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Hello guyz,,m bck wid part 25...Yey,,,I hve completed 100 pages..it wouldn't b possible widout u guyz...😊so I thnk each n every1 of u 4 lyking dis FF frm de bottom of my heart❤️, it really means a lot 2 me...🤗A Very Big Hug 2 U All🤗...thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments n lyks...And I really hope u'll lyk dis part as well...EnJoY..

VirMan...Kuch Iss Tarah...Part 25...


~Recap~

They both smiled and hugged each other tightly. After so many difficulties, Viraat and Maanvi were back together...as VirMan.

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~Next Morning...Vayansh's Room~

Sneha entered Vayansh's room and saw him sitting on his bed, lost in his own world.

Sneha: Vayansh?

Vayansh: (turns to face Sneha) Mom, aaiye na, mujhe toh pata bhi nahi chala aap kab aayi.

Sneha: (walking towards Vayansh) Pata kaise chalta, tum apne hi khayalon mein khoye huye the. (sits beside him) Batao, kya soch rahe the?
Vayansh: Main? Kuch bhi toh nahi Mom, woh bas aise hi.
Sneha: Maine tumse pehle bhi kaha hai, aur ab bhi kehti hun. Mujhse kabhi kuch chupane ki koshish bhi mat karna, main tumhari Maa bhi hun aur dost bhi.
Vayansh: (takes her hand in his/smiles) Of course Mom, main aapse kuch chupa sakhta hun kya? Aisa kuch nahi hai.
Sneha: Viraat aur Maanvi ke bare mein soch rahe the na?

Vayansh looked at his Mom, shocked.

Vayansh: (looking everywhere, but Sneha) Nahi Mom, main kyun un dono ke baare mein sochunga.
Sneha: Vayansh, meri taraf dekho. (turns his face towards hers) Dard ho raha hai?

Vayansh: Haan Maa, ho raha hai. (smiles) Par usse zyada khushi ho rahi hai, Viraat aur Maanvi ko saath dekh kar.
Sneha: (teary eyes) Bahut pyaar karte ho Maanvi se.

Vayansh: (teary eyes) Bahut pyaar karta hai Maanvi se Viraat, uske pyaar ke samne mera pyaar kuch nahi hai Mom.
Sneha: Tumhe pata hai, mujhe tumhe iss halat mein dekh kar bahut dard ho raha hai, par usse zyada mujhe tum par garv ho raha hai. Tumne apne baare mein naa soche huye, do pyaar karne wale ko milaya hai. I am really proud of you Beta.

Vayansh: Aapka Beta hun na, yeh toh hona hi tha.

Sneha hugged his Son tightly, letting the tears flow down her cheeks.

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Viraat and Maanvi entered Vanshika Maa's room, where Jeevika and Viren were already present.

Viraat: Maa...

Vanshika turned around and saw Viraat, she had tears in her eyes as after so many days, Viraat was standing in front of her, willingly.

Vanshika Maa: Viraat, aao na Beta, wahan kyun khade ho?

Viraat and Maanvi walked towards Vanshika Maa and VirIka.

Viraat: Mom, main yahan aapse maafi mangne aaya hun. Maine aapke saath jaise behave kiya, mujhe nahi karna chahiye tha. Aap pehle hi itni mushkil waqt se guzar rahi thi aur maine aapko..(holds her hand) I'm really sorry Maa, please mujhe maaf kardo.
Vanshika Maa: (teary eyes) Thappad marungi agar fir sorry kaha toh. Maa hun main teri, tu agar na bhi kahega na, tab bhi main tujhe maaf kar dungi. Aur teri toh koi galti hi nahi hai Viraat, main hi tum dono ko...maafi mujhe mangni chahiye tum dono se. (hands folded) Mujhe maaf kardo Beta..
Maanvi: (places her hands on hers) Nahi Aunty, yeh aap kaise baatein kar rahi hai. Maa ke haath baccho ko ashirwaad dene ke liye uthte hai, na ki maafi mangne ki liye. Aapne jo bhi kiya, kisike dabav mein aa kar kiya, hume aapse koi shikayat nahi hai.
Viraat: Haan Maa.

