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Posted: 4 years ago
#61

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geet hurting herself to get trap by maan

maan is out of jail but who help him

waiting to know how akhil trap maan

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Posted: 4 years ago
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maan haar gaya?........hate u maan.............uss akhil jeet gaya?b****** kahinka..............cant digest................


nice update...........

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Posted: 4 years ago
#63

Geet feel stupid to believing Maan when Aakil made hrr puppet whom she knows from childhood then Maan is stranger she hurting her self physically to calm down her pain

Other side Maan was trap he knows this Aakhi doing and inspector obeying Aakil orders against law's

But at mid night he got bailed and no one show up whom did iit

I think Geet think he played but her love is genuine so how could she let him in this situation

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Posted: 4 years ago
#64

Eagerly waiting fr next

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Posted: 4 years ago
#65

The story Keeps on getting Intresting.. From what I Have read till now..


Maan's in Akhil's Company For A revenge.. But I didn't Get to see What revenge He is seeking for, May Be I Have To read Further chapters for that..


This Akhil Looks Sick!! What is he, A Child??! Lol Sometimes he Make Me feel A Child Who for on cribbing for everything he want!!!..Arghhhh And Geet, Is she really in love with him.. I highly doubt That... He Keeps On insulting Her and She bears it without a thought..


Maan Seems to Like her slowly.. And Glad That he is showing her the Truth that Akhil wouldn't care for her not in the present or in the future... But Geet ko kaun samjaaye.. She still Wants to help him in everything!!!! Irkkkk

And Maan's Ideas to revenge Were Nice..


I Got out the Hold of the story Can you help which Chapter is the One where Geet tells Maan that she wants to go to Africa But instead Maan takes her to his Farm house or like that...!!???

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I was dreading Geet’s reaction since long and here it is 😭

Who has bailed Maan out? I just hope that Geet’s willing to listen to Maan’s side of the story

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kuttisri

The story Keeps on getting Intresting.. From what I Have read till now..


Maan's in Akhil's Company For A revenge.. But I didn't Get to see What revenge He is seeking for, May Be I Have To read Further chapters for that..


This Akhil Looks Sick!! What is he, A Child??! Lol Sometimes he Make Me feel A Child Who for on cribbing for everything he want!!!..Arghhhh And Geet, Is she really in love with him.. I highly doubt That... He Keeps On insulting Her and She bears it without a thought..


Maan Seems to Like her slowly.. And Glad That he is showing her the Truth that Akhil wouldn't care for her not in the present or in the future... But Geet ko kaun samjaaye.. She still Wants to help him in everything!!!! Irkkkk

And Maan's Ideas to revenge Were Nice..


I Got out the Hold of the story Can you help which Chapter is the One where Geet tells Maan that she wants to go to Africa But instead Maan takes her to his Farm house or like that...!!???

Thanks for reading the story and liking it. What a lovely comment. Keep reading and commenting please.

Here is the part you are looking for

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4995670?pn=55

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Posted: 4 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter

Thanks for reading the story and liking it. What a lovely comment. Keep reading and commenting please.

Here is the part you are looking for

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4995670?pn=55

Thanks For the part Link will Catch up soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#69

Part 81

As Maan steps out of the police station

A kid appears from nowhere and hands over a key into Maan’s hand and disappears into thin air

Maan looks at the key and there is name of a hotel and room number on the key chain

Maan doesn’t know what to do

Is it a trap laid by Akhil?

But what other option does he have?

He thinks, even if it’s is trap laid by Akhil then also he will go and will confront him face to face. This is the time to end this cat and mouse chase

He enters the room of the hotel

The hotel is in a deserted hill

It’s a very average 3-star hotel, nothing fancy

He searches the room for anything unusual but doesn’t find anything

Maan is perplex as to why he was called to the hotel when nobody is there

He rests his back on the bed gazing at the ceiling

He didn’t realize when sleep at engulfed him

He wakes up with the sound of key turning in the door’s lock

His gazes at the clock and it is exact midnight

He stands up on his feet prepared for the intruder

Maan freezes the moment he sees Geet enter through that door

She looks pale yet determined

She is dishelved and disturbed

He is not able to make out her emotions looking at her face

M-Geet!

He exclaims

He hands over an envelope to him and says

G- Jao yahan se

M- Kya hai ye?

G- Air tickets. Flight 2 ghante mein hai, yahan se airport 20 minute hai. Dubai tak ki hi flight hai…itne hi paise the mere paas…baaki tum jahan se bhi ho chale jaane

She is shocked and tongue tied

He was longing to see Geet but not like this

He was longing to speak to Geet but not like this

M-Geet ye misunderstandings jo hain…

She cuts him in between

G- Kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi hai…kuch farak nahi padta

She is struggling to keep her composure

He eyes are giving everything up by tearing up no matter how she struggles to be strong

G- Tum jo ho…jahan se aaye ho….kyun aaye ho…kya karne aaye ho….mujhe nahi pata…mujhe janna bhi nahi hai

He squares her shoulders

M- Par main tumhe batana chahta hoon, Geet

Her voice cracked as she tried to speak while tears roll down her swollen eyes

G- Kya batana hai…waqt nahi hai…nahi hai waqt hamare paas…tum jao

She frees herself from her grip and turns away from him while wiping her eyes aggressively

G- Mujhe kuch nahi pata tumhare baare mein…aur…aur jaanna bhi nahi hai

M- Toh kyun laayi ho ye tickets?

She takes a deep breath

G- Kyunki even if mujhe nahi pata tumne jo mere saath pal bitaaye wo sach the yaa jhooth….par mere liye wo sach the….ho sakta hai main bevkoof hoon….but main ye bevkoofi karna chahti hoon. Tumne mujhe anjaane mein hi bohot kuch diya hai….wo pal…wo memories….you made me feel valuable…respected in a relationship….tumne mujhe pyaar ka ek aisa pehlu mujhe dikhaya…jo ki mujhe pata hi nahi tha….Tum tab mere saath the jab koi nahi tha, isliye…main nhi tab tumhare saath rehna chahti hoon jab koi nahi hai

She turns at looks at him for the last time and walks out of the room, saying

G- Mujhe chalna chahie, warna Akhil ko shaq ho jayega

Maan wanted to hold her hand for the last time but she had walked away before he could touch her


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Posted: 4 years ago
#70

Geet helped him he should go now and come back fr her she loved him she proofed him now his turn

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