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Part 10

Part 10

Abhira opened her eyes after a good night's sleep....She looked at the time,it was 6 in the morning.....her last day in her house....even though she knew she should wake up,Abhira lay still for couple of minutes.She wanted to absorb all the moments today.....Akshara entered Abhira's room and sat next to her and Abhira shifted her head into Akshara's lap....She caressed her head gently and Abhira could feel Akshara's tears.....Abhira sat up and wiped Akshara's tears.....

Abhira (wiping Akshara's tears)-Aapko badi jaldi thi shaadi karvane ki.....toh lo aab ja rahi hu mai.....Aab ro rahe ho woh bhi aabhi se......

Akshara (tearfully)-Tu jai gi toh rona toh aaye ga na.....Tu chali jayegi toh pareshan kon karega mujhe......Mumma ye mumma woh.....khena eke liye tujhe das baar bolna padta hai.....

Abhira (tearfully)-Ha toh aapka beta yahi pe hai...Usse karna aab pampering saari.....

Abhir entered the room and hugged Abhira and Akshu......Abhir regretted not spending enough time with his little sister....Honestly he envied Shikhar and Rohan.Not only they got to spend enough time with Abhira but she loved them too much as well.He felt like he didnt get his share of love from Abhira....Akshara wiped her tears,she had to be strong or else Abhira would fall apart in a minute she knew that....

Akshara (wiping hers and Abhira's tears)-Accha chalo rona dhona bas ho gaya.....Abhira teri mehndi dikha....

Abhira (grumbling)-Subah subah paanch baje Ishaani aayi thi hand wash karwane......

Abhira showed her the mehndi,Akshara was ecstatic seeing the colour.....Abhir rolled his eyes and informed Abhira that her brothers were cooking breakfast for her today and she should freshen up and come downstairs.....Abhira asked Akshara to go and that she would come soon....She stopped Abhir and gestured him to sit next to her....Abhir signaled her to talk ......

Abhira (tearfully)-You need to take care of mumma after I am gone......She too doesnot share much if you donot tell her.....(giving him a paper)-These are her medicines.....

Abhir (stunned)-Ye sab kis liye hai ? I never knew Ma davai bhi leti hai....I thought she is healthy.....

Abhira (explains)-Subah BP ki medication and night ko heart ki.....

Abhir (stunned)-Ma has heart issues ?

Abhira (explains)-She had a minor one 3 years back......After all the stress throughout her life this is not abnormal....She has to eat certain healthy things,no fried food and no late night especially.....Aur unhe davai bhulne ki aadat hai.....I feed in alarms in her phone......I will text you the details of the alarms....

Abhir hugged Abhira tightly.Hearing all this just made him realize what a lousy son he was.......While Abhira was the best daughter she could have had.he didnt know about his own mother's health issues and he was a doctor....He promised Abhira that he would Ma on proper check ups and would take very good care of her... Abhira also asked him to promise her that he would not let those Goenkas come near their mother....She didnt want them around their mumma ,since all they give is stress to her....Abhir promised her,she gave him Akshara's phone and made him understand the alarms of the medicines.....Before Abhir gave back the phone to Akshara he saw that Manish was calling Akshara....He looked towards his mother and remembered his promise to Abhira......He disconnected Manish's phone and than proceeded to block all the Goenkas number.....Abhira had mentioned to Abhir that their mother was not technologically very advanced and hence didnt use the phone much......

Abhira came downstairs for breakfast and was very emotional to see all the efforts her brothers had put through......Muskaan and Ishaani were very happy seeing Abhira's mehendi color....Akshara urged them to have the breakfast since they had to prepare for Haldi......Abhira after finishing her breakfast went back to her room to finish the packing.....She kept her documents,laptop and her case files.....Ishaani came with her outfit for Haldi....

Ishaani (handing her the outfit)-Chal jaldi se ready ho ja,Armaan ki haldi start ho gayi hai.....

