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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvVirManNiShal

Pain Beautifully Expressed
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello lovely people...m bck wid another update...plz dn't hate me, dis update is also sad types, but i promise, pakka wala promise dat VirMan will b 2gether real soon...till den...NJOY..

~VirMan...Kuch Iss Tarah...Part 22...

~Recap~

Viren, Jeevika, Vanshika Maa, and Badi Beeji's eyes filled with tears, as they saw Viraat facing his back towards them and Maanvi holding back her tears. Viraat turned around his head towards Maanvi, after wiping his tears off, smiled, with tear filled eyes, and walked away. Giving her more difficulties in controlling her emotions, in front of her soon-to-be-in-laws and family members.

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Everyone was still in the main hall, except Viraat, congratulating Maanvi and Vayansh.

Swamini Bua: (excitedly) Bauji, hum abhi Pandit ji ko yahan bula lete hai, Viraat Maya, aur Maanvi Vayansh ki shadi ki tareek bhi nikalni hai na.

Dadaji: Haan Swamini Beta, tum unhe yahan abhi bula lo.

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Viraat was called down at the main hall as the Pandit came to fix their wedding date. Viraat sat beside Maya, as Swamini Bua insisted, while Maanvi sat beside Vayansh.

Pandit Ji: (looking at the horoscopes/smiles) Maanvi aur Viraat ki shadi toh kabhi bhi kar sakhte hai, yeh dono ek dusre ke liye hi bane hain.

Maanvi and Viraat looked up at each other, while Maya and Vayansh looked up at Pandit ji with a shocked expression.

Swamini Bua: Arey nahi nahi Pandit ji, shadi Viraat aur Maanvi ki ho rahi hai, par ek dusre se nahi. Viraat ki shadi Maya se ho rahi hai aur Maanvi ki shadi Vayansh se.

Vayansh turned his face towards Maanvi, who was looking at Viraat with teary eyes, and felt something is wrong between her and Viraat. Maanvi looked down at the floor as she felt Vayansh gaze on her, but Viraat was unable to move his gaze away from her face.

Pandit ji: Oh maaf kijiye ga, woh maine socha, Viraat aur Maanvi ki shadi ho rahi hai.
Dadaji: Koi baat nahi Pandit ji.

Pandit ji: Maya aur Viraat ki shadi ka mahurat, agle hafte ka hai, uske baad mein koi shubh mahuraat nahi hai.
Swamini Bua: Agle hafte? Agle hafte mein yeh sab kaise hoga? Aur koi mahurat nahi hai Pandit ji?
Pandit ji: Hai par Saath(7) saal baad ka.
Swamini Bua: Acha? Thik hai, mere khayal se agle hafte hi sab karna padega. Maya tumhe koi problem toh nahi hai na?
Maya: (smiles) Nahi Buaji, mujhe koi problem nahi hai.
Sneha: Maya, tumhara koi rishtedaar nahi hai kya?
Maya: (gulped) Ji..Ji nahi..nahi..main aanath(orphan) hun.
Sneha: Oh I am sorry.
Maya: (smiles nervously) No problem Aunty.
Swamini Bua: Ab tum aanath nahi ho Maya, hum hai na.
Maya: Ji Bua ji.
Dadaji: Arey ab Vayansh aur Maanvi ki bhi kundali(horoscope) milao.
Pandit ji: In dono ki shadi is mahine mein kisi bhi tareek par ho sakhti hai.
Vivek: Toh taiye raha, Vayansh, Viraat, Maanvi, aur Maya ki shadi agle hafte hi hogi.
Sneha: Tum teeno ko mazur hai?

Vayansh, Maanvi, and Viraat nodded their head in approval, with a smile.

Beeji: Par yeh sab kaise hoga, Roka, Sagai, Mata ki Chauki, Mehndi, Sangeet, aur Shadi, ek saath ek hafte mein?
Viren: Aap fikar mat karo Beeji, sab ho jayega.
Inder Chachu: Kyun na hum aaj Roka karle, aur kal Sagai? Roka mein sirf hum gharwale rahegein, aur kal engagement mein hum kuch logo ko invite karlein gein.
Dadaji: Haan yeh theek rahega. Chalo sab taiyaariya karte hain, Roke ki.