Vanshika Maa, with a smile, hugged Viraat and Maanvi tightly. Viraat placed his hands on Maanvi, which was on Vanshika Maa's back, and held it tightly. She looked up, towards Viraat and gave him a cute smile. Vanshika Maa broke the hug, making Maanvi pull her hand away from Viraat's grip.

Viren: (smiles) Chal, ab sab thik hai...ab toh rona dhona band karo.
Vayansh: Exactly.

Everyone turned towards Vayansh, who was standing at the door.

Vayansh: (walking towards them) Ab toh khushiyan hi khushiyan honi chahiye.
Jeevika: Haan.
Maanvi: Di, yeh khushiyan sirf aur sirf aap teeno ki wajha se aayi hai.
Viraat: Haan Bhabhi, agar aap teeno nahi hote, toh aaj hum saath nahi hote.
Viren: Arey ab zyada senti mat ho yaar, hume waise bhi jo bhi kiya apne liye kiya.
Jeevika: Haan, hum tum dono ko alag nahi dekh sakhte, isiliye humne yeh sab kiya.
Viraat: Aur Vayansh, tum paraye ho kar bhi, humare liye itna sab kuch kiya, uske liye Thank You so much.
Vayansh: Paraye kaise? Tum mere dost ho, yeh baat alag hai ki tum mujhe apna dost nahi mante, (smiles) par main toh manta hun na.
Viren: Yeh baat toh tune sahi kahi Viraat, aaj agar Vayansh nahi hota toh shayad hum yeh kabhi nahi kar sakhte the.
Vayansh: Aap sab aise hi mujhe sara credit de rahe ho, maine jo bhi kiya do pyaar karne walo ko milane ke liye kiya.
Maanvi: (smiles at Vayansh, cutely) Thank You Vayansh, tumne mujhe mere Viraat wapas kiya hai, main dua karungi ki tumhe iss duniya ki sabse khubsurat aur sabse achi ladki mile.

Vayansh: Woh toh mumkin nahi hai...(to himself/looking at Maanvi to Viraat) Kyun ki woh toh kisi aur ki hai.
Jeevika: Kyun?
Vayansh: Um..woh, meri aisi kismat kaha.
Viraat: Don't worry Vayansh, tumhari bhi kismat khulegi. (hugs Maanvi sideways) Tumne hume milaya hai, Bhagwaan tumhe bhi tumhari jeevan saathi se milwaeinge.
Vayansh: Haan, ab milwana hi padega.
Viraat: Hmm, and by the way, (extended his hand in front of him) mujhse dosti karoge?
Vayansh: Why Not? (shakes his hand) Friends.
Vanshika Maa: Maanvi, Jeevika, ab hum neeche chalte hai, Shadi ki taiyaari karni hai, do din mein shadi hai.
Jeevika: Haan Maa, chaliye.

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Maanvi was walking towards her room, when suddenly someone pulled her inside a room, pinned her against the wall, and covered her mouth as she was about to scream, with closed eyes. Slowly, she opened her eyes and saw two pairs of hazel eyes looking at her lovingly. She was lost in that eyes, which held so much of love, only for her, it was none other then her Viraat's eyes. On of his hand was around her slim waist, while the other was placed over her mouth, preventing her from screaming.

Viraat: (smirks) Kya dekh rahi ho Dedh Futiya?

Maanvi: Hmmm...
Viraat: (didn't realized where his hand was) Kya?
Maanvi: Mmm...
Viraat: (looking at his hand, which was on her mouth) Ohh...Pehle promise karo tum chilaogi nahi.
Maanvi: Hmm..
Viraat: Promise na?
Maanvi: Hmm...

Viraat removed his palms away from her mouth and placed it on the wall.

Maanvi: Kya hai Viraat, aise khichne ki kya zarurat thi?
Viraat: Zarurat thi na, (moving some strands of hair behind her ears) aaj main bahut hi romantic mood mein hun.
Maanvi: Tum apne romance ko control mein nahi rakh sakhte kya? Kahin bhi shuru ho jaate ho.
Viraat: (holds her hand) Koshish karta hun control mein rakhne ki, par yeh (places her hand on his chest, near his heart) kambakht dil nahi manta. Jab bhi tumhe dekhta hai, sara control kho deta hai.
Maanvi: Flirt kar rahe ho? Aaj tak kitni ladkiyon ke samne yeh line mari hai?

