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Posted: 4 months ago
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Teaser 1


Abhira was walking thinking about Abhinav when she suddenly slipped...... Abhira was prepared to hit the ground but few minutes and she realised that she was in someone's arms .......... Abhira opened her eyes and saw that Armaan had saved her ...


Abhira (smiling)- Thank you for saving me.......


Armaan (chuckling)- Tum aur gravity don't get along...... Don't you remember your first day ?


Abhira was red remembering that day !!!!!


Teaser 2


The engagement


Armaan (cupping her face)- What's wrong Abhira ? Ro kyu Rahi ho ? Please tell me...... Maine tumse kaha hai na you can share anything with me.....


Abhira (hiccuping)-Armaan remember all these tiny details about me,you have memories about me...... You know how you fell for me...... But me....Mai........


Armaan (hugging her tightly)- You know Abhira,woh saari memories sirf meri thi...... But now we will have memories together. Jo humne banai hogi.......


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Posted: 4 months ago
#52

I love the teasers. Specially the 2nd where she's perhaps guilty for not being as invested as Armaan since she hadnt seen him in that way. But i hope that one day Armaan himself will tell her how lucky he feels because he fell first but she fell harder :)

yeh teasers seh na mujhe bahut zyada excitement hoti hai pura chapter padhne ki, but patience is not my virtue! 🙈

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Loved both teasers

Excited to read next chapter

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Loved the teaser, waiting 4 the update

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Looking forward to update:)

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Part 8


Abhira was praying in the temple,not because today was her birthday but because today was her papa's birthday....He might have left her before she was born but for her he was her super hero.....The stories she heard from her Buami and mumma.....She was surprised at the strength her father displayed in not only dealing with her mother's past but also raising the said child together.....It would have been so diffcicult but her father ,loved Abhir bhai like he was his own.......In her own thoughts Abhira was coming down,was walking thinking about Abhinav when she suddenly slipped...... Abhira was prepared to hit the ground but few minutes and she realised that she was in someone's arms .......... Abhira opened her eyes and saw that Armaan had saved her .......


Abhira (smiling)- Thank you for saving me.......


Armaan (chuckling)- Tum aur gravity don't get along...... Don't you remember your first day ?


Abhira was red remembering that day !!!!!


Abhira on the first day had tripped onto Armaan not knowing that he was Armaan Poddar....She had been left embarrassed when she had realized as to who he was....After that Armaan had often noticed as to how Abhira fell and things got knocked over her making him chuckle......


Abhira (angrily)-Accha matlab tum mere girne padne ka record rakhte ho humphh......


Armaan (laughing)-Arre sorry baba....Mai toh mazak kar raha tha.....Gussa mat ho please......


Armaan held her ears and apologized and Abhira forgave him that instant.....Abhira knew that somehow Armaan was making place in her heart.....When Armaan was there she felt relaxed knowing he would handle everything......Her stomach had butterflies when they were near each other and she found herself increasingly thinking about Armaan......But there was also a lingering thought going through her mind every second.....Armaan loved her very much....He remembered small things about her.....He noticed and knew about her allergies but she didnt understand if she could love him this much.......And that thought made her stomach churn......Suddenly she came back to Armaan calling her....


Armaan (calling her out)-Abhira kaha khoyi ho ?


Abhira (smiling)-Sorry woh kuch soch rahi thi.......Once again thanks for saving me Armaan.......


The Engagement day


Today was her and Armaan's engagement.....Abhira was very nervous......Today their relationship would be official......Abhira could barely eat today but Muskaan and Akshara had made Abhira eat.....Ishaani was helping her get ready since the engagement was going to take place at Poddar House......On the other hand Kairav had called Ruhi to meet him....He didnt want any of the Goenkas attending the ceremont and that included Ruhi.....While he loved Ruhi but Abhira was like his own daughter,Abhir had decided to accompany Kairav....He did not want anybody spoiling his sister's happiness today.....Kairav and Abhir both had lied to Akshara about their locations....Only Muskaan and Shikhar knew what they were doing.....Kairav and Abhir spotted Ruhi in the cafe......


Ruhi (nervously)-Aap logo ne mujhe milne kyu bulaya......


Abhir (bluntly)-Abhira ki engagement attned karne ki koi zaroorat nai hai.....


