VirMan..FF Kuch Is Tarah...Part 32 pg 136+Note

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Hey guyz...my name is Arti...well dis is my 1st FF on Virmaan..luv em alot...n after readin so many OS/SS&FF..which were so nyc...i thought y don't i give it a try...so m sorry if dis is an boring FF...i juz hope u guyz lyk it...neways here we go...

VirMan..Kuch Iss Tarah...

It was the day when the Vadhera family invited Chaudhary family to their farmhouse so that both families could spend time with each other and get to know each other better. This Idea was suggested by Maanvi The Great. Everyone was happy with this idea besides Swamni bua but she was helpless because Dadaji liked the idea and personally invited the Chaudhary's over for them to go on a picnic to their Farmhouse...

Chaudhary's House:

Everyone packed their things...Maanvi was very excited...she was happy that Dadaji accepted her idea of going on a picnic together...she was happy that she is going to spend time with her lovely Di and jiju...as she was packing her stuff,,her phone rang...

Maanvi: Hello? (in a happy tone)
Jeevika: Hi Maanu, kaisi hai tu?
Maanvi: Diii...main toh hamesha hi thik rehti hun...app kaisi ho?? Aur mere Jiju Kaise hai???
Jeevika: Main bhi thik hun aur tere jiju bhi thik hai...waise sab packing ho gayi?? hum abhi thode hi der mein pahoch(reach) jaye gein
Maanvi: Haan Di bas ho gayi hai
Jeevika: Thik hai,,,Beeji ko keh dena ki hum bas 15-20 min mein pahoch(reach) jaye gein ok, bye Maanu
Maanvi: Ok Dii...bye.

As Maanvi hang up the phone and packed her stuff she ran outside her room,,towards Beeji
Maanvi: Beeji Sab packing ho gayi..?..Dii ne kaha hai ki woh log 15-20 min mein yahan aa jaye gein
Beeji: Haan ho gayi hai...chalo acha hai...woh log thodi der mein aa jaye gein

~After 15-20 min...the Vadhera's arrived~

Jeevika, Viren, Kadambari Chachi, Chachu, Shlok, and Viraat were inside the bus, As Dadaji, Swamini Bua, and Vanshika Ma Got out of the car right infornt of the bus. On the other hand Maanvi and Dabbu went to Badi Beeji's room to help her come out along with Madhan Chachu. Door Bell Rings and Pinky Chachi opens the door with a huge simle on her face along with Beeji.

Beeji: Namaste ji kaise hai aap sab??
Dadaji: Namaste behenji...hum sab thik hai...app sab kaise hain?
Pinky Chachi: Hum toh bahut hi badiya hai Ji...aur bahut khush bhi hai.
Vanshika Ma: Chalo achi baat hai.
Swamni Bua: Babuji hume ab chalna chahiye warna jaate jaate bahut late ho jaye gi.
Dadaji: Haan Swamni beta tum sahi keh rahi ho...chale behenji?
Beeji: Haan ji chaleyein...MAANVI...DABBU JALDI AAO. (Shouting)
Dabbu: Jii Beeji...hum aa rahe hai...

All walked towards the bus.

Dadaji: Behenji...app aur Badi Beeji humare saath gadi(car) mein chaliye...aur baki sab bus mein aa jaye gein.
Beeji: Ji

Madhan Chachu with help of Maanvi and Dabbu made Badi Beeji sit in the car and walked towards the bus. As Maanvi entered the bus, she smiled at her Dii as she ran and hugged her.

Viren: Saali Saheba...hum bhi yahan hai, humse bhi mil lijiye.

Maanvi and Jeevika broked the hugged and smiled at viren.

Maanvi: Arey Jiju don't worry app next line mein ho
Viraat: Acha aur mera number kab aaye ga Bandariya???(as he wink at Maanvi)
Maanvi: Aaye ga aaye ga Chep...sab se last mein.(smiles at Virat)
Viraat: hmmm Chalo last mein hi saahi aaye ga toh sahii. (he smiles back at her)

Maanvi ignored him and went forward to hug Viren and Kadambari Chachi, pulled shlok's cheeks and took Chachu blessing.

Viraat: Ho gaya sab se milna, ab main bacha hun, mujhse bhi mil lo meri Bhabhi Ki Behna.
Maanvi: Of course main tumhe kaise bhul sakhti hun Mere Didi Ke Annoying Devar.
Viraat: Yaa Exactly..so come on..(opened his arms for her to hug him)

Maanvi smiles and walks toward Viraat. As she reached him, she bowed down and was about to touch his feet just then Viraat jumped with a confused expression.