Viraat: (pretending to think/counting with his fingers) Ek, nahi teen, nahi aath..

Maanvi gasped and slapped him on his arm.

Maanvi: Chep kahin ke...aath, tumhe sharam nahi aati?
Viraat: Nahi Maanvi, aath nahi, I think maybe 15 tak toh hoga.
Maanvi: (gasped/angerily) 15? Tum...tum..Urghhh...(trying to push him away) Chodo mujhe, haato..

Viraat wrapped his hand around her stomach and pulled her back as she was about to walk away.

Maanvi: (looking straight into his eyes) Maine kaha chodo mujhe Viraat.

Viraat: (smirks) Jealous?
Maanvi: Pagal kutte ne nahi kaata hai jo main jealous hone lagi.

Viraat: (leaning close to her face) Lag toh kuch aisa hi raha hai.
Maanvi: (pushes him back) Tumhe jo lagta hai, tum woh socho par mujhe jaane do.

Viraat: Arey aise kaise jaane dun? Romantic mood hai, kuch romance toh karne do.

Maanvi: Haan toh roka kisne hai, jao na un 15 ladkiyon ke paas, deingi tumhe mauka romance karne ka, yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Viraat: Thik hai, main un 15 ladkiyon ke saath romance karunga, par tumhe ek wada karna hoga ki tum mujhe roko gi nahi aur bura bhi nahi manogi. (pulls her close to him) Promise?
Maanvi: (hands on his chest) Arey nahi nahi, main kyun bura maanne lagi, jao na, intezaar kar rahi hongi tumhara. Jao.
Viraat: (leaning close to her lips) Pakka?
Maanvi: (moves her face back) Jo karna hai karo.

Maanvi pushed Viraat a little and started to walk away. Viraat held her hand and pulled her back with a jerk, crushing her on his chest.

Viraat: Kahan jaa rahi ho? Romance toh karne do.

Maanvi: Kyun, woh 15 lakiyan bhaag gayi?
Viraat: (holds her hands) Kuch aisa hi hoga, agar tum chali jaogi toh...

Maanvi: Kyun?
Viraat: (kisses her right hand) Number one, Bandariya. (kisses her left hand) Number two, Dedh Futiya. (kisses her forehead) Number three, Meri Bhabhi ki Behna. (kisses her left eye, which was closed) Number four, Sherni. (kisses her right eye) Number five, Jiju ki Saali. (kisses her right cheek) Number six, Jhansi ki Rani.

Maanvi closed her eyes and smiled as Viraat was placing kisses on her face, while calling her names. Her heartbeat were increasing, she tightly clutched his shirt in her tiny fist.

Viraat: (kisses her left cheek) Number seven, Drama Queen. (kisses on the tip of her nose) Number eight, Chaudarain. (kisses her chin) Number nine, Toofan Mail. (kisses on her right earlobe) Number ten, Chep. (kisses on her left earlobe) Number eleven, Desi Girl. (kisses her left shoulder) Number twelve, Hero. (kisses her right shoulder) Number thirteen, Der Pixels. (kissing her neck) Number Fourteen, Baby. (moves down towards her collar bone, while kissing) Number fifteen, Darling.

Maanvi: (eyes still closed/clutching his shirt in her fist) Viraat...please,,,

Viraat stopped his kissing session, and slowly went down on his knees. He took out a small box out of his pocket and looked up at Maanvi, who was looking at him questioningly. A smile crept over her lips, as she saw him opening the box and taking out a cute yet beautiful daimond ring. Viraat held her left hand, as tears made its way down to her cheeks.

