Bepanah Ishq...Limitless love...VaNi,Dev Nalini,Ranveer-Ruhi(KK-Jenni) - Page 2

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Congrats on the new story!


Part 1

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Wow such a sweet update loved reading it.

Jasmine.šŸ˜ƒā¤ļøIt was little bit long but enjoyed reading it.

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Part 1


Fabulous Start

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Thank you.Sorry if you found it too long.Since there are 3 pairs i had to add their scenes.



Originally posted by: Surilikoyal

Wow such a sweet update loved reading it.

Jasmine.šŸ˜ƒā¤ļøIt was little bit long but enjoyed reading it.

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Thank u very much Salley,Surilikoyal,taahir,khwaishfan, coderlady,glitter_goldie.

Bepanah Ishq...Limitless love...Part 2

Ranveer and Ruhi went to a remote area for seeing the location for the new jewellery show room.

Ranveer was walking fast.

Ruhi:Sirā€¦.please walk slowly.This area is slippery.

Ranveer:Hey...don't order me what i have to do and what I should not do.I will do as i please.Understand?

Ruhi was silent.

She thought:This man canā€™t understand anything.

As they walked Ruhi slipped and fell down.

Ranveer smirked at her and said:You were giving me lecture and you yourself fell down.I am Ranveer Sharma.I will not fall down.

Ruhi thought:I fell down.But he is so insensitive to talk like this.He is ridiculing me instead of pitying me.

He walked a step forward and fell down because of the slippery ground.Ruhi felt like laughing,but she controlled her urge to laugh.

Ruhi murmured:Control Ruhi...control.If Sir sees you laugh,his will blast at you.

Ranveer was embarrassed.Ruhi stood up.She extended her hand towards him and said:Hold my hand and get up Sir.

Ranveer:I don't need your help.I will get up on my own.

He tried to get up,but he was slipping down.

Ruhi thought:Egoistic man doesā€™nt want my help,at the same time he canā€™t get up on his own also.

Ranveer stared at her and said:What are you looking at?Canā€™t you see me struggling to get up?Canā€™t you help me to get up.

Ruhi:I had told you to hold my hand and get up.But you only refused my help.

Ranveer was embarrassed.

Ranveer:Shut up!How dare you argue with me?Just do what I say.Help me to get up.

Ruhi thought:Such an arrogant person!See how he is ordering me to help him instead of requesting me politely.

Ruhi extended her hand towards him again. Ranveer held her hand.

She pulled him up from the ground.

Ranveer left her hand and walked forward.

Ruhi thought:Arrogant man can't even thank me for helping me.So ungrateful!

Slowly Ranveer turned back and looked at her.

He said:Thanks.

Ruhi was surprised that he thanked her.She could not believe her ears.

She smiled thinking:So Ranveer Sir knows how to thank others.




Nalini got recovered completely and went to college.

Dev was very happy to see her.

He ran towards her.

Dev:Hi Nalini...are you fine now?

Nalini smiled:Hi Dev!I am ok now.

Dev was lost in her sweet smile.

Dev:You look very pretty when you smile.

Nalini blushed.

Nalini:When I have a good friend like you,I will smile.

Dev felt happy to hear this.

Dev:If you consider me as your friend,why were you not talking properly when I phoned you?You did'nt even tell me how your health condition was.I was feeling so worried about your health.You know that?

Nalini:Sorry Dev.I was disturbed after the accident.I was frustrated sitting at home.I was having body pain also.

That's why I could not talk to you properly.It was not intentional.Please don't feel bad.I am really sorry.

Dev smiled:Don't be sorry Nalini.I was just worried.That's all.Now you are fine.Right?

Nalini:Yes.I am fine.I feel very happy to be back to college.To be frank this is where I get maximum happiness.When I talk to you I forget all my tensions.

Dev felt very happy.

Dev:But what tensions do you have?

Nalini became dull.

Nalini:Just normal tensions.That's it.

Dev smiled.

Dev:Ok.Now I am going to my class.

Nalini:Ok.

Dev turned back and walked with a smile.Nalini looked at him walk.

