MG FF - The Burnt -Chapter 10 Pg 60 Apr 14 - Page 8

Superb part

Its little confusing update in last 

What mistake she did

That's unforgivable 

And hiding Advay from him add one more in her mistake list

U write this type story before too

Geet loves him immensely 

He propose her when she ready to marry with another one

Insult her 

And she left foreign for office work

And he Start missing her 

Kya naam tha uska

Awesome update..... commentedd on blog 😊

Chapter 1 

Awesome and Sensitive Chapter 

Geet has been in love with Maan since childhood 

and maybe this very fact was known by Maan and that is his reason

for always been so harsh on Geet.

now that she no longer is with him , he misses her and it seems like 

he is now in love with her or he is regretting all that he has done to her 

Geet on the other hand does not want Maan knowing about Advay been his son

but Dadima's statement of Sole Connection will surely make Maan think more 

about Advay .

Geet now does not want Maan knowing about herself yet she is also confident that

she can face him .

Maan truly must have been tormenting Geet when they were married living together 

but for some reason it also seem like he is in deep pain of their separation

Superb part

Geet is in love with maan since childhood but Maan doesn’t love her. Geet left maan long time now. Maan is now repenting his deed. But now maan has come to business deal with Geet’s firm.  She has changed her name to Mishty  

Geet is scared for her son. But what mistake she has done. Maybe dint tell abt her pregnancy 

Will wait for more updates 

Awesome update Repenting maan and scary geet

Interesting start.. Maan sounds grey in your story.. But what intrigues me is what mistake has Geet done that she feels guilty.. and so does Maan. Seems like a biiiig misunderstanding!!

Lovedd the concept and the first chapter and everything.. I’m probably going to be hooked to this one when u start this (hoping it will be soon) … so they were married!!! Wonder why Sahebzada even agreed to marry a doomat like her?! And wondering about their conjugal life as well coz of his behaviour towards her in the past! So he feels that she’s still alive.. looks like she wouldn’t be able to avoid the confrontation anymore. I feel she had his baby & so is dreading going in front of him.. what she doesn’t know is what happened to him after she left! The scene with the nightmare was nice. I’m really looking forward to this.. also waiting for Devil’s Den eagerly 🤩 

Hi, nice chapter dear, Mishty refuse to work on geetanjali project, she will give help from outside but she will not involved directly that's her request, when she hear about khurana's name and Geetanjali project she is constantly in fear to lose her son advay, here Maan searching geet his wife everywhere but didn't get any success, now his Dadima think that she was not alive but Maan never believe it saying that if I am alive then she is also be some where in this world alive, geet is in London, Maan also there in London for geetanjali project, geet  Saturday take advay to the mall, her helper jeeny also there with advay, here Dadima also went for shopping with Maan, when Maan went for ice cream for Dadima, advay also there for ice cream, he crashed with Maan, his ice cream fell down for that Maan take him to ice cream parlour and gave him dark chocolate flavor which is favorite of Maan also. Geet have fear that which man gave ice cream to be Maan.

Such a catching and interesting update..loved it so much .can’t wait for the next one😁

Amazing update of the story…it’s interesting to know why Geet is soo scared to maan