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BTW I will be updating a prologue for new story tomorrow as well !!
Part 9
Part 9
Abhira was sipping water from her glass after trying to practice dance for sangeet......Trying because well her fiance Armaan Poddar was not the best in dancing....He was nervous that he was going to drop her.....She had tried several times to dissuade his fear but his fear continued to make him nervous....Abhira suddenly remembered how her mother had tried to calm her nervousness when she had been appointed to Poddar firms.....She decided to use this trick to make Armaan dance nervous free....She saw him trying seriously for her because she loved dance but she had in one mind to not dance at all....After all it was their sangeet,people would dance they wouldn't what was the big deal....He didnt have to try so hard not when he was not comfortable.....She saw his cousins and brother Rohit trying their level best but she decided to help in different manner.....As soon as Rohit saw Abhira coming he nudged the Chorus Gang to leave .........
Abhira (taking a huge breath)-I think hume dance karne ki zaroorat hi nahi hai Armaan.....
Armaan (stunned)-Aise kaise you love dance aur humare sangeet mai hum hi dance nahi karege.....?
Abhira (making a point)-Exactly humara sangeet hai,baaki sab to karege na dance and plus sangeet tumhara bhi hai,if you are not comfortable toh tum function ko enjoy kaise karooge....Its better not to dance.....
Armaan (worriedly)-What If drop you on stage ?
Abhira (laughing)- Kya bol rahe ho tum ?
Armaan (worriedly)-Yaha meri chinta ke maare jaan nikal rahi hai aur tumhe hasi aa rahi hai......
Abhira (smiling)-Tum kaise mujhe drop karooge if zyada time tum hi toh hote ho jo mujhe girne se bachaate ho...........Mai abhi bhi keh rahi hu that we donot need to dance....Mujhe dance se pyaar hai but mai aapne liye dance karti hu......
Armaan (holding her from waist)-Aab tumhi sikhao yaar.....Suna hai tum bahut accha sikhati ho.....
Abhira (smiling)-Relax Armaan dance he toh hai,konsa rocket science hai......Close your eyes and take a deep breath....Aisa kya hai jisse tum kabhi nervous nai hote ho...
Armaan (without taking a beat)-Court....
Abhira (smiling)-Toh phir sirf usse ke baare mai socho.....
Abhira slowly taught him how to dance,he twirled and caught her much to his relief...The choreographer came in and helped them along....Abhira knew that Armaan was distracted so she nudged him to talk and think of something else otherwise he would be too concious......Abhira looked at Armaan,who was clearly too involved in dancing,Abhira smiled widely seeing Armaan......Here he was doing something clearly he was too uncomfortable doing for her and their wedding.....Vidya glanced at both of them and smiled happily seeing both of them together.....Abhira's mind was lost somewhere when Armaan twirled her and brought her close to him,her hands automatically landed on his chest.....The choreographer went ahead to attend his phone call.....Both of them were lost in each other.....Armaan put a strand of hair blocking Abhira's face behind her ears.....Both of them were in a moment when somebody broke the moment.....
Rohit (calling him out)-Bhai bhabhi woh......
Rohit clearly saw that he had been univited guest between the two and had clearly came on wrong time.....He apologized to his brother and informed him that their mother was calling both of them....The couple waited for the choreographer and talked while he came.......
Armaan (asking)-Koi aisi cheez bhi hogi jisse tumhe nervousness hoti hogi ?
Abhira (confessing)-I was really nervous before I joined Poddar firms.....That was the most nervous I have ever been in my entire life.......
Armaan (surprised)-Why ? You are a brilliant lawyer Abhira.....
Abhira (nodding)-I donot know....That was the most nervous I have been.......
Armaan (surprised)-Tumne aapne application mai mention nai kiya tha that you were Akshara mam's daughter....Why ?
Abhira (smiled)-My mother struggled a whole lot before being this brilliant of a lawyer....Mujhe unke naam aur struggle par aapna kuch bhi nai banana tha....I just wanted to learn from her story and struggle....
