VirMan..FF Kuch Is Tarah...Part 32 pg 136+Note - Page 83

Originally posted by: niasharma6

loved the part amazing. update soon

Thnk u sooo muchhh...will update soon..😊

Originally posted by: Kanwal_chohan

Lol the morning convo was awesome loved how manvi didn't care
What people would think about get but she thought about virat
Loved the pacifying session beautiful update thanks for the pm
Continue soon and do pm me

Thnk u soo much...ur most wc...glad u lykd it...will continue soon n pm u..😊

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Wow yaar awesome...

Thanks for the PM...

Cant wait for your next update and PM..

Thnk u so much,..n ur most wc...will update soon n pm u..😊

Originally posted by: nishal310

wow yaar artii that was an amazing part. love the convo between beeji and virat. and manvi's outburst on virat was amzing. love the dialogue when manvi said "PAYAAR MUJHSE KARTE HO AUR CHIPAKTE KISI AUR SE HO" really yaar it was a wonderfull update. thanks for the pm and cont soon

Thnk u sooo muchhh...m glad dat u lykd it...ur most wc n will continue soon..😊

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Originally posted by: cutiepie2244

Aaahhh finally u updated yupiiieee... First of all tthank u sooo muccchhh that u kept my suggession n worked on it... n i must say that u beautifully portrayed my suggession n it was damn damn awesome...😊😊

~Thnk u sooo muchh n ur most welcum...I tried my best 2 work on ur suggestion, m really glad u lykd it...😊

Back 2 the update it was as usuall fantastic,, fabulous,, super duper update... loved it sooo muccchhh... starting was sooo cutteee... scene of VIRMAN in starting was damn sweet... awww loved virat's concern 4 maanvi...😊😊...

~THNK U THNK U THNK U THNK U SOOO MUCHHH...😊

Hahhahahah virat teasing maanvi... the way he said ( vo actually kal raat humare beech buhat kuch hua) hahhahahah i was smilling like a mad litterally while reading this line...

~Glad I made u smile..😊

When maanvi went to change the ways virat said ( ab aap hi kuch kro is sherni ko manane main)... i just loved ur each n every dialogue...

~Thnk u soo muchhh..😊


Convo b/w virat n jeevika was sooo sweet... maanvi ko manane ka style which virat used was chhhooo chweeet... loved it sooo mucchhh...

~Thnks sweety...glad u luvd it..😊

hawww chachu is very bad... he told that he was doing that... bechara virat... hahhahahha maanvi glaring at virat n giving deadly look... ufff ktna hansaogi yr... 😛😛...

~Hehe...chalo, aap hasi toh meri update se..😛😊

Hhahahah virat threw the whole blame on viren he is the reason this all mess has happen... bechare virat k saath viren b phans gya... both VV BROS felt bad 4 both😛😛... Convo b/w virat n BB was awesome... when virat said ( bari beej ek bat tou btana,, ap mjhe usse manane k ideas de rae ho ya phr indirectly yeh batane ki koshish kar rae ho k use manana impossible hai)...

~M so glad u lykd their conversation...Thnks...😊


Awww dialogue of virat was sooo cute n sweet ( Bari Beeji plz na, kuch kijiye na,, me us se bat kiye bina ek pal b nae reh skta)... after reading this i was like awww... he loves her sooo much...

~Thnk u once again...n yes he loves her more than nethin..

Aaahhh now they both will not b in talking terms with eachother... what will b the result of this fight???? i think maanvi's ego will not allow her to talk with her...

~U'll c dat soon dear...

Han esa hi hona chahiye ek tou dance kiya dusri larkiyon k saath uper se manane k bajae bat e nae krega... m saying don't let maanvi easily forgive her... chun chun k badle lena maanvi... hahahhahahaahhahaha sorry i think kuch zyada e hogya... vo kya hain me apne ap ko maanvi ki jaga rakh kr dekh rae thi... sorry 4 that hahahahhaha...😛😛...

