Love, the Queen of all Tragedies - NeiVika OS - Page 3

Nice Story I Used To Watch This Show

Brooooo!!! What a piece!!! Wonderful, stupendous fantabulous!!

The parallels between Orpheus and Neil!!

Absolutely loved it!!

Keep writing!

Originally posted by: Syon_Anya41

I know that I had disappeared for almost three months, but now I'm back hehe 😅

This OS is actually my tribute to Neil ; since we all know that Mohit is leaving the show ; and today, the (potential) new ML is going to make an entry.

Please don't throw tomatoes on me if it gets a bit out of character lol. This is the first time I have ever attempted to write in Neil's perspective - his POV is just so hard to write for some reason T_T

This work is inspired by the Greek legend of Orpheus and Eurydice. Set during the Multani track.

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Love, the Queen of all Tragedies - NeiVika OS

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Do give me your comments and reviews

I stumbled across this today....

It is so beautifully written...the use of words and the way you hve expertly weaved it into an engaging short story....

Hats off to you

Originally posted by: samIHA04

First of all, Cheers to your victory 🥂

Now about OS, I loved you used Greek mythology characters. This OS is like Neil becoming that character whom he always thought foolish in love. But as they say, centuries will pass still ppl will be confused regarding love because Love is all about a person's own point of view

Waise toh iss forum ko kabka chod chuki hun, but aaj bohot din baad kuch accha padha

Thank you Ho saake toh author banne ke try karna. Your vocabulary is good.

Hey there! I am deeply sorry for not responding earlier. A few things happened (Even lost my phone lol). Ho sake to maaf kar dena.

Exactly. Love has different perspectives.

You made a great choice lmao. Makers are treating Neil very poorly lmao. Yikes.

Hehe thank you so much for your kind words!

Originally posted by: MochaQueen

Very nicely written and loved how the comparison was drawn

Thank for taking the time to comment! Apologies for not responding earlier 😅

Originally posted by: SilverBell

Nice Story I Used To Watch This Show

Thank you for commenting!

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

Brooooo!!! What a piece!!! Wonderful, stupendous fantabulous!!

The parallels between Orpheus and Neil!!

Absolutely loved it!!

Keep writing!

OMG you are so sweet 😭😭

Glad you liked it hehe. Thank you so much for commenting !

Originally posted by: Sarki

I stumbled across this today....

It is so beautifully written...the use of words and the way you hve expertly weaved it into an engaging short story....

Hats off to you

Thank you for reading this work and leaving your sweet review behind!

Actually, I currently have a Yashika OS in my drafts lmao. Will upload it after proofreading