Without You, I am Nothing : Abhimaan SS Part 4 on pg 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 4 months ago
#11

Originally posted by: Pinecone

Thank you for writing! Great start. Look forward to more.

Thank you so much smiley27

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Originally posted by: Natasha0404

Very nice.Watching for the next part.

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Next part soonsmiley9

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Posted: 4 months ago
#13

Originally posted by: Sajini235

Plz update soon🥺🤞....This ff is the dream of most of the audience for sure❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹...

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: Aash2112

Pls write frequently and not abandon us like other ff plzzzz 😘😘 this is amazing

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Next part would come soonsmiley20

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: 8Lucky88

Amazing 🤩

Loved reading that armaan made the decision

Excited to read more

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: Milalal27

Let Abhira be free from the toxic family, she doesn't relent. On his puppy love.


She has suffered enough.


Armaan should pay for her pain, despair...

Armaan would regret his actionssmiley1

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Originally posted by: Fi_raaq

Great start! looking forward to next part.

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Originally posted by: mehraan

Can u pls cont asap… i hve been waiting to read tis❤️

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Next update soonest smiley9

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Thank you everyone for such an overwhelming response on the 1st part.smiley31smiley27



So here you go, the next part.smiley9

Ps Not edited.. so ignore the typossmiley1





Part - 2



The night stretched long with glows and happiness all around but was happiness really there? With tears flowing down his eyes, as Armaan stepped out of Roohi's room he bumped into someone and that someone was Manish Goenka. It was not only Roohi and Armaan but Parnanu too had heard the confession of Armaan. Though angry with him for playing with his granddaughter's heart but somewhat he was happy because this included someone else's happiness, the one whom he considered his own, his granddaughter, Abhira.


Armaan look at him scared thinking what he would do now as he has heard everything. But he just came forward patting his shoulder and said with a teary smile, "main tumse gussa hun Armaan.. bahut gussa hoon, lekin main khush hun ki tu Abhira se pyar karta hai.. Roohi ka dil tune tod diya, phir ek baar, lekin kya karen uski kismat hi uske sath yeh khel, khel rahi hai.. hum mana karte rahe ki shaadi mat kar lekin woh apni jid per adi rahi aur abhi uski hi kimat chuka rahi hai.. itihaas hi apne aap ko dohra raha hai toh hum kya kar sakte hain? Bas mera ek baat yad rakhna, us bacchi Abhira ka dil kabhi mat todna.. Tu ja beta uske pass main tumhen rokunga nahin waise bhi ye shaadi me kiska bhala tha hi nehin.. tu ja Abhira ke pass woh bacchi bilkul akeli hai aur fikar mat karna main yahan sab kuch sambhal lunga." And with this, touching his feet Armaan ran out of the Goenka mansion without even giving it a final glance.


Kabhi gardishon ka maara

Kabhi khwahishon se haara

Roothe chaand ka hai chakor

Zara se bhi samjho kaise

Ye parhez rakhta hai kyun

Maane na kabhi koi zor


With few phone calls he booked the next flight to Mussoorie, without giving a single thought of his family, the wedding, his reputation he just recklessly drove to the airport. At the moment he only knew one thing, he has to reach to his Abhira, as soon as possible.


Duniya jahaan ki bandishon ki

ye kahaan parvaah kare

Jab kheenche teri dor

Kheenche teri dor..

Manchala man chalaa teri ore


All the beautiful moments spent with her playing in his mind, their 1st meet, the abrupt marriage, their fights and then slowly becoming friends, their bond getting deeper and he cursed himself for not understanding his feelings back then and himself creating all these confusions now.


Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein

Dhoondhe tera shor

Manchala man chala teri ore..






Abhira the broken girl now settled in her room assuring herself of her mother's presence as she felt all alone not only inside the home but also in the whole world. Still not losing any courage she tried to gather herself to fight her on battle because she knew crying can't make anything right at the moment and wiping those tears sat with her laptop trying to search for some jobs as quick as possible, she can't loose hope and sit idle, she needs to earn, for herself, for her resort, for her Mumma's dream. Akhir apni Mumma ki strong girl Abhira kabhi himmat nehin haar sakti.



Rookhi-sookhi dil ki hai zameen
Jaane kahaan gum hui nami
Meri ummeed hai teri baarishein
Sehkar vaar pyaar ke
Tujhe har baar haar ke
Seekhe phir bhi kabhi nahi saazishein









Here in the Goenka Mansion a different chaos was going on after knowing the groom is missing. Dadi sa just merely escaped a heart attack on hearing the news and collapsed on the sofa with Vidya, Kajal and Manisha running to her and holding her hand. Swarna and Surekha ran to Roohi's room to inform her the situation but on reaching there they were shocked to see her on the floor crying uncontrollably and they made her stand supporting her and still in tears Roohi continued to speak, "Armaan chala gaya mujhe chhod ke woh mujhse pyaar nehin karta sab jhooth tha.. sab jhooth" and she shouted and cried again.



