MG-inayaat ya ibadaat/part 20/pg67- 20 sept - Page 6

this was hearbreaking

dev is a nice brother but its naintara who is trying to create trouble

poor maan he is all but alone it seems

life is so cruel to maan

dadi too left

maan tried to convince her to come back but she choose to live dev n tara

now he is all alone

waiting for geets entry

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Part 2

Heartfelt update.... amazingly written

feeling for Maan.....

he had no choice but tell Dev to leave with Tara

well Dadi went to stay with Dev and Tara

hate how she treated Maan

sad that dadima misunderstood Maan

she accused him but ought to have asked him why he did that

alas dadima left and never to return

its not Maan but Tara that broke the family

upset that Maan is now alone

dismayed that no one understood him

update soon

Thanks dear

Try to write one more part soon for getting title

Everyone has blamed Maan for breaking up the family. But Maan is not to blame completely. A little fault lies with all of them. He should have been told about the circumstances. Dev should have gotten something for himself too. Now they are all cutting all ties with him. He did not ask for any of it. He is trying, but they don't see it.

Wonderful story…feel bad for maan nobody is here to listen his point of view ..I think his family is very selfish ..dadi only wants update about business…

Originally posted by: coderlady

Everyone has blamed Maan for breaking up the family. But Maan is not to blame completely. A little fault lies with all of them. He should have been told about the circumstances. Dev should have gotten something for himself too. Now they are all cutting all ties with him. He did not ask for any of it. He is trying, but they don't see it.

Thanks dear

U very well described 👏

Part 2

Emotional Update

Dadi clearly did not want to stay with Maan

while he is alone

surely he is hurting been by himself

as it's also five years since he has been with his family

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Originally posted by: suni_104

Nice start for story

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: sonal36

Great start👍

Beautiful update with full of emotions .

I suggest title Broken relations

Waiting eagerly to read next part

Update soon

I updated next part

Plz check