MG FF - The Burnt -Chapter 10 Pg 60 Apr 14 - Page 9

Lovely start. Both past and present. Misty has worked hard to give luxury to her son even though he deserves even better. Maan and Misty remember their past one regretting his behavior and the one is in fear. Misty has loved him from childhood and it was instilled in her that she would marry him. She still has not forgotten him inspite of one year of torture she had to bear because of him. Looks like he does not know about her child which is what she is fearing.

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Nice update..

Commented on blog..

Was theirs a childhood arrangement? Was she always told she would be married to him? When they did marry, he was not happy?

Geet kept one secret with her when she left him. She is so afraid he will find out. He never knew she was pregnant and had a son.

Wow awesome update ❤️ i wonder what will hapen maan and geet meet. Maan treated Geet badly and Geet was hurt in the past 🥺

Hi Anu... thanks for updating! Much appreciative😊

Chapter 1

Amazing update… greatly written 👏⭐️

so Maan is lost in his thoughts

he maybe rich but is leaving a simple life

great that Maan is trying to find his Geet

sad that Geet has been gone years with no trace 

ahh dadima wants Maan to move on

glad that Maan is repenting

oh he feels that the punishment is less

liked that he is determined not to give up and knows she is somewhere

he will indeed die if she is not alive 

upset that Maan hurt Geet

will he be able to find her?

hmm Geet has changed her name to Mishty

well she and Maan have a son Advay

Geet is a wonderful mother

though she works hard, she ensures to spend time with Advay

she certainly wants to give Advay everything

of cos Geet loves Maan immensely

alas he never loved her

feeling for Geet

Geet's fears are reasonable

seems like she did not tell Maan about Advay

but she unaware that Maan has changed and repenting

at least she has convinced Chetan to hand Geetanjali Dreams to Merul

ahh Maan is having a dream..... 

now Maan is in pain for hurting his Geet

she just left.....

Chetan's question was anticipated

Geet handled the situation well

she will never admit that its personal 

however Chetan was adamant that if she is needed she will have to pitch in

for how long will she avoid Maan?

pleased that dadima convinced Maan to go the mall with her

dadima and Maan share a close bond

Gosh Maan and Advany met at the mall

aww Advay reminded Maan of Geet

not surprised that they share the same likes and tastes 

nice that he brought Advay a box of ice cream

ha ha dadima teased Maan

agree with dadima that Maan and the boy share some soul connection

Maan laughed it off unaware of reality

Mishty/Geet's reaction was justified when Jenny revealed that a man with authority bought Advay ice

cream

the description fits Maan 

can understand Geet's worries and restlessness 

angry what Maan said to Geet

dismayed how he treated Geet

she did want he wanted and now is craving for her one glimpse

why did Maan do this to Geet?

as expected Geet cautioned Jenny not to let any stranger near Advay

loved that Maan felt peace meeting Advay

oh its five years since Geet left

amazed that Maan is unable to find her

Geet's thoughts well portrayed

all she ever wanted was love from Maan

wow she loved him since childhood...

did their families know each other?

eager to know their past....

despite everything and what he did, she still loves him

she dreads to meet him....

Maan is certainly unaware about Advay

no wonder she does not want to come face to face with him

update soon....

sorry for such a long comment! 

Fantastic start to the new story!! I almost went back to the golden era of this forum when writers used to compete against each other in giving fresh perspectives on maaneet! Thank you dear for starting another wonderful journey!!!

I really missed this one as no Pms 😑 

But off to a beautiful starting 😀

First congratulations on this new story 👏

Prologue was beautiful & bit emotional 🥲 just love it 😄

For the part Maan & his temper had destroyed this relationship & Geet is thinking it to be that he hated her to the core 😞 here Maan has repentance in his deeds & has emmersed himself in his work 😊😌

Geet in London as Mishti is now living in her small world which has her son & work 😊 but a mere thought or presence of Maan scared her she doesn't want to be face to face with him again

I really see that God has some other plans & things would go more interesting as this deal progresses

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗 

Do tag me or PM me once you update 😃

Amazing! Interesting! Can't wait to read about this new journey that you are going to make us tread on. The wait for this will be excruciating but won't pressurise you to continue this without finishing the old ones.

Amazing prologue