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Archana Natarajan

@archanan14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Post updated! Hope you all like it! It's a little long sorry!

I'm off to sleep - will catch up in the morning! Good night people! 🤗 Some pictures below from Shwe - I'm one heck of a lucky girl! 😳

Edited by arch_nat1112 - 12 years ago

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sunshine99

@sunshine99

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I became a part of you...

As you of me...

I never knew how it happened..

When I ceased to exist as I was before...

When You and I become We...

It is true We can never go back to being You and I

But can walk ahead as We...

A Night to Remember

Nearly 6 months ago on a night quite similar Arnav married Khushi against her will... she charged at him in hurtful anger that whether he understood the significance of applyingsindoor and tying a mangalsutra around a girl's neck... he stood in silence with eyes lowered and heard his wife's voice choked with emotions... on a similar night today, he makes a visit to his wife's maternal home to tell her know she can go off to sleep ... clears out the half eaten plate of food,the half drunk cup of tea and tucks her comfortably in bed... As she tightly holds on to his hand he sleeps by her side so that Khushi can have an undisturbed tryst with slumber land... He did this again in silence today for his wife...

That fateful night he heard her without uttering a word because he had been unjust and deserved it... tonight he had troubled her so the need to ease it in his caring manner... Arnav Singh Raizada understands the sanctity of marriage always has...today he tried showing that to his wife in his own cocksure way...

He held on to his wife's hand while sleeping out of habit... wanted the woman in her to declare in front of a roomful of people that she is married...enjoy his first marital spat with her playing the dutiful husband who is all ears... felt pride engulf him when she used his words "jab hum baat kar rahein hai to beech mein mat boliye".."hum bhi apni kismat khud likhna sikh gayee hai"..."what the... " gave a loving smile when like him she started trashing stuff at hand in anger...

His adorable wife was doing what she hated in him...He could not help beam and gloat a little more in the success of getting Khushi to act like his true better half...

He will keep recreating events for her to act and react as Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada more and more everyday...before the 11 days are over he will make her realize that life has changed. Arnav is no more the guy he was 6 months ago and Khushi is no longer the girl she was 6 months before... they cannot just start life living as lone individuals one fine day because they have truly become the inseparable Mrs. & Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada forever...

Family Ties

As celebration of the bond of a brother and sister-Raksha Bandhan draws near... Anjali is reminiscing of the sweet moments she has shared with Arnav. She wishes for Chotte to be with her always... the happy moment that Anjali,Nani and NK are engrossed in broken with a ring on the mobile... like an off key note in a perfect symphony.

Another family tries drilling some sense into their Sanka daughter of returning to the sasuraal her rightful place... A recipe for trouble being written at Shantivan and Gupta Nivas.. which one will bear fruition and which will go kaput only the future can tell..

Rough Waters

As per the current track Arnav seems to have figured out the way his wife thinks,acts and reacts... in short he now knows her mind and heart inside out... Going forward he should be able to make Khushi see the futility of her thought on letting go of the marriage without pleading on bended knee except for a proposal of remarriage...

Khushi is a simple belle deeply in love...she is gullible,naive but not dumb...if she can have the brains to outwit Shyam ,change kerosene to water at the kidnappers den,wittily be loggerhead with her husband(biwi bani tv repartee from her) -she can inform Arnav with an attitude on receiving the money but not jump in glee and chirp to her husband that the money to pay the rent was earned by herself and he did not win the deal...

The protagonists are strong please let them be the way they are.. don't weave them around the plots rather weave the plots around them.

Congratulations to Beena ,Kalpana and Anjali👏

Edited by sunshine99 - 12 years ago

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Nandalala

@Nandalala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Updated on pg. 2...Be back in a bit!😊

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: arch_nat1112
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Archu:
Fantastic Crooner. We're all missing Priya but family always takes precedence. Love to her and pray everything is fine soon if not sooner.🤗 Meanwhile you're doing a fabulous job. Priya has chosen the perfect 'seat filler"s (as you put it) for the anchor post.👏

Mum is the word from me today about some forum over-reaction.I had my own share of over reaction yesterday. Today ignorance is bliss is my motto. 😉

Loved how you explained the 1st 5 mins. yes the 'dor' that connects them...he knows it and accepts it...she knows it subconsciously...about time she opens her eyes to that.

Loved your description of the office sequence especially the last line " The dor is strong, and the more it is pushed and tested- the rishte ki gaanth gets stronger.."

Yes Arnav's shatir dimag is upto something. His mission to begin with was to win her back into his arms.Will he succeed in his mission, time will tell. But he sure has gotten back the feisty Khushi he fell in love with...the silent one that he dropped off at Buaji's house was bothering him. He can deal with Jhalli SR more than the quiet KKGSR.

Agree with you about prurple...though it's my favorite color never thought a man can carry it till a certain ASR wears it. He can carry any color of the spectrum it looks like, much like his wife, though she seems to be dressed by some toddler's 'pin the color swatch' game.

Lovely Crooner hun. Love the perfect quotes, pics and song!👏

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srirao

@srirao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

😊,,,,an awesome epi for me,,,,,loved it...ASR & Khushi in their element...

how beautiful was the first segment,,,,,loved it,,,😍...loved the content look on his face as he falls asleep holding her,,,,!!!

aise kaise sothi hai taekwondo pose mein,,,,😆...yehi par aisa sothi hain,,,ASR moving towards understanding more abt Khushi...!!she sleeps like that only in GH coz she is still not completely at home in RM first b'coz of him & now DI..

Shayad yeh meri aadat hain...😍,,,yeah dono ek doosre ki aadat ban chuke hain,,,,!!!

I loved the office segment too...that indulgent look on his face when she is throwing things,,,!!

I felt he looked pleased with her refusal to come home inspite of his ultimatum,,,,this is what he loves abt her,,,her refusal to give in in the face of adversity,,!!!he definitely has something up his sleeve,,,,

maine kaha tha na abt,,Di...kuch toh kichdi pakh raha hain,,,,what did she mean by'hum jahan bhi rahen chotey hamare saath ho'...Di,,what abt Chotey ki zindagi,,,uski Khushi..??

Nani asking NK,,aap kahan ghayab hote hain,,,😆,,the way we question his disappearances,,,😆

Khushi's dress...eekkk😡...only Sanaya could look pretty in that..!!!

Promos ka kya hua...

cheating us out of Teej,,,😭,,,

Edited by srirao - 12 years ago

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srirao

@srirao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

@ Archu,,,wonderful Crooner with beautiful quotes to match...loved it,,,,

ASR is doing what he doing to compel her into exercising her rights over him,,,that is the only thing he wants now,,,& he is going abt it in the only way he knows is guaranteed to do the trick,,,,

A big🤗to u for carrying on the Crooner inspite of ur busy schedule,,,

Edited by srirao - 12 years ago

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Parsha

@Parsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: indi52
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waiting and CURIOUS !!! . 😲

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srirao

@srirao

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

@ Gandhari...fab post ,,loved it,,,,gr8 defining of love,,,,beautiful quote,,,,

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srirao

@srirao

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

@ Sunshine99,,,loved ur take,,,'they have truly become the inseperable Mrs & Mr Arnav Singh Raizada forever'...truly & completely,,,,

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bs_deeps

@bs_deeps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Desi title and quote..😉so lovely..yet to read the post..

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