~Lol, its k, wen I was writing dis I was imagining myself on Maanvi's place..😛

I will also tell u don't let maanvi to forgive virat easily ok na?????? ahhahahaahhahah...

~Dn't worry, I won't let Maanvi forgive him so soon, even if she does, she will definitely not let him knw...n deres more fun...punishment toh milni chahiye na, Maanvi Chaudhary se panga liya hai Viraat ne..LOL...😆😛

OOOhhh ok dats it 4 today... my fingers are hell paining but not to worry itna tou me apni best buddy k liye kar e skti hun...

~Aww..Thnk u so much sweety...for such a LONG comment...dat means a lot 2 me...Thnks a lot..🤗

I loved each n every dialogue of this update... it was damn awesome... Loved it 2 the core...

~Thnk u sooo muchhh...m sooo happy rite nw..😊

In the end i will only say that it was a lovely update... love u 4 that sweety...

~Thnk u soo muchh...god, so many thnks, well u really deserve dat...😊

Yr my image sharer is not working properly thats y i didn't uploaded any image... i thought 2 give u many pics 4 the treat but what to do with my image sharer😡😡...

~No prob sweety, wateva u wrote was really sweet..

Really sorry 4 that... but next time i will give u many pics... ok now bye love u 4 the amazing update...
Plz dear continue ASAP...😊😊

~Will definitely update soon,,,Thnks once again 4 reading n giving such a cute/sweet feed back...😊😊😊

Originally posted by: huma030195

WAH!! kya likthi ho aap ive read all the parts n omg ur jus too gud the way the story goes from happy to emotional n then happy again

i really luved the way u hav shown virman's unconditional love for each other tis damn sweet

n lolz manvi's drunken state awesomely written sooo cute

n i really want u to update this sooonn sooon sooon n very quickly really cnt wait for the update plz do it quickly

thanx for the pm😊😊😊

😊Thnk u soo much dear...dat means a lot..will continue asap...n ur most wc..thnks once again..😊

Hey guyz...new update, I hope u lyk it...thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments n lyks guyz...EnJoy..

VirMan...Kuch Iss Tarah...Part 28...

~Recap~

Badi Beeji left, leaving Viraat behind, who was smiling widely.

Viraat: Difficult hai, (smiles) par impossible nahi. Maanvi, ab toh tumhe mujhse baat karni hi hogi.

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Maanvi was walking towards her bedroom, when suddenly Viraat appeared out of nowhere. She looked at him with questioned eyes, while he was looking lost in his thoughts.

Viraat: (thinking) Abhi maafi maang leta hun, shayad maaf kar de.

He opened his mouth to say something, but stopped as Badi Beeji's words echoed in his ears.

Viraat: (thinking) Yeh kya karne jaa raha hai tu? Bhul gaya tujhe isse ignore karna hai.

Viraat looked at Maanvi for a while. Maanvi was shocked and confused as Viraat, grinned and started walking away, without even saying a word.

Maanvi: (thinking/confused) Yeh isse kya ho gaya? Main toh isse naraaz thi, yeh mujhse bina sorry kahe has ke chala gaya.

Viraat turned back towards Maanvi, still walking away from her, and saw her lost in her thoughts.

Viraat: (smiling widely/muttering to himself) Lagta hai Badi Beeji ka idea kuch asar dikha raha hai.

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Maanvi was in the kitchen with Jeevika and both the Chachis'.

