hello guys
today i am really confused
by different opinion.
first in my last pm i have not said to quit wirting i told that for intense scene.
beacuse today the reflection it being so bad is clear to me
that is why my previous update on page 76 have 41 likes and
on page 80 only 18 likes😭
never gone through so bad phase of my update. is i amm so poor. dear there i know i am zero in this but atleast you all can tell me how to improve it or help me. i always keep in mind that nature whenever anyone else is wrong and that all you know that i never mind bad comment also. i have earlier also changed past track on you all request.
please take out any way of it. but slwly bdont harshly bash me. i can listen but please be soft and true.
as the story which now i will depict in full of arhsi and bundle of scenen like that are in neccesiity.
do i request anyone else to wrote it
because i dont want to get story down by this and main
i dont want to loose you all. you all have become such nice buddy of my. already many my old friend here left me.
2 futher a note to kept in mind arnav if known about pari it is not neccesary he know about chahat or anjali about ansh as there can be many rathore in world.
3 also i have edited the post in page 80 added anklet update in it check if you missed anyhting
4 next will be past update.where a new and last entry. we are moving towards pari death. which is very horrible.
,,
do you want to know why?
please tell me do i am going too fast. is everything clear to you or need each character description separately as a note
i will do
waiting for your answer
do like this and like your all
comment i quoted
link below sorry thought to add here only
do like it 😃
IPK..Jenny, sanluvug, chavvi16,
raniluvsasrAngel13prerna1sohara
wiwykbtr ITS_LEENA Edited by salooni - 11 years ago
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