Viraat: (looked up at her) Maanvi...humari zindagi mein itni mushkile aur taklife aayi, fir bhi hume koi bhi juda nahi kar paaya. Hum alag ho kar bhi ek the, aur dur reh kar bhi paas. Par main humari zindagi mein se yeh mushkile aur taklife hamesha ke liye mita dena chahta hun. Tumse alag ho kar nahi, tumhare saath reh kar jeena chahta hun. Tumse dur ho kar nahi, tumhare paas rahe kar apni zindagi guzaarna chahta hun. Maanvi, Yeh jante huye bhi ki tumhara jawab kya hoga, fir bhi main tumse puchna chahta hun...Maanvi, kya tum meri banogi? Kya tum apni puri zindagi meri saath guzaarna pasand karogi? Kya tum mujhe, khud ko apna kehne ka haq dogi? Kya tum, mujhse shadi karogi? Will You Marry Me Maanvi?
Maanvi: (with teary eyes/knelt down on her knees) Yes Viraat, yes, I will marry you...I Love You..Main tumhari baungi. Main apni puri zindagi tumhare saath, chahiye dukh ho ya sukh, guzarna pasand karungi. Main tumhe woh sare haq dungi, jo tumhara hai, mujh pe. (smiles) Haan, karungi main,,,karungi main tumse shadi.

Viraat slipped the ring into her finger, which perfectly fitted. Maanvi wrapped her arms around his neck, holding him as tight as she could, as he wrapped his arms around her waist, pulling her close.

Viraat: Mujhe ring nahi pehnaogi?
Maanvi: (breaking the hug) Mere paas nahi hai abhi.

Viraat took out the ring, that was on his finger and handed it to her.

Viraat: Yeh lo..

Maanvi: Viraat yeh toh..
Viraat: Yeh tumhare haath se pehna likha tha, Maya ke haath se nahi. Aur dekho, (showing her his left hand) mera haath bhi bilkul thik hai.

Maanvi smiled and took the ring in her hand.

Maanvi: Khade toh ho jao.
Viraat: Kyun aise nahi pehna sakhti?
Maanvi: Nahi, bahut unromantic lagega.
Viraat: (laughs a little) Acha?
Maanvi: Haan, ab chalo utho.

Viraat stood up, while Maanvi was still sitting down on her knees.

Viraat: (looking down at her) Tum nahi utho gi?

Maanvi: (held his left hand) Nahi, mujhe bhi kuch romantic kehna hai.
Viraat: Acha? Thik hai, bolo.
Maanvi: Ok. (clearing her throat) Ahem...Viraat, maine jab se hosh sambhala hai, tabse sirf aur sirf apni Jeevika Di se hi pyaar karti thi, unke ilava meri zindagi mein koi aur important nahi tha...
Viraat: (cuts her off) Tum propose kar rahi ho, yaa mujhe apni zindagi ki kahani bata rahi ho? Dekho Maanvi, shadi ke baad tumhe bahut time miley ga, tab bata dena.
Maanvi: (irritatedly) Mujhe bolne doge ya main jaun?
Viraat: Arey sorry, continue please.
Maanvi: Hmm...haan toh kahan thi main? Haan...toh Di ke ilava meri life mein aur koi important nahi tha. Par ek din, (smiles, looking at Viraat lovingly) koi aisa aaya, jisne meri duniya hi badal di, jisne mujhe jaane anjaane mein apne itne kareeb le aaya ki main usse kabhi dur hi na jaa paiye. Ussne mujhse itna pyaar kiya, ki cancer jaisi bimaari bhi mera kuch nahi bigadh paayi. Woh mera partner bana, har ek modh pe mera saath diya, mujhe himmat di, hosala diya, aur dekhte hi dekhte mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya. Aaj main usse sirf yeh puchna chahti hun, ki jaise woh mere saath har dukh har taklif mein khada tha, kya woh waise hi aaj, mera haath tham kar mujhe apne sukh mein shamil karega? Bolo Viraat, kya tum mujhe apni zindagi mein shamil karoge? Kya tum mujhse shadi karoge?

Viraat pulled her up by her shoulder and hugged her tightly.

Viraat: I Love You. Main tumhare saath apni zindagi toh kya, uske baad bhi chahunga. Main tumhara haath marte dam tak nahi chodunga, aur na hi marne ke baad. (breaks the hug) Karunga main tumse shadi, yes, I will marry you Maanvi.


Maanvi smiled at Viraat with teary eyes, and slide the ring into his ring finger on his left hand. They were engaged.

Viraat: (wipes her tears/smirks) Ab...May I Kiss The Bride?

Maanvi: (blushingly) Main abhi tumhari Dulhan banni nahi hun.

Viraat: (wraps his arms around her waist, pulls her close) Banni nahi toh kya? Banne wali ho. (leaning close to her lips)
Maanvi: (pushing him back) Viraat, kya kar rahe ho, koi aa jaye ga.

