MG-inayaat ya ibadaat/part 20/pg67- 20 sept - Page 4

Hello priya. Great start. Loved the story line.

I would suggest inaayat .

But i would like to read geet part.

Maybe it can be all but alone

Congrats on the new story!

Part 1

Emotional update..... greatly written

feeling for Maan...

he has no achieved success

alas has no one to share his happiness with

where are Dev and dadima?

Maan recalls the past and how happy he was with his family

sad that his parents did

of cos dadima was shattered with the news

everything then just felt apart

admire that Dev ensured Maan completed his studies

he made sacrifices for this

well Dev's wife Naintara was angry with him for this

of cos Maan felt guilty hearing this

Tara was indeed rude to Maan

great that Maan started going to the office with dadima

oh the office is in a bad condition

well Dev has no interest in the construction business

upset how Naintara treated Dev

Maan was clearly upset seeing Dev and Naintara fight

glad that Maan spoke to dadi

dadi reveals everything and how they lost business and their financial difficulties

as expected Maan blames himself

liked that Maan is determined to work hard and make everything right

update soon

Title of the story suggestion - Tanhayi or Broken Relations

Originally posted by: Crazyover123

Hello priya. Great start. Loved the story line.

I would suggest inaayat .

But i would like to read geet part.

Maybe it can be all but alone

Thank u dear

I really confused with the title name

Great update sorry for d late reply was busy in my brother s wedding fab story looks like geet will come soon to solve maan s every problem

Great start👍

Beautiful update with full of emotions .

I suggest title Broken relations

Waiting eagerly to read next part

Update soon

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats on the new story!

Part 1

Emotional update..... greatly written

feeling for Maan...

he has no achieved success

alas has no one to share his happiness with

where are Dev and dadima?

Maan recalls the past and how happy he was with his family

sad that his parents did

of cos dadima was shattered with the news

everything then just felt apart

admire that Dev ensured Maan completed his studies

he made sacrifices for this

well Dev's wife Naintara was angry with him for this

of cos Maan felt guilty hearing this

Tara was indeed rude to Maan

great that Maan started going to the office with dadima

oh the office is in a bad condition

well Dev has no interest in the construction business

upset how Naintara treated Dev

Maan was clearly upset seeing Dev and Naintara fight

glad that Maan spoke to dadi

dadi reveals everything and how they lost business and their financial difficulties

as expected Maan blames himself

liked that Maan is determined to work hard and make everything right

update soon

Title of the story suggestion - Tanhayi or Broken Relations

thanks for liking and give reply for title

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg

Great update sorry for d late reply was busy in my brother s wedding fab story looks like geet will come soon to solve maan s every problem

thanks dear

enjoy the wedding

story can wait

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