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Prologue


Abhira and Armaan will be love however after Armaan confesses Abhira will discover about Armaan and Ruhi's past which will make her heartbroken and furious.....She will be furious at Armaan for not even telling her after they confessed and Abhira decided to terminate their marriage....However than Rohit re enters and he has lost his memory and remembers that Armaan and Abhira are married.....Abhira stays for Rohit but Armaan will be in no mood to relent........He will fight for their marriage and Abhira.......After all this even Abhira's parentage will be known but Abhira will hate Ruhi.....


WARNING


There will be angst between the lead couple.....Hence be prepared.....

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Charecter Sketch


Abhira Armaan Poddar- She discovered about Armaan and Ruhi.She is heartbroken but is wants to end the marriage but Armaan persistent efforts to make her stay and work it out are working....Abhira is extrmely upset with her husband and hates Ruhi for both the things....Treatment of Akshara and her try to break her marriage....Armaan and Abhira in the fight for their marriage....


Armaan Poddar- He is deeply in love with his wife and is trying to win her trust back...He is ecstatic since Rohit is back but is saddened to know his condition....He has found peace and feeling of family with Abhira and doesnt want to lose....he will do all the hard work to make sure that Abhira stays....


Rohit Poddar- While everybody thinks that he has lost memory,Rohit is absolutely fine....Just before Rohit was about to be discharged Krish had met Rohit and informed him everything about Armaan and Abhira....Rohit was happy for his brother and hence decided to help him hence the memory loss....Rohit hates Ruhi and wants to leave her...


Ruhi Poddar- She has lost everything.Armaan hates her for trying to break his marriage,Abhira hates her for Akshara masi and Rohit hates her too.....Even Manish is not on talking terms to Ruhi.Ruhi has time and again tried to apologize to Abhira but Abhira has made it clear that she hates her too much to even look at her face.....


ANY RUHI FAN PLEASE DONT READ......THIS IS STRICTLY ABHIMAAN FAN FICTION....

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Great concept

Excited to read more

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Excited to read! Please write soon

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Great concept. Excited to read it.

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Very nice...
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wonderful, do tag me please


Can't wait how Armaan pacify her.


Abhira let him suffer as she has sufferd for so long.


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Posted: 5 months ago
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Great concept

Ruhi well deserved the hate from Abhira and Rohit

Please update soon

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What does angst means 🤔

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Chapter 1

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Armaan glanced at his wife,whose eyes were closed during the morning aarti.He and Abhira had a huge fight when Abhira had discovered the truth about him and Ruhi and since than Abhira had been giving him silent treatment.He wanted to talk to her,they needed to talk.They needed to communicate but instead she was stonewalling him.He looked at Manisha and Manoj.He needed to talk to them.They would give him the sanest advice......And he should also include his father.He was closest person to Abhira....He smiled looking at his family,they were finally accepting Abhira and that was making him the happiest person but Abhira.....He was scared to lose her....He had never felt this before.....He received a call from work and went other side to receive the call.Soon the aarti ended and just before she was going,Vidya Ma stopped her......


Vidya (smiling)-Abhira mujhe Ruhi ne bataya ke Aksharaji bahut accha gati thi....Kya tum bhi gati ho ?


Abhira (nervously chuckling)-Ma agar mai gao gi toh aas pe log bhaag jaege.....Jitna sur mumma ke gaano mai tha usse zyada besuri hu mai.....


Manisha and Vidya chuckled at Abhira's comment.....Armaan messaged manisha that he wanted to talk to her,Manoj chachu and Madhav.....She replied back to him that they would talk after breakfast....Just as Abhira was about to go,Rohit and Krish stopped her.....Abhira glanced at Rohit,Armaan had been delighted seeing Rohit alive but as soon as he had known about his little brother's condition he had went into guilt trip....Abhira knew that Armaan's anger on Ruhi also was partly due to this reason....


Abhira (smiling)-Kya huva Rohit ?


Rohit (teasing her)-Bhabhi sa aapne Ma se jhooth kyu bola....Jab ki Krish mujhe aapka secret bata chuka hai....Aap toh bahut acchi singer or saath mai trained dancer bhi hai....


Abhira (glaring at Krish)-Rohit mera dance,mera gaana sirf mere peace ke liye....Kisi aur ke liye nai....Hence I didnt tell her....Please kisi ko mat batana....


Rohit (smiling widely)- Dont worry aab ye humara secret hai.....


Abhira soon left to get ready...Armaan had came back after attending the call...Ruhi longed looking at Abhira and Rohit's conversation....Rohit had been normal with everybody except her...It seemed like she had lost everybody and everything....Abhira hated her,her sister hated her.....Armaan had been too much angry to even look at her....Ruhi remembered Abhir and Akshara.If only she had used some humanity,if only she had not tried to break up Abhira and Armaan....But it was too late....


