Entangled Relations- part 4/5/6/pg11/13/14- 21 sept - Page 5

Your writing is beautiful. ..simple yet awsome. ..HindI dialogue makes it realistic like I am watching maneet serial or movie with new episodes..

I only dislike side characters. ...and villain which behind M or G... positive or negative

I only admire Dadima apart from MG

Originally posted by: Mg13

Banner is beautiful but scary. ...

Congrats on new story. ..wish you come up always with new one on maneet. ..and cross 100 number with your mg ffs. ...

Thank you

I love writing on maaneet

30 story to hongi meri

Bs update krne ka time nhi mil paata 😜🤣

Nice update

Waiting for next update.

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Originally posted by: kirtikaa

Wonderful start ..

Congratulations on a new beginning waiting to read further ❤️

Thanks

U read part 1?

Originally posted by: Mg13

Your writing is beautiful. ..simple yet awsome. ..HindI dialogue makes it realistic like I am watching maneet serial or movie with new episodes..

I only dislike side characters. ...and villain which behind M or G... positive or negative

I only admire Dadima apart from MG

Same here

When you stratch amit character

But it's needed for story

Originally posted by: jasika08

Nice update

Waiting for next update.

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Thanks

Am thinking for part 2

Originally posted by: aparna3011

1

very nice n emotional update

daadi remembering past n tears come out from her eyes

daadi again start maan's unwanted topic of marriage as he dint believe in marriage

annie says to daadi that they need to plan in different way on this topic to make maan agree

Thanks

Past is painful for all one

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Priya

thanks for the update

Part 1

SD recalls the past happy moments

however Maan's dad was uninterested in running the family business

liked Maan's care for daadi

of cos she wants Maan to get married

so she refers to the girl that Pallavi saw at the mandir

well Maan does not want to get married

as expected she wants Maan to settle down

but Maan does not believe in marriage

sad that Maan shouted dadima

however she tries to make Maan understand

wonder what dadi and Annie will plan

update soon

daadi and annie plan you get to know in next part

thansk

Wo Maan ki Dulhan na bn saki

Pr hum apni puri koshish karenge

Wo Naksh ki jarur ho jaaye

maan ye kya kiya aapne