MG FF - The Burnt -Chapter 11 Pg 70 May 17 - Page 10

Beautiful start waiting to read more 

Lovely update, waiting for next....

Why maan hated geet? Why she is not with them. So many questions. Very curious to know the past. She is not ready to face him. Maan is changed person now. Wonderful update.

Oh man so it is about her son she fears   Not telling Maan about him. Maybe 

she is so right to tell Jenny not to let any stranger talk to her don. The description Jenny gave for Maan so well 

she of course dies not know that Maan relents his deeds everyday. But will he again become a devil when he knows about his don or the truth geet kept from him??

her fears of seeing him are so reasonable 

so they live in the same town???

wow. So he has been seeing his son and not knowing. No wonder dadi felt she is seeing Maan when he was young. Hmmm

glad he is living a simple life and Reid ting. But why was he such a devil before treating geet so badly 

Interesting 

Geet changed her name to Mishty 

Adhvay maaneet son ?

Maan feels a connection with advay 

Geet didn't have guts to meet Maan 

Bt why she left him 

Wating for nxt 

congrats for new story

beautiful story

as name of story

thanks for pm

Read the prologue congratulations on new story waiting to read more ❤️ commented on the blog dear

lovely story. quite a powerful beginning....waiting ot read next ...all about maan's rudeness and geet's tears

Awesome SS

Maan Geet living separate and that is due to man behavior for which he is guilty but geet fear and reaction shows that he did something really bad and small past give that hint 

There baby seems so cute can't wait for further updates 

Waiting 

Originally posted by: priya_21

Superb part

Its little confusing update in last 

What mistake she did

That's unforgivable 

And hiding Advay from him add one more in her mistake list

U write this type story before too

Geet loves him immensely 

He propose her when she ready to marry with another one

Insult her 

And she left foreign for office work

And he Start missing her 

Kya naam tha uska

that was ‘her complete submission’ but this one is very different journey all throughout. It has much more vast capture of life