Viraat: Yeh kya kar rahi ho?
Maanvi: Maine kya kiya..main toh bas,,,woh...appka aashirvad(blessing) le rahi thi Viraat Ji (sweetly).
Viraat: Woh kyun? main tumhe koi old person dikhta hun kya?
Maanvi: Sorry main jhoot bolne ke mood mein nahi hun.

Everyone inside the bus started laughing at Maanvi and Viraat's fighting. They enjoyed their nok jhok, they were like their entertainment package who will never fail to make them laugh. After some time with their entertainment's nok jhok, they finally reached the farmhouse. It was around 6 pm so everyone just went to their room and freshen up themselves as Dadaji told everyone to meet up at the dinning table sharp at 8 pm.

~ 2 Hours Later ~

Everyone reached the dinning table at 7:55 pm and were waiting for Dadaji to say start as they watched him looking towards his watch.

Dadaji: Ab hum khana shuru kar sakhte hai.

All started eating quitely, especially Maanvi. She remembered when she went to the Vadhera house on her Di's birthday, and all she did was talk talk talk with her sister while eating which made Dadaji and Swamini Bua very mad. "So this time I am not going to take a risk"she thought to herself as someone tapped her shoulder. She turned her face and saw Viraat sitting next to her signaling her to come close to him.

Maanvi: Kya hai Chep? (she whispered)
Viraat: Mujhe nhi tumhe kya hua?
Maanvi: Kya matlab?
Viraat: Matlab yeh Bandariya...tum aaj itni chup kyun ho? Kisine punishment di hai kya?
Maanvi: Tumhe isse kya? main chup rahun ya kuch karun...tum...

She was cut off by Swamini bua's voice.

Swamini Bua: Maanvi,,,pehle dinner karlo baatein baad mein karna. (making wired faces at her)
Maanvi: Ji Bua ji,,, (thinking) Chep kahin ka, uski wajah se main trouble mein chali gayi, chodhungi nahi main use.

It was 9 pm, all were done eating.

Dadaji: Chaliyein ab hum sab bahar(outside) chalte hai, wahan bahate(sit) hai.

All walked outsied, as one of the servant came with the coffee and all of them went on with their conversation. After sometime Dadaji, Swamini bua, Vanshika Ma, Beeji, Shlok and Badi Beeji went inside to sleep as it was the Vadhera's house rule. But today Dadaji permitted everyone to spend their night as they were not in the Vadhera house, Although rule will never change for Dadaji, Swamini Bua, Vanshika Ma, and Of course for Shlok so they left.

Maanvi: Thank god gaye.
Jeevika: Maanu!!!
Maanvi: Sorry Di.

It was silence for a while, then Maanvi as usual came up with an idea.

Maanvi: Di kyun na hum yahan bore hone se acha antakshari kehle?
Kadambari Chachi: Haye ni kya idea hai Maanvi, chalo khelte hai.
Maanvi: Haan, but rules thode different hai.
Viren: Matlab?
Maanvi: Matlab yeh ki jo team song gaaye ga, woh team dusre team ko ek letter bataye ga jise dusre team ko gaana hoga. Thik hai, toh apne apne partners pick karo jaldi.
Pinky Chachi: Haan thik hai.

Madhan Chachu and Inder Chachu were team 1, Kadambari Chachi and Pinky Chachi were team 2, Viren and Jeevika were Team 3, and Maanvi and Dabbu were team 4. Viraat was not part of this game, eventhough he wanted to be part of it, but no one asked him to join not even Maanvi after whatever happened at her Di's Mehndi Ceremony she thought it would not be a good idea to ask him to play along. Everyone moved to sit with their partners in a circle. Viren was sitting between Jeevika and Virat, on Viraat's left side was Inder Chachu, beside Inder Chachu was Madhan Chachu, Beside Madhan Chachu was Pinky Chachi, Beside Pinky Chachi was Kadambari Chachi, Beside Kadambari Chachi was Dabbu, and beside Dabbu was Maanvi.

Maanvi: Ok chalo start, Team one shuru ho jao.
Madhan Chachu: Woh toh thik hai Maanvi beta, par hum kaun si letter se shuru kare?
Pinky Chachi: App na "H" se shuru kariye.
Madhan Chachu: Acha thik hai,,,,,,Hume aur jeene ki chahat na hoti, agar tum na hote, agar tum na hote.
Maanvi: Wah Chachu, romantic ha..not bad...acha chalo team 2 ki baari. Chachu's letter toh batao.
Inder Chachu: Haan team 2 letter "E".
Pinky Chachi: Ek main aur ek tu, dono miley iss tarah, aur jo tann mann mein ho raha hai, yeh toh hona hi tha.
Kadambari Chachi: Haye kya song gaaya hai ji (smiles). Chalo team 3 Jeevika aur Viren "A" se shuru ho jao.
Jeevika: "A",,Viren ji gaaiye(sing) na.
Viren: Haan,,Aaye ho meri zindagi mein tum bahar bann ke...meri dil mein yun hi rehna tum pyaar pyaar bannke.