Before they could actually continue the conversation,Vidya called them both inside.....Vidya called Armaan aside and asked him to take Abhira to his room and ask if she wanted to change anything.....Armaan smiled and went back where he saw Abhira checking out the books......Armaan smiled seeing her,those books were Dadisa's favoraite one,she would be thrilled to know that Abhira loved those books......Abhira looked at those classic novels......Abhira loved reading.Her mother had always cultivated that habit in her.....When she was a child she had to read a book before going to sleep......That was the rule and she came to love those books......Armaan and Vidya had asked for her suggestions to change anything in the room but Abhira had declined stating that she would never want anybody to change her.....Armaan had chosen each thing intricately and she didnt want to change anything.....
That evening before the sangeet Akshara had given to Abhira the necklace which belonged to Naira....Abhira looked gorgeous in it.....She was dressed in black lehnga for Sangeet and for Armaan she looked every vision in elegance and beauty....That evening he truly couldnot remove his eyes from her,constantly looking at her.....Abhira glanced at Armaan,she knew he was constantly looking at her and at some point their eyes met and couldnot leave each other's attention......Abhira was called out by Rohan who called for her attention and he seated her next to Armaan.....Rohan smiled and beamed at Armaan and Abhira, and dropped a suprise,their mothers were going to speak about them.......Armaan and Abhira looked at each other.....Boy they were going to make things emotional.....But something was changing inside Abhira's heart she knew...For she and Armaan couldnot look away from each other.....
First came Vidya to speak about Armaan.....
Vidya (emotionally)-People who see Armaan right now see patient,caring and loving Armaan Poddar but let me tell you he was the naughtiest child anybody had ever seen.....Idhar Udhar saare din shaitaaniyan,overtime Armaan fell in love with his family profession.....And yet jab mujhe pata chala that he was in love I was the most surprised person.....I am proud of the fact that he is my son.....I am rpoud of everything he has acheived but I am truly proud of the fact that despite of everything he has acehived,he is down to earth human being.........
Soon Akshara came up on the stage and stood next to Vidya......Abhira knew whatever her mother may say,tears where bound to come so she braced herself for no tears.....As a child and adult she hated crying infront of anyone,even her mamu and buami.....She didnt know why but she detested the idea that she would end in tears infront of anybody.......
Akshara (smiling)-Log kehte hai ki bete hona zaroorri hai,they take our family names forward but I donot agree with the idea.....I have a son and a daughter and I can proudly say that since the time Abhira was born,she has been my support.....Abhira has been my backbone since she was little,she took of herself and sometimes she would take care of me too even when she was that small.....When she grew up the roles reversed and she became my mother,taking care of me,my health......She had made me immesnely proud my a brilliant lawyer and also a very good human being....Abhira has always been my pride.......Sabko lagta hai ki Abhira kabhi mere bagair nahi reh sakti but the fact is that I donot have the habit of living without Abhira.....
Armaan noticed Abhira removing few drops of tears from her eyes......Shikhar immdiately gave a water,he knew his sister didnot like to cry infront of people.......Abhira excused herself and went outside,Armaan followed her with bottle of water and napkin....Abhira let the tears flow once she was outside and alone....She had always been worried about her mother living alone.....She knew that Akshara would be with Kairav and Muskaan and they would always take care of her....But the fact that she would not be with her mother pinched her more......Suddenly a napking came out of nowhere and the owner of the hand was Armaan......She quickly wiped her tears with the napkin......
Armaan (sweetly)-You can cry you know that right ?
Abhira (nodding)-I donot know why but i detest the idea of crying infront of somebody......
Armaan (softly)- Abhira you can always freely cry infront of me......I donot understand the pain of leaving family behind but I do understand your pain.....I know you have always been worried about Akshara mam but you know,she is moving back here and whatever happens she is your mother and you will always remain her daughter......