Dev turned back and smiled at her.

She smiled at him.Then they both walked to their respective classes.



Saransh and Alia went to the pub and danced a lot.

Aanhh it's he on the track, lets go
He is sexy sexy - (3)
Attention!
Rhythm of something don't stop
Give' em wht they want n don't stop
Lak nu hila de n don't stop
Sab ko dekha de yeah don't stop



? don't stop
Lak nu hila de n don't stop
You know wht I look my boy he' s so rock!
Go on wht u think u hot star?





(Dharati hilade laade lishkare
Rab nu hila de nachake dikha de tu soniya) - (2)
Main tera dhadkan teri yeh din tere raatein teri
Abb bacha kya, abb bacha kya
Har ghadi khud se hi main karta rahu main baatein teri
Abb bacha kya, abb bacha kya
Ishq ka rog hai yeh, aisa jog hai yeh


Isase bachane ka abb aasaar najar nahi aata
(Kuch yaar najar nahi aata, ghar baar najar nahi aata
Sansaar najar nahi aata, jab pyaar hota hai) - (2)
(Dharati hilade laade lishkare
Rab nu hila de nachake dikha de tu soniya) - (2)
Teri chaahato se din shuru, mere rubaru ho tu hi tu
Teri soch ho, tera saath ho, abb har ghadi


Teri baat mein, teri yaad mein
Khoya main rahu, aur yeh kahu
Mere saamane teri baat ho abb har ghadi




=


Kabhi kabhi yaari mein, yaar khumari mein
Chahe kuch bhi ho dil ke paar najar nahi aata
(Kuch yaar najar nahi aata, ghar baar najar nahi aata
Sansaar najar nahi aata, jab pyaar hota hai) - (2)



Meri aashiqi ka hai sila, meri chaahato ko tu mila
Teri mehfile meri manjilein abb ho gayi
Tere khwaab hai behisaab hain, teri deed hai meri eid hai
Pareshaaniyan aur muskilein sab kho gayi
Ishq to jaadu hai bas bekaabu hai
Ishq ke jaadu mein kuch dushwaar najar nahi aata


(Kuch yaar najar nahi aata, ghar baar najar nahi aata
Sansaar najar nahi aata, jab pyaar hota hai) - (2)
Main tera dhadkan teri yeh din tere raatein teri
Abb bacha kya, abb bacha kya
Har ghadi khud se hi main karta rahu main baatein teri
Abb bacha kya, abb bacha kya



Ishq ka rog hai yeh, aisa jog hai yeh
Isase bachane ka abb aasaar najar nahi aata


(Kuch yaar najar nahi aata, ghar baar najar nahi aata
Sansaar najar nahi aata, jab pyaar hota hai) - (2)(Ajab Prem Ki Ghazab Kahani)


Saransh:Dancing with you was fun Alia.Remember how we used to dance together in childhood...

Alia remembered their childhood dance.

Alia:It was super fun.We recreated those moments today.

Saransh:Yes..right.I will take a peg and come.

Alia:Saransh...drinking is not good for health.

Saransh:Stop advising me doctor.

Alia showed him a puppy face.

Saransh went to drink.

After some time when Alia looked for Saransh he was seen drinking .

Alia:Stop it Saransh.This is enough.You drank too much.Drinking is not good for your health.

Saransh:Oh stop advising me Alia.

Alia:I have to advise you as I am a doctor.

He smiled.

He told Alia:Leave it.Alia...I want to tell you something.

Alia:Say Saransh.

Saransh:I...I...love...

Alia:I know that you love dancing.

Saransh:Not dancing...I love...

Suddenly he fell unconscious and fell down.

Alia:Oh no....

Alia poured water on his face and made him conscious. Still he was not in his senses.



Alia took Saransh to Khurana house.

All were shocked to see Saransh drunk.

Rudraksh:What is this?

Alia:Sorry Uncle.We went to the pub.For fun Saransh drank a bit.

Preesha:A bit?Then why is he not in his senses?

Alia could not say anything.She was embarrassed.

Dev and Rudraksh placed Saransh on the bed.