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~Guest House~

Vayansh was lying on his bed, his head resting on his Mom's lap, while she lovingly caressed his hair. Vayansh loved his mother, he loved her the most in this whole world, and shared each and every detail with her. She was not just his mother, but his friend, best friend.

Sneha: Ab uth jao Beta, Roke ke liye taiyaar nahi hona hai kya?
Vayansh: (looking at Sneha) Mom...aapko...Maanvi pasand hai?
Sneha: (smiles) Of course Beta, bahut hi pyaari bacchi hai, jitni sundar, utni hi samjhdaar. Par tu aisa kyun puch raha hai? (worriedly) Tujhe woh pasand nahi hai kya?
Vayansh: (sits on the bed) No Mom, aisa kuch nahi hai, I really like her. Infact, I think I'm in love with her. Jab maine usse pehli baar dekha, toh aisa laga ki yahi hai woh, jiski mujhe hamesha se intezaar tha.
Sneha: (teasingly) Acha ji, toh mere pagal Bete ko pyaar ho gaya hai, woh bhi love at first sight.
Vayansh: (smiles/lost in his own world) Mom, jab maine usse dekha, toh mujhe uski aanhon mein jitna dard dikha, utni hi khushi dekhi. Jitna akelapan dikha, utna hi pyaar dikha, aisa lagta hai ki uski aankhein mujhse kuch kehna chahti hai, par woh keh nahi paa rahi. Jab woh smile karti hai, toh aisa lagta hai ki maano jaise iss duniya mein kabhi roshni ki kami nahi hogi. Par wahi muskurahat usski aansu ke picche chup jaati hai. Ek pal mein aisa lagta hai ki jaise, usse zyada khush iss duniya mein koi nahi hai, par dusre hi pal mein aisa lagta hai ki usse zyada akela aur dukhi insan kahin ho hi nahi sakhta.
Sneha: Aur kya dikha?
Vayansh: Mom, main yahan koi kahani suna raha hun kya?
Sneha: Kahani toh hai, mujhe nahi pata tha ki mera Beta ek hi nazaar mein kisi se itna pyaar kar baithe ga, pyaar toh chodho, uski aankhe tak padh lega.
Vayansh: Uski aankhen padhna bahut hi aasan hai Mom, par usse padhne ke liye aapko usse samjhna hoga. Usse mehsus karna hoga.
Sneha: Acha, toh aap yeh kehna chahte hai ki Mr. Vayansh Malhotra, very successful businessman, jo apni filon se aankhein nahi hatata tha, aaj woh ek ladki ki ankhe padhne laga.
Vayansh: Of oh Ma...in sab mein meri business kahan se aa gayi?
Sneha: Wah, ladki mili nahi ki business ko bhul gaya...(ruffling his hair) I'm proud of you mera Baccha.
Vayansh: (irritatedly moves back) Mom, please, aapko kitni baar kaha hai, i don't like it when someone touches my hair.
Sneha: (smirks) Acha, aur agar Maanvi hoti toh..??
Vayansh: (blushes) Toh..
Sneha: (hits him with a pillow) Acha bacchu, maine kiya toh gussa, aur Maanvi ka naam liya toh sharma rahe ho.
Vayansh: Mom, you are getting old ok, you won't understand.
Sneha: Oye What OLD? Main abhi bhi young hun samjhe. (hits on his head sightly) Aur ab chal uth, tere chakkar mein main taiyaar nahi hun, ab uth aur taiyaar ho ja, warna ladki jaaye gi haath se. Main chalti hun..

Sneha left Vayansh's room, leaving him lost in Maanvi's thoughts.

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~Main Hall~

Everyone was gathered around Viraat-Maya, Vayansh-Maanvi for their Roka, who were sitting on the couch. Maanvi and Viraat looked at each other, love and pain still visible in their eyes.

