this was hearbreaking
dev is a nice brother but its naintara who is trying to create trouble
poor maan he is all but alone it seems
Romance FF
this was hearbreaking
dev is a nice brother but its naintara who is trying to create trouble
poor maan he is all but alone it seems
life is so cruel to maan
dadi too left
maan tried to convince her to come back but she choose to live dev n tara
now he is all alone
waiting for geets entry
Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Part 2
Heartfelt update.... amazingly written
feeling for Maan.....
he had no choice but tell Dev to leave with Tara
well Dadi went to stay with Dev and Tara
hate how she treated Maan
sad that dadima misunderstood Maan
she accused him but ought to have asked him why he did that
alas dadima left and never to return
its not Maan but Tara that broke the family
upset that Maan is now alone
dismayed that no one understood him
update soon
Thanks dear
Try to write one more part soon for getting title
Everyone has blamed Maan for breaking up the family. But Maan is not to blame completely. A little fault lies with all of them. He should have been told about the circumstances. Dev should have gotten something for himself too. Now they are all cutting all ties with him. He did not ask for any of it. He is trying, but they don't see it.
Wonderful story…feel bad for maan nobody is here to listen his point of view ..I think his family is very selfish ..dadi only wants update about business…
Originally posted by: coderlady
Everyone has blamed Maan for breaking up the family. But Maan is not to blame completely. A little fault lies with all of them. He should have been told about the circumstances. Dev should have gotten something for himself too. Now they are all cutting all ties with him. He did not ask for any of it. He is trying, but they don't see it.
Thanks dear
U very well described 👏
Part 2
Emotional Update
Dadi clearly did not want to stay with Maan
while he is alone
surely he is hurting been by himself
as it's also five years since he has been with his family
Great start👍
Beautiful update with full of emotions .
I suggest title Broken relations
Waiting eagerly to read next part
Update soon
I updated next part
Plz check
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