Preesha:Alia...you go home.We will manage him.

Alia:Please don't scold him.

Preesha:You don't even like us scolding him.It's ok.Don't worry.We won't scold him.

Rudraksh:But we will advise him.

She smiled.

Alia went home.


After some time Saransh opened his eyes.

He remembered that he was about to say 'I love you' to Alia in the pub.

Saransh thought:OMG!Thank God..I could not say I love you to Alia.If I had told her that I love her,her reaction would have been....I don't know how she would have reacted.

Rudraksh and Preesha came.

Rudraksh:When Alia brought you home you were completely drunk.What is this Saransh?
Preesha:You were not in your senses.How could you drink like this Saransh?

Saransh:Sorry Mumma.I was dancing and enjoying.I don't know how I lost my control.

Rudraksh:Next time onwards be in limits.

Saransh:Yes Rudra.

Rudraksh:Ok.We are not scolding you as Alia does'nt want us to scold you.

Saransh smiled.

He thought:She really cares for me.Does she also love me?

The truth is that I drank a lot so that I can confes my love to her without any fear.But still I could not confess my love.I feel scared about her reaction.Still I can't cover up my feelings always.I should reveal my feelings to her.




Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Ruhi asking Ranveer to walk slowly and then falling and thenRanveer taunting her and then he himself falling, Ruhi controlling her laughterand saying control Ruhi control was funny. It reminded me of the dialogue ā€œControlUday controlā€. šŸ˜‚ Ruhi offering help and he denying it and thenrudely asking for help was so hilarious. Surprised that he thanked her, means hehas a soft corner too. Dev complimenting Nalini and Nalini blushing was cute. Naliniapologizing was nice. Even I am wondering what tensions she is having. Both lookingback at each other and smiling was sweet. Saransh Alia dance was nice. Both rememberingtheir childhood moment was cute. Surprised that Alia is a doctor. Saransh drinkingand Alia stopping him, and then he stuttering to say he loves her and falling unconsciouswas funny. Alia asking RuSha not to scold Saransh was so caring, guess she alsoloves him. BTW Rudra also drinks when heā€™s in a problem so he scolding Saransh wouldbe a little inappropriate, yes if Preesha does it, then it would be appropriate.RuSha advising Saransh was nice. So Saransh drank a lot to confess only, soon heā€™sgoing to confess, waiting for next, perfect pics.

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Nice and beautiful partšŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Just loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soonšŸ¤—

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Thanks a lot.

Control Uday control is from which show?

Now rudraksh is old and mature.and veer was not in problem according to rudraksh..he simply drank and got unconscious which didn't go well with rusha.

Actually fathers always care for their children.so when the children have the bad habits which the fathers also have also they react.my father in law drinks.but when my brother in law tasted it once for the first time also he got angry and advised him not to drink.


Originally posted by: salley145

Ruhi asking Ranveer to walk slowly and then falling and thenRanveer taunting her and then he himself falling, Ruhi controlling her laughterand saying control Ruhi control was funny. It reminded me of the dialogue ā€œControlUday controlā€. šŸ˜‚ Ruhi offering help and he denying it and thenrudely asking for help was so hilarious. Surprised that he thanked her, means hehas a soft corner too. Dev complimenting Nalini and Nalini blushing was cute. Naliniapologizing was nice. Even I am wondering what tensions she is having. Both lookingback at each other and smiling was sweet. Saransh Alia dance was nice. Both rememberingtheir childhood moment was cute. Surprised that Alia is a doctor. Saransh drinkingand Alia stopping him, and then he stuttering to say he loves her and falling unconsciouswas funny. Alia asking RuSha not to scold Saransh was so caring, guess she alsoloves him. BTW Rudra also drinks when heā€™s in a problem so he scolding Saransh wouldbe a little inappropriate, yes if Preesha does it, then it would be appropriate.RuSha advising Saransh was nice. So Saransh drank a lot to confess only, soon heā€™sgoing to confess, waiting for next, perfect pics.

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The dialogue is from the movie "welcome"

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Part 2

Lovely update... awesomely written

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