Vayansh: (whisperes to Maanvi) Waise aap..i mean tum bahut achi lag rahi ho.
Maanvi: (smiles at him) Thank you.
Vayansh: (smirks) Main bura lag raha hun kya?
Maanvi: Ji..ji nahi. Aap bhi...ache lag rahein hain.
Sneha: Dulhe Raja, baad mein meri Bahu ki tarif kar lena, abhi rasam shuru karein?
Vayansh: (blushes) Of course.

Jeevika and Sneha walked towards Viraat-Maya, Maanvi-Vayansh with aarti ki thali in their hands. Jeevika, with teary eyes looked at Viraat, and did his and Maya's tikka, aarti, and gave them shagun as Sneha did the same with Maanvi and Vayansh.

Jeevika: (hand on Viraat head) Bhagwaan kare, tumhe tumhari zindagi mein woh sab miley, jo tum chahte ho. (to Maya) Aur tumhe woh miley jo tum deserve karti ho.

Maya looked up at Jeevika and forced a smile at her blessings, she knew the exact meaning behind it. Maanvi looked at Jeevika, as Vanshika Maa looked at Viraat helplessly.

Sneha: (smiles/hands on Maanvi's head) Bhagwaan kare, tumhe woh sab miley, jo hamesha se tumhara tha, tumhari khushi. (hands on Vayansh's head) Aur tumhe kya ashirwaad dun? Tumne aaj tak jo manga hai woh hasil kiya hai?
Vivek: Haan, dekho ladki bhi mil gayi hai.

Everyone laughed at Vayansh, who was blushing.

Sneha: Bhagwaan kare ki tum aise hi muskuraate raho, tumhari khushi kabhi tumse dur na ho.

Maya: (to herself/smiles evilly) Roka toh ho gaya, kal engagement aur fir shadi. Wah Maya, tu ek hafte mein iss ghar ki Bahu bann jayegi.

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It was evening, everyone was already at the Vadhera House for Viraat-Maya, Vayansh-Maanvi's Engagement. Viraat, Viren, and Vayansh, were already down in the main hall, waiting for Jeevika, and Maanvi...well about Maya,,no one really cared beside Swamini Bua. Maanvi and Maya walking down the stairs with Jeevika in between them. Maanvi was looking drop dead gorgeous, in her blue lehenga choli, hair left open, with matching jewelries. Viraat smiled as he saw Maanvi walking towards them, smile playing on her lips, her one smile, made all his pain vanish in a second.

Maanvi's Outfit: https://www.fashionfashion.org/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/Lehenga-Choli-Bridal-Collection-2012-182.jpg
Jeevika's Outfit: https://www.junglee.com/Bondi-Embroidered-Lehenga-Style-Saree/dp/B006L0YO32
Maya's Outfit:https://besthomedecorators.com/latest-designer-lehenga-choli-collection-2010-in-puce-red-color/sareez.files.wordpress.com*2010*08*37ll1018_m_lehenga.jpg/
Viren's Sherwani: https://laroyal.net/Wedding-Sherwani-Indo-Western-Suit-for-Groom-G330-P1703725.aspx
Viraat's Sherwani: https://kurtasherwani.files.wordpress.com/2012/07/eden-robe-wedding-sherwani-designs-for-men-71.jpg
Vayansh's Sherwani: https://laroyal.net/Indian-Pakistani-Embroidery-Designer-Groom-Wedding-Sherwani-SHW0046-P2573122.aspx


Sneha walked up to Maanvi, and placed a small black spot behind her ears.

Sneha: Tum bahut hi pyaari lag rahi ho Maanvi Beta. Tumhe kisi ki nazar na lage.
Maanvi: (smiles) Thank you Aunty.
Sneha: Beta, main tumhari Aunty nahi, Maa hun, mujhe Maa kaho jaise Vayansh kehta hai, (placed her hand on her face) hmmm...ab chale?
Maanvi: Ji

All four of them walked towards The Vadhera Boyz and Vayansh. Maya walked towards Viraat's side and stood next to him, while Vayansh extended his hand for Maanvi. Maanvi looked at him and then at Viraat, who's smiled vanished as he saw Maya beside him and Maanvi away from him. Maanvi forced a smile and place her hand into Vayansh's as Jeevika walked up to Viren.