Armaan wiped the tears from Abhira's eyes and offered her water,Shikhar who had came outside to check up on Abhira had smiled seeing his sister alright.While Abhir who had been sitting on the back had tears in his eyes,listening to his other's speech.....It was true,Abhira had been more of better daughter than he could ever became,despite of him being older than her....Ishaani helped Abhira get back to normal since all that crying had almost ruined her face.....The first thing Abhira did was hug her mother tightly.....She had been everything for her-a mother and a father.....She also knew that leaving her was going to be the most difficult thing to do.....After the sangeet was done,Armaan had thanked the god twice that he didnt drop his fiance,Abhira had laughed at his thought......Abhira had been packing her stuff.....She sat in her room....This has been her room as long as she had lived here.....Shikhar and Abhir brought cups of coffee for them.......Abhira thought this was the best time to talk to Abhir.....Shikhar went out to get Ishaani.....
Abhira (explaining)-Bhai whatever Ma said in that speech iska matlab ye nahi hai that you were a bad son.....
Abhir (sadly)-She may not have meant that Ira but the fact is that I was a bad son to my mumma and a very bad brother to you....Papa hote toh bahut gussa hote....Naraaz hote mujhse...But I am glad that we could patch up before the wedding.....Shikhar was right in calling me here otherwise I would have lost this opportunity....
Shikhar,Ishaani,Abhir and Abhira almost spent late night together......And they had all slept in their room with Rohan sleeping near Abhira's feet.....When Abhira woke up the next morning her room looked like there were lot of sleeping bags around.....She freshened up and went downstairs....Abhira saw the breakfast and was surprised.....It was all her favraite.....She talked to Akshara and Muskaan and told them as to what was missing.....She had chided Akshara for putting so many sareers and took out a few of them.....Saree made her feel nausaous.....
Abhira (chiding)-Mumma aapko pata hai meri aur saree ki pichele janam se dooshmani hai......
The evening had came around pretty quickly and Abhira was getting dressed for the mehendi......She was going to be exhausted by the end of the evening she was sure for it......Ishaani had kept orange juice for Abhira......Akshara looked at Abhira,she looked gorgeous......She noticed Vidya at the door and gestured her to come in....Vidya had informed her that Armaan would be coming bit late due to a case.....Akshara knew the workings of being a laywer and had smiled and assured that it was fine....Ishaani had nudged Abhira but she squatted away her arms.....Ishaani looked at Abhira,she was a hundred percent sure Abhira was already in love with Armaan but was not saying anything......
Abhira sat for getting mehndi applied.....
Kaveri (smiling)-Vidya chalo....aaj pehle tumhari baari.....
Vidya (smiling)-Ji ma.....
Vidya sat next to Abhira and applied the shagun first to Abhira's hand.....She was very happy that her son was getting married.....Abhira smiled widely at Vidya....She and Vidya had gotten quite close.....She never thought that she would be close to anybody other than her mother but that had changed.....Kairav and Shikhar along with Abhir were lot more emotional....They were going to have a hard time tomorrow they knew for sure......She was the only sister all three brothers had and for Kairav she was like a daughter......When Armaan came ,Abhira was extrmely busy......But Abhira could feel the discomfort of sitting now....Akshara had came with food for her but she had declined because she could hardly sit properly but Kairav had fed her one bite as part of Mama bhoj.....Abhira had noticed that Kairav had been emotional all throughout the day.........
Finally the mehndi was done but Abhira was feeling extrmely thirsty and got up with help and went to drink water....
Abhira whose hands were covered with Mehendi wanted to drink water.....She tried to call out to Akshara and Muskaan but no avail.....Armaan saw her getting frustrated.....
Armaan (worriedly)-Whats wrong ?
Abhira (irritably)-Mujhe pani pina hai....
Armaan (smiling,gesturing her to sit)-Sit mai pila deta hu.....
Armaan made her drink the water....Seeing her drink the water fast he stopped her......
Armaan (chiding her)-Pani hai Abhira kahi chala nai jayega....Shaati se piyo na.....
Abhira (smiling)-Thank you help ke liye......
Armaan (asking)-Did you eat something ? Akshara mam le ke aayi thi tumhare liye.....
Abhira (nodding)-Nahi aisa (showing the mehendi)-nai kha sakti mai......
Armaan (chuckling)-Abhira khana na moo se chabate hai.....
Abhira (angrily)-Kabse bethi hu.....back pain ho raha hai.....Na khana kha sakti aur na chba sakti hu.....
Armaan brings a pillow and plate of food for her.......
