Originally posted by: Charanjeetkaur
Very nice update dear
Maan and geet parents are truly loved their children
Maya is also pampered kid
Thanks for pm
Watting for update dear
Thanks.dear
I try to give one more part soon
Romance FF
Originally posted by: Charanjeetkaur
Very nice update dear
Maan and geet parents are truly loved their children
Maya is also pampered kid
Thanks for pm
Watting for update dear
Thanks.dear
I try to give one more part soon
Congratulations on Season 2
Curious Prologue
Interesting Character Sketch
Part 1
A Lovely Start but Sad too
Maan is simply so cute and yes both he and his father
love his mother but sad that she has a brain tumor and wants to
first give birth before going on medication
Geet seems to be intelligent doing her homework as well as Maya's too
Maan is dil toots.. and now ghayal sher
My guess… Geet is the beautiful mistake
Thanks for reposting!
Congrats on season 2.
Captivating prologue
Maan was shattered after she broke his heart
he owes his success to her
great character sketch
thanks for posting
Part 1
Nice update... well written
Maan is happy go lucky boy
well Geet has a tough life
Maya is a spoilt rich girl
hate that Maya makes Geet do her homework
so Geet's dad works for Maya's dad as a driver
sad that Maan's mom has brain tumour
she is waiting to deliver before taking treatment
of cos Geet helps her parents
Maya cannot so anything for herself
Jaanavi had a point
updaet soon
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