Kairav (explaining)-Look beta tumhe Udaipur mai rehna hai toh raho but Abhira aur Akshu se door raho......Abhira tumhe aur baaki sabko bilkul pasand nai karti hai and I dont want anything ruining her day.....


Ruhi (looking at Abhir and Kairav)-Aap dono ka mujhse bhi toh koi rishta hai na ? Sirf Abhira se hai kya ?


Abhir (taking a huge breath)-Mera aur tera rishta ussi din khatam ho gaya tha jis din tune meri mumma ke against itna ghatiya allegation lagaya tha......And your P-nanu expected my mother to sacrifice everything for you again........Tu aur teri mumma hamesha se Ma ke khushiyo ke peeche padi rehti ho......Mai nai chahti ki Abhira ke saath bhi yahi ho......


Kairav (explaining)-Tumhare Akshara ke khilaf allegation lagane ke baad uske kya huva hai tujhe pata bhi hai......Aur jab sach samne aaya tab tu bacchi hai ye kehke Akshu was expected to forgive everybody again.....Woh insaan hai Ruhi....Bhagwan nai.....Leave her and her family alone.....Hamara rishta Goenkas se kab ka khatam ho chuka......Dil ke darwaaze bhi hum baand kar chuke hai......


Abhir (explaining)-Udaipur mai rehna ya nahi is your choice,but stay away from my family......I am getting late........


Kairav and Abhir left Ruhi wondering in the cafe.....She called Aarohi immediately crying who asked her to come back......Aarohi was shattered knowing that her relations with her siblings would never be the same and all because Manish and Suwarna decided to use their brains in her accident.......Aarohi prayed for Abhira's happiness and hoped that there would be enough time left for her to make it up to Akshara.....When Kairav and Abhir came back,Akshara had looked at them questioningly.......Abhir explained to Akshara as to where they had been.....Akshara was rattled by what Abhir said.....


Akshara (explaining)-Agar woh aati toh kya hi ho jaata....Bhai bina wajah aapne usse roka....


Kairav (chuckling)-Akshu kabhi toh aapne baccho ko upar rakh......Ruhi attend nai karegi toh mar nai jayegi....And plus agar woh aati toh hamare jaanene wale uske samne ussi accident ki baat karte....She is a trauma patient isnt she.....Uske liye bhi accha nai hai......


Abhir (getting bit angry)-Aapne Ruhi ke liye almost sab kuch sacrifice kiya tha Ma....Par mai Abhira ki khushi kabhi sacrifice nai hone dooga remember that......Abhira is the most important person of my life.......Aaj uski sagai hai......Uski zindagi ka sabse important din.....Its a known fact ki woh Ruhi ko pasand nai karti hai....Toh aur kyu uncomfortable feel karwanan usse......


Akshara smiled knowing that all was well between her kids....But Abhir was right....Abhira was getting married....Her being happy mattered a lot since she would be going away after her marriage.....Akshara looked at her mobile's calendar......Abhira was getting married in just a week....How will she send her daughter away.....The one who had been with her throughout in all ups and downs....She was supposed to send her away.......How ? She went upstairs to check on Abhira......She was stunned seeing her....Her daughter looked gorgeous.....Akshara went away to get ready......Abhira was wearing her earrings when she noticed Ishaani looking at her smiling......


Abhira (smiling)-Aisi kyu dekh rahi hai ?


Ishaani (teasing her)-I dont think aaj Armaan tere alawa Armaan kisi ko dekh payega !!


Abhira (smiling)-Aisa kuch nai hai.....


Ishaani (teasingly)-Shart laga le Miss Sharma.....Aaj Armaan ki nazar nai hatne wali tujhse....


Abhira (blushing a little)-And I cant guarantee that aisa kuch nai hone wala......


Ishaani (catching her blushing)-Ira you are happy with this relationship.....tere checre pai dikh raha hai.....You Miss Sharma are falling in love......


Abhira (brushing her aside)-Aisa kuch nai hai....


Ishaani (laughing)-Mai tujhe bahut acche se aur saalo se jaanti hu.....Abhira you are smiling and you are happy.....Aaj toh mai bas Armaan ke reactions dekhne ko intezaar kar rahi hu.....


