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Posted: 6 months ago
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Waiting for it to start.

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Awesome one.

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------ CHAPTER ONE--------



It was the next day after Rumaal revelation , Abhira was heartbroken. She was sure she is going to reveal the truth in front of the media on the upcoming party held by the Poddar's because apparently they won a very high profile case. She laughed at the irony, the case was first brought for the Shekhawats , but Dev Sir refused it because the prosecute was himself the criminal, he was a mafia and a lusty, disgusting man.Abhira hated that man.



He offered Dev sir a hefty amount of money but he refused. Her respect for him grew ten thousand folds after this. And here Fufasa and the family was going crazy after making sure the criminal wins . She laughed, the Poddar's were such hypocrites. She was going to make sure she also reveals about the reality behind the closed doors of the Madhouse.




She will expose their double standards, partiality, patriarchal and matriarch dominance over others. The orthodox thinking, their morals and ethics which were lower than the Marina Trench. Disgusting treatment towards anyone who goes against their 18th century societal norms.Dadisaa and the family's terrible behaviour towards her and then leave with her head held high.




She looked at everybody present in the house with a sadistic smile. And promised herself to reveal everyone's truth , she is not going to leave anyone who hurt her without any actual mistake of hers. She was not somebody who likes planning and plotting but it was needed to give them a reality check . Afterall, Karma is a bitch and she will only give them what they rightfully deserve.



She was completely broken, hurt and disguisted at herself for the betrayal she received. She rebuked herself for falling for such a weakling of a man. But to prove it, she needed to keep up her act . She still behaved like before giggling, laughing, talking , smiling at everyone. Being chatty with Armaan and his family. But , it was all a act now.She hated him to the core, and herself for falling for such a pendulum of a man but it's ok better late than never.




Atleast, she saved herself from the humiliation of being rejected for her true love because of someone who is involved in adultery and EMA with his SIL. But it's okay. Now, she is not going to cry anymore, she is going to make them cry.She put her signature smile and started planning the plan for her husband's ema and his family' s firm who are protecting criminals.



Meanwhile,Armaan was frustrated with himself, Yesterday,Ruhi came out of nowhere and hugged him and started blabbering stuff like the promise of asking dadi for marriage, the promise for which he don't give two cents about. He just promised her to calm her down when she was screaming like a banshee in his ears, he just wanted some peace in his life?His mind stopped working for a moment( like always). He stood still and rigid.




Eventually, giving her some more hope that he reciprocated her hug while he was just uncomfortable and disguisted by her mere touch. He couldn't explain, he tried pushing her which only made her tighten her hands around his torso. She also started saying about their Love story which probably lasted even less than Manish Goenka in his bed with that old hag.



Finally, he pushed her and rebuked her harshly. He maintained firm distance from her and strictly warned her from touching him.She being the delulu she is ,thought that he was only saying this because she hugged him in the house when anyone can easily see them ( which someone did) but still. She smiled phsycotically and told okay, I will touch you when we are alone.



Armaan facepalmed and cursed the day when he met her, he was also hating himself for easily giving in her demands when he was clear that she was only guilt tripping him. He knew she was selfish, self centred and a spoilt brat but he was overwhelmed by the guilt of spoiling her life. So , he remained quiet and also not to forget to be the golden boy( retriever) of the house. He is a scaredy cat he knew but he was helpless ,(a two timer a pendulum I might add ).




He entered his room after successfully making another false promise to Ruhi and calming her down. He saw his wife, clad in a beautiful tea pink kurta and cigerette pants. Something was different today, she has applied a good amount of make-up. She was brushing her straight hair, giving them a cleaner look. After hair, she started doing few touch-ups. In the end, she started applying a blush pink lipstick. Armaan coughed and started looking here and there to avoid the strange attraction he was feeling towards his wife.




