Cutest Love Story: Jay Sean and Naina - Page 9

heyy ppll....its zula kajals friend....

OMG....kajal i m addicted to ur fanfic....i m lovin it soo much!! u have the best parts n i gotta agree wit pooja!!! AMY is soo cutee n sweet!! keep up the gudd wrkk!! lol i luvv u soo much!! oh n i want to know wut goin to happen next!! i cant believe Naina is pregant!! lol well wonder how their marriage will eventually turn out to be like!!

xox zula xox

lovely part...but if i were naina i wudn't forgive jay so soon...u shudve made him plead a lil bit...he can't just say tht its notm y child!!!!!! lol...plsss cont soon.

hey guys can you plz tell me whether to continue it? i havent for the longest time and it seems like no one likes it anymore!!!!!!!!!

plz tell me!!!!!

YES YES YES!!!! I love it! Its so awesome! I wish I was Naina as u can tell by my sigi and avi😳 CONTINUE IT PLZ! 😃

i will continue sometime tom. Kay? thanxs for ur comments

wicked part kaju!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

omg im reading this fanfic after sucha a long time 😆

feels gud tho! 😆 👏

Jay: naina!!!!! we are going to be late!

Juggy: where are you guys going?

Jay: concert!

Juggy: how about a club?

Jay: cant!

Juggy: why not?

Jay just realizes what he said and thinks of something quick.

Jay: naina doesn't want to.

They both enjoy the concert.

On the way back Home:

Jay: naina I am going to be away for a couple of weeks

Naina: what? When?!

Jay: tomorrow for a tour in Southeast Asia

Naina: oh I hope it goes well.

She sounds a bit down and Jay notices.

Jay: don't worry, I will be back soon. But you have to promise me something!

Naina: what?

Jay: you will relax and not put up with any stress.

Naina: but I am always going to be stressed until i tell my family.

Jay: if that's what the problem is then soon as I get back we will tell your family.

Naina: okay! I promise

Jay kisses Naina good-bye.

Naina: bye

Jay: bye.

Naina goes inside.

Next Morning:

Soniya and Juggy are in their room. Juggy is sleeping peacefully and Soniya is getting ready.

Soniya: come on Juggy! Get up!

Juggy: no! 5 more minutes!

Soniya: I know your 5 more minutes will turn into an hour.

She comes and sits on the bed by his side and caresses his forehead.

Soniya: I love you!

Juggy: me too!

Amy comes in with a big smile across her face.

Amy: good morning papa!

Juggy covers his head by putting the pillow over it.

Juggy: bye jaanu!

Amy: noo!!!

Soniya: Amy, wake up your papa for me!

Amy climbs on the bed and starts jumping on it non-stop. Juggy has no choice but to get up so he gets up. He grabs Amy from behind and starts to tickle her. Amy giggles so much.

Soniya (sounding a bit down): you know mummyji is coming over today!

Juggy: oh! Jaanu just try to get along.

Soniya: where's my magalsutra?

Juggy: what?

Soniya: I don't want your mother to find one thing to criticize in me!

Juggy laughs!

Soniya: juggy I lost my magalsutra here and you are laughing.

Juggy: just tell her the truth.

Soniya: what truth?

Juggy comes behind her and hugs her.

Juggy: that you don't care and that you love me a lot.

Soniya: juggy!!!!! What am I gonna tell her? "oh mummyji your son threw it somewhere while we were making love"

Juggy: yeah sure! It's the truth so….

They both laugh.

hope you enjoyed!!!!!!!!

😳

great part 👏 👏 😆

Awesome part! Please continueeeeee!😃

Juggy goes to the studio while Soniya is waiting for his mother in law and cousins.

Juggy's cousins adore her to bits and love her but when it comes to his mom...oh man!

Naina is in her room getting ready to see Jay off to the airport.

Airport:

Jay: take care of yourself

Naina: oh dont worry!

Jay: that makes me worry!

Naina: jaanu all i have to do is eat healthy and exerise! how hard can that be?

Jay kisses her on the forehead and leaves. Naina comes back home and so does Juggy.

Juggy: where were you?

Naina: gonna go see Jay off to the airport.

Juggy: oh.

They both go in the living room.

Naina goes and plays with Amy. They take post its and write kick me and then stick them on JUggys back.

The whole family is there becuz Juggy's other cousin is getting married in a week.

Jay and Naina are getting married in a month.

It's some kinda of rasam they have to fulfill.

Juggy's whole back is covered in post it notes that say "kick me"

Soniya sees and starts laughing.

Juggy: what happened?

Soniya: oh nothing.

Juggy is like w/e.

They all laugh and have a good time.

Except Juggy is too busy staring at Soniya.

Soniya is too busy talking to his cousins.

THey are asking her for advice on girl things.

Juggy take a lipstick from the cousin that is getting married and writes "i love you---JUggy" on her back. The salwar kameez has the back exposed so you can see it.

Soniya is too busy talking to notice.

Cousin #1: bhabs love ur back!

Soniya: what's so special about my back?

Juggy starts to play with Amy when he hears that!