All the Sharma-Goenka family members were ready so were their guests....Kairav had learnt it from his bade papa on how to give out wedding invitations......There were people from his business circle and few of Akshara's circle......Abhinavji had very few family......And Neelama had passed away few years ago as well.....Vidya had asked Akshara about Ruhi but Akshara had told her that Ruhi would not attend.....Kairav and Abhir had handled it.....Abhira was very nervous.....Ishaani had been with her every step of the way....Kairav glanced at Abhira......She looked so gorgeous and all grown up......He still remembered when Vidyaji had called him and Muskaan about Abhira and Akshara......When he had held Abhira first time in his arms he had felt so happy...She was this tiny little thing......He had been always happy seeing Abhinav and Akshara together,but he had always felt sad knowing that Abhinav could never know Abhira......Shikhar and Abhir and Rohan too very happy as well as sad.....Their sister would leave them.....For Rohan and Shikhar Abhira was the only sister they knew.....


Abhira (cupping Rohan's face)-Rohan tu theek hai na ? Aisa kyu dekh raha hai ?


Rohan (Sadly)-Aisa koi provision ani hai ki aap hamesha yahi mere saath raho.....


Abhira (lovingly)-Aww....Tu hi aisi baat kar sakta hai....Mera pyaara chota bhai......


Abhira hugged Rohan.....Shikhar and Abhir looked jealous......


Abhir (chuckling)-Woh akela bhai nai hai tera,....


Shikhar (expalining)-Aur nai toh kya......Saara pyaar us ke liye...


Ishaani (teasingly)-Ira tere saare bhai jeko hai.....


On reaching Poddar House,Abhira tried to calm her nerves down....Getting nervous was not going to do her any good.....She had to be calm.....She was a lawyer dammit,she argued cases infront of judges but this she was scared about....Armaan was stunned seeing Abhira.....she looked gorgeous and there were no words to describe her....Ishaani had nudged Abhira who had stared at her.....Vidya smiled seeing Abhira and hugged her......Just as Armaan and Abhira sat besides each other she heard him comment......


Armaan (looking lovingly at her)-You are looking very beautiful......Not fair sab ki nazar tum par hi rahegi.....Kisi aur ka chance hi nai hai aaj........


Abhira (smiling)-Thank you.....


Armaan noticed Abhira fidgeting.....He held her hand......


Armaan (assuring her)-Calm down.....nervous kyu ho rahi ho....Tum judge ke saamne case ladti ho.....You didnt get nervous there.....


Abhira (surprised)-Tumhe kaise pata ?


Armaan (smiling)-When you had assisted me for the first time,I had noticed that you fidget when you are nervous.......


There came that flutter in the stomach again......Whenever Armaan mentioned something he knew about her,it send waves to her stomach....He knew and noticed so much about her.....He loved her so much would she be able to love him back that much....Throughout the enagagement he had noticed that while Abhira was not nervous anymore but she was thinking about something.....he went and whispered something in Vidya's ears who asked him to take Abhira after engagement since dadisa would not allow right now....The ceremony was about to begin soon........Vidya assured him that she would talk to Akshara and inform her.....


Ishaani sat next to Abhira during the engagement ceremony.....Armaan looked at Abhira who smiled back at him.....Kaveri asked Vidya to start the engagement ceremony......Vidya asked Armaan to make Abhira wear the ring,Abhira felt butterflies in her stomach during the engament but she held it together.Next Abhira made Armaan wear the ring.....Soon they took Kaveri's blessings first,Kaveri was very happy seeing Abhira and Armaan together.....Vidya and Madhav hugged both of their children.....While Armaan's siblings decided to tease their brother......


Charu (teaseing )-Bhabhi aapko humare boring se Armaan bhai kaha se pasand aa gaye.........


Armaan (asking)-Mai boring ?


Kiara (teasing)-Aur nahi toh kya.....Abhira bhabhi aapko pata hai...Armaan bhai kitne boring hai....Movies bhi nai dekhte bas kaam kaam kaam......


Manisha (teasing)-Bechari Abhira.....Kitna boring husband mila hai......


Armaan (pouting)-Chachi sa aap bhi.....Come on....


Krish (taking a huge breath)-All the best bhabhi.....


Rohit scaramed all of them away from Armaan and Abhira but Abhira was laughing seeing Armaan's condition after the teasings.....


