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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwww!!!!!!....kaju i love it.....welll cont soon..and ill see u on saturday at mandir!!!

ur best friend and older sister....pooja!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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time to cont!

Next Day:

Naina is sitting up in bed and thinking.

Naina: (to herself) i am getting married....well if juggy agrees to it. i guess it's time to tell him...i love him so much so i hope bhayyia approves! gud luck naina!

She walks downstairs and calls out Juggy's name.

But he already left for the studio.

She gets sad but decides she is going to tell him no matter wht.

For the rest of the day she decides how to tell him.

Studio:

Juggy: so let's get to work.

Rishi and Juggy are working out some problems with the equipments while Jay decides to call his sweetheart.

He doesnt know Juggy is her brother n Juggy doesn't know Jay and Naina go out.

He was very strict with Naina wen she went out with other guys!

Jay: hi.

Naina: hi...so how's it going in the studio?

Jay: how'd u know i was in the studio?

Naina: becuz where else would you be?

Jay: u are sooo perfect.

Naina: i know!!!!! so why did you call?

Jay: missed you.

Naina: me too.

Jay: let's go out tonight.

Naina: no not today...have "things" to do.

Jay: like tell ur brother.

Naina: something like that.

Jay: then wht about tom.?

Naina: no u will come over at my house tom n meet my brother.

Jay: uh....okay.

Jay is like " i hope her brother approves before tom"

They hang up and Jay goes back into the studio room.

Rishi: where were you?

Jay: talking with my gf.

Juggy: introduce her to us sometime.

Rishi: yeah...i wanna meet her.

Jay: relax, you will

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kajal tht was great... I hope Juggy doesnt over react when he finds out who jay is dating and when most of all when naina is engaged with jay.. Plzz continue ur fanfic.. I enjoy it.. Naina is soo lucky.. 😆 Dont u think so?

-luv ya always ur big sis and bff Deepa 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well hope you enjoy!!!!!!!!

Juggys House:

Juggy is in the living room talking to Soniya.

Soon as Soniya sees Naina she smiles.

Juggy looks at her and smiles.

J: wht happened?

N: nothing....i want to tell you something.

Soniya knows that Naina is going to tell him.

S: i will be in kitchen...i have to prepare dinner.

J: wht are we having?

S: a surprise. now pay attention to your sister.

J: okay so wht did you want to tell me?

N: umm....i have a boyfriend.

She sits down looking at the ground.

J: since when. u never told me.

N: well now i have to....so plz dunt get mad i didnt tell you before.

J: okay....i wont..now tell me

His tone of vioce is causal.

N: he proposed to me!

J: HE WHAT? how? when? where?

He is totally shocked!!!!!!!!!!!

N: calm down....i will tell you everything.

J:since when did you guys go out?

N: a year and half.

J: and you didnt tell me.

N: i didn't mean to it's just that...i

J: i was really disappointed. i am strict becuz i dunt want you to get hurt.

N: i know....well i am going to tell you everything from now.

J: so when did he propose to you?

N: two nights ago.

J: no wonder you were so happy when you came back. so wht did you say?

N: yes...

J: so when are you going to introduce him to us?

He is grinning.

N: that means you approve! tomorrow night.

J: no...i will after i meet him.

Naina is so happy.

THey hug.

N: i love you, bhayyia.

J: me too!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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cont soooon!!!!....plzz i am so bored and this is sooo interesting....luv ya...seee ya saturdai!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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the big day is here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Night:

It's midnight.

Jay misses Naina so much he cant take it.

He climbs up Naina's window. OPens it and hops inside.

He decides to give her a surprise.

He throws rose petals all over the room(wen i mean everywhere...i mean it...bed....floor....dresser....bathroom(she has one in her room), etc.

Then he puts a huge chocolate box on her dresser and signs it....jay .

He leaves becuz of her brother.

He kisses her on her forehead and leaves.

Morning:

Naina slowly opens her eyes and looks around.

She is speachless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SHe is like omg!!!!!!!

SHe opens the card attached on the front of the candy box and smiles.

She calls him up

On the phone:

Jay: hey.

Naina: i cant believe you did this.

Jay: i love you.

Naina: me tooo.

Jay: now eat the chocolate becuz i know you cant resist.

Naina: you're coming over tonight, right?

Jay: yeah....y?

Naina: just making sure.

Jay: are you positive it's safe to come over?

Naina: you're acting as if he's going to shoot you?

Jay:uhh...u never noe.

Naina: my brother is really nice you know.

Jay: really?

Naina: jay!!!!!! i know you will like him.

Jay: how?

Naina: becuz i know you.

Naina knows Jay knows Juggy and Juggy knows Jay.

Except they dunt know that.

Jay: well...i got to go.

Naina; okay say hi to your parents from me.

Jay: sure....see you later.

Naina: okay.

Jay: bye.

Naina; bye.

Kitchen:

Soniya: Juggy, you better behave tonight.

J: you;re acting as if i am amy.

A: i know, right papa?

Juggy picks her up and gives her a kiss.

S: well i think he is going to be a really nice guy.

J: how'd u know?

S: gut feelings.

J: well i hope your "gut feeling" is right.

S: so......wht are we planning to do today?

J: well i was thinking about having a romantic movie to watch.

S: it's 4 in ethe afternoon.

J: and your point?

S: we arent going to watch the movie?

J: fine...let me watch you.

S: we are not doing that either.

J: that wht?

S: we are going to go have lunch at bina masi's house(juggy's aunt)!

J: wht? every time i want to....

S: want to wht? tell me.

J: umm...ill show you instead!

He kisses her all over her neck.

Amy is already in ther masi's room.(naina's)

S: juggy let go....someone will see

J: as in who. naina's gone to her friends house and amy is playing.

S: you win!!!!!!!1

He picks her up and the blinds close.

Naina's bffs house:

She's at Zula's house.

N: guess wht?

Z: wht?

N: i got proposed to!

Pooja: U WHT?

Deepa: PROPOSED!?

they knew she was going out with someone but didn't know who.

N; ill introduce you guys to him later.

Deepa: when did this happen?

Zula: Where?

Pooja: u betta give me all the details.

SHe tells them everything, i mean everything. her bffs are like her sisters.

Pooja: i cant wait to meet him.

Deepa: i cant wait to see your brothers face.

Zula: i still cant believe he proposed to you.

Naina: you guys will love him.....he's soooo sweet.

Please comment and tell me if you like it. 😭(this excludes Deepa and Pooja and Zula!!!)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hahah.....i loved it kajal!!!....i love u....and i promise u will get ur big hug when i see you again muahhz....i cant believe u added us lol....

ttyls....call later!!....

ur best friend aka older sister ....POOJA <3
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i luv it....plz cont soon kajal....sorry 4 not answerin b4 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i will update later! miss ya
Edited by Kajal741 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: blah_blah

i luv it....plz cont soon kajal....sorry 4 not answerin b4 😉

i really appreciate it! wen i dunt see ur comments i think no one likes it....im so glad you do!😊

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