Jeevika: (whisperes to Viren) Hum kuch nahi kar paaye Virenji, aur na hi shayad kar paye gein?
Viren: (wraps his arm around her shoulder) Hum kar bhi kya sakhte hai, jab yeh dono hi yeh shadi ke liye taiyaar hai toh..
Vivek: Arey, aaj sagai hai aur aap sab aise khade ho?
Kadambari Chachi: Haye ni, main bhi same to same soch rahi thi.
Pinky Chachi: Toh kya kare?
Sneha: Maine suna hai ki Viraat bahut acha gaata hai?
Swamini Bua: Arey Sneha, tumne bilkul sahi suna, humara Viraat bahut hi acha gaata hai.
Sneha: Acha? Tumhe pata hai, Vayansh bhi acha gaata hai...toh kyun na hum in dono se apni apni hone wali Patni ke liye ya (looking at Vayansh/smirks) Pyaar ke liye gaana gavaye?
Vayansh: MOM?
Vivek: That sounds really interesting..maine aaj tak apne Bete ko gaate huye nahi suna, hamesha apne Ma ke samne hi gaata hai, aaj sunlunga, very good idea.
Viraat: Please, I'm sorry mujhe koi gaana nahi gaana.
Sneha: Arey aise kaise nahi gaana Beta, tumhari engagement hai, ek gaana toh banta hai na.
Viraat: Sorry Aunty, main aaj nahi gaa paunga.
Swamini Bua: Viraat, woh itna keh rahi hai toh ek gaana gaa hi sakhte ho.
Viren: Viraat...ek gaana.
Viraat: Bhai, I really can't...
Maya: (holds his hand) Viraat please gaado na, mere liye.

Viraat pulls his hand away from her grip and looked away from her.

Vanshika Ma: Viraat..
Viraat: (looking straight into Vanshika Maa's eyes) Maa please...
Maanvi: Viraat...

Viraat looked at Maanvi, as she called his name...her voice sounded like music to him. When she called his name, he could feel the love she held for him in her voice.

Maanvi: Please, ek gaana...

Vayansh looked at Maanvi, then at Viraat. He saw something in their eyes for each other, but didn't understand what it was. He was more confused as he saw Viraat smiled and nodded his head possitively.

Sneha: Arey wah, very good, meri Bahu toh kisi ko bhi mana sakhti hai.

Badi Beeji: (smiles) Chalo Viraat, (looking at Maanvi) apne pyaar ke liye, ek gaana suna do.
Vivek: Haan haan chalo shuru ho jao.

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Viraat stood there, playing his guitar with closed eyes, while Vayansh stood next to Viraat, looking at Maanvi with a smile on his face.

Viraat: (eyes still closed/thinking about Maanvi/smiles) Meri kismat ke, har ek panne pe, mere jeete ji, baad marne ke, mere har ek kal, har ek lamhe mein, (opened his eyes/looking straight at Maanvi) tu likh de mera usse...
Vayansh: (walking around the hall) Har kahani mein, saare kison mein, dil ki duniya ke, sacche rishton mein, (stands in front of Maanvi, 3 feets away, sideways) zindagani ke, saare hison mein, (turns his face towards Maanvi/smiles) tu likh de mera usse...
Viraat: (turns his back towards Maanvi/handed his guitar to someone else) Aye khuda, aye khuda...(looking at Maanvi, over his shoulder, from the corner of his eyes) Jab bana uska hi bana...
Vayansh: (walks towards Maanvi) Aye khuda, aye khuda...(held his hand out to Maanvi) Jab bana uska hi bana...

Maanvi unwillingly, placed her hand in Vayansh's. He walked in the middle of the hall with her, holding her hand in his. Maanvi's heart skipped a beat as Vayansh placed his right hand on her waist, while his other hand held onto her right hand. She placed her left hand on his shoulder, as they started moving slowly on the music. Viraat stood there, looking at Maanvi, who was avoiding his gaze.

