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This looks a bit desi. I think we can introduce a suspense through Hogwarts school introducing the characters. Finally the character reveals what will happen this one year month by month. Each predictions and the other characters reaction to it

Harithadi, sorry I missed your comment there.
Is this better?

Res for WU


it's 17th March morning..Members of the Alpha Team Big Boss(Yuvi) , Snoopy(Maliha) , Wolf(Ramya) , Piccolo(Har) , Harry Potter(Megha) , Beauty(Debo) and Pluto(Sid) are sitting in the hall..discussing about their upcoming mission..which is Nishi's birthday party...and they were discussing it from last month but all the plans are rejected..

Big Boss : what should we do? 😕
Wolf : it is tomorrow..for God's sake..
Snoopy : we are going to miss the deadline..for the first time we will are going to fail in out mission 😵
Beauty : I am sorry guys it is all my fault
Pluto : you know what we should all go for a mass retirement..
Piccolo : don't loose hope..we still have time..we should do something..let's decide..
Harry Potter : I know we should do a costume party..
Big Boss : rejected..we did this so many times..
Snoopy : we are going to fail..😭
Wolf : shut up Snoopy..
Pluto : why not we bring her favorite actor and surprise her?
Big Boss : rejected..
Piccolo : then what about we act like we don't remember and then we will kidnap her and bring her to her surprise party? ( she said with all happy big smile )
Big Boss : rejected..
to this all stare at her with their narrow eyes..
Beauty : can we just throw a simple party?..for once we can do this right?
Big Boss give her such a look that Beauty just shut her lips..
Harry Potter : hey why don't we bring Harry Potter?
all look at her with confused look..
Pluto : why we will bring you?
Harry Potter : Pluto not me..
Wolf : then?
Harry Potter : I am talking about real Harry Potter
Snoopy : as if it will work..this is definitely rejected..what say Big Boss?
Big Boss : go on..it is quite interesting..
to this Snoopy rolled her eyes with shock..
Harry Potter : as I am saying why don't we bring real Harry Potter as she is his big fan..
Beauty : but isn't he too busy to come in this party?
Piccolo then we will bring someone who is less busy and will come easily..
to this whole Alpha Team started to think..just then Pluto shout..
Pluto : I know..
Wolf : who?
Pluto : we can invite Prof. Trelawney and her Asst. Luna..
Snoopy : and they can also predict her future for the whole year..
Wolf : good idea..
Big Boss : so this is final..Beauty get back to work..you have till Midnight..prepare everything till then..Alpha Team will help you so get set go..Beauty Is That Clear?
Beauty : Yes Sir
Big Boss : good..then you all are dismiss..Over and Out.

okay this is a intro I wrote..and I know it's crap..so feel free to edit it..now someone please help me with the prediction part...

Originally posted by: OtakuGirl-Debo

Res for WU


It's 17th March morning..CC team were under the blanket hiding themselves from getting caught by their lead for not finishing their work. Its their fellow CC Nishi's birthday and the thread is not ready!
Maliha : what should we do? 😕
Ramya: it is tomorrow..for God's sake..
Debo: we are going to miss the deadline..for the first time we will are going to fail in out mission 😵
Sid : I am sorry guys it is all my fault
Har : you know what we should all go for a mass retirement..
Megha : don't loose hope..we still have time..we should do something..let's decide..
As they were immersed in the google to find out her favorites, someone came hooting the "Dhinka Chika" song. Members closed the laptop and acted as if nothing happened because its their boss who is entering and they shouldnt give a small hint.
Yuvi : Hey whats up girls? All set? Ramya : Voh. yea I mean we... Yes.
Sid ( whispering) : We are finished now.😭
Megha : oh stop..
Yuvi: Why are you all looking like you stole something? Get ready to make arrangements to set up the room. We should start it by 11.50 at night.
Maliha : You mean surprise party? Yuvi I am sorry but we didnt plan anything.
Yuvi: oops didnt I tell you ?😲 there is no party today. I have planned something else. Now I get it.. You lazy people havent done anything on the thread I know. I know you people sleep till the last minute😡. So I arranged everything.. Just help me for arranging this room.
11.30 PM - Creative Castle Hall
Nishi the birthday girl entered watching her mobile. The hall was pitch dark infact the whole castle was.. Nishi :Why does this give me a Hogwarts effect? (hitting her head) This is the after effect of watching HP 24*7. Chal let me find what our Bday team has in store for me.
Nishi entered the Birthday Subteam room only to find the room more darker than the hall area. She gulped her rising fear and moved forwards to switch on the light but a slow background of the castle when HP and his friends were entering. The wall infront of her had images of Hogwarts Castle and it looked as if she was watching Harry Potter movie on the wall.. A voice came suddenly out of the shadows, a soft, misty sort of voice."Welcome Nishi .. How nice to see you here"This surely scared Nishi as she didnt expect Professor Trelawny here. The armchair and fire infront of her did shake Nishi a bit. A strong brave girl she was didnt show her fear and sat on the couch near by concentrating on the wall.
Prof: Nishi dear, I am here to predict your future, my crystal ball is all ready to spill out your next whole year. Do you have the strength to hear?"
Nishi ( laughing) : Dont try to scare me. I am not the one who gets scared for these. Let me see what your crystal ball can predict!

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April

May

June , July, August

Professor : Always wondered if you could ever set your feet out of the country . This time of the year you would be able to get to the destination you've always wished to get to .

Nishi : I always wanted to visit my cousin in Berlin and I also wanted to roam around in the city of Rome. Shopping in Paris would be great too . Or maybe ...

Professor : Patience my child , you will know more about it when time comes .

Nishi : What about July ?
She pouted wondering all the possibilities all while thinking that this whole prediction was getting better .

Professor : Every person has the dream of becoming popular and so do you . Thus this July you would be all over social media . Your popularity shall be at its peak .

Nishi : Good popularity or bad ? Cause if it's bad then you can keep it for yourself , Mr Oh-So Future Prediction !

Professor : Don't worry this year shall not disappoint you in any way . August shall bring you the golden oppurtunity to meet someone you have always looked at with love through television screen , a person who is worth your fangirl time .

Nishi : So you mean a celebrity type person ?

Professor : Maybe . How should I know about your likes and interests .