Jeevika blushes.

Maanvi: Oye hoye Jiju...not bad,,,Acha hume letter toh bata do.
Viren: Haan letter,,,"E".
Maanvi: Chalo Dabbe shuru ho ja.
Dabbu: Main? kya Maanvi didi, mujhe kahan song gaana aata hai.
Maanvi: Oye Dabbe, tu mera partner aise hi nhi bana hai,,,chal gaana ga.
Dabbu: Thik hai,,,,,Ek garam chai ki pyaali ho koi usko pilaane waali ho chaahe gori ho ya kaali ho seene se lagaane waali ho mil jaaye to mit jaaye arre hum tararum pum...

Everyone starts laughing and Maanvi hits Dabbu on his head.

Maanvi: Kya re Dabba koi acha gaana nhi ga sakhta tha. Ok back to team 1, ab Inder Chachu gaaye gein. Chachu "M" se shuru ho jaiye.
Inder Chachu: Ok,,,Mere rang mein rangne wali pari ho ya ho parion ki raani ya ho meri prem kahani,,mere sawalon ka jawab do, do na.
Maanvi: Aaye haaye Chachu...Chachi ke liye tha na... Chachi ur turn, Chachu letter?
Madhan Chachu: Haan letter,,"H".
Kadambari Chachi: Haaye ni meri bari,,,,ok,,,,Haan hai koi toh wajha jo jeene ka maza yun aane laga,,yeh hawaon mein hai kya thoda sa jo nasha yun chhane laga,,pucho na pucho mujhe kya hua hai teri raahon mein aa kar,,pucho na pucho mujhe kya miley ga teri baahon mein aa kar yeh ishq haye baithe bithaye jannat dikhaye ha...

Viraat continuiously stares at Maanvi, But Maanvi didn't see him staring at her.

Maanvi: Arey wah Chachi...Inder Chachu, appko jawab mil gaya.
Inder Chachu: Haan mil gaya. (Smiles)

Viren saw his little brother staring at her saali saiba as if their no one around him.

Viren: Viraat, mere bhai, kya dekh raha hai itne ache se. Hume bhi batao hum bhi dekhna chahte hai. (teasingly)
Viraat: Kuch nahi bhai, appko dekhne ki zarurat nahi hai, appke paas babhi hai app use dekha ha.(smiles)
Maanvi: Team 3 appki turn hai, Chachi letter?
Pinky Chachi: Chal Jeevika tu na "H" se ga.
Jeevika: Main?
Viren: Haan Mrs. Vadhera app, maine gaa diya ab app gaaiye.
Jeevika: ok,,,Hum dil de chuke sanam, tere ho gaye hai hum teri kasam.
Viren: Wah Mrs. Vadhera,, yeh gaana mere liye tha ya...
Jeevika: (blushes)...Ji,,,Maanu ab tu ga "D" se.
Maanvi: Sure Di...Dil dil dil dil dil dil dil...Agar dil kahe ki mujhe tumse mohabat hai, agar dil kahe ki mujhe tumse mohabat hai, toh tum kya karo gein toh tum kya karoge.
Dabbu: Maanvi didi Maanvi did,,, appko kise pyar hai?
Maanvi: Chup kar Dabbe, Haan toh team 1 app log "T" se gaaiye.
Madhan Chachu: "T" se...socho bhaisab.

Both Chachu's thinking. After a little while someone starts singing which shocked everyone, eps Maanvi. They look up and saw Viraat singing.

Viraat: Tum dil ki dhadkan mein, rehte ho rehte ho, meri in saanson se kehte ho kehte ho, bahon mein aa jao sapno mein kho jao. Tum dil ki dhadkan mein rehte ho rehte ho.

Everyone stood their speechless, looking towards Viraat who is smiling rather than getting upset.


Thats it guyz...i knw its kinda long, i tired my best,,plz do comment wheather its gud or bad... I will continue if u guyz want me 2...Thnk u...Sorry 4 ne mistakes dat i made...


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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...it was gud...& definitely not boring...very well described scene...i like dat u focussed on d entire family bonding...

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Nice story,,, enjoyed it..
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Awesome start, loved the way Manvi greeted Virat and the song Virat sang was one of my fav... Please continue and PM me when u update 😊
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very nice story i really like it plz continue n pm me
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Oh its really good...😊
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Awesome start!! i liked it do continue soon i'll be waiting for yr PM :) hehe
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Very nice...
I liked d ending very much 😊
U kw,i always dream of virat singing a sng 2 mannu(bt with a guitar in his hand 😃 )
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awesome yaar...plz continue it...❤️
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