Vidya and Akshara both watching their children while being happy.............Armaan fed her with his own hands....Abhira felt her pain in back diminish slowly and steadily because of the pillow.....And now that she had ate she felt better now and was less irritated as well.....Armaan smiled seeing her.....Tomorrown was their wedding day,he couldnot beleive he was going to spend rest of his life with the woman he loved....After all the guests had gone Ishaani ahd helped Abhira change and sit comfortable in her room,Abhir asked a staff member to ask her mamu to come to her room if possible......Kairav came within minutes thinking something was wrong but Abhira gestured him to sit next to her.....
Abhira (smiling)-Mamu I cant begin to thank you enough for all the support and love you have given to me....Both you and Buami.....I know you are very emotional about tomorrow....But mai aapki beti hi rahoogi no matter where I stay....Aap hamesha mere liye papa jaise hi rahege.....Musibat mai aapko sabse pehele yaad karoogi.....This has been a home for me for so many years....And you and buami have been parents to me just like Ma and Papa.....I know mai kal jaogi but tomorrow we may not get time.....
Kairav (cupping her face)-Abhira tu hamesha yaad rakhan,this is still your home...Ghar kahi aur hoga tera but ye bhi tera hi ghar hai with or without your mother.....You have always been my daughter.....Jab tujhe pehli baar uthaya tha na tabse tu meri aur Muskaan ke bhi beti rahi hai......Tu mere liye Shikhar aur Rohan jaise hi hai.......And donot worry....Akshu ko mai kal sambhal looga......Tu bas aapne bhaiyo ko dekh......Kabse devdas jaisa moo bana bethe hai......
Abhira (smiling)-Can you send them ?
Abhir and Shikhar and Rohan soon came up......Rohan immediately hugged Abhira tightly......However Abhira couldnot hug him back due to the mehndi......
Abhira (trying to calm him)-Rohan shaant ho ja......Mai kal ja rahi ho.....Aaj nai.......We still have full day....
Rohan (crying)-Toh mat jao na.....
Before Abhira could stop both Shikhar and Abhir joined Rohan as well and hugged her.......Akshara and Kairav looked at their children through the door and maybe while both didnt mention it they missed Aarohi.....Suddenly Akshara's phone rang and while she picked up the voice call,it was Aarohi......Kairav excused himself.....Aarohi was saddened by that......Aarohi inquired about Abhira and Akshara turned the camera to the siblings.....Aarohi wished for Ruhi to have been part of this but she knew mistakes had been made.....Aarohi asked Akshara to take care and wished her luck for tomorrow......manish was upset,the first great grand daughter was leaving and he couldnot even wish bye....While she talked to Abhir and Rohan.....She asked Shikhar to sit longer....
Abhira (smiling)-You know bhai kehte hai ki mai aapse zyada pyaar karti hu ? Saahi hai....I love you and respect you more than anybody else....Jab zaroorat thi tabse leke aab tab you have been my rock and my brother dada.....Ye jo mai Abhir bhai se baat kar rahi hu woh sab aapki wajah se....
Shikhar (tearfully)-YOu have always been my own sister Abhira....Nothing will ever change that......Since the time maine tujhe itna chota sa dekha hai mere liye tumhamesha mere behen hi thi.....There was no other type of equation that existed....YOu are my only sister......Koi bhi problem and you will always tell me understood...........Bua ko bheju.....
Abhira (tearfully)-No unko aabhi kuch nai keh paogi.....Otherwise I will end in tears aur Udaipur mai baadh aa jayege.....
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Haldi and Shaadi !!
Amazing, outstanding 👏
You wrote the emotions of abhira so beautifully
Love the addition of armaan caring for abhira
Excited to read more on wedding day
Hope you are planning to write after wedding to show abhira realization and confession about love to armaan
Please update soon
After the wedding I will writing a 6 month leap.... Abhira's confession......
Wow! What a beautiful chapter. Such a great flow. Thank you. Look forward to shaadi ❤️
Thanks a lot...
Amazing update,
waiting 4 nxt update
eagerly looking forward to shaadi and post shaadi life of these two!!! please write more soon
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