MG SS: Shhh...:- Updated Part20||31st July||Pg.37|| - Page 3

Originally posted by: heycookie

part 1

nice one

geet has really a lovely family

oh doc geet this is interesting

waiting for maans entry now

cont soon

Thank you.

Liking the pace of story.. and the suspense in it. do continue soon.

Originally posted by: tellyme

Liking the pace of story.. and the suspense in it. do continue soon.

Thank you Di ❤

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geet is from well do family with open mind

geet is ideal daughter n loved by every one

geet fainted in depression of loosing life of her first case as doctor

Sad update. Geets first Patient dies. And while going to console her friend she faints. What’s going on

Originally posted by: aparna3011

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geet is from well do family with open mind

geet is ideal daughter n loved by every one

geet fainted in depression of loosing life of her first case as doctor

Thank you ❤

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Sad update. Geets first Patient dies. And while going to console her friend she faints. What’s going on

Thank you❤

Will clear it in the next part.

Part 1

Part 2:

It's midnight around 12o'clock, dark and silence everywhere, the only source of light are the street lights. People of the town are fast asleep, except for the people of one house!!

Geet is on the bed, with her big brown hazel eyes wide open blinking now and then, staring at the ceiling continuously. Her eyes, face have turned pink and her nose to red. Her lips are apart and teeth are chattering. She has covered her whole body with duvlet, only her head is out and she is shivering now and then. Alas! Today she is not able to sleep and she is not letting her parents as well with her shivering and continuous chattering. Did I forget to mention! She is sleeping in her parents room, on their bed with her mother on her right and father on her left. Finally Rano gets up and sits on her side after continuously turning on the bed not being able to sleep. Poor rano was deprived of sleep yesterday too because of an over excited Geet for her first day which went haywire and after whole day's work she very badly needed rest, but her sweet daughter was not helping her. Finally frustrated and irritated

"Grr..yeeee. Kisne kaha tha tum ko kabristaan ja kar darkar, beemaar padne ke liye? Humari ghar mai aurte kabristaan jate he nahi, lakin tum vahaan gae ho, aur vo be jaise ke tum kesi park mein gaeho."

Geet sees towards her mother, she gets up and sits in her place holding the blanket tight, shivering. Meanwhile Mohinder also gets up switches on the light. Now all three are wide awake, father and daughter duo are looking at an irritated sleepless Rano who continues ranting,

"Tum bad mai Rita ke ghar ja kar saantvan nahi kar sakte the kay?"

A shivering Geet listens to Rano's scoldings with her head bent, her hands moving up and down her arm trying to warm herself from cold, and Mohinder leaning on the bed post listening to them quietly.

"Kud nahi so raha hai, aur hamara neend be karab kar raha hai....che." Rano says while she rests her sleepy head on her palm.

Geet who was listening quietly looks up at her mother then looks back at her father who is still watching them quietly, then she looks at her position then realises...

"Maa"

"Hmmmm" Rano turns towards Geet.

"mujhe pata chala tum mujhse gussa kyu Ho!"

"ha? "Rano gives her a questioning look.

"Mai be na, ek buddu ho, dimak jo nahi hai meri pass to buddu hui mai. Aap dono ke beech jo aakar so gaya."

Geet makes a baby angry face, she pushes the duvlet off her,

"Aap dono enjoy karo" she stands up from the place and jumps off the bed and starts walking towards the door.

"hey? " Mohinder.

"hey, hey. Kaha ja rahi ho?" asks a perplexed Rano seeing Geet's behavior. Geet who has already reached the door turns back answering

"main apane kamare mein hee so jaathe hu. Aap dono shaanti se.. "

Mohinder and Rano both look at each other, while Geet continues

"So jate ho ya kuch aur kar the ho, mujhe nahi maloom. Aab mai jarahi hu, Good night."

Mohinder "Good night beta. Good night."

Geet leaves to her room.

Mohinder who was leaning on the bed post, sits straight in his place,

"Wah, meri beti bohat samajdar hai, jaldi samajgaya."

A perplexed Rano keeps hand on her mouth listening to Geet's reply, then turning to Mohinder

"Bhagawan!! Ye ladki kay samajkar jaraha haiji?".

"Sahi to samaj raha hai."

"Ayee... aap be na. Beti ke shadhi karke, unke bachoo ke sath khel ne ka umar hai hamara. Bhool gaya Kay?? Mai keh rahi hu jaldhi se Geet keliye ladka doondna shuru kar dena chaye."

"Tum fikar mat karo. Meri nazar mai, mai ek ladka already choon chuka Hu."

Rano is surprised and happy listening to Mohinder, then she egarly awaits for him to continue.

" Aab Australia mai business keliye gaye hai, agle mahine India wapas araha hai. Humari Savitri Devi hai na, unki pote hai. Maa ne kaha ke unhoone Geet ke tasvir dekhar Ha karliye hai. Jab vo wapas ayega tab ghar akar baki Ke bath kar lenge. Aab so ja."

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Geet returns to her room. Thumps herself on the bed and starts to think if she was really really that weak, that her going to cemetery scared her? It's not that she has never seen a dead body and moreover she is a doctor. She concludes that she had never been to a cemetery before and seeing the painful faces of Rita's family and the atmosphere for the first time, might have taken a troll on her resulting her to faint. Then she finally drifts off to sleep shrugging off the thoughts, though she is not convinced of the reason she had given to herself. Geet did not even have the slightest of idea that dark clouds have started closing into her life, and her visiting the cemetery has made her more nearer to the dark life ahead awaiting to consume her.

The death of Rita's brother had happened even before Geet arrived but in her hurry to check what has happened, she didn't notice the reaction she got from the nurse, when she asked about checking the patient's BP, after the incident she proceeds to think that she was the reason for the death.

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Its been three days to Geet's fainting, her temperature has not yet reduced. Her mother is worried for her that she takes Geet to hospital, when Geet herself is a doctor embarrassing her. When that didn't seem to work, Rano started taking Geet along with her to all the spiritual places in the town, by the end Geet's wrists were filled with different color threads. In all this what they didn't know was that the arrival of the evil had already taken place and it would nearly be impossible for them especially for Geet to come out of it. Geet was being followed from the time she fainted in the cemetery, and that same person was responsible for her to faint, for he didn't want Geet to see or to even have a faint memory of seeing a thing which belonged to him. He doesn't want Geet to know about him until he himself makes an appearance.

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Thanks to all who liked and commented on the previous part.❤

Hopefully you will like this part as well!

Part 3

Part 2

So there is some kind of evil that

is surrounding Geet

is this the reason that she feels ill

Oooh what is going on? Is this story horror thriller genre? Clearly looks like it😳!

Rita’s bro’s final rites Geet sees and fainted on spot. And some dark thing has started following her ever since. She’s fallen ill and not recovering. Wonder where this is heading & Maan’s role in it. Is he linked to any of this by any chance? Its very interesting. Pls update soon