Kadambari Chachi: (happily) Haye ni Jeevika, tumne dekha na tere Chachu ne kya kiya aaj mere liye. Main toh unse kal bahut hi naraz thi, unhone itna manaya par main maani hi nahi, (smiles) par aaj kya style se sorry bola hai unhone mujhe.
Jeevika: (smiles) Haan Chachi. (to herself) Bechara mera Devar.
Maanvi: Kash sab Chachu ki tarah hote Chachi.
Pinky Chachi: Hayo Rabba, Maanvi tune sahi kaha, sab aise nahi hote. Tere Chachu ko hi dekhlo.
Maanvi: (to herself) Chachu ki toh umar ho gayi hai, par Viraat. (angerily) Chep, Ullu, Bandar, surprises dena toh dur, maafi bhi nahi mangta agar galti karta hai toh. Ulta mujhe ignore karta hai.
Jeevika: Nahi Chachi, Chachu bhi romantic honge na jab aap dono ki shadi hone wali hogi.
Pinky Chachi: (frowns) Kahan Jeevika, woh toh aise hi the, dulhan se zyada toh khud sharma rahe the.
Maanvi: (surprised/laughs) Kya?
Pinky Chachi: Haan, woh toh jab mujhe pehli baar milne aaye the, toh ache se meri shakal bhi nahi dekhi thi.
Maanvi: (laughingly) Chachu itne sharmile the?
Pinky Chachi: (blushingly) Haan.
Kadambari Chachi: Tabhi main sochun, Dabbu itna sharmata kyun hai ladkiyon se.

All four of them laughed out loud as Viraat walked in the kitchen. Maanvi looked up at him, and saw a smirk on his face.

Jeevika: (looking at Viraat) Kuch chahiye tha tumhe Viraat?
Viraat: (looking at Jeevika) Nahi woh, (looking at Maanvi) bas pani, (looking at Jeevika again) main khud le lunga Bhabhi.

Viraat walked towards the refrigerator, he looked behind towards Maanvi, who was still looking at him confusedly. He turned back around with a smile, opened the door of the fridge and took out a bottle of cold water.

Viraat: (to himself) Please Maanvi, kuch toh bolo, tumhari awaaz suni hai mujhe. (drank the water, after pouring it in a glass)
Maanvi: (to herself) Tum mujhe ignore karoge? Thik hai Mr. Vadhera, karo ignore, par yeh mat samjhna ki main tumhe maaf karke, tumhari baahone mein daudti aajaungi.
Jeevika: Kya hua Mannu?

Viraat smiled as he thought that Maanvi would reply to Jeevika. Unfortunately, Maanvi just nodded her head negatively with a smile.

Viraat: (putting the bottle back in the fridge) Time hi kharab hai mera.

He gave one last look at Maanvi and walked out of the kitchen. Badi Beeji, who was sitting in the main hall, called Viraat as she saw him coming out of the kitchen.

Badi Beeji: Viraat?
Viraat: (walking towards her) Haan Badi B?
Badi Beeji: (whispering) Kya hua? Kuch baat bani?
Viraat: Abhi tak toh nahi, (smiles) par lagta hai asar shuru ho gaya hai.
Badi Beeji: (excitedly) Acha? Kuch kaha usne?
Viraat: (poutingly) Kahan Badi B, pichle paanch ghante se uski awaz nahi suni.
Badi Beeji: Arey, thoda aur intezar kar, jald hi sunloge.
Viraat: (smiles) Mujhe bhi aisa lagta hai Badi Beeji, app ko pata hai, jab maine usse ignore kiya, toh woh mujhe aise dekh rahi thi jaise main koi pagal hun.
Badi Beeji: (looking at him weirdly) Toh isme khush hone wali kaun si baat hai? Woh tumhe pagal samjhti hai!
Viraat: (sitting beside her) Arey Badi Beeji, aap samjhi nahi. Main aapko sab ache se samjhata hun. Maanvi apne kamre ki ore jaa rahi thi, utne mein main wahan pauch gaya. Maine usse dekh kar smile kiya aur bina kuch kahe wahan se jane laga. Jab maine mudh ke dekha toh woh mujhe dekh kar bahut confused lag rahi thi aur kuch soch rahi thi.
Badi Beeji: (smiles) Arey wah, matlab humara idea kaam kar raha hai?
Viraat: (smiles back) Haan Badi B.

The next moment they saw Maanvi coming out of the kitchen, she was looking at Viraat with a smirk on her face. Viraat was puzzled with her expression, wasn't she supposed to be confused, but no, he was the one, who looked more confused and surprised.