Abhira came after changing her outfit.....Akshara and Muskaan were gushing seeing Abhira....She looked gorgeous in the yellow outfit and on top of that she had that bride's glow on her face.....Ishaani made her sit and helped her with Jewellery....

Here at the Poddar House after all had applied haldi to Armaan,the chorus gang and Rohit were applying haldi to Armaan.Something which he feared.....His cousins had flair for fun......What if the haldi didnt get off in time for wedding......He stopped them from applying...

Kaveri (smiling)-Armaan aap rok nahi sakte unhe haldi lagane se....haq hai unka

Armaan (scared)-Dadisa aap inhe jaanti nahi hai kya......Poora ka poora bowl ulta kar dege mere upar....Inki shitaan dimaag mai kya chalta hai kise pata.......

Charu (teasing)-Accha toh bhi aisa bolo na ki ki agar haldi reh gayi toh bhabhi ke saamne kaise jaoge.....Accha theek hai bhabhi ke liye hi sahi hum poora bowl nahi lagayege na hi ulta karge.....

Armaan (scolding)-Ye kamal ki baat hai.....Mai bolta hu nai toh nai sunte Abhira ka naam liya toh nahi karege......

Krish (smiling)-Ha toh bhabhi hamari........Unke liye kuch bhi karege.....Aapke liye kuch bhi nai karege.....Jaise ki jab Vidya mami haldi dene jayegi tab hum toh unse milne jayege par aap nai ja sakte.....

Kiara (smiling)-Ha hum toh bhabhi ko haldi bhi lagaige.....Par aap toh aab unse mil bhi nai paoge.....

Rohit (laughing)-Arre time please.....haldi pe attack karo come on guys.......

While Abhira was ready for haldi,she had noticed even at breakfast that Rohan was very silent.....She asked somebody from the staff to call for Rohan......Rohan came instantly.....Abhira asked to sit in front of her and asked somebody to bring a plate of food......Rohan was surprised when Abhira asked for plate of food.....Shikhar and Abhir were searching for Rohan for the gift which they had kept for Abhira but the staff member told them that he was in Abhira's room......

Rohan (smiling)-Aapko bhook lagi hai ? Toh mujhe bolo na me leke aata hu....

Abhira (smiling)-Khana mere liye nai tere liye hai......Subah se kuch kahya nai hai tune....Aur itna chup chup kyu ho gaya hai........Tabyet theek hai na teri....

Rohan (sadly)-Mai theek hu di....donot worry...

Abhira started feeding him food.....He was very upset it was evident to Abhira....He was smallest of all of them and she loved being a elder sister to Rohan....Yes he was very mischievous but she loved him as much as Shikhar dada loved her....She knew why he was upset but she didnt want to needle him lest he starts crying.....Shikhar and Abhir saw them from the door step......

Shikhar (pouting)-Hume toh itne pyaar se kabhi nai khilati ?

Abhir (nodding)-Hume khilati hi kaha hai.....

Abhira (chuckling)-Aap dono na jeko ho....Barabar kehti hai Ishaani......

Abhira fed all three of their brothers laughing at their tantrums.....Akshara who had came in with Vidya on video call,she wanted to see the dupatta of Abhira which she had selected....She had told Vidya that it belonged to Naira and she wanted Abhira to wear it....Akshara watched all of her children.......Vidya had smiled being on video call seeing how Abhira was happily feeding her brothers......Akshara had not disturbed them......Abhira hugged Rohan tightly......For Rohan Abhira was the only sister he knew.....For Abhir and Shikhar had Ruhi when they were young but for Rohan Abhira was the only one......She protected him from Kairav and Muskaan but also forced him to study late in night during exams.....

Ishaani came to take Abhira downstairs for haldi.....Kairav looked at Abhira and he knew that wherever Abhinavji would be today he would be the happiest......His daughter was finally getting married today.....He also knew that Abhira's grand parents Kartik and Naira would also be happy.....The first time he had seen Abhira since than he had always said that Abhira was completely like Naira....And that was the truth....