Abhira (lauhging)-How is it to be on the other side Mr Poddar......


Armaan (explaining)-Tum bhi unki side le rahi ho ?


Abhira (smiling)-Tu kiski side lu ?


Armaan (sulking)-Meri aur kiski......


Abhira continued laughing...Armaan was mesmerized seeing Abhira laugh......Her smile was infectious.....She brought happiness with her smile.....He asked her to accompany him after the engagement had finished......She left with Armaan who brought her to his special spot.....She smiled when he talked about this became his special spot while Armaan was happy because somebody listened to him without any stoppages......Being the eldest son was never easy......You are expected to be the eldest brother and son but there is somtimes nobody to listen to you....


Armaan (holding her hand)-Abhira tumhe pata hai na,I did tell you to share with me whatever you felt.....I want to be somebody jiske saath tum sab kuch share karo jaise tum mam ke saath karti ho....I want you to rely on me......Toh batao mujhe kya baat hai.....? Kyu pareshan ho ?


Abhira (confused)-Tumhe kaise pata ki mai pareshan hu ?


Armaan (smiling)-I love you....Zindagi bitane wala hu tumhare saath......


Suddenly Armaan could feel tears in Abhira's eyes.....He made her look at him.......


Armaan (cupping her face)- What's wrong Abhira ? Ro kyu Rahi ho ? Please tell me...... Maine tumse kaha hai na you can share anything with me.....


Abhira (hiccuping)-Armaan remember all these tiny details about me,you have memories about me...... You know how you fell for me...... But me....Mai........


Armaan (hugging her tightly)- You know Abhira,woh saari memories sirf meri thi...... But now we will have memories together. Jo humne banai hogi...........Aab meri koi bhi memories sirf meri nai hogi,humari hogi do you understand......Maine uss din bhi kaha tha tumse,pyaar unconditional hota hai.....Take your time understand your feelings......Tum mere paas hi aa rahi ho......But dont get worried about a thing.....Mai hu na tumhare saath.....


He hugged Abhira tightly.....She could feel his love in that hug....She could feel the warmth,his care,his protectiveness in that hug.....He kissed on top of her head.....She could feel things in her heart and in that moment she knew that he was the one for her and she ahd made the correct decision........Armaan dropped her back at the house......Abhira sat at the table writing for the leave,which made her chuckle considering she was marrying her boss......She decided to mail this to Kaveri instead of Armaan.....That would make it more professional.........


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Sangeet and Mehndi and more romance






Edited by olsen_124 - 4 months ago
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Posted: 4 months ago
#57

Beautiful!!! I absolutely loved it.

Thank you for this ❤️

Cant wait to read more.

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Thanks a lot. Soon I will be updating teaser for next part

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Teaser


Sangeet Preparation


Abhira (smiling)-Relax Armaan dance he toh hai,konsa rocket science hai......Close your eyes and take a deep breath....


Armaan put a strand of hair blocking Abhira's face behind her ears.....Both of them were in a moment when somebody broke the moment.....


Mehendi


Abhira whose hands were covered with Mehendi wanted to drink water.....She tried to call out to Akshara and Muskaan but no avail.....Armaan saw her getting frustrated.....


Armaan (worriedly)-Whats wrong ?


Abhira (irritably)-Mujhe pani pina hai....


Armaan (smiling,gesturing her to sit)-Sit mai pila deta hu.....


Armaan made her drink the water....Seeing her drink the water fast he stopped her......


Armaan (chiding her)-Pani hai Abhira kahi chala nai jayega....Shaati se piyo na.....


Abhira (smiling)-Thank you help ke liye......


Armaan (asking)-Did you eat something ? Akshara mam le ke aayi thi tumhare liye.....


Abhira (nodding)-Nahi aisa (showing the mehendi)-nai kha sakti mai......


Armaan (chuckling)-Abhira khana na moo se chabate hai.....


Abhira (angrily)-Kabse bethi hu.....back pain ho raha hai.....Na khana kha sakti aur na chba sakti hu.....


Armaan brings a pillow and plate of food for her.......


Vidya and Akshara both watching their children while being happy.............

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Posted: 4 months ago
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I think giving teasers is really a test of patience. Mujhse handle nahin hota. 🙈

Please please write soon!

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