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Posted: 8 months ago
#61

Hi there, thanks for the update


Chapter 5

Lovely update… amazingly written

great that Maan did Geet's check up

at least it was a doc that Maan knew

she certainly gave Maan good avice

great that Maan understood Geet

sad what happened to her

she indeed suffered so much

she was denied the simplest pleasures in life

liked that Maan is determined to make Geet better

glad that Geet knows that Maan is different from all men

pleased that Maan left a rose for Geet

well Geet dropped coffee on Maan

Geet was really scared

she was amazed that Maan did not shout her

of cos Maan assured her

hate this Sasha

Maan's anger was justified

but he hurt Adi in the process

good that Geet kept busy and cooked

not surprised that Maan enjoyed the food

wonderful that Maan is interacting with Geet


outstanding precap

update soon

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Posted: 8 months ago
#62

Thanks for tag. Like the update.

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Posted: 8 months ago
#63

5.

I can't press on the fact how much I appreciate Maan for being so kind hearted. He took Geet to a doctor. Priya is right that the scars Geet might have can heal with love

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Posted: 8 months ago
#64

The flower scene is so nice. I like the subtle understanding developing between Maan and Geet. You wrote it so beautifully

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Posted: 8 months ago
#65

When Geet expected Maan will be mad at her for spilling coffee I feel so sad for her. She has been treated so bad that having a negative reaction comes first to her. Nimki is sweet. Maan went to give Geet another cup of coffee.

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Posted: 8 months ago
#66

5

maan trying his best make geet normal

his mami who is doctor suggest him to take care of her seeing geet reax around maan

maan can see very slow change in geet

maan is happy to see small smile on geet's face when he introduce her with his small library

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Posted: 8 months ago
#67

Lol Adi should ask Sasha what's wrong with her. Maan was rightfully mad. Maan praised Geet's cooking. That vikram part makes blood boil. He was an animal. I wonder what hell he made Geet go through. Maan is trying to open her up. He showed her his library. Precap looks promising. I hope you update it soon. Also waiting for ineffable ☺️

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Posted: 8 months ago
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GREAT update maan took geet to doc and doctor who is her mami told her about how he can heal geet. Geet is also liking how maan is humble and doesn't shout at her during breakfast coffee spills in maan s shirt from geet and she gets scared that maan ll scold her but maan makes her understand it was a mistake looking forward for next update

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Chapter 5


Seems like Geet will fill Sasha's post

I like that Geet herself is trying and she also understands

that Maan is very much different than Vikram

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Posted: 7 months ago
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The doctor is right. The emotional scars run way deeper than the physical ones.Only love and time can help.

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