Soon Vidya and The Chorus Gang came with the haldi.....All of them happily laughed that Armaan bhaiyaa was grumpy since he could not meet her but they can at which Abhira had chuckled and blushed little as well.....Vidya first tied the mauli on Abhira's hand.....And first applied the haldi to Abhira......And than the rest followed......But Abhira was searching for her brothers who were yet to apply haldi......

Charu (asking)-Bhabhi kya hum aapko haldi laga sakte hai ?

Abhira (smiling)-Ha bilkul kyu nahi.....

Charu,Kiara,Aryan and Krish all four of them applied Haldi.....They all took pictures as well with the plan to tease Armaan......Charu had smiled happily at Abhira's mehendi color......

Vidya (smiling)-Arre wah rnag toh bahut accha hai......

Charu (smiling)-Ha mami bilkul almost black.....

Soon Abhira asked for her brothers.....

Abhira (looking at time)-Mumma mere teen idiot bhai kaha hai....? Haldi lagane bhi nai aai......

Kairav (nodding)-Woh teeno ek saath ek time par kaam ke liye gaye hai.....

Abhira (pouting)-Haldi ke waqt kon jaata hai......

Soon all three came but all of them quiteed seeing Abhira's expressions.....First Rohan and Shikhar went and at last went Abhir......

Abhir (tearfully)-Tujhe pata hai papa kitna khush hoge aaj.....You have made him proud in every aspect.....

Abhira (smiling)-He would be proud of you too.....He could never be angry with you from what I have heard.....

After the haldi was over,Abhira was in her room packing the rest of the stuff.....Thats when Akshara came over with the Shaadi ka Jhoda and Jewllery and Muskaan brought Naira's dupatta.....Abhira got emotional seeing all the stuff,it was just becoming more and more clear that her time to leave the house was coming near but she couldnot talk with Akshara.....Otherwise she would breakdown in such a manner that it would be task to get to mandap.....

Here at the Poddar House,Charu and Kiara went to Armaan's room.....He was already in a grumpy mood but his sisters came over to help him get over that grumpy mood....Charu decided to tell bhai to calll Abhira bhabhi.....She was so sad and so were everybody there especially her brothers....Kiara made Armaan sit and gave him their phone......Armaan was confused.....

Armaan (confused)-Isme kya hai ?

Kiara (smiling)-Abhira haldi ki haldi ke photos....

Armaan (smiling)-Thank you so much.....

Charu (hesitaitngly)-Bhai aap photos dekhne ke baad bhabhi ko call karna,to cheer her up......Woh bahut upset thi aaj.....Actually sab upset the waha.....

Armaan (taking a huge breath)-Ok donot worry mai call kar looga....

Armaan glanced away at the photos....Abhira was looking beautiful but his sister was right,she seemed very upset....Armaan took out his phone and video dialled Abhira.....Abhira picked it up after few rings.....She was glowing but he couldnot let go the fact that she was upset.....Vidya and Dadis both had mede him understand that Abhira might take few days to settle since she would be leaving Akshara for the first time.......Armaan already knew that fact.....He knew that not just Abhira but it would be diffcicult transition for anybody.....

(ON THE VIDEO CALL)

Armaan (nodding)-Dont fake your smile Abhira....Never with me....If you are upset there is nothing wrong with it.......

Abhira (nodding)-Thanks Armaan but I am fine even though there is bouts of that sadness which you are talking about......Agar mai rone lagi toh Udaipur mai baadh aa jayegi.....

Armaan (smiling)-Agar baddh aani hai toh aa jaye......Tum kyu aapni feelings kisi ke liye dabao....

Abhira (feeling freshsned up)-Are we allowed to see each other like this ?

Armaan (laughing)-Mil nai sakte,kisi ne video call ka kuch bola nai hai.....So you know Vakil Sahiba,loop hole.....

They chatted for about an hour when suddenly their video call was hijacked by Ishaani and Rohit......

Ishaani (nodding)-Sorry Armaan par aab aapki hone wali dulhan ko video call band karna padega....Taiyaar hona hai isse.....

