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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
AWWW KAJU THT WAS SOOO GOOD!!IT WAS SOO CUTE,SWEET AND ROMANTIC!!!PLZZZ CONTINUE!!I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!! 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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A week Later:

Juggy's HOuse:

It's the morning.

Juggy is knocking on Naina's bedroom door.

Juggy: get up Nainu! it's 9 already.

Naina: 5 more minutes...plz bhayyia

Juggy: okay.

Naina gets up and brushes her teeth and goes downstairs.

Little does she know Jay and Rishi are downstairs talking.

Jay: hey! u look cute in ur pjs.

Naina: thank you....

Jay: oh i went over to dat card shop and got all the card printed so all we have to do is send them out.

Naina: i will come over tonight and we will mail them.

Juggy: Soniya!!!!!!!

Soniya: wht now?

Juggy: i m leaving

Soniya: oh...have a good time.

SHe kisses him on the cheek and hugs him.

Juggy: bye.

Amy comes running in the lobby.

She runs up to Juggy and he picks her up.

Juggy: i love you.

AMy: i lub you too. when are you coming back?

Juggy: in two days.

AMy: that long?

Juggy: well, if u behave then i might get you a dog.

AMy puts her hand on her mouth.

Amy: really?

Juggy: uh-uh

AMy: okay.

Soniya: have a gud time...luv u.

Juggy: luv you too...bye

Soniya: bye

Rishi: bye bhabi.

Soniya leans toward him and whispers....

Soniya: make sure he behaves!

Rishi: will do.

Jay: bye Juggy.

Rishi: arent you coming...

Jay: nah....plus i dunt really have anything to do there.

Rishi and Juggy are going to perform on the otherside of the country for two days.

Naina: bye....

Juggy: bye

They leave.

Soniya: i might go to mummyji's place if you dunt mind cuz she hasnt seen Amy in a while.

*Change: Naina n Juggy's mom is alive...their dad died of a heartattack a few years before*

Naina: okay.

Soniya: i am gonna leave in like a couple of hours.

Naina: dont worry..ill have everything in control.

Soniya: then i wont have to worry about anything.

Naina: bhabi!

SHe goes upstairs and starts to pack.

Jay and Naina go in the garden(backyard there is a garden)

They are holding hands and talking.

He is about to kiss her but AMy comes

So he backs away.

Jay: hey munchkin!


Amy: hey masa!

Jay: wht are u doing?

AMy: wht are you doing?

Jay: uh...nothing. isnt mamma calling you?

AMy: no

Jay: yeah

AMy: no

Jay: go tell mamma that jay masa needs time.

AMy: that doesnt make sense!

SHe is such a smart child.

Jay: mamma will understand.

AMy: okay...whatever you say.

SHe goes skipping along and Jay is about to kiss her

Amy: hi masa

Jay: AMy!!!!

AMy: that's my name!

Jay: oh god.

AMy: mamma said that you have to go somewhere else for time.

Jay: that helps!

AMy: masa let's go.

She pulls him up by his finger.

AMy: let's go

Jay: let's go where?

Amy: to go get icecream.

Jay: wht?????

AMY: masa!

Jay: wht? i didnt do anything.

She just pulls him closer to the house.

Amy: come on masa!

Jay: yes boss!

THey walk back to the house!(hand in hand)

He looks back at Naina for help.

Naina just laughs!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
aww...soo cute...amy is such a doll!! pls cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54

time for a lil more masti!

Jay's HOuse:

Naina is over cuz they are putting the invites in the envople.

Soniya and AMy went to Naina's mom's place for a couple of days since she felt lonely.

Jay: i love you....

Naina: so?

Jay: wht do you mean by so?

Naina: jay! we have so much work to do.

Jay: it's takes 5 seconds to say " i love you"

Naina: i

Jay: i...

Naina: love....

Jay: love...

Naina: teasing you like this.

Jay: Nainu!

Naina; i love you too or i wouldnt be here.

in about 2 hours they have everything ready to be mailed out by tom. morning.

Jay kisses her.

On her cheek and neck.

Naina is melting in his arms.

Lights dim slowly. (guli ki line....im brain dead so i kinda "borrowed a line".)

Next Morning:

Naina's eyes open slowly.

She is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Naina: Jay!

Jay: wht? let me sleep.

Naina: this is an emergency.

He gets up and rubs his eyes.

Naina: i didnt

Jay: we didnt

Naina: oh god.

Jay: we....

Naina: my brother is gonna kill me.

Jay: wht is it with you n ur brother? ur brother is gonna kill you....ur bhabi is gonna kill you....they arent that scary.

Naina: do you realize wht we did?

Jay: uh...slept together.

Naina: before marriage.

Jay:so wht's da difference?

Naina: my brother woulndt kill me if we were married first.

Jay: that's true. oh well..relax

Naina: how can i relax when we just slept together?

Jay kisses her.

Jay: like that.

Naina: at this rate we wont get anything done.

Jay: i am here n u r mine so no one can say anything to you.

Naina: oh really?

Jay: did i tell you that you look cute in my shirt?

Naina looks at her shirt and sees his shirt

Naina: oh.

she blushes.

They both get up and get ready.

Jay: i cant wait til we get married.

Naina: me too.

Jay hugs her from behind.

Naina: let go

Jay: why?

Naina: cuz we got to mail out invitations

Jay: that can wait

Naina: you can wait!

Jay: fine be like that.

He turns around and pretends to dial a number.