Maanvi: (to herself) Tumhe kya laga, tum mujhe ignore karoge, mujhse dur rahoge toh main sab bhul kar tumse fir baatein karne lagungi. Ya right Viraat, in your dreams, main un dusri ladkiyon jaisi nahi hun. Maanvi Chaudhary naam hai mera.

And she walked away, leaving Viraat and Badi Beeji looking at her way, confusedly.

Badi Beeji: (looking at Viraat) Tumne toh kaha tha asar ho raha hai, yeh Chudail toh tere ko hi beasar kar ke chali gayi.
Viraat: (saddly) Badi B, humara plan super flop hua.
Badi Beeji: Aise kaise ho gaya. Yeh idea toh hamesha kaam karta tha.
Viraat: Karta tha nahi, karta hai. Par aap kaise bhul gayi, ki yeh idea insaano par asar karta hai, Bandariya par nahi.
Badi Beeji: Kuch aur sochna padega.

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VirIka, Vayansh, Inder Chachu, and Viraat were sitting in the hall room. Viraat and Jeevika sitting together in one couch, while Inder Chachu, Viren, and Vayansh sat in the other couch, right infront of them.

Inder Chachu: Waise kuch bhi kaho, mujhe toh party mein bahut maza aaya.
Vayansh: (smiles) Haan, mujhe bhi bahut maza aaya.
Viren: (looking at Vayansh) Haan Beta, woh toh aaye ga hi, teri shadi jo nahi hui na abhi tak.
Viraat: Toh meri bhi kaunsi hui, fir bhi phas gaya na.
Vayansh: Hone toh wali hai.
Viren: Waise ek baat bahut bura hua.
Jeevika: (looking at Viren) Kya Viren ji?
Viren: (controlling his laughter) Yahi ki Biwiyan toh sabki naraaz hui, lekin apne Patiyon ko maaf kar diya unhone. Par bechara Viraat, Maanvi toh abhi uski Biwi bani bhi nahi hai aur sabse zyada gussa ussi ko aaya.
Inder Chachi: (laughingly) Haan, sahi kaha.
Viraat: (looking at them, annoyedly, yet cutely) Aap logo ko toh maza aa raha hai? Yahan meri jaan nikli jaa rahi hai bina usse baat kiye, aur aap log yahan mere hi maze le rahe hain. Wah.
Jeevika: (hand on his shoulder) Arey Devar ji, fikar not, sab thik ho jaye ga.
Vayansh: Haan Viraat, lekin hume maza toh bahut aaya, (laughingly) khaas kar woh Chachu aur Chachi ke scene dekh kar, mehnat kisi ki aur inaam kisika.

Viren, Inder Chachu, and Vayansh hi-5d, laughingly, while Jeevika was just contolling her laughter after looking at Viraat, who was looking at them angerily.

Viraat: (irritatedly) Haso haso, aur haso. Koi kasar mat chodhna.
Inder Chachu: Arey mujhe pata nahi tha na, ki woh sab tune kiya hai, woh toh baad mein pata chala. Aur sach bataun, Kadambari ko manate manate meri toh halat hi kharab ho gayi thi. Kaaju Kaaju kehte kehta main toh thak gaya tha. Itna acha mauka mila tha, haath se chodhne ka mann hi nahi kiya.
Viraat: Aapke Kaaju ke chakar mein meri wali toh aur gussa ho gayi na Chachu, ab toh baat bhi nahi kar rahi hai, 5 hours, 50 mintues aur 45 seconds ho gaye hai usse baat kiye huye.
Viren: (looking at Viraat, unbelievingly) Yaar, tu timing kar raha hai?
Viraat: Aur nahi toh kya? (looking at Viren) Yeh sab na, aapki wajha se huya hai, Bachelor Party. Arey Bachelor Party rakha toh rakha, usme ladkiyon ko bulane ki kya zarurat thi. (pouts) Ab band baj gayi na meri.
Vayansh: Arey relax Viraat, kuch din mein woh bhul jaiye gi.
Viraat: Kuch din? Do din mein meri shadi hai, aur meri dulhan mujhse naraz hai. Main wahan usse manane ke wajaye, yahan aap sab ke saath baith kar apni dukh bhari kahani suna raha hun. (places head on Jeevika's shoulder)
Inder Chachu: Senti mat ho na yaar. Galti ki hai toh saza toh milegi na.
Viraat: (moving up/looking at Chachu) Haan, ab aap toh yahi kahoge, Chachi naraz nahi hai na abhi.