Manish handling the situation and apologizing to all guests gathered enter her room and hearing her, frustrated with all the commotion around shouted at her, "Mana kiya tha na mat kar ye shaadi ab dekh liya mere baat na sunne ka natija? Armaan tumhare liye toh kabhi bana hi nehin tha lekin tumne toh jid pakad li aur ab dekh kya hua? woh tumse nahin Abhira se pyaar karta hai"


"I can't take all this no...", Roohi shouted, "Aisa nahin ho sakta.. kabhi nehin.. Armaan mera hai. itna sab kuch to kiya maine Armaan ko pane ke liye mein use ese nehin jaane de sakti .. nehi.. mein un donon ka divorce paper lai, aur ghanghor ke time pe itni mushkil se toh Abhira ko roka tha Armaan se apna pyaar ka izhaar karne se, Charu ka sach bhi sabke samne bataya taki Abhira sab ke samne buri ban sake toh phir Armaan usse kaise pyaar kar sakta hai? woh toh mujhse pyaar karta hai..?

yeh sab jhooth hai mein Armaan ko samjhaungi.. please Pnanu mujhe Armaan ke pass le chaliye please.. please mujhe Mussoorie le chaliye.." and she jerked Manish's hand only to receive a slap from him who scolded her again, "bas karo Roohi ab kitna girogi tum? Shayad ye thappad mujhe bahut pehle hi maar dena chahiye tha taki tum sahi raste per ajaati.. are sharm ani chahiye tumhe, khud ko Aarohi ki beti kehte hue.. tumhari matasri ne kya kya nehi kya tumhra liye aur tum ye sab.. tum meri natin nehi ho sakti aur mein nehi hun tumhara Parnanu".

Hearing him Swarna came standing infront of Roohi as she countered Manish, "ye aap kya kar rahe hain Manish ji yeh bacchi hai galti toh us Armaan ki hai aur us Abhira ki jo hamare bacche ka dil tod diya aap ko thappad unhe marna chahiye naki humare Roohi ko" And Manish shouted at Swarna too, "are hosh mein aao Swarna.. akhir galti to tumhari bhi hai, nahi tum iska saath deti aur nahi ye itne aage nikalti. tumhe pata tha ki Roohi Armaan se pyar karti hai phir bhi tumne usse us ghar mein jaane diya kyon? agar Roohi humare pas rehti to aadhe do din mein hi Armaan ko bhul jaati aur apni jindagi mein aage badhti.. lekin nehin usse to Armaan aur Abhira ke bich aana tha unki shaadi todni thi taki woh Armaan ke sath apna ghar basa sake.. usne to Rohit ke bare mein bhi nehin socha aur us bachhi Abhira uski kya kasur thi? usi sab ka hi natija bhugat rahi hai ye aur humein toh use sambhalna chahiye tha na ki uske galti ka sath dena tha.."


To add fuel to the fire dadi sa, Kajal, Vidya and Manisha who had came to apologize to Roohi were standing at the door and had heard everything. Vidya was putting her hand in her mouth realising what blunder she did because it was she who had came with this marriage proposal. Now she could relate to the sad and gloomy Armaan and felt a bit guilty for not understanding him. Manisha was giving knowing looks because she had doubted Roohi's intentions previously too and she was happy now that the truth has come out and Kajal and Dadi sa were shocked to know all these as the one whom they treated as the ideal Bahu was the one who betrayed them. But still in her ego Dadi sa was not able to recognize the good deeds of Abhira but she was equally angry with Roohi and marched inside the room angrily.


Ruhi on seeing Dadi sa ran to her and started her melodrama, "dekhiye na Dadi sa Armaan ko.. woh mujhe chhod kar chala gaya aur woh bhi us Abhira ke liye aap please use wapas le aaye, humari shaadi hai aaj, mehmaan sab intejaar kar rahe honge kuch kijiye naa Dadi sa aur us Abhira ko bhi sabak sikhaiye" but Kaveri Poddar showed her, her palm stopping her and answered, "humne sab sun liya.. tumne jo kiya theek nehin kiya Roohi humari najron mein yeh galat hai aur acha hua ki shaadi nehin hui varna humse paap ho jata aur kisi ka to pata nahin lekin humare Rohit ke najron mein toh hum gir jaate" and looking at Manish she folded her hand and said, "Manish ji aap iski dhyan rakhiye humein lagta hai humein ab chalna chahiye" and with this she moved out of the room.