She goes infront of him and lifts his head cuz he is looking down on his cell.

Naina: i am sorry jaanu.

He turns the other way.

Naina: i said i am sorry...plz

She faces him and makes her cute lil puppy face.

Jay hugs her.

JaY: i love you.

Naina: i see! i love you too now lets get to work.

Jay: yes maam.

They both mail out the invitations and pick out center peices.

The engagement is gonna be small and only family.....hall is samll too

The engagement is in two n a half weeks.

Too much masti for one day.....keep da comments coming....😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
great parts... 😉 😆 😆

jay dsnt seem bothered they slept together b4 marriage 😉 loooooool 😆 😆
Edited by blah_blah - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: blah_blah

great parts... 😉 😆 😆 jay dsnt seem bothered they slept together b4 marriage 😉 loooooool 😆 😆



he's da bad boy!!!!!!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57

i need to go get a life....😕😆😆

Juggy's House:

Naina and Jay come over.

Naina: i am so scared.

Jay: of wht?

Naina: i just slept with you!

Jay: so ur Juggy is never going to find out unless you tell him right?

Naina: oh my god! you are a genius.

Jay: no really?

Naina: let's eat...im hungry.

Jay: wht are u gonna make?

Naina: i dunno

Jay: how about tacos?

Naina: yeah

They both make tacos together.

Naina and Jay sit down at the table and eat da tacos.

Naina: not bad.

Jay: for ur first time of cooking it's not that bad.

Naina: let's go to your parents house.

Jay: why?

Naina: wht do you mean by why? they are your parents.

Jay: let's go after a while.

Naina: i am gonna go upstairs and take a shower.

At Jay's house they just washed their face....only Jay showered.

SHe goes upstairs and takes a bath.

Jay is sitting in on her bed waiting for her to come back.

Jay: hurry up!

Naina: have patience.

Jay: How long does it take a girl to get ready?

Naina: long!

He falls asleep while waiting for her.

Naina comes out in a yellow sari with her hair all done.

She kisses him on his forehead.

Then his eyes

Then his nose.

Just as she was about to kiss his lips he get up and kisses her on the lips.

They leave for his parents house.

His dad's name is Vijay.

His mom's name is Maya.

Maya: Naina....wht a surprise!

Naina takes thier blessings and sits down.

Vijay: how are you guys?

Jay: gud...how about you? everything is okay right?

Maya: yes..dunt worry about us. wht do you want to eat?

Naina: nothing really...we ate n came

Vijay: oh so how is the planning coming along?

THey look at each other and then at them.

Naina: really gud.

They leave after they eat dinner.

Naina: i am gonna go home...i have a paper to write.

Jay: oh okay. well call me later.

Naina: okay.

THey hug and Jay leaves.

Naina is working on her paper and by no time she is done.

Jay is watching tv and thinking about Naina.

Jay calls her.

Naina: hey.

Jay: hey.

Naina: wht have you been doing?

Jay: watching tv and thinking about you. i have surprise for you.

Naina: you do.

Jay: come to the beach and ill show you.

Naina: sure.

She goes cuz she is dying to know the surprise.

Jay: hey beautiful.

Naina: wht's the surprise.

He blindfolds her.

Naina: Jay?

Jay: i am right here. i take you to the surprise.

HE walks her to a bonfire on the beach and a table is set near by.

On the table there are lit candles and dinner.

On the other side of the bonfire is a white tent.

There is bed with white sheets and it's covered with rose petals.

There is also a long mirror there too.

He takes the blind fold off her.

She is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She gives him the biggest hug she has ever given to anything.

Naina:oh my god.

Jay: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

Naina: i totally forgot.

Jay: how can i forget?

Naina kisses him and the image fades.

They have dinner and sit in the sand by the bonfire and talk.

He carries her to the bed filled with petals.

And drops her on it.

He is on top of her.

Jay: i love you.

She has her arms around his neck.

Naina: i love you too.

Lights dim slowly.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
again.....thakte nahin??? 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part btw....(b4 i was talkin about jay and naina).... 😆 😆 😆
Edited by blah_blah - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Jay is in trouble!!!!!! Juggy is coming back!!!!!!!!

Beach:

Naina is sleeping peacefully like a lil angel.

Jay enter the tent.

He has a tray in his hands which has breakfast on it.

He lays it on the bed.

Jay: Swtheart!

Naina slowly rubs her eyes.

She gets up and looks up at Jay lovingly.

Naina: Good Morning!

She stretches her arms and yawns.

Jay: Good Morning.

Naina: oh my god! did you make this?

Jay: yeah just for you.

Naina: thanks

She kisses him on the cheek.

He smiles!

Jay: sweetie...

Naina: yeah

Jay: it's da 12th

Naina: so?

Jay: i just realized your brother comes back today in about 2 hours.

Naina: WHAT????????

Jay: uh...so let's go.

They clean up and leave.

THey drive back to Naina's house.

15 minutes after they arrive at her house the doorbell rings.

It's Juggy and Rishi!!!!!!!!!!!!

Naina: hi bhayyia.

Jay: hey JUggy.

juggy: hey guys.

Jay: how was the performance?

Rishi: excellent.

Naina: i will be right back.

She goes upstairs and changes her clothes.

They all talk and in no time Soniya arrives.

Soniya: hey!

Juggy: hi...how was ma?

Soniya: fine..she misses you.

Juggy: we will go visit her soon.

I will continue later....too many interruptions!😕

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