Armaan (curious)-Kis secret ki baat ho rahi hai...?


Rohit (smiling)-Sorry I promised Bhabhi that it was our secret now....ye toh iss Krish ne bataya warna toh kisi ko pata nai chalta....


Armaan (pulling Rohit's ears)-Mera bhai ya Abhira ka...?


Rohit (chuckling)-Sorry bhai....Isss baar zubaan de chuka hu......


Armaan went to their room to see Abhira getting ready for work....She was lost somewhere.He had tried multiple times to talk but each time he failed.He was frustrated and extremely angry at Ruhi...She had thrown live grenade into his marriage and now was trying to get a relationship with Abhira....Now he could see why Abhira disliked her...He agreed he was blind that Ruhi would change and finally understand that nothing was left between them but she had worsened the situation....He saw Abhira struggling with her mangalsutra,Armaan went behind her,put her hair on the side and helped her tie the hook....They looked at each other through the mirror,but before Armaan could say anything,Abhira's phone rang.....He was genuinely frustrated this time.....He took a huge breath,he had to maintain his calm....He had committed a huge blunder and it would take time to settle it....


After breakfast,Armaan went to Manoj chachu and chachi's room...He closed the room door...All three of them were confused but nobody would be prepared for what Armaan was about to disclose.Armaan knew his father would get very angry at him but he had to ask for help...This was getting beyond him now and he needed some ideas....He very hesitatingly told the truth to all three of them...While Manisha and Manoj smiled knowingly,Madhav was very angry and slapped Armaan in anger.....What mess had Armaan created..


Manisha (calming everybody down)-Bhai sahab please shannt ho jaye....Mujhe aur Manoj ko thoda sa idea tha iss sab ke baare mai....


Madhav (angrily)-Kaise shaant ho jao ? Abhira ka bharosa toda hai tune......She trusted you the most after her mother and you broke that trust Armaan.How could you ? Jab tumne usse kaha tha ki tum usse pyaar karte ho toh tumne usse apne past ke baare mai kyu nai bataya ? You should have told her especially since tumhe Ruhi ke liye koi feelings nai hai....


Manisha (explaining)-Ha beta.Tumhe usse bata dena chahiye tha....


Armaan (looking at Manisha)-Aap jaanti thi iss sabke baare mai pehle se ? Why didnt you ever ask me?


Manoj (smiling)-Armaan beta you have always sacrificed a lot for this family.You were never asked ki teri pasand kya hai beta......Mujhe ye toh definitely pata tha ki tu Rohit ko jaan bujhke kabhi hurt nai karega.........


Armaan (explaining)-For once chachu mai bahut khush that I was never in love with Ruhi.Yeh sab uski wajaha se huya hai....I was going to tell Abhira about Ruhi,but when we visited Kasauli and we were alone and no one put their noses in our matter....And now Abhira has gone completely silent....Baat karna toh chodiye ,gussa bhi nai hui hai......Bahut darr lag raha hai.....


Manoj (explaining)-Armaan shaant ho ja.Take her somewhere jahan tum dono baat kar sako.Aapne dil ke poori baat bata de.....Jo kuch bhi huva tha uss waqt woh sab kuch bata de....She will talk once she knews everything beta....Iss waqt woh bhi confused hogi...


Madhav (explaining)-Ye sab uske liye samajhna thoda mushkil hai Armaan...I knew that you have married for a year,but tune hi bola na tum dono ye shaadi sirf 1 saal ke liye rakhne wale the and now you want to continue this marriage.....Aur upar se uske dimaag mai bahut saari batein ghum rahi hogi....Be patient with her....Even though you have been living with her for a year,tum uske baare mai bahut kuch nai jaante ho....


Manisha (angrily)-Aur upar se woh Goenkas bhi aa gaye hai sir par uss ke...I am very happy that for once Abhira ne unhe koi bhaav nai diya....Aisa aapni poti ke saath kon karta hai.....


Armaan (smiling)-Abhira Akshara mam se bahut alag hai.....Akshara mam was somebody jo immediately maaf kar deti thi,but Abhira is more hardened and strong when it comes to those things....


Madhav (smiling)-Armaan tum se zyada patient aur koi nai hai beta....YOu have to maintain that patience...Tuta huva bharosa jitne mai waqt lagta hai....


