hide the head in her stomachholding her closly entwinling his hands on her waist his tears were not stopping abhira rubbed hisback and allowed him to hold her as long he wanted she knews it only one fearhe had that is to loose abhira and he is too much vocal about it after sometime

Abhira :taking him out of hug acha ab rona band karo aur khilao mujhe chalo

Armaan happilymade her eat and gave her medicines and told dubara yeh karne ki koshih bhi matkarna please you are to precious to me I cant loose you

Abhira : I promiseab chale husband late ho raha hain

They bothwent first they did pooja at home then office it was just a small function withsome close friends they have kept party next day for there busuiness associates

After longtiring day they slept in each other arms peacefully

Prerecap

Abhimaan busyin shifting to new house with work and romance

Party jealousarmaan

Sanjay :yeh ab and ar firm ke owners hain kaun pata karo pechle 3 mahine main kuch zadahi chad rahe hain


next part will be coming on next wednesday since i am travelling hopw you guys enjoy this part full of abhimaan

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Amazing

Enjoyed reading abhimaan scenes

Excited to read more

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