Viraat: Bas ek kissy please.
Maanvi: Vir...
Viraat: Please Maanvi.

Maanvi closed her eyes, for him to kiss her. Viraat smiled and leaned closed to her lips, her heartbeat was beating at a high rate. Viraat placed his one hand on her waist, pulling her close, while the other was placed on her neck, pulling her face close to his. She slightly moved her hands up, from his chest, towards his shoulder. Their lips were just about to crush, they pulled away as they heard Jeevika's loud voice.

Jeevika: (shouting) Mannu, kahan reh gayi? Jaldi aa na neeche, main tera kabse intezaar kar rahi hun.

Maanvi: Di...main toh bhul hi gayi thi, Di ne mujhe kuch laane ko bheja tha. Tumhare chakkar mein main sab bhul gayi.

Viraat: Yeh Bhabhi bhi na, kya timing hai unki.

Maanvi: Oye, meri Di ke khilaaf kuch nahi.

Viraat: Ok. (pulls her close to him) Toh kahan the hum?

Maanvi: Abhi nahi Viraat, mujhe jaana hai. (trying to push him away) Chodho.

Viraat: Arey yaar, rehne do Bhabhi khud dhundh legi unhe jo chahiye.

Maanvi: Viraat, chodho.
Viraat: Nahi.
Maanvi: Viraat, bas do din ki baat hai.

Viraat: Tum do din ki baat kar rahi ho, main tumhare bin ek second bhi nahi reh sakhta.

Maanvi: Viraat...
Jeevika: (shouting) Mannu, kahan hai tu?
Maanvi: (shouts) Aayi Di...Viraat chodho..ufff...(pushes him back)

Maanvi walked towards the door, but then turned around and saw Viraat, looking at her disappointedly. She smiled and walked towards him.

Maanvi: (kisses on his cheek) Sorry...(runs away) Bye.

And she left the room, leaving a happy and smiling Viraat behind.


Viraat: (looking up/smiles) Bhagwaanji, Thank You, meri Bandariya ko meri zindagi mein wapas laane ke liye.


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Viren and Vayansh entered Viraat's room, who was sitting on his bed, lost in his own world, while smiling like an idiot. Vayansh and Viren smiled mischeviously at each other, walked towards Viraat and sat beside him.

Viren: Akele baithe baithe muskura rahe ho? (hits his shoulder with his) Kis ke khayalon mein khoye ho Bhai?

Viraat came back to his sense and saw Viren and Vayansh sitting beside him.

Vayansh: (teasingly) Yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai Viren Bhai. Ab do din mein shadi hai, aur kiske khayalon mein khoye honge Dulhe raja.
Viraat: (blushingly) Nahi, woh..aap dono yahan kaise?
Viren: Hum yahan tujhse kuch mangne aaye hain.
Viraat: (confused) Mujhse?
Vayansh: (smiles) Haan.
Viraat: Kya?
Vayansh: Party.
Viraat: Party? Haan toh, aap dono mujhse kyun mang rahe ho?
Viren: (smiles widely) Bachelor Party.
Viraat: (stands up/shocked, surprised) Kya? Bachelor Party?

Viren & Vayansh: (stands up) Yes.
Viraat: Nahi, Bhai, agar Maanvi ko iss baat ki bhanak bhi lag gayi na, toh mujhse shadi karne se pehle mujhe divorce de degi.
Viren: Arey kuch nahi hoga. Aur waise bhi teri wajha se hume bhi enjoy karne ka mauka mil jaye ga.
Vayansh: Haan Viraat,
Viren: Do din baad tere aazadi ke din khatam ho jayein ge...thoda toh enjoy karna banta hai.

Viraat: (threateningly) Bhai, Bhabhi ko bulaun?
Viren: Dara mat mujhe. Chal na, karte hai party shaty. (hands around Viraat's shoulder) In ladkiyon ko pata bhi nahi chalne deinge. Sirf hum...tu, main, Vayansh, dono Chachu, Dabbu, aur humare kuch friends bas.
Viraat: Pakka?
Vayansh: (smiles) Pakka.
Viraat: Par Dadaji?
Viren: Unhe main manna lunga.