He came out of his trance , he was physically attracted to her real bad. He knew it, just didn't want to acknowledge that. But who can blame him? She is a gorgeous girl in her early 20s, a pretty and radiant glow always marring her beautiful facial features, she had fit and a lean body, she was insanely attractive. Her short, straight hair moving along with the wind, her pink and puffy cheeks, her everglowing face and beautiful smile made his heart skip a beat.




She is a ball of sunshine in his dark life. She made him smile, laugh, feel important and wanted. He can be his own self with her, can be vulnerable, childish, angry , irritated, free, careless, irresponsible with her rightfully without any ounce of guilt. She became really important to him, and the mere thought of her leaving after 3 months was enough to give him a heartattack, he has already decided to propose her in few days, make her understand the depth of his feelings towards her and make her stay with him forever like a real wife.



Meanwhile, Abhira has already noticed his piercing stare towards her but it was all part of her plan, to be nice to him, acting normally. Although, her heart was breaking piece by piece at the thought of planning against him but she knew it was much needed.So, made her spine of steel. And turned , smiled towards him. Armaan automatically started smiling after seeing her beautiful face and her pretty smile.




She started moving out when he out of habit held her hand and pulled her towards him a little harshly, she landed straight onto his hard chest, he steadied her by firmly holding her waist and pulling her even more closer, she looked at him with a questioning stare and holding her nose which was hurt by the sudden pull. He looked at her and smiled, he slowly and with a feathering touch removed the few strands of her hair from her face, he then slowly almost painfully dragged his fingers onto her contours and her cheeks.



He removed her fingers from her face and held her sharp nose with her thumb and index finger slowly giving it a squeeze, she winced and slapped his hand away, he started laughing. Had it been a day old Abhira, she would be matching the colour of a beetroot with this touch and going crazy at his laugh, but now she was only disguisted by the touch internally stopping her self from slapping him hard. She was not affected at all, infact she was feeling nothing, only the images of last night was flashing through her eyes.




She started wriggling in her hold , he looked at her as if wanting to understand her behaviour, she was smiling no doubt but something was off today, it just felt weird.He felt as if she was uncomfortable by his touch , he felt electrocuted and left her immediately with a jerk. She stumbled but managed to stand straight. Armaan went feral at the mere thought of her lack of comfort with his touch, when literally he touched her all the time.




He can't keep his hands off her even when they were having a Normal convo, she was so comfortable with hugs, pulls, intimate touches even kisses but her this behaviour felt really off . He didn't like it for sure, he wanted to shake her and ask about it, but he couldn't he sensed her hesitation and concluded, she was hiding something from him.



Heyyy seniors,

chapter 1 out, How is it? Please leave your lovely comments,they are really inspiring, the updates will be really slow from now on mere paper aane wla hai may mein aur 12th ka result bhi. Also, slowly this story will pick the pace, don't try to judge it by the first chapter....didi log constructive criticism always welcome...and any ideas you want me to add, i will gladly do it....Waise iska upar wla part delete ho gya tha to upar wala part thoda aadha paka sa hai....🥺☹️par you guys wanted the update toh jaise likh payi waisa update kr diya...tag me koi reh gya ho toh I am sorry.

Thank you

Niharika❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Love this scheming Abhira! ❤️

Maza ayegs jab voh bhand phod ke jayegi.

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Amazing 🤩

Loved reading about abhira, armaan feelings

Very descriptive

Excited to read more on how abhira will reveal her plans and if armaan will be able to figure it out

Please update soon

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Haha, fun! A great creative outlet for all our collective irritation towards the show. Write on! smiley4

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Posted: 6 months ago
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It’s really nice to read a scheming Abhira, one who will learn to manipulate others and make others dance.

Making each and every one dance to her tunes specially Sanjay,Ruhi and Kaveri will be fun to watch.

Thank you for tagging Shamita.

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Amazing

Loved this abhira.. Arman has feeling for her. Good he is going to get hurt. Y should abhira always suffer

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Delightful start.

Go Abhira we are with you crush them hard.

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Way to go Abhira! smiley32


Can't wait what is in store for them. smiley41


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