MG-inayaat ya ibadaat/part 20/pg67- 20 sept

Hello everyone

i know i already written many stories

whi complete nhi ho paa rhi hai

and i start one more

actually, i written this for OS competition.

but don't get time for completing that time.

now i am thinking converting OS into SS/FF

depend on parts.

first read the part 1 below

and suggest Title

i get four suggestions

1) All but Alone

2) Broken Relation or Hearts

3) Tenhayi

4) Inaayat

you all can suggest from own choice too

Index

part 1

part 2 - on page 6 & Poll- do vote

Character sketch- page 9

character sketch 2 - on page 12

part 3 - on page 13

part 4 - on page 16

part 5 - on page 18

teaser - page 25 - video

part 6 on page 27

part 7 on page 32

Teaser- page 35

part 8 on page 37

part 9 on page 41

part 10 on page 44

part 11 on page 48

part 12 on page 52

part 13 on page 57

part 14 on page 49

part 15 on page 50

part 16 on page 54

part 17 on page 57

part 18 on page 59

part 19 on page 63

Part 20 on page 67

blog link

i get two suggestions

1) All but Alone

2) Broken Relation or Hearts

you all can suggest from own choice too

part 1- click here

tere liye- part 18 on page 20 (24 may)

Wo humsafar tha - part 64 on page 121 (25 may)

ye dil kya kare- part 34 on page 9 (27 may)

New Mg Story - part 1 (29 may)

Interesting start. Maan has a small family is he not staying with them. What happened to Dadima.

Originally posted by: MA1970

Interesting start. Maan has a small family is he not staying with them. What happened to Dadima.

Thanks dear

Yes he has small family

U know soon in next part

Suggest story name

Great start! Thank you. Maan was not aware of his families struggles. I’m sure he will work hard for the sacrifices that Dev has made.

A Sad Start

Naintara seems like someone that is shrewd

now she fights with Dev as he did send Maan to study

but the fact that Naintara has no patience and seems greedy too

Maan now knows the problems his family faced to educate him

Originally posted by: taahir004

A Sad Start

Naintara seems like someone that is shrewd

now she fights with Dev as he did send Maan to study

but the fact that Naintara has no patience and seems greedy too

Maan now knows the problems his family faced to educate him

Thanks dear

Naintara is not wrong too

Dev give own share too

Now both future at stake

Suggest name please