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Jeevika and Maanvi were in the kitchen with Kadambari Chachi and Pinky Chachi, cleaning up the mess they made while cooking.

Jeevika: Mannu, tu yeh sab rehne de, yeh sab main aur Chachiyan sambhal lenge, tu jaa Viren ji, Vayansh, aur Viraat ko bula la.

Maanvi: Main help karti hun na Di.
Kadambari Chachi: Oye Maanvi, jaa na, hum hai na.

Pinky Chachi: Haan Maanvi meri Bacchi, jaa.
Maanvi: Ok.

Maanvi washed her hands and started walking towards Viraat's room, and stopped when she heard Viraat saying 'Bachelor Party'.

Viraat: Ok then, kab hoga yeh Bachelor Party?

Viren: Hmm...Kya lagta hai Vayansh?
Vayansh: Aaj?
Viren & Viraat: Aaj?
Vayansh: Haan, aaj, kal se toh shadi ki taiyaariyan shuru ho jayeingi, toh aaj.
Viren: Haan.
Viraat: Par itne kam samay mein sab kaise hoga?

Viren: Tum fikar mat kar. (smiles) Hum sab sambhal leinge.

Viraat: Ok. Par iss ghar mein ladies ko pata nahi lagna chahiye, sirf hum. (extended his hand in front of Viren and Vayansh) Deal?
Vayansh: (places his hand on Viraat's) Deal.
Viren: (places his hand on Viraat's) Done.

Maanvi: (to herself/angerily) Bechlor Party? Woh bhi hume bina bataye? Dekhti hun Bacchu, kaise mannate ho tum yeh Bachelor Party, tumhari party kharab nahi kardi toh mera bhi naam Maanvi Chaudhary nahi.

Maanvi, without calling the boyz, went running towards the kitchen, to tell the news to Jeevika and the Chachi's about the Vadhera Boys/Vayansh's plan of doing a Bachelor Party... WITHOUT THEM.


Okk..so hwz it...?? I knw its vry long...I really hope u guyz lykd it...Plz leave ur comments and hit lyk if u lykd it..Sorry if I made ne mistaks..Thnk U...Tc...Luv Aartii...

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Edited by Artii159 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ME FIRST!! :D

Awesome Update Girl..!
Really loved it!
:)
Thanks for d PM :D
Edited by ..Lavi.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey Aarti
firstly heartly congratulation 4 reaching 100 pages 👏
now back to update
it was sweet and amazing
i liked the whole but most of it I liked the sequence where virat is romancing with manvi...
thanx 4 d pm dear
waiting 4 ur next part... update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
HEY AWESOME PART DEAR... Ahhh finally u updated.. i was waiting like mad... it was more than amazing... as usuall virat manvi scene was awesome.. the way virat manvi proposed eachother was superb... the words of manvi while proposing was awesome... felt bad 4 vayansh.. he is superb... he is the sole reason y virat n manvi r together... the way u portrayed the emoyions of virman was beyond words...😊😊... waoo BACHELORS PARTY... n manvi heard it all... plz add some scenes like virat enjoying dancing with girls... manvi sees it.. she becomes angry n hurt... n then ruthna of manvi n manana of virat will be amazing... plz yr m dying to read such scenes plz add these types of scenes😭😭... plz update ASAP... thnx 4 the pm... m eagerly waiting 4 ur update... looking forward to it... plz think of my suggession.. i must say it will become amazing... plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its damn awesome yar...loves there cute romantice moments n there proposel to each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update yr ,
the proposing scene was written so beautifully dear .
loved it .
thanks for the pm .
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was superbbb... i alwys frgt to mention about sneha.. frm day 1 u introduced her character, im loving her charactr.. i often wonder how can such a cute lady be frnd of Swamini..?? anyway i love the way she is attachd to her son...😊.. keep updating.. nd thanks fr pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME too good yaar loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Congrats for reaching 100 pages!!!
Loved the update!!
It was super!!
Virman proposal scene was amazing!!
Beautifully written!!
Eagerly waiting 4 the next update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update...its so sweet of virman. both proposing each other is gr8. .loved d way virat gave difrnt names to manvi while kissing. .want to see such scene in show also. .thanks 4 pm n cont soon

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