Roohi tried calling her and then she called Vidya, "Maa please kuch kijiye naa Maa please Dadi sa ko rokiye" but Vidya too nodding her head in no said, "abhi bhi wakt hai Roohi sudhar jao.. ab toh mujhe lag raha hai tumse behtar toh Abhira thi, are woh toh jo thi samne thi tumhari tarah nehi ke andar kuch aur, bahar kuch aur"

Manisha looked at Roohi with a sad smile and said gently, "Roohi jodiyan toh Bhagwan banate hain aur unhone hi Armaan aur Abhira ko sath laye hain toh phir tum kaise unhen alag kar sakti thi?" and with this she too walked out of the room following Vidya and Kajal.












It would be quite some hours now probably in the midnight as Abhira slept clutching her mother's photo and holding the blazer of Armaan when she heard a knock on her door. Scared she got up and picking a stick went to open the door as the knock continued but on opening the door she was bewildered because stood there, Armaan in his wedding attire. She had to pinch herself to realise he was really there and shocked she asked, "Armaan tum.. tum yahan.. yahan kya kar rahe ho tum? Aaj to tumhara shaadi hai na toh phir?"

But cutting her in between Armaan sat in his knees crying his heart out as he spoke, "nahin kar paya yeh shaadi mein Abhira .. yeh galti mein nahin kar sakta akhir kab tak mein kisi aur ki khushi ke liye jita raho Abhira? Mere bhi to koi Khushi hai, koi khwahish hai unka gala ese hi kaise har wakt ghot dun? Isiliye shayad pehli bar aaj maine apne dil ki suna hai.. Mein nehin kar sakta Roohi se shaadi kyunki mein nehin karta usse pyar, nehin chahiye mujhe woh meri jindagi mein, kyunki nehin hai woh meri perfect partner.. Mera perfect partner, mera soulmate, mera humsafar woh to koi aur hai Abhira, jo apne se pehele puri duniya ki khusi dekhti hai, jo sahi kliye dat ke khadi rehti hai, jisne is khadus Armaan Poddar ko jina sikhya, hasna sikhya, mere parivaar ke khusi ke aage apna sapna, apna pyaar sab kuch kurbaan kar diya, wohi hai mera soulmate.. Mujhe toh pata bhi nahin chala kab kaise mujhe tumse pyar ho gaya Abhira, pyar sirf tumhen nahin hai, mujhe bhi hai tumse.. mein tumse aur dur nahin reh sakta please meri jindagi mein wapas a jao Abhira please I love u.. tumhari woh hassi, bachkani harkatein, wo gussa, wo gande jokes, woh ladhai, in sab ke bina meri jindagi adhuri hai Abhira.. Mein tumhare bina kuch nehin.. I am nothing without you.. nehi reh sakta mein tumhare bina, nehi jee sakta mein tumhare bina.. I love you... I love you.."


Tears were flowing from Abhira's eyes as she sat next to Armaan holding his hand, this confession of him was a dream for her but now that it's happening in real she was not sure of what to do, she was very happy yes, her Armaan too loved her but at what cost? Living Roohi in the mandap, running away from the family, betraying everyone and she knew it was all not right, she could imagine the Poddars blaming her, cursing her after knowing everything and then she looked at Armaan the man who had came all the way from his wedding just to confess his feelings to her, living behind his family.

She felt so grateful at that moment but also cursed because she knew she can't keep Armaan with her forever, he has come here out of impulse and what if he suddenly regrets his actions? The Armaan who was always the worshipper of his Dadisa and Mom, she didn't know for how long he can stay without them. She didn't want her fragile heart to be broken again and with this she jerked his hand and standing up spoke, "tum yahan se chale jao Armaan please hamara rasta alag ho chuka hai .. bhale hi dil mein pyar ho per ye sath ab mumkin nehin" and making him to stand she closed the door on his face.

Shocked Armaan banged the door but she didn't open and just shouted from inside, "please yahan se chale jao Armaan please.. main tumhare aage hath jodta hun" and defeated Armaan stopped but he couldn't leave from there. He just sat on the floor leaning to the door and cried his heart out. The pain he had bolted inside him from days now, now made their ways out.

Abhira too ran to her room crying. No matter how much she tried, situations around were breaking her again and again.


The night felt cold for the broken hearts as things were not going on their favour, the universe was conspiring but what? The future seemed uncertain and the upcoming events that would happen was making them even more nervous and inbetween all the chaos, they didn't know when tranquility came to them in the form of sleep.









Okk so done with the long part. I am nervous now. Hope it's upto expectations.smiley42

The confession and the dramas took me too long.smiley36

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Amazing

Loved reading your version

Glad that armaan didn’t leave abhira- he should show her that he is serious about her

Excited to read more

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