Cutest Love Story: Jay Sean and Naina

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i am starting a new fanfic based on real ppl you know but it's a original storyline. i am only going to continue if you like it so it depends on you guys.

THe characters are based on real ppl (as in looks and career) and they are the following:

Rishi (based on Rishi Rich)-juggy and jay's best friend and also part of Rishi Rich project. Famous singer. Single

Juggy (based on Juggy D)-rishi and jay's best friend and also part of the Rishi Rich project. Famous punjabi singer. Very protective of his younger sis. Married with Soniya

Jay (based on Jay Sean)-juggy and rishi's best friend and also part of the Rishi Rich project. FAmous R&B singer. Single and 23 years old.

Naina (not real person, Juggy's younger sis)-23 year-old woman who is a currently attending a university to earn MBA. Single, funny, the girl who brings the whole house alive. Youngest of 4 siblings. 2 older brothers aren't involved as much so i won't give names.

Soniya (not real person, Juggy's wife)-best person to ask for advise. Spoils Naina. Not really on great terms with mother in law and is Juggy's life. The best bhabi anyone could have.

Amy (not real again, but Juggy's daughter)-Sweetheart. 3 years old and can speak clear english. Juggy's lucky charm. VEry close to Naina and Juggy. Loves to play practical jokes on everyone with Rishi's help.

Veronica (based on Veronica Mehta)-Rishi and Juggy and Jay's best friend. Part of Rishi Rich project (only girl). had an affair with Richi but is currently single. Soniya's best friend.

This is supposed to be a comedy and make you laugh. I will post first episode soon.

Background:

Juggy and Rishi and Jay are like best friends and enjoy working together. Jay has neve seen Juggy's family and has only heard about it so far. Rishi is like family and refers to Soniya as "bhabi" so you can get the picture. Naina is like Rishi's younger sis and cares about her a lot. Juggy is also very protective on Naina and hates when she goes on dates. Soniya and her mother in law never agree on anything. This is one big family with a crazy life. You will find out a lot more!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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well time to start! hope you enjoy this fanfic.

Juggy's House:

Juggy: Good morning!

Soniya: Finally, app ki subha ho gayi!

Juggy: Where is Nainu? (naina)

Soniya: App ki pari abi tak sorahi hai.

Juggy: Amy!

A: yeah papa?

J: Go wake up that masi of urs

Amy runs upstairs and jumps on Naina's bed.

A: WAke up, masi!

N; why?

Amy: Papa is calling you.

Naina:Tell him i will be down in 15 minutes.

Amy: okay.

She rums downstairs and tells her daddy.

Soniya: Juggy, are you going to the studio?

J: Yeah why?

S: Just asking.

Juggy: Sweetheart...i invited jay and rishi for dinner tonight. you are okay with that, right?

Soniya: Yeah no problem.

Naina makes her entry.

N: Good morning bhayyia.

Juggy kisses her on her forehead and says good morning.

Naina: I am so bored today. I have nothing to do.

Soniya: WHat a surprise! Let's go shopping tonight.

Naina: Okay.

Juggy: Is that all you women can think about? Shopping, shoppong, and shopping!

She puts her hands on her hips and makes a sarastic face.

Soniya: WHat about men? All you can think about is food and sleep!

Juggy: THat's not true.

Naina: Just admit it! Girls are better than guys!

Well,Juggy gets ready and RIshi stops by and decides to pick up Juggy.

Rishi: Hey bhabi! What's up?

S: Nothing much. you? Here taste these parathas

Rishi: Mmmm...these are delicious. same old things. where's juggy?

S:Upstairs! JUGGY! come down, rishi's here.

Naina: Hey!

Rishi: hi...what are you up to?

Naina: Nothing much just getting ready to go shopping.

Juggy: let's go.

He kisses Soniya on the forehead and says he will be back by six.

Meanwhile, Soniya, Naina, and Amy go shopping.

It's six and Juggy hasn't come home yet. At seven thirty they finally come back home.

Soniya is in the kitchen and is cooking lazanya. Juggy comes behind her and is trying to kiss her but to no vain.

She walks to the other end of the kitchen everytime he tries to come close.

Juggy: I am really sorry, jaan.

Soniya: Yeah right. I have been waiting for you for the past hour and half.

Juggy: Tumhari kasam...i will never do this to you again.

Rishi and Jay are in the living room. This is the first time Jay has come to Juggy's house. Rishi's been here loads of times.

Hope you liked it. If you didnt tell me how to improve it!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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lovely...sumthing completely new..n i love their music...so plss continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats good!!!! are u gonna cont TD??
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG...

kajal i luv u...

i absolutly luv da rishi rich project...i saw dem twice!!!

i luv this..lol....

plz continue 👏
Luv Raksha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Naina is upstairs while Juggy finally says sorry and Soniya forgives him.

Juggy: Let's eat. Nainu come down and eat.

THey are all seated at the table.

Juggy is at the head of the table and Rishi and Soniya are on both sides. Naina already ate so she doesn't come down.

THey eat and then they go home.

Naina is upstairs, trying to put AMy to sleep.

Juggy comes behind Soniya and kisses her.

Soniya: Someone will see.

Juggy: Your point is?

Soniya: My point is stop or i'll scream.

Juggy: And who's going to come?

soniya: That's a guud point...idk.

Juggy turns off the faucet and picks her up. He carries her upstairs and the door closes.

Naina comes downstairs and is confused.

Naina: I wonder where bhabi is? Oh well...I guess i'll finish these dishes.

Next DAy:

Naina: Bhayyia, can i go out today?

J: WHere?

Naina: At prapti's house.

J: No, not today.

Naina: why not?

J: BEcause i said so.

N: This isn't fair. BHABI!

S: What, sweetie?

N: I want to go to prapti's house.

S: so go! have a good time.

J: What? i told her no.

S: let her go..go, nainu.

SHe leaves and has a good time.

Naina desides to go shopping afterwards and guess what?

So does Jay.

They are both shopping in a card shop (it's naina's friend's b-day and jay's mom's b-day)

They bump into each other.

N: I am sorry!

Jay: No problem.

Will con't later. Pm if u guys have any ideas about how to get them to go out.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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fab part kajal...

lol..

so jay n naina gna go out wit each oda now... 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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keep the comments coming! i would appericiate it.
i will update tomorrow. n yes they do eventually go out.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww...damn cute ..loved it....wht abt rishi..whos the girl for him??
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome job cant wait to read more!!
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