Rohit (agreeing)-Time please bhiyya and bhabhi.....Jaldi taiyaar hona shoori kijiye.....

Armaan and Abhira both shut the video call......Ishaani started getting Abhira ready....It was a lengthy process afterall you donot become Dulhan everyday......Akshara and Muskaan came to help Ishaani....Abhira was going to look goegeous and breathtaking everybody knew that.....Finally after exhausting 2 hours.....Abhira was all ready.....Muskaan took balaiyaa of her...Akshara looked tearful looking at Abhira in her wedding dress......Ishaani looked att he mother-daughter duo and signled Muskaan.....Abhira wiped Akshara's tears.....

Abhira (tearful)-Lo aap chahti thi na shaadi ho jao......toh dekho shaadi ka din aa bhi gaya......

Akshara (tearfully)-Toh itni jaldi bada hone ki kya zaroorat thi....THode aur saal laga leti......Ro mat Abhira make up kharab ho jayega....

Abhira (chuckling)-Kuch nai hoga...Its waterproof mascara...(holding Akshara's hand)-Thank you for everything Mumma....For being a wonderful mother to me...Thank you for being a wonderful guide to me.....for being my teacher and supporting me in my life throughout,for respecting my choices.....You have been the best mother ever...

Akshara (tearfully)-Thank you beta for being the best daughter ever.....Tu mera gurror hai,my pride......(kissing her on the forehead).....Abhira mai jaanti hu nai log hoge,naya mohal but stay patient beta...Waqt lagta hai,kabhi kabhi bahut waqt lagta hai....And remember my advice aapne experience se keh rahi hu.....Family is a priority but teri aur Armaan ka rishta tera sabse bada priority honi chachiye....Your papa loved everybody but his home was always me and Abhir.....And thats how it should be.....

Abhira asked Akshara to get ready.....Abhira sat down looking at her pcaked luggage once again.....She looked at Naira's photo which she had placed at side table...She had often been told by everyone who knew her and Naira that she was exactly like Naira.....Abhira asked for Naira's blessings for her new life and asked for her Nani ma to protect her Akshu mumma.....

Soon Ishaani came to her room to tell her that the baarat had came....Abhira felt the butteflies in her stomach......The entire Poddar family had been ecstatic,this was the ocassion they had waited for long......Kaveri was the happiest,today she would bring their pota bahu home.....She was ecstatic.....Vidya too was happy but was sad for her best friend.....She knew Akshara would be upset at the propect of Abhira going away......

Soon the wedding ceremonies sarted and Panditji asked Ishaani to bring Abhira....Abhira's brothers went upstairs to get her....All three of them were stunned seeing their sister in her wedding dress......She looked gorgeous......All of them were teary eyed but Ishaani had specifically asked them not to cry infront of Abhira.....All the siblings got ready for the wedding ceremonies.....

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The wedding ceremony......

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Posted: 3 months ago
#72

NOTE

I wanted to manage the entire wedding in one update however when I started to see the size I felt that was not possible so now there will be part 2 of wedding ceremonies

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Enjoyed reading the haldi and abhira love for her brothers

Very excited for wedding

Amazing chapter

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Beautiful as always!

Look forward to reading more of shaadi scenes too ❤️

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Posted: 3 months ago
#75
Earlier chapters are so nice.Waiting for the next update.
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Beautiful update

Waiting 4 nxt part

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Waiting for your updates! 🙏😊

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#78

Will update soon. Have a bit of issue as to how to take story forward.....

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Posted: 3 months ago
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SUGGESTION

Need a suggestion. This story can go forward two ways.....

1) After the wedding there will be confession and than there will be Epilogue

2) There will be further chapters, than I will write Akshu's death & Abhira's bonding with Poddars and Armaan.....


Choose one option please

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Option 2

Its gonna be tragic but I wanna see Armaan be there for her in her toughest moments also.

I wanna see him be the only one in front of whom she drops her stoic mask to just weep and he lets her.

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