Viren, Inder Chachu and Vayansh saw Maanvi descending the stairs, behind Viraat and Jeevika. They smiled at each other mischeviously and looked at a confused Viraat.

Viraat: Kya?
Viren: Waise Viraat sach batana, woh ladki kafi hot thi na?
Jeevika: (gasps) Virenji?

Viren looked at Jeevika and signalling her to look behind.

Vayansh: Haan, bahut achi dance bhi kar rahi thi. Haina Viraat?

Viraat was thinking about his imagination, when he was dancing with that girl. So basically he was thinking about HIS MAANVI.

Viraat: (smiles) Haan, hot thi toh bahut, aur dance bhi acha kar rahi thi.

Maanvi, who was standing behind Viraat, with her hands on her hips, was fuming in anger.
Inder Chachu: Haina, maine toh tarif bhi ki thi uski.

Viren: Bahut maza aaya na?
Jeevika: Viraat, woh...peeche...

Jeevika was trying to tell Viraat that Maanvi was standing behind them and listening to their conversation, but Viraat never looked back. While the other three were enjoying, but controlling their laughter at the same time.

Vayansh: Arey Bhabhi, hum sab toh aage baithe hai, peeche koi bhi nahi hai.
Viren: (looking at Jeevika) Haan Jeevika. (looking at Viraat) Viraat, batao na, maza aaya na tujhe?
Viraat: (smiles) Haan Bhai, it was nice.
Jeevika: (worriedly) Viraat peeche...
Viren: (cutting her off) Haan, agar wahan Jeevika, Maanvi, aur dono Chachi nahi aati toh hum aur bhi enjoy kar sakhte the.
Viraat: True Bhai, ab inko manane mein hi jaan sukh rahi hai.

Jeevika couldn't see her beloved Devar getting more in trouble. She turned back and looked at Maanvi.

Jeevika: Arey Mannu, tu?

Viraat looked at Jeevika with widen eyes, as he heard her saying Maanvi's name. He was frozen on his seat, only his eyes were moving from left to right.

Viren: (pretending to be surprised) Arey Maanvi, wahan kyun khadi ho? Yahan aao na.
Vayansh: (smiles at her) Haan, aao na Maanvi.
Inder Chachu: (smiles) Aao aao Maanvi.

Maanvi was just staring at Viraat, who's back was facing towards her. Viraat slowly moved, to face her. Her hands were still on her hips, while her eyes were full of anger, which was only on him.

Viraat: (without any sounds coming out of his mouth) Ma..Maa..Maa..
Viren: (hand on Viraat's shoulder) Viraat main help karta hun. (looking at Maanvi) Maanvi, Viraat Maanvi, matlab tumhara naam le raha hai.
Inder Chachu: Haan, maine bhi suna, shayad bechare ke gale mein kuch atak gaya hai.

Maanvi, angerily turned around and started walking towards her room. Viraat gave one last deadly glare at Viren, and Inder Chachu, as they started rolling on the couch while laughing their heart out, and followed Maanvi.

Viraat: Maanvi...
Jeevika: (giving a deadly glare at Viren) Viren Ji?
Viren: Sorry.
Vayansh: Sorry Bhabhi, just having fun.
Inder Chachu: Sorry Jeevika, hum toh bas uski khichai kar rahe the.