Viraat: (still looking at her) Uska hun, us mein hun, usse hun ussi ka, (Maanvi looked up at him) rehne de...(gives her a painful smile) Main toh pyaasa hun hai dariya, woh zariya woh jeene, ka mere...
Vayansh: (looking at Maanvi's face, lovingly/swaying) Mujhe ghar de, gali de, shehar de ussi ke, naam ke...(twrils her around once/resumed swaying) Kadam yeh chale ya ruke ab ussi ke, vaaste...
Viraat: (smiles/walking around Vayansh-Maanvi) Dil mujhe de agar, (looking at Maanvi) dard de uska par...


Maanvi smiles back at Viraat, as she saw everyone looking at them.

Vayansh: Uski ho woh hasin, gunje jo mera ghar...

Maanvi bumped into Viraat, as she excused herself from Vayansh and started walking towards Jeevika.

Viraat: (looking straight into her eyes/smiles) Aye khuda, aye khuda...
Vayansh: (turns his face towards VirMan) Jab bana uska hi bana...(smiles) Aye khuda, aye khuda...

Viraat held Maanvi's hand, as she was about to walk away. She turned and saw Viraat, looking at her longingly.

Viraat: Jab bana uska hi bana...

Maanvi looked deeply into Viraat's eyes, as he placed her hands on his shoulder, and his hands around her bare waist. His touch burned against her skin, she felt like she was on fire, she actually felt the pain that he was going through all this time, seeing her with someone else. He smiled as he started swaying her, holding her as close as she was with someone else just minutes ago. He tried everything in order to control himself, but all seems to go in vain, just the thought of her being away from him killed him inside out, then how could he control himself when he actually saw her going away from him...with someone else. No one overreacted at their closeness as they thought that they were just best of friend, dancing won't do any harm right? Except for four people, who knew what VirMan were going through..but theres nothing that they could do..they were helpless.

Vayansh: (lost in Maanvi's beauty) Mere hisse ki khushi, ko hasin ko tu chahe, aadha kar...
Viraat: (looking into her eyes) Chahe lele tu meri zindagi par yeh mujhse, vaada kar...
Vayansh: (walking towards Sneha/still looking at Maanvi) Uske ashkon, pe gumon pe, dukhon pe har uske, zakhm par...
Viraat: (looking at her face/moves some strands of hair behind her ears) Haq mera hi rahe har jagah, har ghadi haan, umar bhar...
Vayansh: (hugs his mom from backwards/smiles) Ab fakht ho yahi, (looking at Maanvi) woh rahe mujh mein hi...

Maanvi controlled herself, moved out of Viraat's grip and starts walking towards Jeevika.

Viraat: (looking at Maanvi, walking away) Ho juda kehne ko, bichdde na par kabhi...
Vayansh: (walks in front of Maanvi) Aye khuda, aye khuda...(looking at Maanvi/smiles) Jab bana uska hi bana...
Viraat: (standing behind Maanvi) Aye khuda, aye khuda...(looking at Maanvi, as she turned around) Jab bana uska hi bana...
Vayansh: (smiles/looking down) Meri kismat ke, har ek panne pe...
Viraat: (looking up) Mere jeete ji, baad marne ke...
Vayansh: (turns his face towards Maanvi) Mere har ek kal har ek lamhe mein...
Viraat: (looking at Maanvi) Tum likh de mera usse...


Maanvi was standing in the middle, looking down the floor, between Vayansh and Viraat looking at her direction.

O... aye khuda
Aye khuda khuda khuda
O... khuda...


Everyone clapped as they finished singing the song.

Kadambari Chachi: Haye ni, kya awaaz hai dono ki...Viraat, tum toh mere top hope toh ho hi, par oye teri Vayansh tum toh kamaal ke nikle. Perfect hai ji perfect.
Vayansh: Thank you Aunty.
Vivek: Awesome job you two, aaj main pehli baar tum dono ko gaate huye suna hai, Vayansh mera khud ka Beta hai, aur aaj main pehli baar uski awaaz sun raha hun. (looking at Maanvi/smiles) Yeh sab tumhari wajha se hua hai Beta, warna yeh Maa Bete mujhe alag hi kar dete hai, par ab aisa nahi hoga, meri pyaar si Bahu jo aa rahi hai humare ghar.
Sneha: Bas kijiye aap. (looking at Swamini Bua) Ab sagai ki rasam shuru karein?
Swamini Bua: Haan, chalo...
Viraat: Um Tarun, mujhe pani chahiye please, mere liye ek glass pani laa do.

