Aapka Dil Humare Pass Hai/Pt18/pg70- 11 july - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Beautiful start. congrats on new story. base is wonderful. geet n maan both are full of life. i like ur character sketch very much as after long see black hair of dadimaa. haha. waiting for next part.

After watching the list of ur ffs n ss i got that i have a lot of homework to be finished. 🤣



lot of homework 😆

daadi ki wo pic dekh dekhke mein nore ho gyi thi
isliye ye dundi maine
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Desigirls12


wow lovely superb update..te way my maaneet ki intro was lovely..te way geet dad got transfer and geet ki annoy but some one changing her mind was lovley..other side my maan ki intro opps superb cool guy hana,very different type..i love te update yar


thank you

this time i want to write different maan little bit 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
hi thanks 4 updating! fab banner by hinal! awesome update! superbly written! Geet's gt a transfer 2 Delhi! they tell her n she is upset! A stranger makes her understand! she realises n apologises! Maan's dad worried abt him! Maan arrives n is tired! seeing his dad's angry face he decides dadi is right! his dad is upset! Dadi defends Maan! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 updating! fab banner by hinal! awesome update! superbly written! Geet's gt a transfer 2 Delhi! they tell her n she is upset! A stranger makes her understand! she realises n apologises! Maan's dad worried abt him! Maan arrives n is tired! seeing his dad's angry face he decides dadi is right! his dad is upset! Dadi defends Maan! update soon


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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
nice update with a beautiful banner,lvd it.
waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
hi there! cld nt wait 4 pm! read n commented already! thanks 4 da pm! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
good start .taunting father and supporting grandma ,ma for Maan hmmm like it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
geets dad transfered to delhi
geet cribbing over it
maan changed her view
n she started to think of other side
maans dad is strict
but others pamper maan
nice part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Wow the starting is awesome , Geet angry with her parents as she has to leave her friends and move to Delhi and she is also doing her last year in college but it seems a stranger has put sense into her telling to think from her parents pov is that stranger Maan ?
but then he seems so laid back and getting into trouble with his dad while his Daadima defends him
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