new truth-trust inquest thread 2 - Page 17

nice update dear
liked it
and i love this story so do it as you like
continue soon

Regarding your ideas both of your ideas are excellent. i love the way you write. so continue with whatever you have in your mind.

Regarding update. awesome update. loved it.

You can simplify by doing a synopsis of the past and then bring it to pari present and also that Arnav figures out everything that happened to her

Originally posted by: Archu61

You can simplify by doing a synopsis of the past and then bring it to pari present and also that Arnav figures out everything that happened to her

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

READ and comment later

Originally posted by: yashu_95

The story is moving as good like a daily serial. Sorry for my late late comments. But trust me, whenevr I get logged into IF, your FFs are the 1st ones I open. Coz they reflect reality... sometimes sad, someimes happy, sometimes amazing, sometimes exciting,... a concoction of everything.

Once I get regular access to my laptop, nothing can stop me from coming into IF and reading ur PMs. But, as for now, I'll have to wait for a few days(until my college starts) to get complete access to my laptop.

(I'll be joining in either Computer science engg or IT both of which need computer usage).hehehehe!!!!😉😃

Originally posted by: chavvi16

oh man that was painful to read

how she became a statue like that

nothing remained for her

she has lost all the will to live

man this was the toughest thing to read

even more than when raj betrayed her

and even more than what khushi did

not to mention arnie and shyam deeds

gosh how did she overcome it all

and why did they think she is no more

oh wait they thought she died in the accident right

man am glad she has arnie now

but hope her past doesnt over shadow her present and future with arnie

that will be hard to take right

so she finally moved raj picture rigth

it was hard for her family to see her like this

and yet they couldnt do anything

cheers for pm

Originally posted by: jm020

Wow amazing ...poor Khushi...she is practically a robot...poor girl shes broken...i feel sorry for her family too...man how does she overcome this...and bear the pain from shyam and Arnav too...continue soon...

Jenny x

awesome update

So you depicted Pari's death scene in the flash back.