Tarun handed Viraat a glass of water, Maanvi-Vayansh, and Maya-Viraat stood in the middle of the hall. Sneha handed Vayansh and Maanvi the rings, Vayansh took the ring in his hand and was about to slide it into her finger, they heard something break. Everyone turned their attention towards Viraat, who's left hand was bleeding due to the glass he was holding so tighlty. Maanvi didn't move an inch, she was just looking at his bleeding hand. She wanted to ran towards him and slap him for hurting himself, for hurting her, but she couldn't...she couldn't even move seeing him like that. Vanshika Maa was the first one who ran towards her Son, with teary eyes.

Vanshika Maa: (teary eyes) Viraat...yeh...
Viraat: (showing his right hand palm to her) Main thik hun Maa, aapko chinta karne ki zarurat nahi hai.
Maya: Viraat, tumhare haath se..
Viraat: (sternly) Sirf khoon hai Maya...aur kuch nahi..(looking at Vayansh) Aap please (looking at Maanvi) anguthi pahenaiye.
Swamini Bua: Maanvi, tum Vayansh ko anguthi(ring) pehna do.

Maanvi just looked at Swamini Bua, then at Vayansh, she raised her hand and slide the ring into his finger. Vayansh looked at Maanvi as he was about to slide the ring into her finger...something told him that she didn't belong here, she belongs to somewhere else...but where??? He held her left hand in his and tried sliding the ring into her finger, which was very tight.

Sneha: Arey, aise kaise ho gaya? Humne toh ache se naap(measurement) li thi..
Badi Beeji: (smiles) Bhagwaan ki marzi ke khilaf kuch nahi hota, woh jo karte hai,
soch samjh kar karte hain. Vayansh Beta, tum Maanvi ke dusri ungli(finger) mein anguthi pehna do.
Vayansh: (smiles at Badi Beeji/little confused) JI..

Vayansh held her hand and slide the ring into her little finger.

Swamini Bua: Chalo Maya, tum bhi Viraat ko anguthi pehna do.

Jeevika handed Viraat and Maya the rings, Viraat forwarded his right hand as his left hand was bleeding, she slide the ring into his finger as she had no other choice. Then he slided the ring into Maya's finger.

Viraat: Ho gayi sagai, everyone enjoy...(walking towards the stairs)
Viren: Viraat...

Viraat didn't responed to anyone and left towards his room, while Maanvi was looking at the blood that was on the floor.

Vanshika Maa: Viren, tum jaa kar dekho na, Viraat apne aap patti nahi kar paiye ga, usse dard ho raha hoga.
Viren: Maa relax, main jaa kar dekhta hun. (left)

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Guest started to leave, as they blessed the couple (Vayansh-Maanvi) and Maya. Maanvi just wanted to run towards Viraat's room, but she couldn't...she was engaged with someone else. She saw Viren coming down the stairs towards Vanshika Maa, who was looking at him with teary eyes.

Vanshika Maa: Kya hua Viren? Woh thik toh hai na? Usne patti karli? (shaking him) Bolo na Viren.
Viren: Maa, woh kisi se baat nahi karna chahta hai, usne patti karne se bhi mana kar diya.
Jeevika: Main dekhti hun..
Viren: Nahi Jeevika, woh abhi kuch bhi sunne ke halat mein nahi hai. (looking at Maanvi) Usse sirf ek hi insaan samjha sakhta hai...wohi sambhal sakhti hai usse.
Jeevika: (looked at Maanvi/teary eyes) Woh khud ko kaise sambhal rahi hai, hum mein se koi nahi janta, woh kisi aur ko kya sambhal sakhti hai Viren ji.

Vanshika Maa looked at Maanvi, she saw the pain in her eyes for her Son, the love in her eyes for her Viraat. Maanvi was not able to control herself anymore, she excused herself and walked upstairs towards Viraat's room. She opened the door and saw Viraat sitting on his bed, looking at his hand. She closed the door behind her and locked it, she walked towards his drawer and took out the first aid box. Viraat still didn't knew that there was someone in his room, he was so lost looking at his wounded hand. Maanvi walked towards him and sat beside him, he turned his head towards her, as he felt someones hand on his shoulder. He smiled through his tears as he saw her holding his hand in hers, cleaning his cut silently, tears streaming down her cheeks.