All three of them started laughing yet again.

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Viraat: (entering her room) Maanvi..meri baat...

Viraat stopped talking as Maanvi showed her palm to him, gesturing him to stop. Viraat was waiting for her to say something, but she didn't. She just turned her back towards him, as he looked at her confusedly.

Viraat: (cutely) Maanvi, I'm sorry. Maine neeche jo bhi kaha, woh sab tumhare liye tha.

Maanvi turned back towards him, with questioning eyes.

Viraat: Woh...(pleading with folded hands) Please Maaf Kar Do...Please.

Maanvi looked away from him.

Viraat: (turning her to face him) Maanvi, acha maaf mat karo, par mujhse baat toh karo, mujhe danton, jo chahiye woh kaho, par please aise chup mat raho. (pouting cutely) Ab toh 6 hours, 4 mintues and 26 seconds bhi ho gaye hai. Please.

Maanvi was trying hard not to smile in front of him, as he was looking so cute.

Viraat: Please, agar tum kaho toh main Bandar bhi ban jaunga. Agar tum kahogi ki main kisi bhi ladki ke saath dance na karun, toh main dance hi nahi, uski taraf dekhunga bhi nahi. Please Maanvi, please kuch toh bolo please.
Maanvi: (to herself) Nahi, Mannu, usse yeh mat pata lagne dena ki tune usse maaf kar diya hai. (smiling mentally) Thoda toh maze lena banta hai na, baar baar aisa mauka kahan milta hai.
Viraat: Please kuch toh bolo..Chep hi bol do...Please.
Maanvi: (arms folded acrossed her chest) Tum chahte ho ki main tumhe maaf kar dun?
Viraat: (smiles widely) Haan..
Maanvi: (walking away) Toh thik hai, main tumhe maaf kar dungi. Par ek shart par.
Viraat: (walking towards her) Manzur hai.
Maanvi: (turns towards him) Sun toh lo kya shart hai.
Viraat: Um..Haan, bolo.
Maanvi: Main tumhe maaf tabhi karungi, jab tum mujhe sab se pehle aa kar mehndi aur haldi lagao ge. Aur agar...agar kisi aur ne mujhe pehle haldi ya mehndi lagayi, toh main tumhe maaf nahi karungi, aur shadi ki pehli raat tum Jiju ke saath unke kamre mein bitaoge. (smiles) Manzur hai?
Viraat: (looking at her shockedly/surprised) Maanvi, yeh kaisa shart hai? Yeh dono toh ladies function hai. Agar mujhse pehle kisine tumhe haldi ya mehndi laga di toh main kya karunga?
Maanvi: Woh tumhe sochna hai. Tum kya karoge kya nahi, mujhe nahi pata.
Viraat: (worriedly) Par Maanvi, ladies function mein kaise...
Maanvi: Keh toh aise rahe ho jaise kabhi gatecrash kiya hi na ho ladies function mein. Yaad hain mujhe Di ki mehndi. Aur mujhe pata hai, main chahiye yeh shart rakhun ya nahi, tum wahan zarur aaoge.
Viraat: (looking at her/cutely) Maanvi agar Dadaji, ya Buaji ko pata chal jaye ga toh woh mujhe kha jaiyein ge.
Maanvi: Thik hai, mat maano meri shart, rehna apne Bhai ke saath apni shadi ki pehli raat ko. Arey ek aur punishment toh batana bhul hi gayi, (smiles) main tumse ek hafte tak baat bhi nahi karungi. Its up to you Viraat.
Viraat: Nahi Nahi Nahi Nahi...Manzur hai, tumhari har shart manzur hai.
Maanvi: (smiles) Very Good Boy.

Maanvi happily walked out of her room, leaving a confused and worried Viraat behind, lost in his own thoughts.


Ok, so I dn't knw wat I was thinking,,so if u find dis boring or lame, plz 4give me...n plz do leave ur comments 4 me...Thnk u..tc..Luv Aarti...


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