Abhira was busy with lots of files throughout the day.She had seen Armaan's message around lunch that he would come to pick her up...Abhira didnt reply to the message...She was knee deep in her work,so much so that she had forgotten to eat her lunch.Charu saw that Abhira didnt have lunch today.....But before she could tell her to eat the lunch time was over....And Abhira hadnt even noticed.....She had buried deep in citations and old cases for a case she was going to assist Dev with... Armaan too had been busy the entire day...Manjoj had kept a eye on Armaan the whole day.He had never seen Armaan so desperate,so scared.He smiled thinking how his wife was right every time...Abhira was exhausted at the end of the day....When she came outside her office she saw that Armaan was already waiting for her....Armaan knew looking at Abhira that she had a tiring day....


Abhira saw that they were taking a different road...She scrunched up her nose in confusion but didnt ask Armaan.He stopped the car at their special place...He opened the door for Abhira.....He sat down besides Abhira....Abhira was confused...What did he want to talk about ?


Armaan (explaining)-Abhira I dont know Ruhi ne tumse kya kaha hai ya kya nahi.....I just wanted to clear my side.....


Armaan started explaining how he and Ruhi had met at her resort,how he had been attracted towards Ruhi and how Ruhi had not trusted him and went ahead with engagement with Rohit and how after he came to know everything,he refused to talk to the family...Abhira was listening intently.She knew that she had to listen to both the sides.Armaan also mentioned about how he was going to tell her everything when they went to Kasauli,since he wanted to talk to her alone...Armaan also mentioned that probably Rohit knew everything and maybe thats why he left home...Abhira took a huge breath....Ruhi and Armaan had created a mess in their lives....


Armaan (explaining)-I love you Abhira....And I know maine tumhara bharosa toda hai.....I should have told you everything in the first place.Believe me mera chupane ka koi irada nai tha......Mare dil me Ruhi ke liye koi feelings nai hai......


Armaan waited for a few minutes waiting for Abhira's response but Abhira wasnt saying anything that sacred him....But the fact was the Abhira was registering everything.....She had two major shocks in space of 2 weeks and it was setting her back.If it were upto her she would went to Kasauli today itself.She needed time away from Ruhi.She was disgusted seeing Ruhi's face right now....


Armaan (concerned)-Abhira....


Abhira (chuckling)-In 2 weeks,jinpe sabse zyada bharosa kiya tha un dono insaan ne mera bharosa toda hai....


Armaan (cupping her face)-I love you Abhira....I am so sorry.....


Abhira (explaining)-I dont like being lied to Armaan,neither I like lying...Isisliye mai jo hota hai mai kehdeti hu.So that it doesnt create confusions and messes....


Armaan (explaining)-I will never keep anything from you...I promise..


Abhira (chuckling sadly)-Dont give me any promise jo tum nibha na sako....


Armaan (asking)-Do you trust me Abhira ?


Abhira (explaining)-With my life-YES with my heart,not right now....


Armaan (asking)-Can I get one chance ? To prove myself....Please....I dont want to lose you...


Abhira (taking a huge breath)-Alright....One chance...Tumhe yaad hai na maine kya kaha tha....Mujhe ek hi galti teen baar karne ki aadat nai hai Mr Poddar....


Armaan (smiling)-You will not regret giving me a chance Abhira....


Armaan hugged Abhira tightly.Abhira was a little hesitant but eventually hugged him tightly...She was afraid too losing him.She loved him to much,but she knew she had to tell this to him...Eventually Abhira and Armaan reached home hand in hand....Manisha was relived seeing both of them together....Ruhi was stunned...while it was deliberate attempt to tell Abhira about thier past....She didnt know they would reconcile though......Vidya asked them to frshen up before dinner just before Abhira could take one step she expericed a harsh dizzy spell,Armaan immdiately held her and made her sit....Vidya asked for water from helper...


Armaan (giving)-Ye lo pani piyo....What happened ?


Abhira (holding her head)-I dont know...Achanak se...ekdum...


Charu (chuckling)-Bhabhi ne lunch nai kiya hai bhai....Kaam mai inhe pata hi nai chala when lunch time was over....


Armaan (chiding her)-Lunch karna kon bhulta hai Abhira.....Aisa kya kaam that you forgot to eat yaar....


Charu (explaining)-Bhabhi is assiting Dev sir next week....Ussi case ki tyari chal rahi thi....The books were her lunch today....


Vidya (with full of concern)-Armaan tu isse upar le ja...Mai khana upar bhijwati hu....


Armana lifted Abhira up and took her to her room.Manisha knew that Ruhi would try and go hence she told Vidya that she would give the dinner to Armaan and Abhira....Armaan safely made Abhira sit on the bed....She was not in the position to let a foot down....Manisha reached the room with dinner....Armaan fed her with his own hands....Someday Abhira would give him a heart attack out of worry....

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Manisha : Abhira woh pati hai tumhara,haq hai tumhara uss par...I know all this is new for you....rishta,relationships par the truth is that he is your husband


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