Viraat: (smiling through his tears) Maanvi..
Maanvi: (crying) Chup karo tum..pagal ho kya Chep? Aisa koi karta hai bhala? Jaan nikal di thi meri tumne. Kya zarurat thi yeh sab karne ki, kuch ho jaata toh mera kya hota, socha hai tumne kabhi?
Viraat: (pouts) Chep? Tumne mujhe fir se Chep kaha?
Maanvi: (angerily/wipes her tears away) Haan kaha, kya kar loge?
Viraat: Tumhe sharam nahi aati Bandariya, mujhe Chep bulate huye?
Maanvi: (showing her index finger to him) Dekho Viraat, mera dimaag kharab mat karo, main tumse pehle se hi bahut gussa hun, aur gussa mat dilao.
Viraat: (held her wrist and pulled her close to him) Acha kya kar logi Dedh Futiya?
Maanvi: Main kya kar sakhti hun yeh toh tum ab tak jaan hi gaye hoge.
Viraat: (looking at her lovingly) Dara rahi ho mujhe?
Maanvi: Kyun? Viraat Vadhera dar gaya?
Viraat: (releases her wrist/moves back) Main aur tumse darunga, jao jao...
Maanvi: Acha? (holds his sherwani's scarf and pulls him close) Jis din chali gayi na, uss din pata chalega, tab rona din raat mere liye.
Viraat: Woh din kabhi nahi aaye ga, kyun ki tum mere bina reh hi nahi sakhti...

There was an awkward silence between them, as the reality hit them both...they were lost of words, they moved back away from each other, unable to meet each other's gaze.

Maanvi: (looking everywhere but him) Um...woh,,yeh...tum..(looking at his wounded hand) apna haath do, main patti kar deti hun, bahut dard ho raha hoga.
Viraat: Choti si chot se kuch nahi hota Maanvi...
Maanvi: (angerily/ pulls his hand and starts dressing his wounded hand) Aise kaise nahi hota, kab sudhroge tum Viraat. Pata nahi kitna dard ho raha hoga.

Some strands of hair fell on her face, as she was dressing his hand. Viraat moved his right hand towards her face and moved them behind her ears.

Viraat: Pata hai tumhe.
Maanvi: (looked up at him) Kya?
Viraat: (tears formed in his eyes) Yahi ki mujhe kitna dard ho raha hai.

Maanvi's eyes filled with tears as she saw tears rolling down his cheeks, her heart ached seeing him in tears. She was finally done dressing his hand, she closed the box and placed it on the bed.

Maanvi: (holds his right hand) Jab pata hai ki mujhe dard hoga, toh aisa kyun karte ho Viraat?
Viraat: Jaan bhuj kar nahi kiya maine Maanvi, jab maine tumhe Vayansh ke itne paas dekha, toh mujhe aisa laga jaise tum mujhse kahin bahut dur jaa rahi ho, (tears rolling down his face) jaise meri zindagi koi mujhse chhin raha hai. Aur achanak hi woh glass..
Maanvi: (wipes his tears) Viraat, kuch dino mein hum dono ki shadi ho jayegi, main tumhari nahi rahungi (holding back her tears)...toh..toh kya tab bhi tum khud ko itni taklif pahochao ge?
Viraat: (fingers on her cheek) Tum meri kyun nahi ho sakhti Maanvi?
Maanvi: (places her hand on his, which was on her face) Shayad, Bhagwaan ji nahi chahte ki hum saath ho.
Viraat: Par maine toh unse kaha na, ki tumhe jab bhi banaye, mere hi liye banaye...toh iss janam mein woh tumhe mujhse dur kyun kar raha hai?

