FF||Deceptive Obsessions - Chapter 23 page 22 Updated 22nd Sept - Page 3

read all 5 chapters in a go

reminds me an old story of urs

maan manupulated and decieved to marry geet but she gets to know the truth and now longing for ex lover but she knows she wont be able to go back

maan on the other hand is determined to win her he knows it tough one but he is all in

waiting for more

Chapters 1-5

Intriguing Chapters

Maan was smitten by Geet at first sight

then her talks were a calming and soothing balm for him

however he very much got attracted to Geet but due to Geet's brother Vikram

and his friend , Maan had to stay away

however at present Maan and Geet are married but their marriage holds emptiness

and hatred

while it seems like Maan is craving for the old Geet he has met

Geet still holds affection for Arjun while she blames Maan for taking her away from her love

but was Geet and Arjun's relation not strong enough to withhold whatever was thrown at them.

All the chapters were very beautifully written. you have a flair for language. Oh the complexity of human relationships! Maan doesn't come across as devious right away, but he is surely going to show his true colours in the flahbacks...glad to see him guilty in the present. Geet is so torn between past and present. Arjun too is hurt and as per Geet, has hurt her as well. Oh dear! what a complex web

Looking forward to other updates

Originally posted by: heycookie

read all 5 chapters in a go

reminds me an old story of urs

maan manupulated and decieved to marry geet but she gets to know the truth and now longing for ex lover but she knows she wont be able to go back

maan on the other hand is determined to win her he knows it tough one but he is all in

waiting for more

Yes! It is loosely based on an old FF of mine - Love me back

Wow new story. Awesome start. Prologue is intriguing. Maan seems to be obsessed with Geet who is engaged. Love that turns obsession is dangerous. Looking forward where this leads Geet, Maan & Arjun's life.

Chapter 6

I truly feel bad for both Maan and Geet

she is not only hurting Maan but herself

while he seems to want to vanish whatever misunderstanding

and hatred is between them

Arjun was once a part of her past life , hopefully she can see that

and reconcile with Maan

though Maan was very wrong in the manner he got Geet to marry him

but I do think he is now regretting hurting Geet

Wonderful wonderful 💯 update fab

Originally posted by: Queen0fDarkness

Yes! It is loosely based on an old FF of mine - Love me back

hope you start something like match made in vegas or love unscripted...two of my favorites from you

Chapter 6

oh Pammi questioned Geet

Geet's frustration was justified

well she told Pammi not to interfere in the marriage

so Maan heard everything

as expected he supported Geet

dadima's concern was reasonable

Geet's thoughts well portrayed

Maan indeed knows Geet is capable of handing the situation

liked that he does not want anyone not even his mom disrespecting his wife

Geet's response was anticipated

this clearly hurt Maan

glad that Maan regrets hurting Geet

however he does not regret his actions

he wanted Geet and now he has her

but she is his?

he loves her

however the way he did it was wrong

Geet's outburst was understandable

sad seeing Maan and Geet suffering

she had a point that he ruined 3 families

he was really selfish

Geet seemed to have accepted Maan

until she became aware of the truth

can understand Geet's view

at least Maan realised that the ramifications of his actions

appreciate that now Maan is honest with Geet

was Geet truly in love with Arjun?

Geet is also hurting herself in the process

of cos Geet refused to reciprocate that he loves him

will Maan ever win her love and trust?

update soon