Maanvi: Agar woh chahein gein, toh woh hume kabhi alag nahi hone deinge Viraat.
Viraat: Mujhe khush karne ke liye yeh sab keh rahi ho na? Par main janta hun, ab bahut der ho gayi hai, kuch nahi ho sakhta...hum ek nahi ho sakhte.
Maanvi: (hands on his cheeks) Kisne kaha hum ek nahi ho sakhte? Hum kabhi alag the hi nahi Viraat.
Viraat: Kabhi bhi nahi. I still Love You Maanvi. (kisses her forehead/resting his forehead against hers)
Maanvi: (hands on his neck) And I will always Love You Viraat.

They both sat there, holding each other close, living the moment.

Maanvi: (pulled away/hands on his cheeks) Viraat, mujhse wada karo ki tum khud ko kabhi chot nahi pahochao ge.

Viraat: I'm sorry, main aisa promise nahi kar sakhta Maanvi.
Maanvi: (stands up/angerily) Kyun Viraat?
Viraat: (stands up) Kyun ki iss chot ki wajha se aaj tum mere paas aise bhagte huye aayi ho. Kaise gava dun ek mauka tumhe apne kareeb laane ka?
Maanvi: Viraat, please...kya tum chahte ho ki tumhari wajha se mujhe taklif ho?
Viraat: Main aisa sapne mein bhi nahi chahta Maanvi.
Maanvi: (puts her hand out in front of him) Then promise me.
Viraat: Maanvi...
Maanvi: Please Viraat, promise karo.
Viraat: Thik hai, (placed his hand on hers) I promise, main tumhe kabhi koi taklif nahi pahochaunga.

Maanvi walked towards him and placed her head on his chest. Viraat was shocked at first, but then he wrapped his arms around her waist, holding her close to his heart.

Maanvi: Thank You Viraat.
Viraat: I Love You.
Maanvi: (holding him tightly/eyes closed/tears rolled down) Thank You.

Vayansh, who followed Maanvi, when she excused herself and walked away from there, stood near the window of Viraat's room, and heard their full conversation. At first he was smiling, when he saw them fighting, he thought that they were just close friends. But then, his smile faded away as he found out that it was not just friendship, but LOVE...Unconditional Love for each other.

Vayansh: (teary eyes/turned around, starts walking away) Viraat aur...Maanvi...ek dusre se pyaar karte hai?



Okk guyz...dats it..dat was a longgg update...nw its ur turn 2 leave ur comments...n hit lyk if u lykd it...I hope i didn't disappointed u guyz...sorry 4 ne mistakes...Thnk u..Luv Aartii...

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Posted: 13 years ago
kya update hai.it was really awesome.although it was emotional it was one fantabulos update.loved virman conversation.the song sequence were too good tat showed their pain.i hate tat maya i think somethink is cooking in her mind.and last vayansh came to know the truth pls continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: keertu

kya update hai.it was really awesome.although it was emotional it was one fantabulos update.loved virman conversation.the song sequence were too good tat showed their pain.i hate tat maya i think somethink is cooking in her mind.and last vayansh came to know the truth pls continue soon😊

Aww...thnk u soo much...m glad u lykd it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update yar. .m speechless. .so emotional. the song scene was really nice how u show their pain for being away frm each other is superb. .thank god vayansh cme to knw the truth. atleast he should do smthng nw. thanks 4 pm n update soon
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wow it was so awesome really wonderful that last part of virman scene just brought tears in my eyes.
please continue soon and thanks a lot for the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
glad vaynazh came to know the truth.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!! Amazing update!!!
Loved it!! Virman conversation was awesome!!!
Finally veyansh knows the truth!!
Plz continue soon, can't wait 4 the next update!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
You dont know how happy i was to find your pm in ma inbox...i eagerly wait 4 sundays...thanx 4 updating...now coming to the update...what should i say??? Another marvelous piece of work or an extremely beautiful update?? Man it was so good that i am out of words...👍🏼 👏 i am very happy coz vayansh came to know the truth! 👍🏼 And pls reveal the stranger who called Vanishka ma as soon as possible...i am dying to know who it is! Hope VIRMAN becomes one soon... I guess i am blabbering too much... 😔 😉 I didnt know that i would write so much! But you actualy deserve it... 😉 Please continue soon!
Thanx 4 the pm!

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